The Heartbreaker, chapter two.
Mika
Reviewers Read Back.
Kirjava Deamon; Heheh. Thanks, glad you like the idea. And it's based off of the game that I'm playing. MY game. And I'm not doing too well right now. My poor animals are dying. wails. You know? It took me forever to find where the fodder went to when you cut it.. :/ I felt so stupid. Heheh. Nami rocks!
Red Sonic: Mmn. This isn't one of my "better" works. Because it's Fanfiction. I don't read much FF.. Or write much of it. But after seeing one of the scenes, where the girl's heart gets broken, I decided to write this. But as I was saying, I don't write or read too much FF. Because I don't like it. I feel most of it is a waste of time. (That sonic section full of pure crap you were talking about.) And when a writer can REALLY write they should spend more time on original works. Which is usually better then fanfiction. ;; Because most fanfiction writers can't write. I haven't read any of your stuff yet. Been.. uh.. busy. Yeah. (I slept all day. P ) Anyway, I thank you for your review. Yeah, I don't have a beta-reader for my original stuff, so it had more typos, and such. Because it's longer, more in-depth, and thick. And I don't like to reread my stuff.. For some reason. Well, I do just not the original stuff I write. (Especially Bees in the Grass.) But I won't get into that. Thank you for the review, and I'll put in a bit more personality to Tekkia. (That's what I named him.) However, for the most part, the dialogue is going to stick to what was in the script. ) Later on I'll add in the Cut signs with Daryll and such. laughing so hard. There was one today that was soo funny! Anyways, this is getting long.
... : Umn.. Actually no, he isn't. I believe that Celia is just someone that moved in with them. When you decide to Marry Celia, Vesta threatens you and says that Celia is LIKE a daughter to her, but isn't. (And no this isn't a hint. I've played the game so that I could see how each, other then Muffy. shiver. would react to you getting married to someone else.)
Jarrod: ) Thanks love.
Mika (Roxi.)
A.N. Before I start the chapter, I realize I screwed up. And put in Nami's, two hearts cut scene, instead of her one heart cut scene. So this chapter will be dedicated to Nami's first Cut scene ;; sweatdrops. And what I did in reaction to it.
Don't you have work to do?
Nami, beautiful redheaded, cold Nami. She is so.. cold. I can only laugh at my thoughts, trying to ignore my growling stomach as I walk from my house. Wondering what to do after I water my crops. And feeding my animals. Scratching my head a little I look around. And there she is that beautiful redheaded Goddess of Ice. Nami.
"Uh.. hello.." I have wave to her a little. Wondering what she's doing here. She's leaning against the fence to my field. The cow is walking around, how did she get out? I have no idea. Maybe Takakura let her own. The sheep is out as well. Did I leave them outside? I hope not. Sighing a little I walk up to Nami. She hasn't turned around to talk to me. I tap her on the shoulder a moment. Smiling at her.
"Uh. I didn't come here to see you or anything." She states coldly, staring up at me. Maybe she thinks I've got a girlfriend? She's got beautiful eyes. I wish she'd smile at me. I just stand there and stare at her. Scratching my head a little. Watching her. I shake my head at her a moment. She sighs at me and scratches her head back. We both seem to do that a lot. It's a match made in heaven! I smile at her. And she says, "I don't need anything.. You should get back to work."
That hurt a lot, I blink at her. Sighing I guess I mumbled something. Because she's leaving again. Why is always leaving so quickly? Strange girl that Nami. But so beautiful. But you know beauty isn't the only thing. There's more to do it then that. One has to have a brain. Well there's, Celia. She's got an excellent brain. And she's beautiful too! Aw, beautiful Celia. I wonder what she's doing now.
I move over to my crops. I'm a little obsessive about them. More then I am about Nami or Celia. I water them at least four times a day. Obsessively. I move over to them: five strawberries, five carrots, and five sweet potatoes. What am I going to do with all that food? I haven't planted so much since I moved into this town. My stomach growled loudly at me. But I have nothing to put into it. So I do my best to ignore it. I can't do anything about it right now. Soon, soon I'll have fifteen different vegetables to eat. My mouth waters, and I start to get dizzy. I sway for several minutes. I can barely keep myself standing. I'll go back to sleep as soon as I finish feeding the cow. And the sheep, and the horse.
I'm so tired, and so hungry. What am I going to do? I'll have to fishing after I rest. Hard to keep my eyes open..
TBC
AN. I realize this is very short. But it was only one Cut Scene. ;; shrugs. The next Chapter will be better, I promise. 3 Ooh, look I branched out a little! Put something that wasn't in the script! And I put in character quirks! (I do obsessively water my crops by the way. I water the trees I've planted like five-six times a day. Depending if I've gone up to the Ruins to dig or not.) ) Anyway, review. Tell me what you think. What you would like to see added and such.
Mika
Reviewers Read Back.
Kirjava Deamon; Heheh. Thanks, glad you like the idea. And it's based off of the game that I'm playing. MY game. And I'm not doing too well right now. My poor animals are dying. wails. You know? It took me forever to find where the fodder went to when you cut it.. :/ I felt so stupid. Heheh. Nami rocks!
Red Sonic: Mmn. This isn't one of my "better" works. Because it's Fanfiction. I don't read much FF.. Or write much of it. But after seeing one of the scenes, where the girl's heart gets broken, I decided to write this. But as I was saying, I don't write or read too much FF. Because I don't like it. I feel most of it is a waste of time. (That sonic section full of pure crap you were talking about.) And when a writer can REALLY write they should spend more time on original works. Which is usually better then fanfiction. ;; Because most fanfiction writers can't write. I haven't read any of your stuff yet. Been.. uh.. busy. Yeah. (I slept all day. P ) Anyway, I thank you for your review. Yeah, I don't have a beta-reader for my original stuff, so it had more typos, and such. Because it's longer, more in-depth, and thick. And I don't like to reread my stuff.. For some reason. Well, I do just not the original stuff I write. (Especially Bees in the Grass.) But I won't get into that. Thank you for the review, and I'll put in a bit more personality to Tekkia. (That's what I named him.) However, for the most part, the dialogue is going to stick to what was in the script. ) Later on I'll add in the Cut signs with Daryll and such. laughing so hard. There was one today that was soo funny! Anyways, this is getting long.
... : Umn.. Actually no, he isn't. I believe that Celia is just someone that moved in with them. When you decide to Marry Celia, Vesta threatens you and says that Celia is LIKE a daughter to her, but isn't. (And no this isn't a hint. I've played the game so that I could see how each, other then Muffy. shiver. would react to you getting married to someone else.)
Jarrod: ) Thanks love.
Mika (Roxi.)
A.N. Before I start the chapter, I realize I screwed up. And put in Nami's, two hearts cut scene, instead of her one heart cut scene. So this chapter will be dedicated to Nami's first Cut scene ;; sweatdrops. And what I did in reaction to it.
Don't you have work to do?
Nami, beautiful redheaded, cold Nami. She is so.. cold. I can only laugh at my thoughts, trying to ignore my growling stomach as I walk from my house. Wondering what to do after I water my crops. And feeding my animals. Scratching my head a little I look around. And there she is that beautiful redheaded Goddess of Ice. Nami.
"Uh.. hello.." I have wave to her a little. Wondering what she's doing here. She's leaning against the fence to my field. The cow is walking around, how did she get out? I have no idea. Maybe Takakura let her own. The sheep is out as well. Did I leave them outside? I hope not. Sighing a little I walk up to Nami. She hasn't turned around to talk to me. I tap her on the shoulder a moment. Smiling at her.
"Uh. I didn't come here to see you or anything." She states coldly, staring up at me. Maybe she thinks I've got a girlfriend? She's got beautiful eyes. I wish she'd smile at me. I just stand there and stare at her. Scratching my head a little. Watching her. I shake my head at her a moment. She sighs at me and scratches her head back. We both seem to do that a lot. It's a match made in heaven! I smile at her. And she says, "I don't need anything.. You should get back to work."
That hurt a lot, I blink at her. Sighing I guess I mumbled something. Because she's leaving again. Why is always leaving so quickly? Strange girl that Nami. But so beautiful. But you know beauty isn't the only thing. There's more to do it then that. One has to have a brain. Well there's, Celia. She's got an excellent brain. And she's beautiful too! Aw, beautiful Celia. I wonder what she's doing now.
I move over to my crops. I'm a little obsessive about them. More then I am about Nami or Celia. I water them at least four times a day. Obsessively. I move over to them: five strawberries, five carrots, and five sweet potatoes. What am I going to do with all that food? I haven't planted so much since I moved into this town. My stomach growled loudly at me. But I have nothing to put into it. So I do my best to ignore it. I can't do anything about it right now. Soon, soon I'll have fifteen different vegetables to eat. My mouth waters, and I start to get dizzy. I sway for several minutes. I can barely keep myself standing. I'll go back to sleep as soon as I finish feeding the cow. And the sheep, and the horse.
I'm so tired, and so hungry. What am I going to do? I'll have to fishing after I rest. Hard to keep my eyes open..
TBC
AN. I realize this is very short. But it was only one Cut Scene. ;; shrugs. The next Chapter will be better, I promise. 3 Ooh, look I branched out a little! Put something that wasn't in the script! And I put in character quirks! (I do obsessively water my crops by the way. I water the trees I've planted like five-six times a day. Depending if I've gone up to the Ruins to dig or not.) ) Anyway, review. Tell me what you think. What you would like to see added and such.
Mika