Hey everyone!!!! I'm soo back! And you guys were most likely thinking 'WHERE HAS SHE BEEN ???' Well let me reassure you that I didn't forget you guys! Though unbelievably …. I only had two reviews & that's small from some other chapters. -___-; I think everyone is forgetting me!!! Owell . I want to thank G-Man and DBZ Chick1 ! You're both the best ! Been there since chapter 2 . How would I go on without you??? I'm not too sure. Well all I know is that this is basically either the chapter with my characters in it or it's the chapter BEFORE "my" character !!! Yay! Well enough of me talking & junk & I'll let you enjoy this chapter! & yah the other reviewers are still very very cool!!!!! ^____________________________________^
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Disclaimer: I don't own DBZ , boy doesn't that suck. Well if I did , Gohan wouldn't be wearing glasses in GT!!!! Gr!!!! They are totally messing his cute look up!!! -____-; & even if he had glasses , couldn't they just make it thin frames? Goodness.
Dedicated : To EVERYONE WHO HAS REVIEWED AT ALL!! YAY!!!! ^____________________________^
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18 for some reason had a flash back of Videl being taken from some new ALIEN race?!?!?!?! Yah , she did . lol
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Piccolo's cape fluttered against the breeze. The morning sun beating down on his smooth green skin. His jet black eyes darted around the area. The moment was decided by Piccolo as he slung his cape off and onto the soft earth below them. He put his stern face on and crouched into fighting position. Gohan was a little surprised Piccolo decided to fight right at this second. But Gohan agreed with Piccolo , he couldn't stand it being THAT quiet any longer. 17 and 18 were ready. All was set and ready to go. Gohan got into his stance. His raven hair swaying back in forth in the wind. Loose dust was blown in everyone's faces , yet no one seemed to notice . 17 and 18 got into their fighting stances . Their fighting stances were like mirror images. As swift as the wind , the twins attacked. Gohan was blocking 18's onslaught of fury. Punches and kicks leaving bruises on Gohan's arms and legs. He wouldn't let those affect him though. He had to win , he had to succeed. The world's fate had been thinning out as more and more people were being destroyed by these demons. It was either get the job done , or their job meant nothing as there was no one else to protect. That meant everything Gohan put his heart into , his time of training , meditating , all the risks he had gone through had been for nothing . And what made this fight even more heartbreaking is it would be the only word stamped on his forehead for the rest of his life would have been "failure" . It was an awful word to any fighter as they become strong and become a hero to protect their home planets from doom such as Son Gohan had so many times before and even now.
"What's wrong Gohan? I thought you had more fight in you than that!" , 18 taunted. She smirked as the 13 year old stared her in the face.
Gohan could only stare and then he disappeared in front of 18 and punched her in the cheek. He twirled around and kicked her in the lower back . 18 cried out in pain and collapsed on the ground. 18 slowly made her way to her feet as she smirked. Not one bruise or even a scratch was even there of proof she had been hit. She laughed mockingly at him. Gohan's anger boiled in his blood. He couldn't believe she didn't have a scratch and she even was laughing at him. He was going to have a LONG fight ahead of him .
*Meanwhile*
Piccolo was desperately trying to keep up with an certain android on his own. 17 was unbelievably fast for person to see. Piccolo had been punched a good amount of times. He didn't like this outcome so far and was very annoyed. Piccolo's eyes tried hard to keep up with the speedy , yet graceful android. 17 darted around looking for a weak spot and then decided to attack Piccolo's knee . 17 took a swift kick towards the name's knee , but the namek knew better and moved his knee in time. The male demon was surprised by this and Piccolo took advantage. Piccolo kneed 17 in the gut and sent the android flying into a bolder. 17 got up and sped his way towards Piccolo.
The Androids were on full attack on our two hero's . Not showing any sign of stopping soon , Piccolo and Gohan struggled with the pain , keeping up with the demons speed , and not collapsing on the ground from exhaustion. The battle was going very much one sided. Gohan couldn't keep his guard up and 18 dug her hand in his stomach. Shock and surprise filled his head at the second . He was a second too late to save himself of the fatal blow. She pulled her hand out , it was covered in his own blood. After shock and surprise soaked in , he finally realized the pain and the amount of losing blood. Gohan's mind was numb shocked as his body was becoming numb as well. His knees failed to support his numb body anymore and Gohan fell on his knees then on his stomach. Gohan's vision was swirling and fading . His hearing was taunting him , for he almost thought he could hear Piccolo calling his name . Gohan wasn't sure about anything any more. It was all becoming a blur . His hearing was becoming harder to hear every passing moment as well as his eye sight. Finally blackness over consumed his mind and body as he drifted into the blackness that surrounded him blocking his sight , hearing, and feeling.
Piccolo couldn't believe it , he called Gohan's name a couple of times to make sure his eyes and hearing wasn't messing with him. 17 took advantage of Piccolo's shock , and kicked Piccolo in the jaw and sent Piccolo spiraling across the valley. Piccolo couldn't find the strength to get on his feet. Gohan was laying there helpless as he was unconscious and bleeding badly. 17 and 18 smiled and left the Namek to find some way to get up and get Gohan help.
As the twins were about to leave , they hear a voice yell , "NEO FLAMING TIGER CLAWS!" The twins turn only to see 10 fire power bombs engulf them both . Both of the twins scream in pain . They were sent to the ground . Smoke rising off their bodies and clothes. Scratches and bruises proved the attack powerful and painful . 18 and 17 slowly climbed to their feet . Pain was defiantly the reason why it was slow. 18 was enraged by all of her clothes were now tattered and her hair was messed up. She was very ticked off . What she didn't understand is how they managed to get the power to even scratch or get a bruise. Was it possible they found someone strong than themselves? Or someone who wants to die . 17 had become ticked as well . He was supposed to be the strongest there ever was. Now he was being pushed around like a rag doll. How could it be? How was it possible? 17 glanced up to see a 13 year old girl waiting in the sky with her hand's positions giving it away that SHE had been the one to blast them. The girl had black hair with silver and gold tips that was shoulder length. Her eyes were a deep purple and resembled a cat's eyes. [1] She was wearing a leather black coat with a red tank-top under , with black pants to match. She was wearing black boots to match her outfit [2].
Piccolo couldn't help but noticed a tail swaying back and forth behind her. 'Is she a Saiyan?' , Piccolo wondered. 'Wait , that's not a monkey tail , IT'S A CAT TAIL?!?!?!?!?!' Piccolo was totally shocked to this new discovery. How could she have a golden-blonde color tail with white tip on the end ? Where could she have gotten it from? It blew Piccolo's mind away at the thought of how , where , and why? The answers were very hard to understand the reasons why , but once given the answers from the horse's mouth it would be unbelievably easy to understand.
While Piccolo seemed to be thinking , 17 and 18 had better ideas. They were going to get rid of this threat to their existence . If this girl had the will power to destroy them , she could very well be able to. But what if that was all she had? The twins weren't sure what to expect of her , but it will surely be a test for them. This will become quite the test for the twins as the new challenge has come to face them , but what about Son Gohan??? Will he be able to hold on the life long enough for help?
~~~Gohan's Dream.~~~
Gohan only saw void of darkness in every possible aspect that could be seen . He had no way of telling were he was headed or if there was even a way out of this mass of blackness. People had said , " If you see a bright light , don't walk that direction." But really , Gohan sure could use that light at least to see. Gohan was starting to wonder if he would ever get out of there. Was it possible? With what it seemed , it seemed impossible , with no help, not being able to see , you tend to think that way. All Gohan knew was that this blackness wasn't comforting to him. The way Gohan moved wasn't your everyday body movement , you couldn't feel , see , or really hear . For there was really nothing TO feel , see, or hear. It was like he was part spirit , and all he had to do was think , and it was done. No movement of the body was necessary. He seemed to float through the dark , it was like the sky , always seeming endless….
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1,815 words everyone!!! Yay!!!!
Chapter 1 had : 636
Chapter 2 had : 1,582
Chapter 3 had : 1,927
Chapter 4 had : 1,773
This chapter , Chapter 5 has : 1,844 words so far!!! Not even including anything after the number itself. ^______^
I'm slowly getting more words in each time. Like I said , I'm sorry for slow up-dates , I never mean it to be slow! Hontou . Also to make things worse , the last 2 , 3 , or 4 days , I have been without internet! AHHH!!!!!! *shudders* it's a scary thought I know!! ^____________________^ but boy , I hate my computer with out internet! You cant do ¾ the stuff normally when you HAVE internet. Well thank you for reading this ! Now on to the Review Café!
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DBZ Chick1 : ^____________________________________________^ *glompz* THANK YOU!!!! -____-; I'm sorry it wasn't a "real soon" up-date. Gomen . Forgive me. I have had some evil internet *cough* difficulties! *cough* But hey! I have more words in here right? ^-^ thanks again!!!!
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[1]: if anyone of you has watched beyblade and you like Rei then you know what I am talking about when I mean cat eyes. For those who DON'T , well this is how I can explain. … … the slits of the eye can go very narrow like a cat's eyes can & stuff in that way.
[2]: now , the BOOT deal , well when in the Android Saga & 18's second new outfit , ( the second outfit she wore when she FIRST was seen , were they steal that pink van? Understand?) well those cowgirl looking boots are the same one the new girl has , except hers is black with the red straps things lol. ^___^
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Hontou- it's the truth . Honestly.
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