Hey everyone! Long time no see! I am VERY sorry , I'm not one to update fast huh? Well I have my reasons. There has been a lot of birthdays that have had to go to. Gomen!!! Well I would like to thank my reviewers! I have a LONG time before this story will end. Reasons why you may ask? Well 2 reasons I can think of right now is :
1} I cant seem to update fast &…(do to very busy month for me -__-; )
2} there is a WHOLE lot of things that are supposed to happen that still haven't happened yet! Oh boy lol
well here I go without Hiei Pandy yelling at me. MUWAHAHAHAHAHA , oh yah , where did I put him anyway?
*in my closet* Hiei Pandy: WHY I SHOULD HAVE YOU KNOW U PUT ME IN HERE!!! HOW COULD YOU GO & DO SUCH A THING TO ME!!! *goes on & on*
oh yah… I left him THERE *cough* on purpose *cough* , *whispers* but he doesn't have to KNOW about it *winks* well I should just leave him there! MUWAHAHAHAHA
Hiei Pandy : *from in the closet* NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Disclaimer: don't own DBZ , I DO own the new girl who is fighting the androids , doctor and nurse.
"talking"
'thinking'
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Gohan & Piccolo's mental conversations
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Chapter 6!!!
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Last time:
A new girl has come and now has the power to defeat the Androids? Maybe… you'll have to read it & find out!
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Gohan's body laid there unmoving. Any signs of hope for him were covered up . Without any movement , how was you to tell if he was alive or not? His stomach bleeding , eyes shut , these idea's were breaking Piccolo's last hope . It scared him like nothing else has. 'Will he make it?' ,and 'is he even alive?' , these replayed in his head nonstop . Piccolo every once in a while would take a glance at the new battle making him realize how much stronger the new girl was from the Androids. But what made Piccolo worry is that there is no guarantee she wont come after them next. Piccolo glanced back at Gohan hoping for the best .
The girl was too good for the demons to possibly defeat and they knew it. Where did she come from? , was one interesting question. #18 noticed even Piccolo stared at the girl quizzically . That meant he was as clueless as to who and where this girl was and came from. While the mysteries bothered her , she still needed to focus on how to get away from this battle and spend some hiding time. They truly needed to wait for another time to finish her off or even fight her because 1st off , her clothes and hair was a mess , she was running low on attacks and tricks to use on this girl , and she knew if she could feel pain it was serious. But for her brother , he was not so intelligent when blinded to anger . He could feel pain just as well as she could , yet his anger shields him of his since of feeling and concentration on the options in front of him . He was one to take his anger out on one ,but be too worked up to think straight and use it for his advantage. When not used for the advantage , anger and fury becomes your enemy and makes you very worked up and you start to fall off concentration and get your but kicked.
#18 smirked at the thought of 17 getting beaten up very bad by a girl. Yet it was happening now , which made it even more funny. Not but two hours ago was he not boasting? Was he not the one thinking that the battle they would fight would be a piece of cake? If he had not said it in words , his actions and emotions sure said so… or looks are VERY deceiving.
17's silky black hair swayed with the breeze while he was panting. His tanned skin was now bruised and had scratches EVERY where. Blood and dust seem to claim his clothes while rips made the scene complete. He was mad , then turn to anger , followed by frustration. He gave his punches everything he had, yet they missed every time! She was too fast for him to hit!!! He became even more frustrated. , but he couldn't do anything about it.
"I'll let you go if you give up now. You already know you two can't defeat me , and as long as I can dodge what little attacks you have left , it's worthless." the new comer retorted mockingly.
"I WOULDN'T IF YOU-"
"We'll go." 18 cut off her brother from making a huge mistake that would make her chance to freedom blow up in her face.
"Why did you do that!!!!! We where going to win that fight until you opened your mouth!" 17 scolded , being VERY irritated with his sister's action.
18 rolled her eyes and ignored the stupid comment . She knew better than he did. She could stay cool and collect unlike him. She took off for the blue heavens above her , followed by a reluctant twin brother.
As the twins were no where to be seen the girl disappeared . Piccolo was surprised. 'Where did she go????' After that thought , she appeared right in front of the namek. Her shiny raven hair played with the wind. Her eyes were soft and gentle and skin was somewhat pale but smooth and soft as well. She bent down and looked at his injuries , "Are you ok? Because I have to get that boy some help before I can help you. It wont take me long though…" Her voice was caring and kind , not harsh or loud , but not quiet. It carried a gentle lace and was comforting . All she got was a grunt from the green man.
After a little awkward silence Piccolo in his gruff voice said, "What are you waiting for? I'm Fine , go help the boy!" His sudden voiced comment startled the cat like girl. Then she smirked and replied , "I'm Dedra . Nice to meet you." She winked at Piccolo . As in doing that she lifted the teen boy up and disappeared .
'Dedra huh?' Piccolo smirked , he felt at peace now , but the ease of knowing Gohan will live was another story. Terror still ran that department of his mind. Piccolo laid his back onto the rubble again and tried to rest the swore muscles that ached. His head throbbed and pounded him .
*MEANWHILE*
Dedra's speed was incredibly fast. It was amazing. As most Saiyan's speed was outrageously fast , her speed seem to out do them. Human's eyes couldn't keep up with a Saiyan's speed , as a Saiyan's eyes couldn't keep up with Dedra's speed.
She sprinted holding the unconscious boy . Gohan's breath lessened more . He was becoming cold and starting to turn slight lighter shades of skin color. Dedra was aware of the dangers of his life. Every second counting on her speed and the distance she got in that amount of time.
The raven hair girl's eyes darted up as she saw a huge white building with tons of levels and windows. The front doors side automatically when she stepped in front of them. She was a little amazed that they opened like that , but she remembered something more important needed attended to. She dashed into the emergency room . Doctors and nurses scattering here and there doing whatever needed .
Finally a nurse and doctor noticed Dedra and Gohan through all the commotion . The doctor was tall , tan and dark brown hair. He was thick framed glasses with pure chocolate brown eyes hiding behind the glasses. He was okay looking as his perfect white teeth shined as he smiled. Dedra was a little annoyed at him . He just stood there showing off that smile and teeth while she was trying to get help .
"Why are you smiling? I have an emergency and all you can do is STAND THERE AND ACT LIKE A MORON?!?!?!"
The doctor was a little stunned by her sudden out burst but realized that it was somewhat true.
"Nurse , take this boy into the surgery room and get it ready , I'll check his injuries." , the doctor said sternly with no room to argue.
The nurse walked off to do what she was told . She had frizzy short blonde hair , her eyes were a deep pink . She wasn't your everyday model , for she wasn't thin and looked like she was in her upper 50's . [1) I am NOT describing a REAL person. !!! I made her up! So pls do not think I am making fun or picking on someone cause that is NOT the case. She's made up .]
"Fine then , now that's going to be taken care of , what is your name ?" The doctors eyes and face showed curiosity . 'he is REALLY gonna get it . He needs to HELP this boy and he ISN'T!!!' Dedra was getting very mad.
"Dedra , now get him some help! NOW!" , Dedra yelled at the top of her lungs.
The doctor had a scared look on his face . "YES MAM!" And with that he was gone.
Dedra snickered at the way the doctor dashed like mad away from her pushing Gohan on a stretcher . While he dashed into the surgery room. She took a seat near the surgery room entrance. Her nerves where taking her imagination to the thought of what doctors really do to the people they work on. She shook this thought off. She couldn't help but be worried and nervous. She didn't want Gohan to die , [2] Hontou , she truly didn't. She also couldn't help but feel uncomfortable . Her tail was now tied around her waist to make it look like a furry belt. The chair she was sitting on was very hard. You would think , all the money this hospital uses on stuff that isn't needed , and yet they couldn't save a little bit of money for a more comfortable chairs. This was going to be a LONG wait…
(it's about 5hours later) *Gohan's point of View*
Blackness seem to rule my world as I continue to search for any sign of light that would represent my opportunity to wake from this endless black pit of a nightmare. This endless night that rules this realm for eternity . My mind wanders through the dark without knowing if there is a way out…
I search and search for some sign of light but none is given. After what seems eternity , I see a distant light. It wasn't the kind of light that you see , it's more a hope . It seemed to surge through me. For the first time I can feel . I can hear more and more. Sounds flooding my ears and feeling surging through my body. Images start to fade into my sight as I make out some of those images .
Finally , feeling that I could feel my eyes enough to try to open them in the physical way instead of the strange mental way in the black realm , I open my eyes.
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Gohan look upon the white room with a dazed look on his face. He couldn't believe he opened his eyes ! He had never appreciated his sight , hearing , and since of touch as much as now. After that black vortex of his mind , it was like everything took a minute to get used to. But this appreciation for feeling was taken back when Gohan felt knives in his stomach. He looked down and noticed he had gauze wrapped firmly around his stomach. He then realized that this wasn't his room and he was in a hospital. The pain in his stomach was over baring. He remembered the last thing he saw of the real physical world was that he was bleeding and it was day time.
Gohan gazed out the window . The moon was beautiful. It was full and big. It's white light made the trees and grass seem mystical. A light breeze picked up rustling the summer green leaves of the trees. The sound of the rustling leaves was some how comforting to him. He looked at the corner of the room and noticed that girl who started fighting the Androids when he collapsed almost unconscious was slouched in the visitor chair. She was sleeping peacefully in the most uncomfortable chair and position . Her tail swayed every once in a while . For a second he thought he heard her purr , but he shook the thought away. He had a feeling they would become good friends…
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Happy Halloween everyone!!! I really hoped you enjoyed it!! ^________________^ . Some major writer blocks & add a lot of homework & that's my excuse for not up-dating in forever!!!! But all ends well . 2,244 words this time & VERY good majority was the chapter! So I tried to make it up . ^______^ forgive me again for the never fast up-date , but I do remind you , I do not forget you all. You've been too kind to forget!
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* Ayame Kenoshi: Thank you very much. it means a lot! Truly! Thank you for being so kind & reviewing this story for me. You're so kind ! Yah , the dream was kind of neat huh? ^__________________^
* DBZ Chick1 : Thank you . I like a lot of death situations for my characters. I'm so.. Evil sometimes lol. *evil smirk*
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[2]: Dedra still doesn't know Gohan's name just to let u know
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