Hey guys. See I didn't lie when I said I would begin to update regularly! He he he. Ok I'm setting one of those goals for reviews again. I'm hoping to get at least 15 reviews! Well actually I'm reaching for like 2 reviews for every chapter. Of course I can't do anything about that except try and make the story better but I don't know how! I need the readers to tell me so send in your reviews! Thanks ok. Now I'm going to have Yusuke do the disclaimer today.
DISCLAIMER
Yusuke: Ok... ok so why did you wake me up so early in the morning!
Chelz: to do the disclaimer he he he
Yusuke: Well what's it matter I mean you say the same thing over and over again I mean why don't you just go over and kick the owner's ass until he or she agrees (or they) to give you the rights to Yu Yu Hakusho.
Chelz: Because that is cruel and unusual punishment! Though it did sound quite intriguing... But that's not the point! Just do the disclaimer Yusuke! :: under breath:: I can't believe him and Puu are supposed to be like one in the same I mean Puu is just so much nicer, sweeter, kinder (she lists every good adjective in the world) where as Yusuke is just a lazy, unmotivated (bad adjectives...) JERK!
Yusuke: I heard that! But I'll do this anyway just so I can go back to sleep! Attention idiots of the world! Chelz does not own Yu Yu Hakusho! If she ever did well then it would probably mean she was the last survivor in the Earth's destruction , which is never going to happen! Satisfied? Good! Now onto the next chapter!
The Wing Goddess Chapter 10
A/N: I'm starting off with Botan's Point of View for the first part of the chapter. It will go back to normal after about the first page or actually just a few paragraphs or so. Thanks! Your hard working author!
Botan's Point of View.
We had bid our goodbyes very quickly before leaving and Kari had quickly fallen asleep after we took off on my oar along with Puu. Kurama seemed very pleased, along with the others, in being able to persuade her to let me bring her back to the spirit world. She was getting worse. I was actually afraid of what might happen if she were to suddenly stop breathing again, or having the convulsions again. From the way the boys had described them they sounded quite unpleasant. I had contacted Koenma before we left to let him know that we were coming with Kari and about her condition. He seemed very displeased in my report. I sighed as the sun had finally finished setting and the moon and the stars came out from hiding. It was a quite beautiful sight, or at least that is what I thought, Hiei wasn't too fond of it and I don't believe that some of the others were either. I suddenly heard Puu chirp from behind me and I turned my head to see what was wrong. He chirped again pointing to Kari.
"Oh my, you are right Puu. She doesn't look that good! We'll just have to speed up then won't we?" I answered of his cries. She was having a bad dream I had assumed, well actually I had hoped it was just a bad dream, as I noticed her flush face and the cold sweat that covered her body. I quickly turned my attention ahead of myself as I was soon arriving at the entrance to Koenma's palace. Well I wouldn't call it his palace, many others resided there. There were the ferry girls like myself, and the ogres like George, Koenma's father often stopped by every once in a while, and there were constantly visitors of all sorts, like Yusuke and the boys. The truth is I considered it more of a New York City office building then a palace, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I heard Puu chirp again as we landed.
"It's ok Puu. We are here now. No need to worry, we can get her help right away." I said in a soothing voice so as to calm him down. I was greeted by none other than Hiei. I guess Koenma had assumed that Kari would be asleep and I would be unable to carry her. He didn't seem to happy to be the one to have to carry her though, as he muttered what sounded like a demon curse under his breath as he picked her up in his arms.
"Follow me." He said sternly and I gathered her things and walked behind him with Puu following suit. He led me down a few halls to a medical ward. I had never been there before so everything was knew to me. We stopped at a room and he opened the door and set her on the bed that had already turned down. He pulled the covers up to her shoulders and then looked at me.
"Koenma will be in at any moment. I have other business to attend." He said in his normal cold tone before leaving. After he had exited Puu quickly flew over to Kari and with his long ears flailing tried to calm Kari down from her bad dream. Well actually it was worse then a bad dream as the convulsions Yusuke and Kurama had described started again. I was unsure of what to do so I quickly ran out the door to find somebody or anybody. Of course it just had to be my luck that the only person around was Hiei who was very reluctant to come with me in the first place. It was so hard to watch as he held her down until it finally stopped just the fact that she was helpless to control all of this made me feel worse. She only coughed after Hiei released his grip on her and I went for a tissue.
"What the hell happened to her! It's only been a week if not even!?" Hiei exclaimed. I wiped the blood from her mouth and did my best to get her to drink some water.
"We don't know." I replied checking her temperature.
"That's strange I could've sworn that her temperature was much too high when I brought her here. Now she's just freezing." I said in a daze of confusion.
"Well all I've got to say is she's got something that I've never seen or heard of before. And whatever it is she needs some serious healing." Hiei replied. I was oblivious to the fact that Koenma had entered the room at his last comment and was actual quite mortified at her condition.
"I'll leave you two alone. As I said before I have things I need to do." Hiei said and excused himself.
"Hello Koenma sir, I see you now know what I was talking about earlier?" I asked
"Yes. You weren't kidding when you said she was sick Botan." He replied.
Kari's Point of View
I suddenly awoke from my sleep in a quick sitting up. I screamed as I heard the voice in my head one last time. That little girl who became so frightening. But it was just a dream I told myself.
"Oh my Kari, are you ok?" Botan asked of me. I forced a smile and nodded.
"Yes I'm sorry to have kept you worrying. But I'm all better now!" I exclaimed as convincingly as possible. I wanted to go to the rooftop again. But I didn't know when I would ever get out of this place.
"Can I ask what the dream was about?" Koenma asked as he sat beside me in the bed and placed a wet washcloth on my forehead. He then gently pushed me back so that I was laying down again.
"I guess I could." I said unsure of myself.
"Do you want me to leave sir?" Botan asked. I shook my head no and Puu chirped.
"No you may stay Botan." Koenma replied and pulled a chair up for her.
"Well it all started when I was in this field. There was a little girl crying and she was lost. I asked her if I could help and she said yes. So we kept looking for her parents and every place we went go darker until finally I was locked into a cage and then the girl became so scary looking. She glowed and was just so frightening. She told me that I had better watch out if I wasn't going to help them because they were coming, and no one can protect me, not even you and your reikai tantei." I explained.
"Well tell you what. How about you get some rest and we'll try and figure out how to heal you ok?" Koenma said.
"Could you stay with me until I fall asleep sir. I'm just scared... that's all. Its ok if you are busy." I asked
"No that's ok I can stay till you fall asleep." Koenma replied
"I have to go do work but I will be back soon." Botan said
"Bye Botan." I replied and she left. It wasn't very long until I had fallen asleep. Koenma got up from his spot next to me and leaned over and kissed my forehead before telling Puu to watch over me and leaving. Little did he know I wasn't sleeping at all, I had been faking it the whole time.
So did you guys like this chapter? Wow 10 chapters already! Cool! ( I said cool when my mom asked me if I wanted to dissect a shark, after I had previously stated I didn't like dissections. This only proves how random I truly am!) Thank you to all who have reviewed! Please continue reviewing!
~Chelz~
Preview of the next chapter:
What do you know I'm back by popular demand from Buffy926! Yes you guessed it the infamous god of death. I'm still waiting for Kari to come back but hey that's not the point right now. So what is up with her anyway? It doesn't seem like her to fake sleeping, is she up to something? Man I hope not, when she gets into something it usually turns out bad! Well you'll have to wait for the next chapter of: The Wing Goddess.
DISCLAIMER
Yusuke: Ok... ok so why did you wake me up so early in the morning!
Chelz: to do the disclaimer he he he
Yusuke: Well what's it matter I mean you say the same thing over and over again I mean why don't you just go over and kick the owner's ass until he or she agrees (or they) to give you the rights to Yu Yu Hakusho.
Chelz: Because that is cruel and unusual punishment! Though it did sound quite intriguing... But that's not the point! Just do the disclaimer Yusuke! :: under breath:: I can't believe him and Puu are supposed to be like one in the same I mean Puu is just so much nicer, sweeter, kinder (she lists every good adjective in the world) where as Yusuke is just a lazy, unmotivated (bad adjectives...) JERK!
Yusuke: I heard that! But I'll do this anyway just so I can go back to sleep! Attention idiots of the world! Chelz does not own Yu Yu Hakusho! If she ever did well then it would probably mean she was the last survivor in the Earth's destruction , which is never going to happen! Satisfied? Good! Now onto the next chapter!
The Wing Goddess Chapter 10
A/N: I'm starting off with Botan's Point of View for the first part of the chapter. It will go back to normal after about the first page or actually just a few paragraphs or so. Thanks! Your hard working author!
Botan's Point of View.
We had bid our goodbyes very quickly before leaving and Kari had quickly fallen asleep after we took off on my oar along with Puu. Kurama seemed very pleased, along with the others, in being able to persuade her to let me bring her back to the spirit world. She was getting worse. I was actually afraid of what might happen if she were to suddenly stop breathing again, or having the convulsions again. From the way the boys had described them they sounded quite unpleasant. I had contacted Koenma before we left to let him know that we were coming with Kari and about her condition. He seemed very displeased in my report. I sighed as the sun had finally finished setting and the moon and the stars came out from hiding. It was a quite beautiful sight, or at least that is what I thought, Hiei wasn't too fond of it and I don't believe that some of the others were either. I suddenly heard Puu chirp from behind me and I turned my head to see what was wrong. He chirped again pointing to Kari.
"Oh my, you are right Puu. She doesn't look that good! We'll just have to speed up then won't we?" I answered of his cries. She was having a bad dream I had assumed, well actually I had hoped it was just a bad dream, as I noticed her flush face and the cold sweat that covered her body. I quickly turned my attention ahead of myself as I was soon arriving at the entrance to Koenma's palace. Well I wouldn't call it his palace, many others resided there. There were the ferry girls like myself, and the ogres like George, Koenma's father often stopped by every once in a while, and there were constantly visitors of all sorts, like Yusuke and the boys. The truth is I considered it more of a New York City office building then a palace, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I heard Puu chirp again as we landed.
"It's ok Puu. We are here now. No need to worry, we can get her help right away." I said in a soothing voice so as to calm him down. I was greeted by none other than Hiei. I guess Koenma had assumed that Kari would be asleep and I would be unable to carry her. He didn't seem to happy to be the one to have to carry her though, as he muttered what sounded like a demon curse under his breath as he picked her up in his arms.
"Follow me." He said sternly and I gathered her things and walked behind him with Puu following suit. He led me down a few halls to a medical ward. I had never been there before so everything was knew to me. We stopped at a room and he opened the door and set her on the bed that had already turned down. He pulled the covers up to her shoulders and then looked at me.
"Koenma will be in at any moment. I have other business to attend." He said in his normal cold tone before leaving. After he had exited Puu quickly flew over to Kari and with his long ears flailing tried to calm Kari down from her bad dream. Well actually it was worse then a bad dream as the convulsions Yusuke and Kurama had described started again. I was unsure of what to do so I quickly ran out the door to find somebody or anybody. Of course it just had to be my luck that the only person around was Hiei who was very reluctant to come with me in the first place. It was so hard to watch as he held her down until it finally stopped just the fact that she was helpless to control all of this made me feel worse. She only coughed after Hiei released his grip on her and I went for a tissue.
"What the hell happened to her! It's only been a week if not even!?" Hiei exclaimed. I wiped the blood from her mouth and did my best to get her to drink some water.
"We don't know." I replied checking her temperature.
"That's strange I could've sworn that her temperature was much too high when I brought her here. Now she's just freezing." I said in a daze of confusion.
"Well all I've got to say is she's got something that I've never seen or heard of before. And whatever it is she needs some serious healing." Hiei replied. I was oblivious to the fact that Koenma had entered the room at his last comment and was actual quite mortified at her condition.
"I'll leave you two alone. As I said before I have things I need to do." Hiei said and excused himself.
"Hello Koenma sir, I see you now know what I was talking about earlier?" I asked
"Yes. You weren't kidding when you said she was sick Botan." He replied.
Kari's Point of View
I suddenly awoke from my sleep in a quick sitting up. I screamed as I heard the voice in my head one last time. That little girl who became so frightening. But it was just a dream I told myself.
"Oh my Kari, are you ok?" Botan asked of me. I forced a smile and nodded.
"Yes I'm sorry to have kept you worrying. But I'm all better now!" I exclaimed as convincingly as possible. I wanted to go to the rooftop again. But I didn't know when I would ever get out of this place.
"Can I ask what the dream was about?" Koenma asked as he sat beside me in the bed and placed a wet washcloth on my forehead. He then gently pushed me back so that I was laying down again.
"I guess I could." I said unsure of myself.
"Do you want me to leave sir?" Botan asked. I shook my head no and Puu chirped.
"No you may stay Botan." Koenma replied and pulled a chair up for her.
"Well it all started when I was in this field. There was a little girl crying and she was lost. I asked her if I could help and she said yes. So we kept looking for her parents and every place we went go darker until finally I was locked into a cage and then the girl became so scary looking. She glowed and was just so frightening. She told me that I had better watch out if I wasn't going to help them because they were coming, and no one can protect me, not even you and your reikai tantei." I explained.
"Well tell you what. How about you get some rest and we'll try and figure out how to heal you ok?" Koenma said.
"Could you stay with me until I fall asleep sir. I'm just scared... that's all. Its ok if you are busy." I asked
"No that's ok I can stay till you fall asleep." Koenma replied
"I have to go do work but I will be back soon." Botan said
"Bye Botan." I replied and she left. It wasn't very long until I had fallen asleep. Koenma got up from his spot next to me and leaned over and kissed my forehead before telling Puu to watch over me and leaving. Little did he know I wasn't sleeping at all, I had been faking it the whole time.
So did you guys like this chapter? Wow 10 chapters already! Cool! ( I said cool when my mom asked me if I wanted to dissect a shark, after I had previously stated I didn't like dissections. This only proves how random I truly am!) Thank you to all who have reviewed! Please continue reviewing!
~Chelz~
Preview of the next chapter:
What do you know I'm back by popular demand from Buffy926! Yes you guessed it the infamous god of death. I'm still waiting for Kari to come back but hey that's not the point right now. So what is up with her anyway? It doesn't seem like her to fake sleeping, is she up to something? Man I hope not, when she gets into something it usually turns out bad! Well you'll have to wait for the next chapter of: The Wing Goddess.