All right, chapter 11, finally. I'm sure a lot of you are thinking the same thing as it has been over a month since my last update. He he he. Well in the past month and a half I have been on vacation, working at a vet clinic, and suffering from writer's block. Yes I had thought I had prepared enough so I wouldn't get writer's block, but look! What do we have here? Lol.... I think its almost gone, I'm sure you will know when it is because my writing will most likely seem ten times better. Its currently 9:07PM EST and my dog is sleeping at my feet as I type this sitting on my couch in my room on my mom's laptop that she never uses anymore. And now the dog is wandering (great and I just cleaned this room today too!) Well how about we get started? Here's the disclaimer:

DISCLAIMER

Hiei: :: in a very bored sounding voice:: Chelz does not own Yu Yu Hakusho or any of its characters. She does own any of the original characters in this story.

Chelz: thank you Hiei.... but uh sound more excited next time will ya?

Hiei: I wasn't done you stupid ningen!

Chelz: well sorry, go ahead and continue then....

Hiei: If you would like to use any of her original character's in a fan fiction or story please contact her by e-mail (or in a review) at: RavenDropz@cox.net.

Chelz: Wow.... I never thought about that one...but hey it's a good idea!

Hiei: can we start the stupid chapter now?

Chelz: oh yes the chapter.... Hey what are you calling stupid shorty! (I happen to be 5'7" he he he)

Hiei: Your story!

Chelz: is not! :: Both of them continue to argue as days, weeks, and months go by...

Kurama: :: sweat drop:: and now for chapter 11 of the wing goddess (if the authoress will ever stop arguing with Hiei....)

The Wing Goddess: Chapter 11

Kari's Point of View

I waited until I was sure that Koenma was gone and snuck outside of my room. Come on now did he honestly think a girl like me would just stay in bed? I wanted to go back to the rooftop again, it was starting to become my sanctuary. I needed a breath of fresh air and some time to myself, just to think about what was really going on and all. I swiftly navigated my ways through the palace's wide and long corridors until I reached the stairway to the roof. I smiled as I climbed the stairs quietly and then opened the door with a breeze of fresh air welcoming. I sighed as I sat looking up at the stars, and the moon. Rather then follow the normal constellations I liked to make up my own. I laughed as I found one that almost looked like my dog, and then one that looked like the cherry tree that sat in my front yard. After a while of making a lot of constellations with the stars that reminded me at home I began to get sad and a bit homesick. I hadn't been home for over 24 hours in about a month now. My mom had probably gone insane, and my brother was probably in a panic. I wished that there was a way I could let them know that I was safe and ok, that everything would be fine in a while, and that I'd come back home soon, but I just couldn't. Besides who would believe that I was living with the ruler of spirit world, a few demons, some grim reapers, or ferry girls as they were called here, and some ogres that did office work all day? I laughed at my last thought, but at the same time I felt a few soft tears spill from my eyes as they sparkled in the moonlight creating little pools that showed my reflection like tiny mirrors. I missed home a lot, I liked it here, but it just wasn't the same as home where I had my dog, he was my little buddy, and my big brother, who never said so but secretly really did care about me, and my mom a single mother trying to raise two kids. Then there was my friends, I missed all of them so much, Joey, Christina, Laura, Chris, and Seyla, I wondered how they were holding up. Chris was probably worried sick, though trying not to act like it, Joey would be trying to comfort Laura, Christina would try to explain it as some alien abduction, and Seyla would argue that it would be impossible. I wanted to laugh but instead more tears poured down my face as I remembered home and the people I had left there.

The Unknown Person's Point of View

I sat on a higher part of the rooftop and watched her as she looked up at the stars.

'She is thinking about home' I realized as her thoughts rushed to my mind like a waterfall cascading down a large cliff into a smooth yet strong river. I was sure that Koenma didn't know she was out here and I was eagerly waiting for her to fall asleep so that I could bring her back inside. It would only be a few minutes now and then I would pick her up and bring her to her bed, but instead of falling asleep she started to cry. I figured it was just from being homesick and that the feeling would pass in just a few moments but it didn't, the tears just kept coming. Something inside of me told me to go to her and try to comfort her. But if I did she would find out about me, but that longing inside still remained as I sat there and argued with myself. After a moment or so I decided to take a risky move and try and comfort her. If she found out who I was, so what, and besides the chances of that were slim since it was awfully dark out. I silently jumped down from my perch above and calmly walked up towards her.

Kari's Point of View



I suddenly felt a hand on my shoulder and had the urge to spin around to see who it was but something stopped me. Normally I would have run or screamed but this persons hand was warm or comforting, almost as if they were saying that everything would be ok. I slowly turned around as not to startle whomever this was and found that it was hard to see them. All that I could really tell was that this person was a guy due to his broad shoulders and shorter hair. Though I couldn't see it he looked at me with soft and expressive eyes that seemed to try and comfort me. He then took his hand and gently wiped away my tears with his fingers as I attempted to look up at him. I felt like I could melt right then and there with this guy looking at me with those soft and expressive eyes. I could tell he cared, but I had never even met him before in my life, so how could he know who I was? I closed my eyes as he let his fingers trace my lips, I didn't even know this person nor could I see him but something told me to trust him even under those circumstances. There was a silence for a moment, not even the sound of the wind was heard as I silently took a deep breath unconsciously. He dropped his hands from my face and brought them to my shoulders. The thought suddenly occurred to me that this guy was going to try and kiss me. I wasn't sure of what to do, so like someone who didn't know what to do I stood and tried to act like I did know what to do. I suddenly felt his lips press against mine softly with a little tingle that made me feel like I was a bowl of Jell-O. But I guess I had welcomed his kiss as I didn't pull away even when I felt him gently push his tongue into my mouth. A surge of emotions that I couldn't identify suddenly started to run through my body as he let his tongue explore my mouth a little more before pulling away just as quickly as he came, letting his lips brush against mine softly and then cradling me in his arms gently. It seemed like he could protect me forever, like he was my guardian angel sent from heaven. I could still taste his lips as licked my lips, I couldn't believe it but that kiss from a total stranger just left me longing for more. But I couldn't, something had told me that I shouldn't, that I should just fall asleep and forget anything happened at all, that I should make believe that it was just all a dream. So I did, I let myself fall asleep in his arms.

The Unknown Person's Point of View

I had no idea what I had just done, and what had even brought me to do it. I couldn't believe that I had just kissed the girl like that especially when she didn't even know who I was. I wanted to scold myself for even attempting such a thing not to mention completing it as I held her gently in my arms. I had hoped that she would fall asleep soon that she would forget that any of this ever happened. I had wished that I hadn't come to comfort her in the first place, so I wouldn't even be having these thoughts. I looked down at her one more time and noted that she had fallen asleep.

'Good' I thought, 'the sooner I get her back the better. Hopefully she'll just think that this is all a dream.' I slowly lifter her into my arms and carried her off the rooftop and to her room, where I tucked her in and kissed her gently on her forehead before exiting swiftly.

Kari's Point of View

I woke up very early the next morning with Botan at the foot of my bed looking at me strangely. Puu was chirping as well and the sun hadn't even come up. I looked at the clock, it was only 1 in the morning. I yawned as I sat up.

"You won't believe what I just dreamt, but it just had to be one of the best dreams I had ever had." I said to her.

"Well tell me about it." She urged.

"Well it was about 11 o'clock tonight and I was on the rooftop of Koenma's palace. I was just getting a breath of fresh air and relaxing, looking at the stars and thinking about home. Well I started to get homesick and then started to cry." I started

"And that's a good dream how?" she asked in disbelief.

"I wasn't finished." I replied, " And then this mysterious guy came over. He put his hand on my shoulder but I didn't scream or run I just turned around slowly. I couldn't really see him since it was dark, but his eyes just seemed so soft and expressive as they looked at me to try and comfort me. And then he wiped my tears gently and traced my lips with his fingers. After a moment of silence he kissed me. But it wasn't just any kiss Botan, I mean he really kissed me. I can still taste it on my lips now. But it was so great, and then I fell asleep in his arms and that's the last thing I remember." I explain.

"Sounds to me like it wasn't just a dream." Botan said

"Huh? Maybe it really happened but who knows, I mean how do you figure that?" I asked her

"Well I came back to check on you at that time and you were missing, and Puu was all distraught and crying too, but now you're back." She said.

"So what if it really did happen?" I asked

"Well then I'd have to say you're one lucky girl. Do you know how many girls' dream of having some mysterious guy, almost like a guardian angel, who not only watches over them but also kisses them? " She answered with a big smile. We giggled a bit, just like I might do with Laura, Christina, or Seyla over some hot guy, or some romantic story one of us had told.

"This can be our little secret ok?" Botan said with a smile. I nodded in agreement.

"But tell me before you run off again ok? I promise I won't tell anyone else but you had Puu and I worried." She added.

'Thanks Botan, and um next time you want to wake me up, try a little later then 1 in the morning ok?" I asked with a smile.

"Ok, well goodnight Kari, and sweet dreams." She said before leaving.

"You too Botan." I answered. I then fell back into my bed and pulled the covers over myself allowing Puu to sleep soundly next to me in my arms and fell asleep.

Authoress' notes: All right its now currently 11:07pm EST. That's right people it took be 2 whole hours to write this chapter. I hoped you enjoyed it! Please do review! I miss having reviews! And I really need them! Thank you so much to those who have been reviewing my story! And thanks goes to the readers as well, please do review even if you haven't or have before. And now I turn this to Koenma for the preview of the next chapter!

Preview: Hello there. Well it looks like Kari has had her sweet dreams for a while, if you count a week as a while then ok. But now she has another vision this time telling her to run away, and she does! What will my father think of this? ( Oh no) and will he allow me to go after her, or will he get so angry that he'll cause major disasters in the human world? Uh oh, looks like I've got my hands full in the next chapter. Read the next chapter to find out what happens to Kari and me in the next chapter of: The Wing Goddess!