Hey Guys! Thanks to all those who reviewed! Keep them coming because I really appreciate it! I don't think my writing was affected this time but I was listening to John Mayer when I wrote this, and whenever I listen to his music sometimes my writing changes a bit to be more poetic in a way. But that's not the point. Yay only 4 days between updates! Go me! The only thing that's sad is that school starts on august 27th for me. And my brother goes to college (its only about a 10 to 15 minute drive from where I live, he's going to UCONN) and I'm going to miss him soooooooooooo much! Also I go to my dad's house for 2 weeks so I won't be able to update then unless I feel real productive, which isn't likely since they keep me really busy over there. Well all right I know you are sick of hearing about me so I'll go to Puu and a translator for the disclaimer and then I have a short note regarding the story, and them its Chapter 13!

Disclaimer:

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Translator: Chelz only owns her original characters, Kari and her family and friends, and does not own Yu Yu Hakusho in any shape or form though she wants to. If u want to use one of her characters you can e-mail her at RavenDropz@cox.net or just ask in a review!

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Translator: If you are calling regarding form 298-T please hang up and dial 1-203-287-2003.

Chelz: Puu that's from my mom's answering machine at work! Have you been listening to me on the phone?

Puu: Puu!

Translator: yes I have.

Chelz: Puu! Hey! Well at least you did well on the disclaimer now here is a note from the authoress.... Hey that's me!

Authoress' Note: From this chapter on I'm going to use these terms:

Reikai- spirit world

Ningenkai- human world

Makai- demon world

Ningen (Hiei uses this term)-human

Kitsune- fox demon (I will still use fox demon but this is just another way to say it :))

Reikai Tantei (I know I've used this b4) - this is like the equivalent to spirit detective in the English dub.

And now finally onto chapter 13 of The Wing Goddess!

The Wing Goddess Chapter 13



Koenma's Point of View

The sun was beginning to rise as I reached the place where I was told Kari was last seen. I prayed to god, well myself, that she was ok, and that she was still there sleeping safe and sound. I wandered a bit taking in all of the sights, it had been a long time since I had been out of the palace and into the world but I still did know how dangerous it could be.

"Puu!!!" I heard Yusuke's little spirit beast chirp. He said it over and over again as if he were trying to wake Kari up. I ran as quickly as I could to where the sound came from. I stopped, panting when I saw her lying peacefully on the ground with Puu chirping and bouncing on her, trying to wake her up. I was relieved and I finally had a chance to rest after long hours of searching.

"It's ok Puu, take a break. Give me a minute and I'll wake her up." I said as I sat down to catch my breath. It was strangely quiet for that minute. The wind blew fiercely in the background and the long, tall grass whipped around violently. I slowly reached out my hand and gently shook her shoulder as I called her name.

"Kari! Kari you need to wake up! KARI!!" I finally yelled as loud as I could in her ear. She jumped and gave a little yelp, she then opened her eyes.

"KOENMA! What are you doing here!" she exclaimed. Her expression was at first full of surprise and thanks but it then quickly changed as she turned her back to me. I couldn't see her face but I could tell that she was angry... or at least just acting like it.

"I don't need your help! Especially since you were the one who wouldn't allow me to leave in the first place! Go back to where you came from." She snapped. Puu tried to 'talk' some sense into her but she only snapped at him as well.

"Come on Puu. Or are you going to betray me and go with him?" She asked angrily. I was caught by surprise of how her mood changed so much in such a short time, especially since I never did anything and I only came to help. I too found myself becoming a little angry, especially at her disrespect towards me and her inconsiderate nature towards me coming to help her. I then got up and dusted myself off as I turned to leave.

"Well if that's what you want, don't come running to me when any demons take you and decide to kill you because I won't help." I said and then started to walk out.

"I can't believe her! How can she be so disrespectful and rude! Especially after I came to help her! Maybe I should've made her put a sir after my name every time she spoke!" I muttered under my breath as I continued walking on. I wasn't but about a quarter mile away when I heard a scream. I turned to see what was going on that was so important.

"KOENMA! HE-" She screamed but she was cut off by a cloth being tied in her mouth and being blindfolded by two fox demons as they smiled menacingly and started to take her away.

"So what are you going to do little reikai prince? She's ours now!" They said with a laugh.

"Do with her what you want. I could care less if she was dead or not. Oh and go ahead and make her death long and painful, it'll just make me feel so much better in the end." I replied coldly and left the two kitsunes in a state of confusion and happiness. I could care less about her; she means nothing to me, or any of Reikai.

Kari's Point of View

His words stung me over and over again as he walked off and I was kidnapped by these two demons. I had no idea what they looked like so I had no idea about how strong they were either, otherwise I might have already knocked them out. Normally if someone had just done what Koenma did I would have went over and literally waged war with them, but this time was different. This time I deserved what I was getting especially after my treatment of everyone and most importantly Koenma himself. For the first time in my life I realized how much of a brat I truly could be, I had dropped to my lowest level, these were the kind of people I hated and without realizing it I had become one of them. So instead of screaming and panicking I just gave in telling myself that I deserved this, and if I had been more respectful and not as self centered then this probably wouldn't have happened, therefore it was my fault.

After a while I could sense a change in where I was. The air seemed to hold a different smell to it, not so sweet, but not unbearable either. The area gave me a cold feeling like I was going to freeze, and everything just felt so dark, not that I could see but it felt that way, I could just tell. I could still feel the ground on my feet as the demons had made me walk. It didn't feel as soft under my feet, instead of the plains where I was I know felt what seemed like hard packed dirt with roots and twigs and other things under my feet. I was in a forest I realized, but this definitely wasn't the forest I was going to go into before, this forest was much different. It was much too dark to be a part of Reikai. I had to be in what Koenma and the others called Makai.

Koenma's Point Of View

I walked back into my office as quickly as I could not caring as to where Kari was or where she would end up. It didn't matter, what mattered now was all of the work I had to finish. I quickly changed back to my toddler form and sat in my chair and just stared at the piles of papers waiting to be stamped in front of me and sighed. I had a lot to do. After a moment of staring I finally took the first paper and added my stamp of approval and began to do the same with all of the other papers, over and over and over, this was how I worked. I could've sworn I had the worst job in the world, no not just the world, in all 3 worlds. I wished I had something sweet to snack on or anything at all to drink I was so thirsty. I still couldn't believe that I had wasted all of that energy on that stupid girl. I looked up from my work for a moment to notice that George had entered with yet another stack that needed approval.

"Can't you see how depressing it is to get halfway through one stack to have an ogre bring another one twice its size?! You could have at least done me the courtesy of waiting till I had a little more done." I complained, the truth was it was depressing to look at all the papers, and to know that all I did all day was stamp papers, get something to eat every now and then, end up working to 3 or 4 in the morning only to wake up at 8 and have to do it all over again. Well thank god for coffee is all I have to say about that.

"I'm sorry Koenma sir! Can I get anything else for you?" He asked

"We of course ogre! Can't you tell I'm hungry?" I yelled at his stupidity.

"Of course! Right away Koenma sir!" He replied and quickly ran out to do his requested duty. He came back five minutes later with a fresh plate of food and set it on my desk. And what do you know; the ogre didn't get me something to drink!

"OGRE!" I yelled

"What is it Koenma sir?" He asked timidly

"Where's my drink!?" I exclaimed

"Right away sir I'll be right back." He answered and went of to get me a drink. Well by the time the ogre came back it had been 10 minutes and I wasn't hungry or thirsty anymore.

"Here's your drink sir." He said setting it down by the food on my desk. I just let it sit there with the food as I continued stamping papers.

"Why aren't you eating sir?" he asked

"Well I'm not hungry." I replied. I could've sworn he fell flat on his face at the comment, and I laughed a little under my breath.

"I'm all set for now Ogre, you can go and help someone else now." I said shooing him away. He walked out of my office still in disbelief over the food. Out of the corner of my eye I noticed Botan and George quickly greeting each other before going there separate ways as she entered my office and shut the door behind her.

"What is it Botan I'm quite busy right now?" I said not bother to look up at her or make eye contact. She picked me up by the collar and look at me with an angered face.

"I don't care your work can wait we need to talk, now!" She yelled.

"Well I can't talk like this, you gonna put me down?" I asked of her and she obliged setting me back in my chair and taking a seat across from me with my desk in between us.

"Where's Kari?" She demanded

"I don't know." I replied with a hint of anger at the memory

"I asked you where she is!" Botan exclaimed again

"Do you think I care?" I replied.

"Well, then what happened to her?" She asked

"Two fox demons kidnapped her, what more do you want to know?" I asked nonchalantly.

"What! And you just stood there?" She yelled hear volume rising with every syllable.

"Actually no. I told them that they could do with her as they pleased, that I could care less if she were dead or alive, and if they did happen to kill her make it long and painful because it'll make me feel so much better in the end." I replied calmly. I wasn't showing any signs of hate or concern or anything I was just showing absolutely no emotion whatsoever towards the subject, whom was Kari.

"How can you say such things?" Botan protested.

"Well she was the one who told me to go back to where I came from and that she didn't need any help so I did what she told me to." I answered

"Koenma! You insincere jerk! I can't believe you! And that poor girl was starting to fall for you!" She exclaimed before quickly covering her mouth.

"Oops did I say that out loud?" she asked

"Yes you did Botan and need you be reminded of who you are talking to?" I replied

"No sir not at all. It's just, how can you be so insensitive and just watch them take her away. And then add to that torture! I just can't believe you would crawl that low." She complained in a smooth crescendo.

"Well she was being a complete and total brat." I replied simply.

"Koenma you have no right to say anything about her being a brat because you yourself have been one all of your life! I think you should look in the mirror before you move on to criticizing others qualities, especially if you have those same qualities yourself! And for your information she was not being a brat! She was very sweet and polite and had better manners then you yourself!" She screamed in my face and before I had a chance to order her out of the room she excused herself.

Yusuke's Point of View

"Well, well, well, what do we have here boys?" I said as I eyed the many demons in front of us. There had to be hundreds of them and these were only the weaker ones.

"If you ask me we have some house cleaning to do." Hiei replied unsheathing his sword.

"That is true, we don't want our guests to be unhappy do we?" Kurama added taking out a rose.

" If you mean Yukina then I'll take out all of these demons all by myself!" Kuwabara claimed as he created his spirit sword.

"I don't think that would be necessary Kuwabara seeing as Kurama and Hiei have already taken out a good amount of them now." I answered with a snicker.

"Hey guys! Wait for me!" He exclaimed in response and charged into the pack of demons. I myself didn't wait much longer to get into the action; I didn't want the others to get all of the credit. I readied some spirit energy and entered the battle with a big bang of my shotgun attack. I was pleased as I noted this first effort took out around 10 of the demons.

"Hey guys I got 10 so far what about you!" I yelled as I had decided to start a little contest between the four us.

"Well If I counted correctly that was just 20 that I took out." Kurama said continuing.

"You guys are crazy I only have 6!" Kuwabara complained as he only tried harder.

"Well I've got you all beat! 34!" Hiei claimed with pride. It didn't take much longer to clear the rest of the demons out, maybe but another hour and we now sat resting and sharing our totals.

"Well Hiei how many did you get?" I asked

" 248 not that this little game meant anything." He said with that added comment to make it seem as if he didn't care.

"Well I myself got 235." Kurama said

"Well I got 200. Beat that Urameshi!" Kuwabara beamed

"Gladly I killed 217 demons." I replied with a laugh, as his face seemed to grow redder with anger.

"Oh come on Urameshi! Right here and right now! I'll kick your ass!" He challenged.

"You idiot, he could beat you if he were asleep and using just his left hand." Hiei commented and Kurama gave a little laugh.

"Watch it Shorty!!" Kuwabara taunted trying to sound threatening but only coming out as just the opposite.

"Not now Kuwabara, I'll kick your ass later. We gotta stop all the demons that try to come in until we figure out a way to make it all end." I said

"Yusuke has a point Kuwabara, we need to stay as strong and healthy as we can and beating one another up won't help us too much in that area, though it does sound entertaining." Kurama noted.

"Well I don't know about you but I'm tired, I think I'm gonna go home and sleep." I said with a yawn. As I started walking away I could here the sound of Hiei vanishing. And then I heard Kurama say that he had to get home so he would be able to wake up and go to school the next morning. And then I heard the simple,

"Hey Urameshi! Wait from me!" which obviously came from Kuwabara.

"Hurry up Kuwabara! I ain't got all day!" I said as I waited for him impatiently.

"What's the rush you got a date with Keiko or something?" He asked

"How many times do I have to say this? I'm not he boyfriend!" I yelled in aggravation.

" Well are you going somewhere?" he asked

"Are you always this persistent Kuwabara? I'm going to sleep all right? I think that's the one thing I look forward to in the day don't ruin it for me." I replied.

"All right Urameshi, well I'll see you in school tomorrow." Kuwabara said as I turned towards the direction of my apartments door. My mom was probably out drinking again, but I didn't care I just wanted to go to sleep.

"Yeah see ya." I said with a wave and opened the door to my apartment. It was a mess as usual. I think the only time that it was clean was when Keiko came over and helped out or those few days when Kari hung out here, and neither of them had been over in a few weeks so it was once again the mess it once was. I crawled over empty beer bottles and other garbage lying around to my room, which unlike the rest of the house was clean due to the disgust of having such a messy house. I looked around to see if I was forgetting anything I needed to do or had to have for tomorrow and then I just fell back on my bed and crawled under the covers. It felt so nice when I was in my bed, no one to bug me, no teachers, no Botan, no Koenma with his missions. I thought about all of the demons we had killed today and smiled knowing that Kuwabara was still eager to let me kick his ass as I drifted off to sleep, not caring if I was still in my clothes that I fought in or if I were snoring, I was just happy to be asleep.

Authoress' note:

So how did you like this chapter? I had so much fun writing it! I love writing in Yusuke's point of view, probably because I can relate to him in a way that I know how he feels with everyone on his back. I kinda have that with school, only I'm doing good and my parents won't accept anything lower then a B. (ouch) My mom doesn't mind though unless it's a D or an F. I failed a science test this year and I told my mom, she said it was ok as long as I tried my best and she never told my dad so I was happy. Lol. Enough about me this is a Yu Yu Hakusho fan fiction, not the diary of Chelz the authoress! So how do you like the story so far? In my plans this is around halfway through the fic so I now welcome you the second half of my fic! Please read and review! Thanks so much!

Preview of the next chapter:

Hey guys it's Yusuke here and with all of this stuff going on you think I'd be able to miss school. But of course not I still have to go, and Keiko makes me go shopping with her too. Man I hate girl stuff, especially shopping. But to make matters worse something bad happens to Keiko! I can't say what because I don't know but when I find out who it was they're going to get hell from me! And what's going to happen to Kari? All this and more in the next chapter of The Wing Goddess!