Shuichi the intellectual!
summary: Shu goes intellectual! and he actually has a good idea! (*gasp*) does Yuki like his idea? will he actually help Shu?
disclaimer: duh. I don't own gravitation. if I did Yuki would have at least used lub their first time (has anyone else noticed they didn't? I think that would have taken away some of the loud shout of OWW!! after they started in vol 2 of the manga)
a/n: this chapter starts a few lines and some random dialog after the last chapter. you don't really miss much. and the chapters are all gonna be short but I will have a new one up every few days so I hope that makes up for the length! ^^;
timeline: about four years after the forth volume. a bit ooc-ness but that's cuz of the 4 years later thing not my inability to stick to the original plot of the series.
rating: pg-13 going on R for some references. most parts are pg-13 though
*****************************************************Chapter two**********************************************************
Yuki and his editor (a/n: I know I didn't give her a name. if anyone has a suggestion for a name, and for reasons I do not wish to disclose, some names will be rejected, please make one and I'll edit it in. Thanks!) got up and shook hands. "Sayonara!"
"I'll call and see how the new project is coming in about a month. Thank you for the manuscript, Yuki-san."
Yuki waved a hand behind him as he began walking out the door, dragging Shu by the hand. "is she gone?" Eiri muttered to his koi.
"Ah...yeah."
"good." and with that he pushed Shu against the wall and kissed him passionately (a/n: teehee! the same way he did for their first kiss! wee!). As they got up, Yuki pulled Shu to his feet and went for his keys and wallet.
"huh? Yuki? where we goin' now?"
"we're buying you a laptop."
"huh? why?"
"how do you expect to write a story except for on a computer?"
"well I have my on computers... a few actually."
"you need a computer with word processing. all of your computers are full to bursting with music programs and tracks. besides, you need something portable."
"why?"
"just because. c'mon. were going to the computer store."
"but...but...but I'm not dressed to go outside yet!"
"fine. but hurry up." --half an hour later--
"ARE YOU READY YET, BAKA?!?!?"
"yes, I'm ready. and you can't rush beauty!"
*grr...*
"are we going or what?" Shuichi asked.
"yes we're going! WE WERE WAITING FOR YOU!!!"
--a few hours later--
Yuki and Shuichi walk into the house laden down with at least twenty CDs and one small box that contained the cheapest, most portable, and most durable laptop they could find. Of course, Shu had bought the removable cover for the back of the screen in blue and had bought a black permanent marker. He immediately took these out and scrawled "BAD LUCK" across the back. He would have written directly on the laptop but he had a feeling Yuki would get mad at that.
"Of course, the only decent computer store in town happens to be right next to your favorite music store!"
"Well, its not my fault, Yuki!" he sad with a whine and pouted. He looked up at Yuki sweetly with his lower lip trembling slightly.
'Dammit, he probably doesn't even realize he does that lower lip thing!' Yuki thought with a growl as he grabbed his koibito's face for another passionate kiss. 'the things this kid does to me...'
***************************************end chapter two******************************************
hi! thank you for all the beautiful reviews! WOOHOO!
staci18: hey! thanks for the review, staci-chan! I know there are a few inaccuracies. didn't I say that in one of my author's notes? and don't forget to bring ur manga next time we get together! u can point out the inaccuracies... -_-;;; himitsu: I know that wasn't that big of a deal of an idea, but im not done with the fic yet!!! and maybe I should just change the summary. it should be more along the lines of "Shu goes intellectual. how does Eiri react?" cuz its not really his idea that's so intellectual, it's the fact that there's this huge increase in his level of maturity and depth once he starts writing. that's kinda what im gonna try and get at even if I don't succeed. -.-;; Aja: thanks for the comment. I would leave out the author's notes and put them at the end, but that starts to bug me. im not gonna do that when I get to the deeper parts, like the 'writing'. Apocalypse of the Broom Closet: YAY SHU'S INTELLIGENCE!!!!! and this is only the beginning! wait till he starts writing! (p.s. this will be my first foray into the first person POV so feel free to criticize!) and fortunately I don't have any flames for this fic! but id be more than willing to send some smores ur way from my other fic! -.-; its not an anime fanfic. chibichibi386: see! I updated! and I hope to continue updating as often as humanly possible as long as my teachers don't start calling home for late assignments. stupid teachers. THANK YOU, WONDERFUL REVIEWERS AND PEOPLE WHO ARE JUST JOINING US NOW!!! id like to thank my friends staci and lain and id also like to ask staci to email this to shelly. I forget her email address. -.-;;;;; don't I feel special.
And sry this chapter was kinda short. I lost steam. And if I didn't cut it off there id be going on forever.
Oh, and just in case anyone was wondering, I wrote both of these chapters in about two hours a piece. So that's about how fast I'll try to get these out. I really hate ppl who say, "I'll update a lot!" and that means updating once every 2 months. Heh.
summary: Shu goes intellectual! and he actually has a good idea! (*gasp*) does Yuki like his idea? will he actually help Shu?
disclaimer: duh. I don't own gravitation. if I did Yuki would have at least used lub their first time (has anyone else noticed they didn't? I think that would have taken away some of the loud shout of OWW!! after they started in vol 2 of the manga)
a/n: this chapter starts a few lines and some random dialog after the last chapter. you don't really miss much. and the chapters are all gonna be short but I will have a new one up every few days so I hope that makes up for the length! ^^;
timeline: about four years after the forth volume. a bit ooc-ness but that's cuz of the 4 years later thing not my inability to stick to the original plot of the series.
rating: pg-13 going on R for some references. most parts are pg-13 though
*****************************************************Chapter two**********************************************************
Yuki and his editor (a/n: I know I didn't give her a name. if anyone has a suggestion for a name, and for reasons I do not wish to disclose, some names will be rejected, please make one and I'll edit it in. Thanks!) got up and shook hands. "Sayonara!"
"I'll call and see how the new project is coming in about a month. Thank you for the manuscript, Yuki-san."
Yuki waved a hand behind him as he began walking out the door, dragging Shu by the hand. "is she gone?" Eiri muttered to his koi.
"Ah...yeah."
"good." and with that he pushed Shu against the wall and kissed him passionately (a/n: teehee! the same way he did for their first kiss! wee!). As they got up, Yuki pulled Shu to his feet and went for his keys and wallet.
"huh? Yuki? where we goin' now?"
"we're buying you a laptop."
"huh? why?"
"how do you expect to write a story except for on a computer?"
"well I have my on computers... a few actually."
"you need a computer with word processing. all of your computers are full to bursting with music programs and tracks. besides, you need something portable."
"why?"
"just because. c'mon. were going to the computer store."
"but...but...but I'm not dressed to go outside yet!"
"fine. but hurry up." --half an hour later--
"ARE YOU READY YET, BAKA?!?!?"
"yes, I'm ready. and you can't rush beauty!"
*grr...*
"are we going or what?" Shuichi asked.
"yes we're going! WE WERE WAITING FOR YOU!!!"
--a few hours later--
Yuki and Shuichi walk into the house laden down with at least twenty CDs and one small box that contained the cheapest, most portable, and most durable laptop they could find. Of course, Shu had bought the removable cover for the back of the screen in blue and had bought a black permanent marker. He immediately took these out and scrawled "BAD LUCK" across the back. He would have written directly on the laptop but he had a feeling Yuki would get mad at that.
"Of course, the only decent computer store in town happens to be right next to your favorite music store!"
"Well, its not my fault, Yuki!" he sad with a whine and pouted. He looked up at Yuki sweetly with his lower lip trembling slightly.
'Dammit, he probably doesn't even realize he does that lower lip thing!' Yuki thought with a growl as he grabbed his koibito's face for another passionate kiss. 'the things this kid does to me...'
***************************************end chapter two******************************************
hi! thank you for all the beautiful reviews! WOOHOO!
staci18: hey! thanks for the review, staci-chan! I know there are a few inaccuracies. didn't I say that in one of my author's notes? and don't forget to bring ur manga next time we get together! u can point out the inaccuracies... -_-;;; himitsu: I know that wasn't that big of a deal of an idea, but im not done with the fic yet!!! and maybe I should just change the summary. it should be more along the lines of "Shu goes intellectual. how does Eiri react?" cuz its not really his idea that's so intellectual, it's the fact that there's this huge increase in his level of maturity and depth once he starts writing. that's kinda what im gonna try and get at even if I don't succeed. -.-;; Aja: thanks for the comment. I would leave out the author's notes and put them at the end, but that starts to bug me. im not gonna do that when I get to the deeper parts, like the 'writing'. Apocalypse of the Broom Closet: YAY SHU'S INTELLIGENCE!!!!! and this is only the beginning! wait till he starts writing! (p.s. this will be my first foray into the first person POV so feel free to criticize!) and fortunately I don't have any flames for this fic! but id be more than willing to send some smores ur way from my other fic! -.-; its not an anime fanfic. chibichibi386: see! I updated! and I hope to continue updating as often as humanly possible as long as my teachers don't start calling home for late assignments. stupid teachers. THANK YOU, WONDERFUL REVIEWERS AND PEOPLE WHO ARE JUST JOINING US NOW!!! id like to thank my friends staci and lain and id also like to ask staci to email this to shelly. I forget her email address. -.-;;;;; don't I feel special.
And sry this chapter was kinda short. I lost steam. And if I didn't cut it off there id be going on forever.
Oh, and just in case anyone was wondering, I wrote both of these chapters in about two hours a piece. So that's about how fast I'll try to get these out. I really hate ppl who say, "I'll update a lot!" and that means updating once every 2 months. Heh.