Allrightie, have to make some comments:
1) This is based on the manga. NOT THE ANIME! Remember that.
2) Also, I've only read a little into volume 5, so this is gonna go from there and kinda spin off.
3) I was very, very wrong about abba. (Which was kindly pointed out by marissa) I'm going back and changing it to a non-existent group of drag queens who were in a movie named after the group. I can't go wrong there! heh. **************************************************************************** **
Shuichi the intellectual!
disclaimer: duh. I don't own gravitation. if I did Yuki would have at least used lub their first time (has anyone else noticed they didn't? I think that would have taken away some of the loud shout of OWW!! after they started in vol 2 of the manga)
timeline: about four years after whatever manga are published in the US as of now. Which would only be up to volume five now. a bit ooc-ness but that's cuz of the 4 years later thing not my inability to stick to the original plot of the series.
rating: pg-13
==written stuff. The book that they're writting==
also: Kira Funjatuu is Maiko, Keisuke Fantajuu is Shuichi, suzuki kenji is Yuki, Aso Ryashu is Seguchi Tohma, Takumi is Ryuchi, Katuru is hiroshi **********************************chapter three******************************* (a/n: here's what's written on the title page/intro:) Gravity. A book by Yuki Eiri and an anonymous author.
Editor's note: Yuki Eiri wrote from the perspective of a Japanese Lit. Professor named Suzuki Kenji while master Yuki's friend writes from the perspective of an eighteen year old rock and roll star named Keisuke Fantajuu.
==What a hard day at work. Ah, well, at least he let me off early. The park is so dark at night... "Man, this way may be a shortcut, but it sure is dark... and empty." I sighed. "All you find hanging around a dark park at night are ghosts." I hope not...
Damn! I try to stay focused. Sometimes its hard. I need more than my sister and my friends, I need someone who really understands me... hmm. Maybe Kira's right and I do need a girlfriend.
I laughed. Some one to say something like, "'Ohhhhhh! This is the sweetest, most fabulous poem I've ever read, Keisuke-kun! You're so romantic! You can do anything! I believe in you a hundred percent!' " Something like that? "I guess it would feel kinda good to hear that from a girl. Maybe I should get Kat to set me up with one of his friends..." aa...aah...choo! "It's pretty cold. Woah, my lyrics! ...hey! Come back here!"
And then there was a man standing there in front of me. Where's he come from? He looks kind of, um... woah! Weird train of thought right there! Stopping that now!
Wait a minute! What the? That dude is reading my lyrics, and he's gonna see how lame they are... but wait a minute! What the hell is a foreigner doing around here in the middle of the night? Maybe he's one of those shady characters like on TV and he's gonna beat me up and take my shoes...
"Did you write this?" He speaks!
"Um... huh? ...yeah..." 'Whoa, he's Japanese?'
"You write like you're at a third grade reading level. Is this drivel really you're idea of a love song? Are you nuts? If I were you, I'd consider learning a reliable trade."
Is it possible this guy could be right?==
"Yuki! I finished the chapter where I met you!"
"Shu-chan? Huh? What?"
"Eiri! I just finished what I was working on! How far are you?"
"Oh! Your done! Can I read it?"
"Um, sure."
'Hmm,' thought Eiri as he began reading over his lover's paragraph about the night they had met. 'How in the world did he remember every line he and I said? I don't! Heh. He thought I was a foreigner.' Yuki smirked.
"What's so funny, Eiri?"
"You thought I was a foreigner!"
"Well, you do have blond hair and light eyes"
"What foreigner would wander around a Japanese park at two in the morning if he didn't at least speak Japanese?"
"Shut up! I was being stupid, okay?"
"Okay, okay. Do you want to read mine?"
"Yes please!"
"Well you can't."
"Yuki!" he moaned.
"You can't until you give me something. Like a kiss."
Shu's eyes grew wide as he quickly stepped into Eiri's waiting arms and kissed him. He gently brushed his tongue against his lover's lower lip and Yuki sighed to allow his lover admittance. Yuki allowed Shu time to explore before taking control of the kiss. When he could feel they where both in need of breath he bit gently on Shuichi's tongue as he pulled away. (A/n: I suck at descriptions. But you get the idea right?)
They both panted and sank to the floor in each other's arms. Yuki grabbed his laptop from the desk next to him and placed it gently on his lover's lap. "Here."
==Two o'clock in the morning. Stupid students. No one cares about what I teach. I just have to take a walk to clear my head. Hhh... wait, who's that? there's a kid! What's he doing wandering around in the middle of the night? He's breaking my concentration. Why is he talking to himself? It sounds like he's pretending to be his girlfriend. His name is Keisuke, huh? Oh, he writes.
The wind whistled through the trees. Something fell from the kid's hands. Maybe he writes better than the idiots in my tenth grade literature class. I picked up the lyrics.
Heh, not bad. He's got potential. I can tell. But he's not going anywhere with this poem. Very amateur. But he does understand the beat and rhythm of our language. It looks like he would make a very good musician. But someone should write for him. He really isn't that good at the writing in itself.
"Did you write this?" I can tell he's surprised to hear me. What an idiot. He probably thinks I'm a foreigner.
"Um... huh? ...yeah..." Just as I thought. He has a beautiful voice. If only... Whoa! What was that thought? push that aside! think about the hot new teacher in school... there, that's it.
"You write like you're at a third grade reading level. Is this drivel really you're idea of a love song? Are you nuts? If I were you, I'd consider learning a reliable trade."
His face falls. I turn around and walk away. I can still see him out of the corner of my eye. He falls to his knees.==
**********************end chapter three**************************** To all my wonderful reviewers:
chibichibi386: I'm writing, I'm writing! ^^
Zaphi: I know! Shu is so much cooler when he's smart! (Not that he wasn't cool before but... he was more cute than cool)
Marissa: Thank you, thank you, thank you for pointing out that HUGE mistake! I'm editing it as soon as I get this posted! *bows head and begs for forgiveness*
Noali: GO SMART SHU!!! I got my friend's permission to write her plotbunny and develop it! since it led to this fic.
Himitsu: I'll re-review as soon as I have time! -.-;; stupid homework.... next chapter will be up asap!
Yume no Usagi: I know! He is WAY to femme in the anime. And I haven't even seen the anime I just have screencaps. And yes, Hiro can (emphasis on CAN) be hotter than Shu. But I think Yuki is hotter than both of them, but that's just my opinion. Longer hair is definitely better though. Go bishie- ness!
Apocalypse of the Broom Closet: I am updating! And thanks for the info, I was just using the author's note to let everyone know it would take me a little while to update. And to apologize for the REALLY bad mistake with the abba thing.
Zaphi: I'm glad! I hope you'll like the back story when I write it. It's definitely a lot more angsty than this fic. Heh. Hope you guys like it.
1) This is based on the manga. NOT THE ANIME! Remember that.
2) Also, I've only read a little into volume 5, so this is gonna go from there and kinda spin off.
3) I was very, very wrong about abba. (Which was kindly pointed out by marissa) I'm going back and changing it to a non-existent group of drag queens who were in a movie named after the group. I can't go wrong there! heh. **************************************************************************** **
Shuichi the intellectual!
disclaimer: duh. I don't own gravitation. if I did Yuki would have at least used lub their first time (has anyone else noticed they didn't? I think that would have taken away some of the loud shout of OWW!! after they started in vol 2 of the manga)
timeline: about four years after whatever manga are published in the US as of now. Which would only be up to volume five now. a bit ooc-ness but that's cuz of the 4 years later thing not my inability to stick to the original plot of the series.
rating: pg-13
==written stuff. The book that they're writting==
also: Kira Funjatuu is Maiko, Keisuke Fantajuu is Shuichi, suzuki kenji is Yuki, Aso Ryashu is Seguchi Tohma, Takumi is Ryuchi, Katuru is hiroshi **********************************chapter three******************************* (a/n: here's what's written on the title page/intro:) Gravity. A book by Yuki Eiri and an anonymous author.
Editor's note: Yuki Eiri wrote from the perspective of a Japanese Lit. Professor named Suzuki Kenji while master Yuki's friend writes from the perspective of an eighteen year old rock and roll star named Keisuke Fantajuu.
==What a hard day at work. Ah, well, at least he let me off early. The park is so dark at night... "Man, this way may be a shortcut, but it sure is dark... and empty." I sighed. "All you find hanging around a dark park at night are ghosts." I hope not...
Damn! I try to stay focused. Sometimes its hard. I need more than my sister and my friends, I need someone who really understands me... hmm. Maybe Kira's right and I do need a girlfriend.
I laughed. Some one to say something like, "'Ohhhhhh! This is the sweetest, most fabulous poem I've ever read, Keisuke-kun! You're so romantic! You can do anything! I believe in you a hundred percent!' " Something like that? "I guess it would feel kinda good to hear that from a girl. Maybe I should get Kat to set me up with one of his friends..." aa...aah...choo! "It's pretty cold. Woah, my lyrics! ...hey! Come back here!"
And then there was a man standing there in front of me. Where's he come from? He looks kind of, um... woah! Weird train of thought right there! Stopping that now!
Wait a minute! What the? That dude is reading my lyrics, and he's gonna see how lame they are... but wait a minute! What the hell is a foreigner doing around here in the middle of the night? Maybe he's one of those shady characters like on TV and he's gonna beat me up and take my shoes...
"Did you write this?" He speaks!
"Um... huh? ...yeah..." 'Whoa, he's Japanese?'
"You write like you're at a third grade reading level. Is this drivel really you're idea of a love song? Are you nuts? If I were you, I'd consider learning a reliable trade."
Is it possible this guy could be right?==
"Yuki! I finished the chapter where I met you!"
"Shu-chan? Huh? What?"
"Eiri! I just finished what I was working on! How far are you?"
"Oh! Your done! Can I read it?"
"Um, sure."
'Hmm,' thought Eiri as he began reading over his lover's paragraph about the night they had met. 'How in the world did he remember every line he and I said? I don't! Heh. He thought I was a foreigner.' Yuki smirked.
"What's so funny, Eiri?"
"You thought I was a foreigner!"
"Well, you do have blond hair and light eyes"
"What foreigner would wander around a Japanese park at two in the morning if he didn't at least speak Japanese?"
"Shut up! I was being stupid, okay?"
"Okay, okay. Do you want to read mine?"
"Yes please!"
"Well you can't."
"Yuki!" he moaned.
"You can't until you give me something. Like a kiss."
Shu's eyes grew wide as he quickly stepped into Eiri's waiting arms and kissed him. He gently brushed his tongue against his lover's lower lip and Yuki sighed to allow his lover admittance. Yuki allowed Shu time to explore before taking control of the kiss. When he could feel they where both in need of breath he bit gently on Shuichi's tongue as he pulled away. (A/n: I suck at descriptions. But you get the idea right?)
They both panted and sank to the floor in each other's arms. Yuki grabbed his laptop from the desk next to him and placed it gently on his lover's lap. "Here."
==Two o'clock in the morning. Stupid students. No one cares about what I teach. I just have to take a walk to clear my head. Hhh... wait, who's that? there's a kid! What's he doing wandering around in the middle of the night? He's breaking my concentration. Why is he talking to himself? It sounds like he's pretending to be his girlfriend. His name is Keisuke, huh? Oh, he writes.
The wind whistled through the trees. Something fell from the kid's hands. Maybe he writes better than the idiots in my tenth grade literature class. I picked up the lyrics.
Heh, not bad. He's got potential. I can tell. But he's not going anywhere with this poem. Very amateur. But he does understand the beat and rhythm of our language. It looks like he would make a very good musician. But someone should write for him. He really isn't that good at the writing in itself.
"Did you write this?" I can tell he's surprised to hear me. What an idiot. He probably thinks I'm a foreigner.
"Um... huh? ...yeah..." Just as I thought. He has a beautiful voice. If only... Whoa! What was that thought? push that aside! think about the hot new teacher in school... there, that's it.
"You write like you're at a third grade reading level. Is this drivel really you're idea of a love song? Are you nuts? If I were you, I'd consider learning a reliable trade."
His face falls. I turn around and walk away. I can still see him out of the corner of my eye. He falls to his knees.==
**********************end chapter three**************************** To all my wonderful reviewers:
chibichibi386: I'm writing, I'm writing! ^^
Zaphi: I know! Shu is so much cooler when he's smart! (Not that he wasn't cool before but... he was more cute than cool)
Marissa: Thank you, thank you, thank you for pointing out that HUGE mistake! I'm editing it as soon as I get this posted! *bows head and begs for forgiveness*
Noali: GO SMART SHU!!! I got my friend's permission to write her plotbunny and develop it! since it led to this fic.
Himitsu: I'll re-review as soon as I have time! -.-;; stupid homework.... next chapter will be up asap!
Yume no Usagi: I know! He is WAY to femme in the anime. And I haven't even seen the anime I just have screencaps. And yes, Hiro can (emphasis on CAN) be hotter than Shu. But I think Yuki is hotter than both of them, but that's just my opinion. Longer hair is definitely better though. Go bishie- ness!
Apocalypse of the Broom Closet: I am updating! And thanks for the info, I was just using the author's note to let everyone know it would take me a little while to update. And to apologize for the REALLY bad mistake with the abba thing.
Zaphi: I'm glad! I hope you'll like the back story when I write it. It's definitely a lot more angsty than this fic. Heh. Hope you guys like it.