Shuichi the intellectual!
disclaimer: duh. I don't own gravitation. if I did Yuki would have at least used lub their first time (has anyone else noticed they didn't? I think that would have taken away some of the loud shout of OWW!! after they started in vol 2 of the manga)
timeline: about four years after whatever manga are published in the US as of now. Which would only be up to volume five now. a bit ooc-ness but that's cuz of the 4 years later thing not my inability to stick to the original plot of the series. It's also because of some stuff that me and my friend say happen in the past. You'll see when I get that back story posted.
rating: pg-13
==written stuff. The book that they're writing==
also: Kira Fantajuu is Maiko, Keisuke Fantajuu is Shuichi, Suzuki Kenji is Yuki, Aso Ryashu is Seguchi Tohma, Takumi is Ryuchi, Katuru is Hiroshi
a/n: I'm not going to go through every detail of their relationship. The "book" they're writing does, but I don't have time to write a novel. You know, school, stuff like that. So I'll be writing the parts that I want to explain my idea of the other side of. And the parts I think are important to their relationship. Which means a lot from book one but getting less and less from the other books. also, I'll be starting every chapter with a "chapter" from Shuichi and ending with the corresponding "chapter" from Yuki. Hope you realized that's what's happening from the first one. (chapter three if you want to get technical)
MY DEAR REVIEWERS: So sorry for delaying this update so long! My muses left with the sunshine, but the sun's shining and my inspiration is back!
****************************chapter four*************************** ==That jerk! That stupid, stupid... GRR! Jackass! What gives him the right to knock my lyrics? He doesn't even know me! I am so... DAMN!!! He pisses me off...
::a few hours later::
"You were saying somethin'' happened after work yesterday? What's up?" That was Katuru, my best friend.
Oh yeah. Him. I HATE HIM! "You see, there was this scary guy, and he saw my..."
"Huh? Your what?" That's my sister Kira.
Of course, Kat had to come in with, "Where you peeing in public again? Did he spot your ding-a-ling?"
"NO!! HE SAW MY LYRICS! MY POEMS! And he was a total ass hole about it too. He told me I had no talent and I should quit. I've never seen him before, but he insulted me without a second thought!"
"You don't say?" was my best friend's and my little sister's sympathetic response.
My sarcastic reply was, "gee, thanks for the sympathy guys."
(a/n: I'm running out of creative ways to say who is saying what so I'm gonna go to plain dialogue. sorry to interrupt!)
Katuru: "How much sympathy are you looking for? You want us to cry like little babies the way you are? Is this your morrissey phase or something? You're letting something as dumb as that depress you? Jeez, need someone to change your diaper?"
Kira: "I'm glad to see you so full of self confidence, big brother!"
Me: "I'm self confident! I'm just not stuck up about it! I'm just saying he didn't have to be so mean, is all."
Katuru: "Or maybe he's just more self assured."
Me: "How should I know? I'd never seen him before. It's almost like I could feel his hate, y'know?"
Kira: "What do you care what some nobody says?"
Me: "I DON'T CARE! WHO SAID I DID? dammit! I just want to find him... and... um... make him take it back..."
Kat: "See? You do care!"
Me: "NO I DON'T!"
Or maybe, I do...==
"Eiri? Was it good? Is that okay?"
"Yeah. It's great Shu-chan. Come here." Yuki pulled his lover onto his lap. "I'm sorry."
"Yuki? Why are you sorry?"
"For being so mean to you. And for insulting your lyrics so rudely. Come here." With that he pulled Shuichi into a sweet, apologetic kiss. "I'm sorry."
"No, it's okay, Eiri-kun." And with that, he dove into a much more forceful, passionate kiss then the one they just shared.
"Shu? Shuichi? What's wrong?" He was crying.
"I...I miss my brother! He would have loved to know I'm a big super star now! And I miss my parents!" (a/n: confusing, ne? since when has Shu had a brother? and why would he be crying about his parents when they're only a short ride away? just wait till you read my other fic. ^^)
"It's okay Shu, shh... sh... It's okay..." He let Shuichi cry into his chest. When Shuichi started kissing the bare skin exposed above his shirt, he knew he was better. "Here, do you want to read mine?"
=="The man opened the door and stepped through the doorway. He was very handsome. Everybody liked him." What a stupid student.
"Why did everyone like him as soon as he stepped through the door? That statement doesn't make sense."
"Yes, Suzuki-sensai. I'll fix it." She giggled. What an idiot. Every female in my stupid classes thinks they're in love with me. Idiots. All of them. The bell rings.
"All right, class dismissed." Every male glares at me on the way out. No, wait, not every male. That boy didn't. He kind of reminds me of Keisuke...
Keisuke... hmm... I wonder why I'm so obsessed with him? Could it be? Naw, not me! Not a stupid teenager that's the same age as my students! He's probably just as stupid as they are! Why am I pressing this matter? Why am I still thinking about him? I should get those crappy papers graded.
Hmm... decent plot, no detail to speak of though, atrocious grammar, writes on the same level as that Keisuke...
Wait! I'm thinking about him again, aren't I? I should stop this train of thought now.
I wonder what school he goes to?
Gah!==
***************end chapter four*************************
Well, that was fun, once I sat down and got to it. After a particular chapter if anyone wants to suggest I change my pace, I would be more than willing to. I just want to make sure that everybody understands what's happening. Also, FYI, I'm just putting in some of the more weighted scenes. The ones with the slash stuff. There are a bunch of pages in between what I'm actually writing. Just thought I'd tell you. R&R!
disclaimer: duh. I don't own gravitation. if I did Yuki would have at least used lub their first time (has anyone else noticed they didn't? I think that would have taken away some of the loud shout of OWW!! after they started in vol 2 of the manga)
timeline: about four years after whatever manga are published in the US as of now. Which would only be up to volume five now. a bit ooc-ness but that's cuz of the 4 years later thing not my inability to stick to the original plot of the series. It's also because of some stuff that me and my friend say happen in the past. You'll see when I get that back story posted.
rating: pg-13
==written stuff. The book that they're writing==
also: Kira Fantajuu is Maiko, Keisuke Fantajuu is Shuichi, Suzuki Kenji is Yuki, Aso Ryashu is Seguchi Tohma, Takumi is Ryuchi, Katuru is Hiroshi
a/n: I'm not going to go through every detail of their relationship. The "book" they're writing does, but I don't have time to write a novel. You know, school, stuff like that. So I'll be writing the parts that I want to explain my idea of the other side of. And the parts I think are important to their relationship. Which means a lot from book one but getting less and less from the other books. also, I'll be starting every chapter with a "chapter" from Shuichi and ending with the corresponding "chapter" from Yuki. Hope you realized that's what's happening from the first one. (chapter three if you want to get technical)
MY DEAR REVIEWERS: So sorry for delaying this update so long! My muses left with the sunshine, but the sun's shining and my inspiration is back!
****************************chapter four*************************** ==That jerk! That stupid, stupid... GRR! Jackass! What gives him the right to knock my lyrics? He doesn't even know me! I am so... DAMN!!! He pisses me off...
::a few hours later::
"You were saying somethin'' happened after work yesterday? What's up?" That was Katuru, my best friend.
Oh yeah. Him. I HATE HIM! "You see, there was this scary guy, and he saw my..."
"Huh? Your what?" That's my sister Kira.
Of course, Kat had to come in with, "Where you peeing in public again? Did he spot your ding-a-ling?"
"NO!! HE SAW MY LYRICS! MY POEMS! And he was a total ass hole about it too. He told me I had no talent and I should quit. I've never seen him before, but he insulted me without a second thought!"
"You don't say?" was my best friend's and my little sister's sympathetic response.
My sarcastic reply was, "gee, thanks for the sympathy guys."
(a/n: I'm running out of creative ways to say who is saying what so I'm gonna go to plain dialogue. sorry to interrupt!)
Katuru: "How much sympathy are you looking for? You want us to cry like little babies the way you are? Is this your morrissey phase or something? You're letting something as dumb as that depress you? Jeez, need someone to change your diaper?"
Kira: "I'm glad to see you so full of self confidence, big brother!"
Me: "I'm self confident! I'm just not stuck up about it! I'm just saying he didn't have to be so mean, is all."
Katuru: "Or maybe he's just more self assured."
Me: "How should I know? I'd never seen him before. It's almost like I could feel his hate, y'know?"
Kira: "What do you care what some nobody says?"
Me: "I DON'T CARE! WHO SAID I DID? dammit! I just want to find him... and... um... make him take it back..."
Kat: "See? You do care!"
Me: "NO I DON'T!"
Or maybe, I do...==
"Eiri? Was it good? Is that okay?"
"Yeah. It's great Shu-chan. Come here." Yuki pulled his lover onto his lap. "I'm sorry."
"Yuki? Why are you sorry?"
"For being so mean to you. And for insulting your lyrics so rudely. Come here." With that he pulled Shuichi into a sweet, apologetic kiss. "I'm sorry."
"No, it's okay, Eiri-kun." And with that, he dove into a much more forceful, passionate kiss then the one they just shared.
"Shu? Shuichi? What's wrong?" He was crying.
"I...I miss my brother! He would have loved to know I'm a big super star now! And I miss my parents!" (a/n: confusing, ne? since when has Shu had a brother? and why would he be crying about his parents when they're only a short ride away? just wait till you read my other fic. ^^)
"It's okay Shu, shh... sh... It's okay..." He let Shuichi cry into his chest. When Shuichi started kissing the bare skin exposed above his shirt, he knew he was better. "Here, do you want to read mine?"
=="The man opened the door and stepped through the doorway. He was very handsome. Everybody liked him." What a stupid student.
"Why did everyone like him as soon as he stepped through the door? That statement doesn't make sense."
"Yes, Suzuki-sensai. I'll fix it." She giggled. What an idiot. Every female in my stupid classes thinks they're in love with me. Idiots. All of them. The bell rings.
"All right, class dismissed." Every male glares at me on the way out. No, wait, not every male. That boy didn't. He kind of reminds me of Keisuke...
Keisuke... hmm... I wonder why I'm so obsessed with him? Could it be? Naw, not me! Not a stupid teenager that's the same age as my students! He's probably just as stupid as they are! Why am I pressing this matter? Why am I still thinking about him? I should get those crappy papers graded.
Hmm... decent plot, no detail to speak of though, atrocious grammar, writes on the same level as that Keisuke...
Wait! I'm thinking about him again, aren't I? I should stop this train of thought now.
I wonder what school he goes to?
Gah!==
***************end chapter four*************************
Well, that was fun, once I sat down and got to it. After a particular chapter if anyone wants to suggest I change my pace, I would be more than willing to. I just want to make sure that everybody understands what's happening. Also, FYI, I'm just putting in some of the more weighted scenes. The ones with the slash stuff. There are a bunch of pages in between what I'm actually writing. Just thought I'd tell you. R&R!