I AM SO SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WORDS CAN NOT EXPRESS HOW SORRY I TRULY AM!!! So, I'll stop now and let you get on with the story.

Shuichi the intellectual!

disclaimer: duh. I don't own gravitation. if I did Yuki would have at least used lub their first time (has anyone else noticed they didn't? I think that would have taken away some of the loud shout of OWW!! after they started in vol 2 of the manga)

timeline: about four years after whatever manga are published in the US as of now. Which would only be up to volume five now. a bit ooc-ness but that's cuz of the 4 years later thing not my inability to stick to the original plot of the series. It's also because of some stuff that me and my friend say happen in the past. You'll see when I get that back story posted.

rating: pg-13

==written stuff. The book that they're writing==

also: Kira Fantajuu is Maiko, Keisuke Fantajuu is Shuichi, Suzuki Kenji is Yuki, Aso Ryashu is Seguchi Tohma, Takumi is Ryuchi, Katuru is Hiroshi a/n: I'm gonna try and cut back on how much I talk during the actual writing. TRY I say, so don't expect me to succeed.

A/n: book skips ahead now. Beginning of volume two of the manga. (Erm, when Yuki comes when Shu is sick and almosts...you know...)

A/n: Something I forgot to mention in other chapters: any time I'm writing what they said or thought and it's from the manga, it's from the Tokyopop version, not a scanlation. Even though Tokyopop kinda sucked at the translation. I'm not using the parts where they messed up big time though.

chapter six

==Ugh. I feel awful. I guess that's what I get for drinking so much...

But come on! My tape was rejected! I knew I was being stupid right from the start. But then again, maybe there's no such thing as luck or coincidence. Maybe this is reality.

But what hurts the most......is that I threw away the biggest chance of my life for someone else. That's how much...

...I was in love with him...

Something smells really nice. I guess there are still aromas in your dreams...

Wait a minute, aren't I awake...? Then where's this fragrance coming from?

"Hey. Wake up, you little punk."

"Huh? Huhu...huhuhi?!" (This is the most akward line in the manga to change. It would be, 'Suzu...Suzuki?!' in my version but it's 'hyu...hyuhi?!' in the manga)

"I figured you were dead. That's no way to treat a guy."

I sat up. Then it hit me that Suzuki was really there. "YIKES! You scared me!!" I coughed.

"You don't think it's for the scintillating conversation, do you? Or that I brought flowers? What am I? stupid?" I coughed again.

"Uh...well, it's not that, but..."

"I went to the hospital and they told me you checked out already. So I figured you'd be here."

Ah, he is so...so...

"What? Don't stare at me!"

"Uh...um...well... I was looking at you to ask...why you came to see me... but, you know...well, never mind. Thanks for the flowers. They, uh, they smell nice. I could smell them even in my dream..." Mm...they do smell nice. I buried my face into the bouquet a bit.

"You want to know why? Because I was worried about you, you moron."

Well now I'm stunned. He was worried about me?

"Why the hell did you turn down Aso? (Seguchi, remember?) Are you defective or something? You pass up something like that just because I yelled at you? So you were depressed and ended up at Mizuki's place. If you died, it would have been my fault because I freaked you out. She called me at my parent's place to tell me." Then he mumbled, "whatta bitch!"

HUH? "So you did go home?! Why?!"

"You're the one who told me I should."

"So how was your dad? Is he all right?" I asked nervously.

"Yeah...the bastard'll probably live another three-hundred years."

"That's great! 3 ((heart))" I said, suddenly excited.

"No it isn't."

"I never dared to dream that you'd come visit me. Or that I'd ever be glad I caught a cold." I snuggled up to Kenji.((EIRI))

"Aso probably slammed you because he saw your inner idiot shining through. Getting sick is a good thing?"

I rested my head on his arm and sighed. "I'm just trying to put a happy face on it" I threw my arms around his neck. "I could get rejected a thousand times and it would be worth it for you to visit me just one time like this." He wrapped his arms around me.

"Look, kid..."

"Huh?" mm this feels good. He's holding me...

"What is it about me that you like so much? I don't really belive that your gay. So why are you coming on to me? Is it because of my money? My looks? I know it's not for the witty banter, unless your some kind of masochist."

"None of that matters to me. I don't understand it myself. I can't help it. I can't help being in love." And or course, after this beautiful deceleration of love, I sneeze. And I'm still in his arms!

"Knock it off already. Your going to give me your cold. Go back to bed." I latch on to him.

"NOOOO!" I cry, impish little devil I am. "I don't wanna let go!"

"I didn't say I was going anywhere." He's trying to tug me off of him. "Dammit. Alright already."

He pinned me to my bedroll. "Woah! Suzuki...?"

"If you want it that bad, then who am I to deny you? Let's do it."

WHAT? He's nibbling my neck...oh...that feels nice...wait! Do NOT get sidetracked here, Kei! "W-wait... wait a minute!! That's not what I meant! I was talking about..." no... this isn't what I wanted...==((I cut it off. It actually goes on for another two and a half pages in the manga, but I didn't want to put that stuff in. Shu writes more, and this next part is from right after they actually do do it at the end of volume one. Sorry. Don't want to write that. And Yuki doesn't get a chapter this chapter.))

"Yuki? Can you come in here for a second?" Eiri walked into the room.

"Mm? Shu? What is it?"

"Here." He pointed at the computer screen. "Is that too, well, graphic? Cause, I don't know what you want..."

"That's fine. Move over a bit, I want to read it better." Shu scooted over in his chair and Yuki sat down next to him, hip to hip. As Yuki began to read, he started shifting in his seat. "Uh, Shu-chan? Can we go to another room? I have a bit of a problem-"

"Hmm? What kind of problem?" asked Shuichi, oblivious as usual. His eyes quickly shifted to Yuki's nether regions. "OOH. THAT kind of problem. Sure. Want some help, ne?"

"Of course I want help with this." He scooped Shu into his arms and carried him bridal style into the bedroom. The laptop sat glowing peacefully oblivious to what was displayed on it's screen.

end chapter six

Alright, that was a pathetic excuse to me redemption for the lurk-ness. SO SORRY!!! I just kinda lost my muse, and anyone who's actually still reading this probably thought I was dead or something. I'm not! I was studying. (Not really, but I should have been) And my dad took my computer for a while so I DEFINITELY couldn't write then (I write on my laptop). And I started a bunch of new fics that I felt inspired for. SORRY!!! And I am mentioning now that I will be away for two months starting in about two weeks, so don't expect another update anytime soon.

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