A/N: Sorry about the long update again. I had oral surgery this past Tuesday. They took out all fout of my wisom teeth .
Taladon: Starfire, you can let go now, I think they've turned purple long enough.
(Starfire releases all the reviewers)
Starfire: Oops. Oh well, that was fun.
(All the reviewers run for cover)
Taladon: Oh well, on with the story. (and thanks for the spelling correction, I'll fix it sometime)
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Scene: Raven and Starfire are standing in the garage next to Starfire's car
Starfire: I think I shall name the vehicle "Pink Graldorf"
Raven: Why that name?
Starfire: On my planet, Graldorf is the symbol of joy and fun.
Raven: Wonderful. Well, I guess it's time for your first lesson. Here. (Hands Starfire the keys) Get in.
Starfire: Oh what a joyus day this is indeed! I promise I shall do my best friend Raven.
Raven: Ok, fine get in.
(Raven and Starfire get in with Starfire behind the wheel)
(Raven's thoughts: Ok, just stay calm. You can do this.) Ok, Starfire, start the engine.
Starfire: Like this? (Starfire correctly starts the car. You can see Raven calm down a little.
Raven: Good, now I want to review a couple things with you. First, use your right foot for everything. Second, don't do anything unless I tell you. Now, put the car in drive and push on the gas gently.
Starfire: (Shifts the car into gear and drives it out of the garage)
Raven: Ok, now make a left here and we'll practice in this abandoned parking lot.
(Starfire turns the wheel left, but the car continues straight)
Raven: Starfire, what are you doing?
Starfire: I did what you told me, but the car is not obeying the controls.
Suddenly the seatbelts tighten and additional restraints appear from nowhere, covering Raven's mouth and tying Starfire's hands together. Slade's voice comes on over the speakers
Slade: Such a nice day for a drive, don't you think? Now just sit back and relax. There's nothing you can do.
Raven tries to free herself, but she can't get her magic words out and Starfire is unable to make starbolts.
The car drives them toward the pier.
Slade: I think a nice, loong swim would do the both of you some good.
The car accelerates toward the pier. Starfire and Raven are helpless.
Raven: (muttering) You won't get away with this Slade.
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Well, that's all the time I've got for now. I'm willing to take suggestions on the ending, so send in those reviews and thanks for being patient with me while I recover from being a patient (cheesy drum sound)
Taladon: Starfire, you can let go now, I think they've turned purple long enough.
(Starfire releases all the reviewers)
Starfire: Oops. Oh well, that was fun.
(All the reviewers run for cover)
Taladon: Oh well, on with the story. (and thanks for the spelling correction, I'll fix it sometime)
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Scene: Raven and Starfire are standing in the garage next to Starfire's car
Starfire: I think I shall name the vehicle "Pink Graldorf"
Raven: Why that name?
Starfire: On my planet, Graldorf is the symbol of joy and fun.
Raven: Wonderful. Well, I guess it's time for your first lesson. Here. (Hands Starfire the keys) Get in.
Starfire: Oh what a joyus day this is indeed! I promise I shall do my best friend Raven.
Raven: Ok, fine get in.
(Raven and Starfire get in with Starfire behind the wheel)
(Raven's thoughts: Ok, just stay calm. You can do this.) Ok, Starfire, start the engine.
Starfire: Like this? (Starfire correctly starts the car. You can see Raven calm down a little.
Raven: Good, now I want to review a couple things with you. First, use your right foot for everything. Second, don't do anything unless I tell you. Now, put the car in drive and push on the gas gently.
Starfire: (Shifts the car into gear and drives it out of the garage)
Raven: Ok, now make a left here and we'll practice in this abandoned parking lot.
(Starfire turns the wheel left, but the car continues straight)
Raven: Starfire, what are you doing?
Starfire: I did what you told me, but the car is not obeying the controls.
Suddenly the seatbelts tighten and additional restraints appear from nowhere, covering Raven's mouth and tying Starfire's hands together. Slade's voice comes on over the speakers
Slade: Such a nice day for a drive, don't you think? Now just sit back and relax. There's nothing you can do.
Raven tries to free herself, but she can't get her magic words out and Starfire is unable to make starbolts.
The car drives them toward the pier.
Slade: I think a nice, loong swim would do the both of you some good.
The car accelerates toward the pier. Starfire and Raven are helpless.
Raven: (muttering) You won't get away with this Slade.
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Well, that's all the time I've got for now. I'm willing to take suggestions on the ending, so send in those reviews and thanks for being patient with me while I recover from being a patient (cheesy drum sound)