Ok, here's the last chapter. enjoy!
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Scene: Inside Starfire's car Belts and restraints are holding the girls. Slade is controlling the car remotely, and sending it into the harbor.
Raven's Mind: Ok Raven think. There's gotta be a way out of this. My powers are drained from worrying about Starfire driving, but she's still full of excitement. I just need to get her to tap it. Hmm, what incentive would make Starfire release all that energy at one time? Oh I know, but I'm gonna hate myself for doing this.
Raven links telepathically to Starfire.
Raven's mind to Starfire: Star, listen to me. It's Raven. I'll make a deal with you. If you can muster up enough strength to free yourself, I will.... (gulp) allow you to give me a makeover.
Starfire: Oh friend Raven that is wonderful.
Starfire's arms fly out, breaking the restaraints as she grabs Raven in a meccha hug
Starfire: Raven, I have so much planned for you. We shall go to the "mall of shopping" and...
Raven: Fine Star, but right now we gotta get out of here.
Starfire: You are right friend Raven.
Raven and Starfire break the windows and fly out of the car as it hits the water. A couple seconds later, a huge geyser of water erupts from the harbor.
Starfire stares at the pier where her car just vanished under the waves and a few small tears fell from her face.
Raven: What wrong Star? We can find another car for you.
Starfire: You do not understand. On my planet, machinery is treated like family. That car was like a brother. I shall miss it. Also, I do not think I shall persue driving any further. With Slade around, our vehicles tend to get broken alot, and it would be too sad for me.
Starfire then smiles
Starfire: But come friend Raven, let us proceed to the mall for your makeover.
Raven: Star, you realize that I only said that to get you to break free don't you.
Starfire: Of course friend Raven, but you did make a deal with me and I shall see that you carry through with it.
Raven: Alright Star you win. I just have one request. Don't insist on everything being pink.
Starfire: Very well friend Raven.
Raven and Starfire fly to the mall. On the way, Starfire continues to talk to Raven.
Starfire: Raven, when you linked to my mind, I heard many of your thoughts, and I am confused by them. Why could I not sense anything other than love for Beast Boy? I thought you did not like him like that?
Raven: First off, that's none of your business, but since it wasn't your fault you heard them, I'll explain. Beast Boy is one of the most obnoxious people I have ever met. We are total opposites. I guess that's why I like him. Second off, you are not to tell anyone else what I just told you.
Starfire: I shall respect your wishes Raven, but I think you should tell him. It hurts him to think you do not care for him the way he cares for you.
Raven: I know, but I'm scared of what those kinds of emotions could do to my powers. I just can't take that risk.
Starfire: There is risk in every relationship. My deep friendship with Robin has risks. But running away from friendsship or love doesn't solve anything. It was because I ran that I was almost eaten. Trust in yourself and your powers will sort themselves out like nature intended.
Raven: You know Star, sometimes you're not as dumb as you look.
Starfire: I do not understand why you are calling me dumb.
Raven chuckles.
Raven: Nevermind Star, I didn't mean anything by it. Now, let's get this makever over with.
The sun slowly sets as Raven and Starfire head into the mall for Raven's makeover.
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So how was it? I listened to you guys and didn't do the cliche ending. So let me know what you think.
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Scene: Inside Starfire's car Belts and restraints are holding the girls. Slade is controlling the car remotely, and sending it into the harbor.
Raven's Mind: Ok Raven think. There's gotta be a way out of this. My powers are drained from worrying about Starfire driving, but she's still full of excitement. I just need to get her to tap it. Hmm, what incentive would make Starfire release all that energy at one time? Oh I know, but I'm gonna hate myself for doing this.
Raven links telepathically to Starfire.
Raven's mind to Starfire: Star, listen to me. It's Raven. I'll make a deal with you. If you can muster up enough strength to free yourself, I will.... (gulp) allow you to give me a makeover.
Starfire: Oh friend Raven that is wonderful.
Starfire's arms fly out, breaking the restaraints as she grabs Raven in a meccha hug
Starfire: Raven, I have so much planned for you. We shall go to the "mall of shopping" and...
Raven: Fine Star, but right now we gotta get out of here.
Starfire: You are right friend Raven.
Raven and Starfire break the windows and fly out of the car as it hits the water. A couple seconds later, a huge geyser of water erupts from the harbor.
Starfire stares at the pier where her car just vanished under the waves and a few small tears fell from her face.
Raven: What wrong Star? We can find another car for you.
Starfire: You do not understand. On my planet, machinery is treated like family. That car was like a brother. I shall miss it. Also, I do not think I shall persue driving any further. With Slade around, our vehicles tend to get broken alot, and it would be too sad for me.
Starfire then smiles
Starfire: But come friend Raven, let us proceed to the mall for your makeover.
Raven: Star, you realize that I only said that to get you to break free don't you.
Starfire: Of course friend Raven, but you did make a deal with me and I shall see that you carry through with it.
Raven: Alright Star you win. I just have one request. Don't insist on everything being pink.
Starfire: Very well friend Raven.
Raven and Starfire fly to the mall. On the way, Starfire continues to talk to Raven.
Starfire: Raven, when you linked to my mind, I heard many of your thoughts, and I am confused by them. Why could I not sense anything other than love for Beast Boy? I thought you did not like him like that?
Raven: First off, that's none of your business, but since it wasn't your fault you heard them, I'll explain. Beast Boy is one of the most obnoxious people I have ever met. We are total opposites. I guess that's why I like him. Second off, you are not to tell anyone else what I just told you.
Starfire: I shall respect your wishes Raven, but I think you should tell him. It hurts him to think you do not care for him the way he cares for you.
Raven: I know, but I'm scared of what those kinds of emotions could do to my powers. I just can't take that risk.
Starfire: There is risk in every relationship. My deep friendship with Robin has risks. But running away from friendsship or love doesn't solve anything. It was because I ran that I was almost eaten. Trust in yourself and your powers will sort themselves out like nature intended.
Raven: You know Star, sometimes you're not as dumb as you look.
Starfire: I do not understand why you are calling me dumb.
Raven chuckles.
Raven: Nevermind Star, I didn't mean anything by it. Now, let's get this makever over with.
The sun slowly sets as Raven and Starfire head into the mall for Raven's makeover.
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So how was it? I listened to you guys and didn't do the cliche ending. So let me know what you think.