Disclaimer: For full disclaimer, please see chapter 1.
A/N:
Well, yes, I liked Reran too. I like most of my villains,
I even liked Teonvan in the beginning. *ducks rotten fruit* I said, in the
beginning. I don't like him anymore. He's beginning to scare me - and my alter
ego, and that's not easily done... *g* Anyway, I'm sorry for killing him. Once
again, the plot demanded it. He died for the greater good, or, in this case,
for the plausibility of the story, if there even is such a thing here. *frowns* No comments about that, please.
I have to ask you once again though: Please - don't - kidnap - my - characters.
I really don't know what it is about Celylith that makes several people want to
kidnap him, and some have even started to stalk Celythramir. What is it with
you people and silver hair? *g* So please: Leave them
alone. I need them for the story, both of them, and they're beginning to get
increasingly paranoid. *huggles
them* Poor elves.
Oh, and just to let you know: I have two evil college papers due soon, so the
update-rhythm might change from six to seven days. I didn't said
it will, it just ... might. It won't be longer than a week since, no matter how
much I have to do for college, I can still easily write a chapter a week, but I
wanted to warn you beforehand. *smiles sweetly* I knew you'd understand.
Alright, here we are, they finally arrive at the evil lord's town! Yay them!
Apart from that, we also meet the mysterious delegates from the South - anyone
who can tell me what their and their lord's names mean gets a. a cookie, b. a
copy of Teonvan's book "How to torture people and get away with it"
or c. a clone of one of my OCs. I can't clone Tolkien's characters, sorry. *g*
Enjoy and review, please!
Chapter 19
He was standing at the edge of the camp, his back to a large, comfortingly
solid tree and his eyes wandering from one dark, silent tent to the next. It
was still dark for sunrise was still at least an hour away, and yet he felt
neither the urge nor the inclination to take some rest.
Cendan smiled thinly to himself. Yesterday he had overheard several of his men
talking about how he didn't sleep anymore; they had been wondering how he was
able to keep functioning without rest. They had been wrong, of course: He did
sleep, but as little as possible and only where he was safe and couldn't be
found. He was no fool, after all, and he didn't intend to make the same mistake
Reran had. He would not be caught off his guard by Teonvan and his
lieutenants.
The young dark haired man gritted his teeth, marvelling that it didn't produce
any audible sound. He knew that Teonvan had killed Reran. He also knew that he
would never be able to prove it; Teonvan was the captain now. In addition to
that, Teonvan was one of their lord's favourites, and he knew whom their liege
would rather believe: A commander who was in his favour or a lieutenant who
still had little experience and was in addition to that also half-Easterling.
Cendan growled inwardly. He could as well kill himself right here and now, the
result would be about the same.
Still, he wished he could take his knife and kill Teonvan, wished he could
watch how the mocking, teasing light in the brown haired man's eyes died with
his body. How such a worthless creature and insufferably bad soldier had
managed to surprise a man like Reran he would never understand – he had
probably taken his two lieutenants with him, he reasoned, Caellan and Lybran,
men who were just as despicable as their commander.
He had liked Reran, somehow; the older man had been a good and just captain,
despite his sometimes fierce temper. He had always done his best to get all his
men back home alive and in one piece, as a good captain should. Cendan wouldn't
say that he had been Reran's friend, for that too much distrust and fear of
their lord had stood between them, but that didn't matter in the slightest. The
blonde man had been his superior, his captain. Whether he had liked him
or not was of no importance, he had owed him his respect and loyalty and it had
been his duty to protect him.
A duty he had failed, he thought darkly. Reran had died alone and abandoned,
and he hadn't done anything to help him. Among his mother's people loyalty and
honour were held in the highest esteem, and a soldier who hadn't managed to
protect his superior's life deserved nothing but scorn and contempt.
And for that, for making him fail his duty as much as for killing his captain,
he would kill Teonvan, one day. He wouldn't forget this, not as long as he
lived. No matter how long it took, one day he would thrust his knife into the
man's heart and watch him die with a smile on his lips. Vendettas weren't as
common among his mother's people as they were for example among the Haradrim in
the South, but it was still common enough a tradition for his blood to scream
for vengeance.
And he would have his vengeance, eventually. He didn't know when and he didn't
know how, but he would have it, that he swore by all the Gods in the Heavens.
He didn't know where Reran's soul was at the moment, but he was sure the older
man would appreciate the gesture.
But for that, he concluded silently, still not having moved an inch from where
he was leaning against the tree, he would have to bide his time and avoid
getting himself killed like his late captain. He had to admit that he was
somewhat surprised that Teonvan hadn't tried anything yet, that he had neither
tried to kill him too nor to have some "fun" with the prisoners. The only
explanation he had been able to come up with was one he still thought highly
doubtful: Teonvan wasn't as stupid as he had first thought.
He had never believed he would say that one day, but it appeared that the
commander – no, the captain, he corrected himself wryly – was clever
enough to know that the men wouldn't tolerate more of his foolishness. Right
now, they wouldn't mention the little episode with Teonvan and the elf from a
week ago, for that they were too afraid of what the man might do, but if he
continued his little "games" and damaged the elf further, possibly so much that
he died before they could deliver him to their lord, it just might be enough to
make sure that something … slipped. A few hints here and a few pointed remarks
there and the whole story would come out. Teonvan wouldn't want to risk that.
All in all, it was a situation Cendan could live with, because, otherwise, he
would have to confront Teonvan openly, something that would be just short of
suicide. He was still a little surprised, but Teonvan hadn't touched one of the
prisoners, apart from a little blow here and there that they had even deserved
most of the time. He had yet to meet more infuriating and more annoying
creatures than the elf and the ranger, and he was rather certain that they
didn't exist either. Lasseg had regained much of his former strength already
and the cuts and bruises had almost completely faded,
something that filled Cendan to equal parts with wonder and suspicion.
Back at home elves were regarded as something out of myths and were not exactly
held in high regard. They were said to be dangerous, unpredictable and
malicious, and more than half of the stories also claimed that even though they
were beautiful to behold they were in reality evil spirits that inhabited fair
bodies to torment mankind. Cendan had never been sure if that was the truth or
not, and he had come close to abandoning such ideas since the elf they had
captured seemed real and un-wraithlike enough (besides, he bled rather
convincingly, too), but the elf's miraculously quick healing had put him on
edge.
He did not trust the elf, and he did not trust the ranger. Both caused a quiet
conviction to grow inside of him, and it wasn't the conviction that both of
them were not going to give him anymore trouble. No, it was the conviction
that, this time, their lord had made a grave error and that to get involved
with rangers and elves was dubious at best, if not positively idiotic. That was
something he would of course never say aloud, let alone say aloud in front of
their lord, but it was what he was beginning to accept as the truth. These two
were going to be trouble, even more than they already were.
The young man was still musing about the general unfairness and dangerousness
of the world when a grey shadow stepped out of one of the tents and began to
walk up to him, careful to make enough noise so Cendan would hear him and
keeping his hands raised at his sides. All men knew that it wasn't a clever
idea to surprise their lieutenant – those who did quite often found themselves
pinned against a tree with a knife against their throats.
It took only a few seconds for the man to come close enough for Cendan to
identify him: It was Menvan, one of his men who had been under his command ever
since he had been promoted to Lieutenant three years ago. The most – and only –
striking things about his outward appearance were his large, dark brown eyes
that, right now, looked a little bit unsure, an expression that was to be seen
there very seldom. The rest of Menvan was average: Average height, average
weight, average looks. The young man was in fact so average that it was hard to
remember what he looked like, even if one had seen him only a few seconds ago –
which, of course, made him the perfect spy.
Menvan, however, had always said that he was far too attached to life (and his
head) to become a spy and had therefore rather joined the army – a course of
action that spoke for the man's intelligence. Spies who were caught by those
they were sent to spy on were treated kindly in no realm Cendan could think of,
and in most cases their deaths were a gruesome and exceedingly painful affair.
No, Menvan was right not to have chosen such a career, besides,
the man was the born soldier. He was bright, able to shake the most amazing
plans out of his sleeve (which even worked for most of the time) and more
skilled with the blade than most men Cendan knew. He wouldn't be able to hit a
house with a crossbow or an arrow even if he were
standing right in front of it, but everyone had his weakness. Menvan, however,
had fewer than most, and many men had died because they had thought him to be
an easy victim because of his ordinary appearance. Cendan shrugged inwardly.
Only fools judged their adversaries by their appearance.
A few moments later, the man had reached the lieutenant's side and came to a
stop next to him, flicking a strand of brown hair out of his face.
"Good morning, sir."
Cendan forced his thoughts off Reran, Teonvan, his lord, their prisoners and
Menvan's character and looked at the other man, raising
an eyebrow ever so slightly.
"Mornings usually involve light and the sun, Menvan, do they not?"
"Aye, sir," the man shrugged nonchalantly, but with a calculating expression on
his face. "Usually, they do. But the men say you don't sleep anymore."
"Nonsense," the dark haired lieutenant shook his head, a part of him asking
inwardly why he was even indulging this man. Probably because he was a good and
loyal soldier, he finally thought. Menvan would never turn on him like Teonvan
had turned on Reran. "Everyone has to sleep, even the elf."
Menvan looked at the other man with a sparkle in his eyes that very much said
that he didn't believe a single word he had said, but refrained from protesting.
"If you say so, sir."
"Yes," Cendan nodded, a hint of a warning in his voice, "I do say so." He
returned his eyes to the camp, noting that the other man avoided his gaze.
"We'll reach the city this afternoon."
Menvan nodded slowly, his eyes still fixed on his snow-dusted boot tips. Cendan
wasn't in a very good mood – which was only understandable – and he would most
definitely not bother his lieutenant by offering his opinions.
"I want you to send a messenger ahead before we leave," Cendan went on. "Pick the
fastest rider and send him off at dawn. I am sure our lord wishes to be
informed of our impending arrival."
"Yes, sir," Menvan nodded, wincing inwardly. Their impending late arrival;
because of the whole business with the ranger they were almost a day late. He
winced again. Their lord would not be happy about that.
"And make sure the prisoners' guards are doubled," Cendan added. "Now is their
last chance to escape. I intend to prevent that, even if the … captain does not
think it a possible threat."
"But you do?" Menvan asked quietly.
"Yes," Cendan nodded slowly, "Yes, I do. I think the elf's a lot stronger than
he and the ranger want us to believe. I think his continuing 'weakness' is just
a ruse to make sure that we won't get rid of the ranger." He nodded again.
"They're clever; I have to give them that."
"And you haven't told Comman..., I mean, Captain Teonvan?" Menvan asked again,
deciding to seize this chance to ask Cendan as long as he was in a rather
talkative mood, something that did not happen very often.
"No, Menvan, I have not," Cendan shook his head, fixing blue eyes on the other
man's face, apparently not at all bothered by his words. "And I see that you
haven't either. Don't try to fool me with that daft, harmless expression of yours, I know you are a lot smarter than you let on. Captain
Teonvan will have to come to that conclusion all by himself."
Menvan raised his head, and the somewhat timid façade he usually wore faded so
quickly that it was hard to tell that it had ever been there.
"You have our support, Lieutenant, whatever you choose to do," he told the dark
haired man. "If you wish it, the men will … let certain things slip. Nothing specific, of course, but enough to ensure that Teonvan will
fall out of favour for good."
Cendan didn't react, his eyes still boring into Menvan's large brown ones. He
knew that it was a sign of immense loyalty that the men were willing to do
that, for him or for their dead captain, but it wasn't what he wanted. To have
Teonvan fall out of their lord's favour what not enough, not nearly enough.
"You should be careful with such offers, Menvan," he told the brown haired
soldier, his face calm and expressionless. "Should someone not as lenient as I
hear them, you might pay dearly for them."
"As Captain Reran did, sir?" the other man replied, hatred and anger in his
usually calm brown eyes. "I asked around, Lieutenant, inconspicuously, of
course. No-one's seen the commander or his two … goons that evening, not
between the time the captain left and about two hours before the scouts
returned. They were gone for at least an hour, and no one knows where they
went. Does that not strike you as odd?"
Cendan did not react, but inwardly he gritted his teeth very strongly. He had
not had the means to ask these questions himself because that would have drawn
too much attention, but Menvan hadn't had that problem. If he said no-one had
seen Teonvan and his lieutenants, no-one had seen them, which only proved what
he already knew.
"That will be enough, soldier," he said calmly.
The brown haired man was about to say more, but noted the dangerous sparkle in
the other man's eyes just in time.
"Yes, sir."
"You will get the messenger ready," Cendan said, his voice hard and steely. He
raised his eyes to the sky that was still rather dark. "Now would be good."
"Yes, sir," Menvan repeated obediently and turned to walk back to the camp,
only to be halted in mid-motion by his superior's serious voice.
"Menvan," Cendan's voice cut through the cold, icy air like the steel of a
blade, "I will forget your words, for I know you to be a good and loyal
soldier. Let me give you a piece of advice though: Do not repeat them to
anyone, not even to men of your unit. I would hate to find you with your throat
cut one morning. Or," he added after a second, "to be there when they drag what
is left of you out of the dungeons to be executed. Do you understand me?"
The middle-sized man looked at him with his large eyes and finally nodded. He
didn't know what his superior was planning or even if he was planning
something, but if Lieutenant Cendan gave you advice, you did well not to
disregard it.
"Yes, Lieutenant," he said as he bowed his head slightly. "I understand. I'll
get the messenger ready and not speak of it again."
"I hope so," Cendan nodded. "Because you'll lose your head in both cases if you
don't. Go."
The other man merely nodded again and turned around, quickly disappearing into
the direction of the tents. Cendan remained where he was for a long time, and
only after the messenger had left, the sun had risen and most of the men had
begun to stir did he return to the camp.
He was not stupid enough to try and challenge Teonvan now, he thought as he
wandered down the soft slope into the waking camp. Now every such a thing would
lead to the one, unmistakable and unchangeable end result: His untimely and
painful death. Now that the burial had taken place he had no real proof, and
his liege would never believe him. All he could do now was to ruin Teonvan's
career, for if they got back with the elf and without Reran to insist on
Teonvan's punishment, their lord would hardly kill him for losing his temper.
And that, he thought darkly once more, was not enough.
No, he would bide his time, he decided as he reached the main fireplace. He
would bide his time and be patient, and when Teonvan thought himself safe he
would strike and finally end this despicable man's life, with his own hands and
a smile on his lips.
It was a glorious day, everybody could see that. What most people couldn't see,
however, was that there were other reasons for that except the wonderful
weather – which really was quite exceptional. The sky was of a clear blue
colour, there wasn't a cloud in sight, and the sun beamed down on the lands in
earnest, warming the cold winter air.
The man standing on top of the outer ramparts smiled slightly, a sight that
astonished half of the guards standing at a respectful distance and terrified
the rest. Their lord seldom smiled in public, and when he did it was even more
seldom a good sign. The dark-clad man, however, did not care in the slightest
about what feelings he awoke in his soldiers. All he cared for at the moment
was the fact that, a few hours ago, a messenger had arrived here bearing the
news he had been waiting for.
He turned around and leaned back against the wall, looking into the direction
of the castle. It was a castle too, in the truest meaning of the word:
Imposing, tall grey walls formed tall grey buildings with few windows and even
fewer decorations. The courtyards were bustling with people, most of them armed
and wearing the livery of his house. It was a sight that usually filled him
with satisfaction, and yet he found that he was too … anxious to feel anything
but fevered anticipation.
The man frowned. He wasn't used to feeling anxious; it was a state of mind he
was almost entirely unfamiliar with, or at least had been for long, long years
now. He didn't approve of anxiousness, it was a state
of mind that was typical for undisciplined, short-sighted and weak people. He
was none of these things, something no-one in a radius of more than a hundred
miles would have disputed.
That was mainly because most people in a radius of more than a hundred miles
were neither stupid nor suicidal, but it was also the truth. He was going to
achieve what generations of his forefathers had only dreamt of, and he was
going to achieve it soon, or in fact now.
It was still a little bit hard to believe, he thought, even though he had
spoken with the messenger himself less than three hours ago, or rather spoken to
the messenger who had been too afraid to even raise his head. It was a
behaviour that, under normal circumstances, would have either made him furious
or have amused him, depending on how bad his mood was, but today it had simply
caused him to dismiss the man with an impatient move of his hand.
Well, no matter how hard to believe it was: His men would be arriving today, or
to be more precise, about now, which was the reason why he was out here on the
outer ramparts of the castle anyway. And the most interesting thing about it
was that they were bringing the elf with them, or rather an elf. He didn't
really care who he was as long as he told him what he wanted to know; his
identity was of no importance, none whatsoever.
For a moment, he considered the very remote possibility that the elf wouldn't
tell him what he wanted to hear, an idea he abandoned almost instantaneously.
The only thing that could destroy his plans now would be that the elf couldn't
tell him what he wanted to know, not that he wouldn't.
He was a man who saw violence and fear as a way to rule and a way to ensure that
he kept ruling, and no-one knew better than he that
Glamir was a master of his craft. He smiled thinly to himself. Oh yes, the elf
would tell him everything he wanted to hear, it would only take some time, that
was all. They were on a tight schedule, yes, but he still had time enough to
watch his master torturer break the elf should he prove to be a stubborn one.
He was so immersed in his thoughts that he didn't notice that a servant was
walking up to him slowly and hesitantly, his grey and black livery in stark
contrast to the costly robes the two men wore who were following him,
projecting an air of indifference that marked them as outsiders. The servant
traded a short look with the soldiers of their liege's personal bodyguard, only
to receive an almost imperceptible shrug from one of the younger men.
Wonderful, the man thought to himself, hesitating for the smallest moment. That
was just his kind of luck, wasn't it, having to interrupt their lord when he
was thinking…
After another moment he plucked up his courage and began to walk up to the
dark-clad man who was still staring blindly at the castle, oddly comforted by
the quiet, somewhat menacing presence of the two men at his back. It was they
who had insisted on speaking with his lord, after all; it hadn't been his idea
to climb up here and risk his life by disturbing his liege. He wasn't that
stupid, none of the servants was, in fact.
When he was a mere ten feet away the dark haired man's head turned sharply to
the side, and cold, slightly furious eyes scrutinised the servant who felt the
distinct urge to jump over the wall to his right to ensure he didn't suffer too
long before the end. It was at least forty feet down, and to fall to one's
death was an incomparably quicker and cleaner death than angering his lord.
For a moment, the man truly contemplated jumping, before he sighed inwardly and
bowed low before the other man, his eyes fixed firmly on his lord's expensive
footwear once he straightened up again.
"Lord Súliat's delegates wished to see you, sir. They said it was most urgent."
The dark haired man nodded slowly, his anger at being disturbed dissipating
when he looked at the two solemn-faced men behind the almost trembling servant.
He did not know what they wanted, but he could very well guess. He sighed
inwardly. He had known everything couldn't simply stay as good as it currently
was.
"Go," he simply said and waved a hand into the servant's direction. He didn't
look at the man who was scurrying off so fast that he might as well have been
wearing winged shoes on his feet and turned slightly to the left, fixing an
authoritative stare on the men of his bodyguard. "Leave us," he added quietly.
The soldier's captain looked up sharply and gave the two emissaries a dark
glare, but nodded his head and motioned his men to retreat. The men walked down
the rather narrow walkway to stop a few more paces away; still close enough to
be able to intervene if their lord was threatened in any way but far away to offer
some privacy. They didn't withdraw completely, of course – neither they nor
their liege were stupid, after all.
The dark-clad man waited for the guards to withdraw to a respectful distance
before he turned around, beginning to walk down the walkway into the direction
of the nearest tower which were integrated into the ramparts at regular
intervals. The two delegates were in the position to ask for a meeting at any
time, but there was no reason to agree to one without letting them know who was
in charge here.
"Come," he told the two men who had given him quick bows once he had turned
into their direction. "Join me on a walk to the tower."
The older of the two looked at his companion and hurried to catch up with the
dark haired lord, not willing to be left behind just like that.
"You promised us an audience yesterday, my lord, yet when we arrived at the
appointed place at the appointed time we were told you were, what was the term
… busy?"
"I was busy," the man ground out, trying to remind himself that he
needed the money the lord of these two offered. Up until now the mysterious
Lord Súliat had paid the gold he had promised, and if that source of income
dried up… No, he thought quickly, he didn't want that.
"I see," the delegate said, drawing the words out in a way that conveyed that
he seriously doubted the validity of the man's words. "Well, then…"
The dark haired man whirled around, a look of such fury on his face that it
caused the two men to stop in mid-step.
"I am not sure I like your tone," he hissed at the older emissary. "Nor do I
like what you are implying. Are you accusing me of lying, delegate?"
"No, of course not, my lord," the other man quickly bowed his head. "It is not
my place to question the actions of one of my lord's allies."
"I hope so, my Lord Sangwar," the dark-clad man nodded, obviously carefully
reining in his emotions. "I seriously hope so, or I would have to terminate the
treaty with your lord by sending him your head and that of the young Lord Halyo."
"That would be most unfortunate indeed, my lord," the older man nodded,
beginning to follow the other man who was slowly beginning to climb up the
steps leading to the top of the watchtower. "Yet the treaty is why we are here.
There seem to have been some delays, I understand?"
"No," the dark haired man shook his head slightly, "No delays. The plans stand.
We march out in a week. Your lord will get your war, don't worry."
"My lord is not interested in war," the delegate shook his head as well, a
calculating sparkle in his eyes. "He has merely seen a chance to aid you in
regaining what is rightfully yours."
The other man stopped shortly, looking at both of them with an unreadable
expression on his face.
"Of course," he nodded wryly.
Sangwar narrowed his eyes slightly at the other man's back, a dangerous gleam
in his eyes that died as quickly as it had come.
"Yet I understand that you delayed your departure to wait for the arrival of
some of your men, is that not correct?"
The dark haired man stopped on a small landing about three-quarters up the
tower, turning back to face the two other men. He waited for a moment to make
sure that his bodyguards who had certainly followed him had stopped as well
before he began to speak, his voice flat and barely controlled.
"I do owe no-one an account of my actions or decisions, my Lord Sangwar," he
began slowly, in a tone of voice that caused even the older delegate to
inwardly nod his head in approval. "Yet I am willing to indulge you to a certain
degree, in the name of the treaty between your lord and myself. If you have a
question to ask, ask it here and now, unless you wish to test my temper with
petty insinuations."
Sangwar might be many things, but he was neither stupid nor
reckless, inexperienced or unskilled in the art of diplomacy.
"As you wish, my lord. I ask of you then: What do you
want with an elf?"
The other man did not reply for a few seconds but merely stared at the two
delegates, in his mind deciding that he had underestimated these men, and had
underestimated them greatly. He should have known that they wouldn't remain in
their quarters all day and do what they were told, but he honestly did not know
from where they had managed to get this information. Only a few members of his
war council knew about his plans of capturing an elf, and he was rather sure
that these two were not part of his war council.
"I," he began, taking a slow step forward, "I would be very much interested in
how you obtained that information. Very much interested indeed."
Sangwar did not move an inch or averted his eyes, proving that, apart from a
shrewd and skilled diplomat, he was also no coward.
"A rumour I heard somewhere, my lord; nothing more, nothing less. It is true
then?"
The man narrowed his eyes and refrained from losing his temper, something he
was not used to. If he wanted to lose his temper, then lose his temper he did,
and whoever crossed his way paid the price. That he couldn't harm either of the
two men standing on front of him began to irk him immensely, especially
considering their sometimes less than subservient nature.
He was still not sure what he should think of the two delegates his mysterious
benefactor had sent these few weeks ago. The only thing he was sure of was that
neither their lord's name nor theirs were real and that they were far cleverer
than he had first thought. The first was proven by the small sparkle in their
eyes that was visible every time the men heard their names or that of their
lord, a sparkle that looked as if they were laughing about a joke only they
understood, and the second by the fact that they had somehow managed to find
out things only about ten other people in this city should know. The man smiled
inwardly. He would have to have a talk with his war council, wouldn't he…
"It is of no concern to you," he finally answered curtly. "All you – and your
lord, for that matter – need to know is that we will proceed as
planned. The elf is part of the plan, and has been since the beginning."
Sangwar cocked his head to the side, his interest apparently piqued.
"I have met a few elves in my lifetime, my lord, and luckily never as enemies.
They are a proud, arrogant, strong people. To make him co-operate with you
might prove harder than you think. Besides, what do you hope to learn from him?"
The dark haired man gave the two emissaries a small smile, a smile that could
have been taken right from their own lord's face, so full was it of hidden
meaning and quiet menace.
"Oh, he will co-operate with me, trust me on this, gentlemen. He will
tell me everything I want to know and everything I might want to know before
this week is over."
He turned and once again began to climb the rough stone steps, followed by the
two other men who traded a long look behind the other's back. It was clear that
the man did not intend to divulge what he was planning with the elf. Just as
well, Sangwar thought amusedly, they'd find out anyway. Everywhere, even here,
there were people who were willing to share certain bits of information for the
right price. If there was one thing he had learned as envoy in his lord's
service, it was that every man had his price.
They reached the thick wooden door leading out onto the tower's platform and
the dark haired man stopped, turning back to them with an intense, almost
fanatical gleam in his eyes.
"I understand your concerns," he told them slowly, obviously having to fight
with himself to remain so civil. "Yet I can assure you that everything is going
according to plan. We will be ready to march in a week, even if the elf might
be unwilling to share his knowledge with us."
"So he is no important part of your plan, my lord?" the younger of the two
asked for the first time, awaking in the dark-clad man the powerful urge to
have his tongue permanently removed. Who was this whelp to question him, envoy
or not?
"Yes and no, my Lord Halyo," he said rather friendly and with an undertone in
his voice that conveyed his displeasure at having to answer to someone who
could be hardly older than thirty summers. "Everything else is in place. All I
want is … reassurance, you could say."
The older of the two men shot his companion a very pointed look that told him
rather clearly that he could expect drastic repercussions if he didn't stay
silent, and inclined his head to the dark haired man, raising it again to study
him closely.
"We've heard that you managed to convince the Easterlings' ambassadors not to
cut each other's throats while serving you. May I congratulate you on that
achievement?"
The other man gazed at the two with an emotionless face, proving to Sangwar
once again what he had been suspecting from the very beginning: This rather
unstable man didn't possess the slightest sense of humour.
"You are remarkably well informed," the lord nodded at the older man.
Sangwar shook his head and moved his hands in a vague gesture that was
apparently meant to describe the many unexpected things that happened in the
world and a man's inability to influence his fate.
"Since we seldom leave the castle, my lord, we hear many things."
The other man grimaced inwardly, ignoring the innocent expression on the
envoys' faces. Of course the two of them didn't leave the castle,
he had forbidden it after all. And one could say many thing
about Lord Súliat's delegates, but they weren't stupid and knew exactly which
lines not to cross.
"Then let me show you something," he told them and moved forward, placing his
left hand on the door handle and pulling it open.
The guards on duty gave his lord and his two guests a quick, shocked look,
bowed deeply and withdrew to the other side of the circular platform high above
the ground, doing their best to become invisible. Their lord, however, didn't
pay them any attention but stepped forward, looking to the West where the sun
was slowly beginning to set.
The two delegates followed the dark haired man out onto the platform, but froze
in surprise when they surveyed the plains to the west of the city that spread
out under them. It looked very different from when they had arrived here, and
even though they had been prepared for what they would see, it was something
entirely different now that they saw it with their own eyes.
The dark-clad man smiled openly, enjoying his guests' surprise. If there was
one thing he hated, it was not being in control of a situation, and to see the
two envoys so shocked pacified his more than a little frayed nerves.
"What do you think, my Lord Sangwar?" he asked softly. "That should be enough
to realise my plans, shouldn't it?"
Slowly, the older man tore his eyes away from the rather impressive display of
what money could buy you and gave the dark haired man a curt, respectful nod.
"Yes, my lord," he said seriously. "I think that should be quite enough indeed."
As soon as Legolas saw the dark, imposing mountains that were beginning to show
on the edge of the horizon, still too far away for mortal eyes to see, he knew
that they were in trouble.
That wasn't exactly true, he corrected himself after a moment, since they already were in trouble they would simply get
into even more and deeper trouble, even though he had thought it rather
improbable. He shot a look at the guards surrounding him and Aragorn, and
nodded to himself when he saw that they were sitting up in their saddles and
shooting the horizon furtive glances, as if they were expecting something to
appear there any minute now. Oh yes, he thought. Deep trouble.
The elf gave his friend who was riding next to him a quick look, noticing that
the man was looking at him with a curious look on his face. It was highly
unusual that they were allowed to ride together, for the men thought them –
correctly – far too dangerous if not separated. That they were riding next to
each other could mean only one thing: They were close to their destination and
the men were trying to minimise the chances of one of them escaping, something
that caused a shiver of dread to run down his spine, because he really did not
want to think about what would happen when they got there.
After making sure that the guards were too busy trying to spy the mountains he
could already clearly see, Legolas stared straight ahead, keeping his voice so
low that only a ranger would be able to hear his words.
"I know where we are," he told the young man in whispered Sindarin.
He didn't look at the young ranger, but without straining his imagination
overly much he could almost see Aragorn arch a dark eyebrow.
"So do I," the man told him in the same language. "In Rhûn."
Legolas hid a small smile and shook his head minutely, wondering how someone of
not even 25 years of age could be so annoying.
"Yes, that is quite correct," he told him. "But I know where in Rhûn we
are. Don't try to see them, they're still too far away to see for Men, but
there are some mountains appearing on the horizon."
Aragorn would almost have grinned openly.
"That's rather reassuring, since they should. I have seen maps of Rhûn in my
father's library. There is a mountain range not far from the western shores of
the Sea."
Legolas quickly checked if their conversation was still unnoticed – which was indeed the case unless the men simply didn't care if
they talked to each other or not – before he answered.
"Aye, the Mountains of Rhûn, but they are still farther to the south. These
here are the foothills. They are rather high mountains with twin peaks that are
nearly always covered in snow. My people call them the Ered Dhuir."
"The Dark Mountains?"
Aragorn asked wryly. "Charming."
"The name originates from their unusually dark colour," Legolas explained. "As
far as I can tell, there's nothing there, no town, no city, even though there
were some rumours lately, rumours of people disappearing around here."
"This is Rhûn," the man retorted softly. "People disappear here all the time."
"Well, I won't, and neither will you," Legolas whispered back. "We are close to
our destination now. The men are getting restless."
"So am I," Aragorn replied darkly. "I had hoped we could escape today but…"
He trailed off and chanced a look at his elven friend, who nodded slightly.
"Damn Cendan," both of them hissed together.
Legolas narrowed his eyes and added darkly,
"I'd never thought I'd say something like that, but I somehow wish Teonvan were
in charge of the guards, not Cendan. Teonvan would never have thought of
doubling the guards today."
"It doesn't matter now, mellon nín," the ranger shook his head. "What's
done is done. We might get a chance to escape when we've arrived at our
mysterious destination."
"Oh, of course," Legolas muttered sarcastically, trying not to laugh since he
knew it would hurt a lot. It had been a week since Aragorn had found him, and
yet he was still far from healed. He wasn't as weak as they wanted the men
believe, but he was not hale either. "As soon as these men have reached the
impregnable castle of their evil lord and have thrown us into the underground
dungeons guarded by a fire-breathing dragon, we will manage to escape. I see
your point."
Aragorn turned his head, not caring if the guards saw him speaking to Legolas.
"Who said anything about a fire-breathing dragon?"
"That was just an educated guess based on our past experiences."
Aragorn was just trying to remember when exactly they had encountered a dragon,
of the fire-breathing or any other kind, but before he had even opened his
mouth to tell his friend that he was, once again, exaggerating grossly,
Teonvan's voice interrupted his thoughts, sounding extremely pleased with
himself and the world in general.
"It is very impolite to talk in a language your companions cannot understand.
It might even be considered … offensive."
Aragorn turned slightly to the side, glaring darkly at the other man.
"You are no companion of mine, Teonvan."
Teonvan grinned a little, enjoying the furious looks his two prisoners shot
him. It was almost a shame they would reach the city in a few hours, he
thought. He might get rid of the two of them and be freed of the
responsibility, but he would … miss them. He blinked a little bit surprised. He
would indeed miss them, but then again, maybe he would be able to … visit them
a few times while they were still alive – he did know Glamir quite well, after
all. Then again, they wouldn't live long now, at least the ranger wouldn't, about that he was quite certain.
"Oh, but I am … Strider, wasn't it?" the man replied pleasantly and smiled at
the younger man. "An interesting name you have there. How did you come by it?"
Aragorn ignored Legolas' cautioning look and gave the brown haired man the look,
wondering for a moment of it was caution or cowardice that caused the other to
stay safely out of their reach on the other side of the circle their guards had
drawn around them. Probably the latter, he decided quickly.
"A friend gave it to me. You know what a friend is, don't you?"
Legolas would have loved to screw his eyes shut. Couldn't that stubborn ranger
see that, right now, he was very high up on Teonvan's list of persons to have
some "fun" with? He may not be very skilled at reading humans' emotions and
intentions since he hadn't met all that many in his life until now, but even he
could see that there was nothing Teonvan wanted more than repeat what he had
done to him a week ago – with a few changes, maybe. Teonvan might be many
things, but he wasn't unimaginative.
The man in question looked at the friendly smiling face of the ranger and tried
to ignore the carefully emotionless faces of the majority men who were
encircling the two prisoners. Even though they seemed to have accepted him as
their new captain, they did not like him, he did not
harbour any illusions about that. That was perfectly alright with him because
he wouldn't hesitate to sacrifice every single one of them if he had to, or if
it aided him in any way. As long as they did as he commanded he didn't care in
the slightest, and they did do what he commanded. The necessity to uphold
the chain of command and to follow orders was too deeply instilled in all of
them.
He lazily nodded at Caellan, his large, burly lieutenant who was riding right
next to the ranger, and a moment later the young man was almost thrown out of
his saddle by a punch to his side, apparently much to the displeasure of both
his horse and the blonde elf. Teonvan nodded contentedly while he watched the
ranger slowly right himself again, his face of a sickly white colour. Caellan
might not be a very intelligent man, but he definitely knew how to pack a punch.
"Yes, boy," he finally told the dark haired man. "I know what a friend is. A
friend is a person who gives others power over you and what a sensible man
therefore avoids."
Aragorn would certainly have replied something rather rash and ill-advised had
he had any breath to do so, but since he was still contemplating just how many
ribs had been bruised by Caellan's punch – right now he was still torn between
five and all of them – he was far too busy breathing to be able to speak.
Legolas, however, had no such problems and glared at the brown haired
commander, pushing back dark memories that rose inside of him at the man's
sight alone.
"You are a fool," he told the man, praying inwardly that Aragorn would remain
silent this time. "True friends and family are the only things one can rely on
in this world, and if you haven't realised that by now, you will very likely
never understand it. I only hope I'll be there when that fact finally kills
you."
For a moment, the elf's words in combination with his contemptuous face were
enough to make Teonvan wish to stop, get another fire burning and pick up
exactly where he left off when the ranger had decided to join them, but then he
remembered that they were only about an hour or two away from the city. Cendan,
his much beloved lieutenant, had sent a messenger ahead to inform their lord of
their impending arrival, and if there was one thing he didn't want to do, it
was to let their lord wait, not even to have some fun with the prisoners.
He gave his other lieutenant riding next to the elf another nod, and a second
later the fair haired being's head was whipped to the side by a powerful blow
to his face, something that filled Teonvan with rather a lot of satisfaction.
"Do be careful with what you say," he advised his two captives. "We'll reach
our destination in a few hours, and my lord is not as lenient as I am. You
might regret such uncourteous words in the future."
He turned to Lybran who was just massaging his knuckles that seemed to ache
after having made contact with the elf's cheekbone. "Let's pick up the pace. We
wouldn't want to keep him waiting, would we?" Teonvan was already spurring on
his horse to return to the head of the column when he quickly looked back over
his shoulder and added with a nasty side glance, "Oh, and no talking from now
on. We wouldn't want the two friends here to get hurt because they
couldn't keep their mouths shut, would we?"
Legolas blinked in an attempt to clear his vision of the grey spots that had
begun to close in on him on all sides, and simply stared at the man's
retreating back while he waited for the world to stop spinning. The men only
ever hit him in the face, apparently afraid to aggravate his injuries, but Aragorn
wasn't so lucky. He took everything back, he thought wryly as he glanced at
Aragorn to see if the man was alright. He didn't wish that Teonvan were in
command of their guards, because if that were case, they would already be dead
now.
A few moments later, the men began to pick up the pace, and Legolas spent the
next few hours with dark contemplations of what could be waiting for them at
the end of this journey. It was a question that had never been far from his or
Aragorn's mind in the past week, even more so after they had found out about
these men's association with Adruran.
The elven prince once again shot his human friend a quick look and even
received a curt nod in response. Legolas kept studying his friend's still
rather pale, bruised face out of the corners of his eyes, beginning to feel
panic creep up on him. If their situation hadn't looked bad before they had
known that these here were Adruran's associates, it definitely did now.
Legolas sighed inwardly as he thought back to their meeting with the dark
haired, ruthless and very, very skilled human commander on the slopes of
Erebor, the Lonely Mountain. It was
only because of the man's somewhat interesting way of defining the word
"reasonable" that Aragorn still lived, since he had foregone a chance to kill
the young ranger after it had become apparent that his cause had been lost. The
encounter with Adruran and his men, and especially with Geran, a man whom he
had killed with great satisfaction, had been anything but pleasant, but it had
taught Legolas a few things, and all of them boded ill for them now.
The main thing it had taught him was that whoever their lord was, he was
dangerous and he was desperate. He had sent a group of more than twenty
soldiers – and good soldiers at that – to retrieve a buried treasure, an
enterprise whose chances of success had been more than slim from the very
beginning. The men who had survived the battle had been too afraid to even tell
them their names when asked about their identities or their lord, and he had
even watched one of them commit suicide rather than allow himself
to be captured.
Legolas gritted his teeth as the fury that was attached to the still fresh
memory welled up inside of him. It had been the sensible thing to do for that
man too. After what he had done to Aragorn, he would have killed him himself
had the man lived even a second longer.
Fact was that this was the one mysterious lord on Arda by whom he did not wish
to be captured. If even Adruran's and Reran's men were afraid of him, Legolas
didn't even want to find out how he would treat them – or, more precisely, he
added, the panic in his heart even growing, how he would treat Aragorn.
There was really no reason he could think of right
now why the men should keep the ranger alive once they reached their
destination, none at all. If what he had heard about that lord was correct, he
would hardly clap Aragorn on the back, declare that it
had all been a mistake and that he was free to go. Legolas smiled inwardly.
That would be a rather pleasant development – extremely unlikely, but pleasant
nonetheless. He would give everything to know that Aragorn was safe and as far
away from Teonvan as possible…
His frantic musings that were beginning to go round and round like the wheel on
a cart were interrupted after almost two hours when a man at the head of the
column called out, something that caused all the men's heads to snap up.
"There! The city!"
Legolas raised his head, inwardly cursing himself for not noticing sooner that
they had reached their destination. His eyesight was far superior to that of
any man, and he should have seen the city before them! Trading a quick glance
with Aragorn, Legolas raised himself on his horse as much as his bonds allowed
him, and got his first good look at the city that had appeared in front of
them, looking dark and forbidding in the slowly setting sun.
The first thing Legolas noticed was that it was nearly perfectly round in
appearance, encircled by a thick, circular, thoroughly efficient-looking wall
that was at least 25 feet high. It was built of grey, quadratic stones that
appeared as massive as the mountains behind the city, and round towers were
visible every once in a while, covering every single square inch of the outer
side of the wall. There appeared to be only four ways into the city, by four
gates that were located almost exactly to the north, south, west and east, and
large wooden doors that looked solid enough to keep a horde of trolls out
barred the way.
There were a multitude of other things Legolas noticed as he studied the city
as they drew closer, so close that he could even begin to see single houses
along the four main roads, but two seemed to struggle for domination in his
mind: One, that there really was a castle in the very centre of the city,
looking even darker, more menacing and simply eviller than the rest of the
city, and that, outside the city gate facing to the west, the one to their
immediate right, there was the biggest assembly of tents he had ever seen in
his life, and he had seen quite a lot of encampments.
It took Legolas only a moment to realise what kind of camp this was, and he
gritted his teeth tightly as his eyes wandered over the multicoloured tents.
Unless he was very much mistaken and this was the biggest and most militaristic
group of gypsies on this side of the Misty Mountains (who
shouldn't be in the possession of chariots anyway), this was an army camp. They
were drawing closer to the towering walls of the city, more than close enough
to count the tents and their occupants.
"Great Manwë," he finally whispered in Elvish, trying to keep his voice steady
and not at all caring what the men might do if they caught them talking to each
other again. "Easterlings. There are hundreds, nay,
thousands of them."
Next to him, Aragorn had turned an extraordinary shade of white as he quickly
turned his head to look at their guards, only to turn back to his friend when
he saw that the men were at least as distracted as they were.
"At least seven thousand, I'd rather say more." He locked eyes with Legolas,
shocked. "There is only one thing anyone could want with seven or eight
thousand Easterlings."
Legolas nodded darkly, his silver-blue eyes turning the colour of a deep,
troubled pool.
"War," the fair haired elf whispered. "The Easterlings never gather in these
numbers unless they want to do battle." His eyes widened slightly, and a new
urgency spread over his face. "We must get back to Mirkwood, Estel, we must
warn the king! Eight thousand Easterlings on our southern border, that is…"
"A nightmare," Aragorn nodded grimly, his eyes being drawn back to the camp
that was slowly disappearing behind the rounded city wall as they drew closer
to the northern gate. Even his eyes could clearly see the men that seemed to
fill every single square inch in front of the gates, laughing and talking to
each other or sharpening the blades of their swords and axes. "They could
invade Wilderland, or Rohan, or attack Gondor by advancing through Ithilien! Or
cross the Anduin and attack Anórien!"
"This is bad," Legolas mumbled softly, his eyes darting from left to right. He
hadn't expected anything like this. Why would someone who was about to start a
war draw unnecessary attention to himself by kidnapping one of the Elvenking's
subjects? "This is very bad. Strider, there's nothing to the North
that could stop nearly ten thousand Easterlings who invade without warning! We
do not have the strength to stop them, and neither have Lake-town and Dale!"
"My father would help," Aragorn tried to reassure his friend as they passed the
huge gates, their guards drawing even closer to them in case they tried to bolt
at the last second – something that would have been eminently stupid, of
course. "And so would the Lady Galadriel and Lord Celeborn. And Gondor wouldn't
tolerate such a large hostile force on their northern borders either."
"Maybe," Legolas shot back, ignoring his guards' dark looks who seemed anything
but pleased about the fact that their two prisoners were once again conversing
in that strange language of theirs. "But my people are fading, Estel, you know
that as well as I do. And the Gondorians are hard-pressed to keep their borders
as it is; they wouldn't be able to send aid even if they wanted to."
Somehow, it irked Aragorn to hear the elf say such things about his distant kin
in the south, but the truth of Legolas' words could not be denied. He knew from
talks with his father, brothers and rangers that Gondor's resources were
stretched thin at the moment, and the last thing the new Steward Ecthelion
needed was a war that would force him to pull off troops from his eastern
border.
"You're right," he whispered softly, "Let's see if we
can escape then, shall we? I think we'll stand a fair chance – unless there is
a fire-breathing dragon, of course. I hate dragons."
Legolas gave the man a small, uneasy smile before he redirected his attention
to his surroundings, just in time to see the large doors made of hardwood swing
shut behind them with a sound that would have appeared ominous and foreboding
even to the most unbiased person. He shot Teonvan who was riding in front of
their little troupe a quick look. The man appeared disconcertingly subdued and
serious, something that couldn't be good. He really was not looking forward to
meeting this mysterious lord…
The street leading up to the castle seemed to be one of the city's largest,
with quite a lot of shops, taverns and the like. To Legolas who had seldom
visited the cities of Men nothing appeared out of the ordinary, but Aragorn
knew immediately that something was wrong. The sun hadn't even fully set, and
still there were almost no salesmen praising the quality of their merchandise,
no potential buyers wandering from door to door or children running up and down
the street in an attempt to escape their mothers who would soon come looking
for them. The few people that were out on the street flattened themselves to
the walls of the buildings once they caught sight of their group, and if it was
unusual to see a group of seventeen humans escort two bruised prisoners to the
castle, they surely did not show it. Not even the presence of an elf was enough
to cause the people to look up at them or after them for longer than absolutely
necessary.
Aragorn shuddered. This city was afraid, from men down to women and children.
These humans weren't afraid in a way that would be justified by the fact that
there were a few thousand Easterlings camping on their doorstep; it was a fear
that went deeper, far deeper. The dark haired ranger watched how a young mother
pulled her two children close to her as they passed her, shielding them with
her body as best as she could. These people were so afraid that they didn't
even know what it meant not to fear someone – and he could just guess who that
someone was.
He took his eyes off the blonde woman and slowly shifted his gaze to the
castle, all the while trying to make sense of this situation. The humans here
looked like the usual kind of men one could find in the northern parts of
Rhovanion, just like those that inhabited Dale and the its
sister-town Esgaroth. They weren't Easterling, he was sure about that, so why
would the men camping outside the walls ally themselves with the lord of this
place?
They were drawing closer and closer to the castle, and Aragorn saw that it was
built of a dark grey, almost black stone that seemed to absorb most of the
dying sunlight, swallowing it like a sponge absorbed
water. The walls were at least forty feet high and so solid that Aragorn almost
immediately lost all the hope that still lived within his heart. There was no
way they would get out of there once they were inside.
There was nothing they could do to prevent just that, however, and so they soon
passed the bridge that stretched over the moat and rode through the gates that
looked even more ominous and foreboding than the city gates. The horses' hooves
connected loudly with the swept pavement as they entered a large, grey and thoroughly
dreary courtyard, the dreariest and at the same time busiest courtyard Aragorn
had ever seen. People clad in grey and black liveries hustled to and fro, and
there were more soldiers than one could count. Something like panic began to
spread in the young ranger's heart. He would have preferred a fire-breathing
dragon now that he thought about it.
They were slowly nearing the large, thoroughly intimidating main building, and
Aragorn's attention was attracted by the dark banner that flew from its highest
tower. It was a large, square, black piece of cloth, and the ranger's keen eyes
effortlessly saw the white thread on it that depicted what looked like a ruined
city next to a river. There also was a mountain behind the city, and red thread
was added skilfully to the picture so that it seemed that the buildings were on
fire. Aragorn felt how the feelings of dread multiplied tenfold. What kind of
person would choose that as a banner?
Before he could find an answer to that question, Ráca was jerked to a stop –
something that the black horse did not enjoy overly much and promptly bit the
man who had grasped her bridle. The man screamed in pain and rage and raised a
hand to strike the insolent animal, but either the
horse's threatening neighing, Aragorn's murderous look or his companions'
teasing laughter convinced him otherwise and he settled for pulling the ranger
off the horse.
Aragorn continued glaring at the man for a few more moments while he was
roughly shoved forward until he was standing next to Legolas who was held by
the arm by an especially emotionless-looking Cendan. Now that he had spent some
time with the other man, Aragorn knew that Cendan always looked impassive and
expressionless, but the more emotionless he looked the more agitated he truly
was. Right now, he concluded, Cendan was very unhappy. Well, he wasn't
the only one, he added wryly. He wasn't exactly ecstatic with joy to be here,
either.
Next to him, Legolas was looking up at the flag that was fluttering in the icy
winds and frowning heavily. It was one of the most depressing banners he had
ever seen, but that was not what held his attention. He knew that motif; it
reminded him of something – if he could only remember of what…
He was brought out of his thoughts when Teonvan bowed to a man wearing dark
heavy robes that marked him of a man of some importance, and he tore his eyes
off the flag and fixed them on the commander's face who came to a stop in front
of them, trailed by a group of guards wearing the now familiar grey and black
livery.
"The officers will come with me, the rest is dismissed," he told the assembled
men.
The men nodded and began to walk off into the direction of another building
that looked like a barrack of some sort – then again, Legolas thought, most
building here looked like that so he might very well have been mistaken – and
before either the elf or the ranger could blink they were surrounded by a group
of rather large, rather menacing looking guards.
Teonvan turned back from where he had been giving instructions to his
lieutenants – and had been ignoring Cendan in the process – and grinned at the
two of them, a malicious sparkle in his eyes that Legolas had hoped never to
see again.
"Well, well, well, it's almost sad, isn't it? We have really reached the city
and must soon part."
Aragorn narrowed his eyes at the man, trying to distract himself from the
slowly growing fear in the pit of his stomach.
"My heart bleeds."
The other man grinned even more broadly as he took a step closer to the ranger.
"Be careful, boy, or it really might. I'll see you again no matter what, trust
me."
The younger man did not reply, mainly because Legolas had rammed an elbow into
his bruised ribs, and so Teonvan turned back around, bowing again to the man in
the dark robes in his oily, overly deferential manner.
"Our lord is awaiting us?"
The man looked evenly at the brown haired commander, distant loathing in his
eyes, before he once again fixed them on the fair haired elf who
was pretending not to notice the amount of attention he received.
"Come."
Well, Legolas thought dazedly while they were pushed forward, up the stairs and
through the dark door leading into the main building, the people here didn't
appear to like Teonvan overly much either – they appeared to have more common
sense than he had been willing to give them. Then again, nobody with any common
sense at all attacked one of his father's patrols.
They were led or rather pulled through a maze of dark, narrow corridors and
encountered rather a lot of people, all of them either guards or servants who
did their best to melt into the stone walls once the troupe of guards reached
them. Legolas looked at a young girl of not much more than twenty years of age
with shoulder-length brown hair and bright blue eyes who pressed herself into a
small niche to let them pass, and a sudden stab of pity went through his heart
when she looked at him with wide eyes before casting her eyes to the floor,
studying her dark coarse shoes as the soldiers went past her, giving her a few
pointed looks and making loud, lewd remarks. He did not envy her.
His thoughts were abruptly taken off the servant girl when they were pulled to
a stop in front of a large double door that seemed to be just as dark as the
rest of this accursed town. The man wearing the costly robes nodded at Teonvan
and turned on his heel, walking back the way they had come. Had Legolas not
been so worried and on the edge of a full-fledged panic, he might even have
enjoyed the look of fear and terror on Teonvan's face, but the way things were
he could only try to calm his breathing and not lose what was left of his
composure. What if this lord had Aragorn killed, or worse, gave him to Teonvan
before ordering his death? What if…
The elf's musings were interrupted when the man stopped and turned back to
Teonvan who was eyeing the door with trepidation, annoyance in his voice and on
his face.
"What are you waiting for? Lord Girion awaits you! You are already almost a day
late; don't make everything even worse by keeping him waiting now!"
Teonvan bowed his head and replied something, but Legolas was far too occupied
feeling as if someone had just hit him over the head with a large, metal club
to notice. Girion? Had that man said his lord's name
was Girion? But … but how was that possible, that would mean that…
The flag he had seen suddenly filled his mind's eye, and he knew where he had
seen something like it before, more than two hundred years ago now. O the
Valar, he thought dazedly, could it really be? He knew that Aragorn was looking
at him in concern, but before he could assure the man that he was fine or could
share his newfound knowledge with him, the doors were pushed open.
Cendan grasped Aragorn's arm and pulled him forward and suddenly Teonvan was at
Legolas' side and did the same, and a second later the two of them were dragged
into the dark room that seemed to become even darker when the door closed
behind them with a heavy thud.
TBC...
mellon nín - my friend
Well, that might have been a little cliffy. Just a little one of course. But I think I have given you
loads of clues now - anyone should be able to realise who that evil overlord
is, right? *nods* Right. Well, for those who don't
figure it out, he will of course divulge it and his evil plans in the best
tradition of Dr. Evil, our two friends realise that fire-breathing dragons will
be the least of their worries and we have a little bit ranger ... angst. *hangs head* Alright,
alright, ranger _torture_. Fine. *evil grin* As always: Review? Please?
Additional A/N:
Sirithiliel - Well, yes. These men are part of the same
army, which means of course they know the ones from Erebor. *g* And no, it's not good at all.
Aratfeniel - There are quite a few people who
would want to kill Teonvan, I'm sure. You can kill the doll, no problem, but
since I'm not sure what do with the real thing, I'd ask you to leave him alone
for now. *g* Great you like Rashwe. He's going to make a few more appearances,
don't worry, but I think you're right: He hates all those of the House of
Elrond.
Deana - Well, yes, there's something wrong with Legolas. He's out of his
mind, but that's nothing new. LOL, now that you mention it, Reran sounds a
little bit like 'Rerun'. The pronunciation is similar anyway, so it doesn't
even matter. *g*
Alasse Tiwele
- Well, no, I guess not. If one doesn't like the first story, one will hardly
read the second one. *g* About the change of
perspectives: If I understand you correctly, it's FF.net's
fault. I used to have a large free space between the single paragraphs, but
after chapter 16 FF.net screwed with the formatting and deleted it in every
single chapter. I haven't found the time to re-post every single one of them. From
chapter 16 on it should be easier to read again. But I don't use *~*, mainly
because that line between the two stars is kinda hard
to 'get' on my keyboard. *shrugs* C'est la vie.
TrinityTheSheDevil - *shakes head* Yes,
indeed. They're screwed. And yes, there will be some ranger pain in the future.
You don't need to boil Teonvan or anything. And don't try to shift the blame on
some illness or something! You're simply evil! *g* LOL, I can very well imagine
Rahswe chasing the men around! He'd have a lot of fun
doing it! *nods incredulously* Uh-huh. Your pet warg. Your dyed pet warg.
Sure. *holds out hand* Give him here. Now. Come on!
Nikara - It's always hard keeping everything
apart. I mean, it's hard to forget what everyone knows or doesn't know. All you
can do is pray that you don't mix up too much. *g* Great you liked it, here's
the next part!
Red Tigress - It's supposed to be like that, slightly frightening I
mean. 'R' for 'Rotten luck' is true though, isn't it?
Their luck _is_ rotten... Poor them. *huggles them* At least they found the tree, that's
something, right? *g*
Sadie Elfgirl - No, really, I liked Reran too.
But he had to die, I'm sorry. LOL, yes, Cendan could slip and push Teonvan in.
I can just picture it: "Oops, I tripped. I didn't mean it, really! It was
an accident! And now: Free drinks all around!" I like the falling on his own knives though. Very likely too.
*g* And I don't 'jerk' my characters around! They do
that all by themselves, it's no fault of mine, really!
*innocent look* And don't worry: The next bit is here,
yay! *g*
Bookworm, .303 - Don't worry, I don't think it's your computer's fault. FF.net
does that all the time. It hates me and about ⅔ of all the other authors.
*evil grin* Would you care to define 'not too badly'? It's
a rather vague term, isn't it... A lot of people
seemed to miss Rashwe, I really don't know why. *g*
Elenillor - Really? Your professor can't
have done that because because of that one word too
much! And yes, the chapter WAS longer than 15 pages. I still manage to keep them
under 20 pages, but only barely. *hangs head* I'm
pathetic.
Alilacia - Cendan's mother's people (don't you
just love genitives? *g*) are the Easterlings. She's from the East of the Sea. Well,
as I said in the A/N, I liked Reran too. But I had a good reason to kill him -
at least I think so. I can't remember it now, but I had one, I'm sure about it.
*evil grin* Yes, Elrohir as a hobbit IS quite an interesting idea, isn't it? Well,
I didn't like the film overly much. I and my friend decided after half an hour
that it was exceedingly funny - which it was, let's be
honest. LOL, you have a "Likeable Bad Guys List"? Well, Cendan most
definitely fits in there. And I use "*" instead of dots when I
review. I HATE FF.net. *grrr*
May - Hmm, I do see your point. One
thing is that I don't follow C&S' universe, and have therefore not really
decided how well the twins knew Legolas before he ran into Aragorn. I think
they knew each other and were even friends, but not very good ones. As to
Legolas' naiveté and innocence: I don't think that Tolkien
pictured him as particularly naïve. I think he's certainly innocent in a way
that most elves are (unless, of course, they are Kinslayers
like Galadriel or other interesting things like that), but naïve ... I don't
know. He's a wood-elf after all, and in Mirkwood you tend to lose such things
as naiveté rather quickly, especially after III, 1050, which is about the time
that the "Shadow" fell over Greenwood. *shrugs* That's
just me, of course, and I didn't mean to imply that the twins are only worried
about Aragorn. I just think that - I know that that sounds evil - considering
Aragorn's importance as the Hope of Men and the fact that he is their brother,
after all, (at least it's my interpretation that they would really see him as
such), the twins would be more concerned about Aragorn than about Legolas, at
least at first. Kind of an instinct, if you wish. *g*
Well, as I said, that's just me.
Marbienl - *g* I see. Well, "talen" and "Zahlen"
does sound rather similar. I'll remember that. And yes, I believe that
Thranduil wouldn't pay for one of his subjects. No king or government can bow
to blackmailing, and I don't even think that Thranduil would have paid for
Legolas. He's not that kind of king. *g* *shakes head* No, no pleasure slave.
Those are hardly important to gain "what your forefathers have dreamt
of", huh? Hmm, sorry, but the next ED has already my sister's personality,
and, belive me, she's scarier than you. *shudders*
Much, much scarier... I knew about the maggots. Have you seen Gladiator? It's
in there. It worked quite well too, I'm told. And I don't think that Rashwe
would forgive Elrohir, no matter what he'd do. He hates him. *g*
Gwyn - Yup, loyalty has nothing to do with
personal feelings. Well, most of the time it has, but still. *g* Hmm, you want
to see Legolas angst? I think there's some in the next few chapters, even
though Aragorn is most definitely worse off. *huggles ranger* Poor boy.
Strider's Girl - *g* They're always in more
trouble than they realise! They're kinda stupid,
aren't they? *shakes head* Males. And yes, the twins
and Celylith ARE insane. Considering the company they keep, it's only natural.
Glorfindel is really to be pitied. *g*
TheRowan - Good question. One of
my dictionaries says it's a word, the other says it's not. The internet
dictionary also says it's not, so I guess you're right and it's not a word.
I'll change it ... some time. When I have too much time at my hands, which will
be ... never? *g* Thanks for pointing that out though.
LOL, yes, 50 things out of 100 would be Teonvan's presence and existence in
general. He REALLY doesn't like him. Great you like Rashwe. He's ... cool. Cool
but evil. *g*
Zam - For crying out loud, Reran was
NOT a precious! He was evil! Bad! Mean! Yes, I liked him too, but that's beside
the point! *takes Mighty Authoress Control of Doom™* Thank you! What havoc I
can wreak with this... Mhahahaahaha! *runs off
cackling evilly* Take Saruman and be happy. He's a
freak and a pervy hobbit fancier. You can have him.
And don't kill Caellan. I still have plans for him, I think. LOL, I can just
picture Sauron with the Happy-Face-mask. He's look like a really nice guy, I'm
sure... ROTFL! Celylith? Sugar-muffin?
Oh, that's priceless... *giggles* Sugar-muffin... And I agree with Glorfindel:
He should have stayed in Valinor. Manwë and Mandos are probably still laughing
about that one... *g* And the answer to your last
question is: I don't know. Take your pick: Either elven horses live
considerably longer than normal ones, or Glorfindel is unimaginative and calls
all his horses Asfaloth. *g*
Elvendancer - So you got your sister to read
this, huh? Well, if she's starting in the beginning, I guess we'll see her ...
sometime tomorrow in a year. *g* And I know what you
mean, my sister and I don't exactly hit each other all the time (for which
we're a little old), but we do it from time to time nevertheless. It's great
fun! *g*
Jazmin3 Firewing - *evil grin* Well, don't
count on it! Cendan's not going to be content with 'just' turning Teonvan in -
not that it would have been of much use anyway, but that's a different story,
or rather a different chapter. And Estel doesn't know the word himself!
He wasn't even born when that happened, besides, I don't think Erestor is
stupid enough to let Glorfindel do something like that ever again. So, the only
ones who know the word are elves, including the twins.
They might tell someone later, I don't know yet. And no, I never thought
of one, and if it appears here. I won't write it out either. Sorry about that.
*g*
Narina Nightfall - *shudders* I don't
understand that obsession with abbreviating almost every word you come across.
And you can always get yourself a beta reader. I don't have one myself, but
most authors do. And I don't know why, but I just didn't want them to start
talking about Adruran. I guess I think it would be unlike them, volunteering
any information or talking to each other when others can overhear them. Uhm, and you do realise that Galalith is dead, don't you?
And Celylith might find indeed a new pet. I have something planned, even though
I don't know if I'll manage to put it in. *shrugs* We'll
see. As far as I can tell, Easterlings and Haradrim are not the same people.
The Haradrim are from the South and dark-skinned, while the Easterlings live in
the area around the Sea of Rhûn and east of
it. They are distantly related to the Men living in the North and
descendants of the Men who betrayed Fëanor in the
Nirnaeth Arnoediad. As far as I can see, they have nothing to do with each
other. *g* You haven't been deficient in praise.
Thanks a lot for all your kind words, I am glad you're
enjoying this. *huggles*
Tychen - Well, yes, one of these days the
drawing away attention - bit will come back to bite them in the
a**. Just wait for it. *g* Glad you liked the up to date info about
Rhûn. I just thought that such things could very likely really happen,
considering the Elves' immortality and all that... And I must regretfully
inform you that it's indeed rather unlikely that one of the two happens. Sorry.
*g*
Alariel - *blushes* Thanks! I am very glad
you're enjoying this story this far. Thanks a lot for the review - they make me
smile and grin and do various other silly things! *g*
Jenihenpen - *g* That's
the problem with WIPs, isn't it? I hate them myself,
but I don't have the patience to wait until a story is fully posted. it's my own fault, I guess. I wouldn't call it stamina, it's more stubbornness. I refuse to let a plot tell me what
to do, and I am far too perfectionist to stop posting a story. *g*
Karone Evertree
- *shrugs* I don't know where these thoughts come from myself. They're suddenly
there. Vicious, evil plot bunnies. *tries to shake
them off* Back! Back I tell you! *gets chased away from the computer* Back!
Bailey - *confused* I didn't say that, did I? Aragorn is in this
chapter, and so is Legolas. Just because I didn't say he would be in it doesn't
mean he isn't. *g* I like "elficide". Sounds interesting. I don't like termites either. And I
don't think that Aragorn will ever learn to keep his mouth shut. *shakes head* Nah.
Lyn - Well, I wouldn't exactly call it "senseless torture".
You may call it "flimsily justified torture" or "nearly
senseless torture", but not just "senseless". *thinks and then
breaks down sobbing* Alright, it was nearly senseless. I caved in, my alter ego
made me do it. There are no quick rescues in my stories though, I'm very sorry.
Uhm, about the 'repetition': That was intentional? The phrase "almost
understand Teonvan" was repeated on purpose, kind of like a running gag.
It's even a stylistic device, it's called 'iteratio' in Latin. And about the
Teonvan-not-obeying-Reran-thing: You mustn't forget that this isn't a modern or
even a normal "old" army like maybe the Roman army. In this one, the
most important thing isn't your rank, it's who's in
the evil overlord's favour and who isn't. Cendan most definitely isn't, and
Reran isn't really either, while Teonvan is. I would agree with you that,
usually, every commander has the means to ensure that his orders are obeyed,
but Teonvan had been sent on the mission by special request of their lord and
he enjoys his favour. Reran didn't dare do anything that would really upset his
lord. *shrugs* That's my interpretation of the whole
thing anyway. Thanks for the review!
Crystal-Rose15 - No-one will ever understand FF.net, I fear. I most
certainly don't. Uh-huh, a balrog the size of a Macaw parrot? And he likes
carrots? That's an ... interesting balrog you have
there! Oh, and I'd say all of them have heard that particular speech quite a
lot of times. It would surprise me very much otherwise. And to be honest, I am
quite surprised myself that so many people like Celylith. I like him too, sure,
but not THAT much. Well, the CLF certainly does. *g*
Fewer Brain Cells Than A Garden Hose -
*giggles* I STILL like that name. Ah well. *watches as
Teonvan explodes randomly* Al-right. Whatever you say.
And I think Zam might indeed have started a CELF, so
to speak. She likes him too, God only knows why. *shakes head*
Shauna - *darkly* Beetroots can be very intelligent vegetable. They are
in fact THE most intelligent vegetables ever! *g* *hugglees
Speedy Award* Thank you! I usually need three or four days a chapter. Most of
the time four days though. Great you liked the fire ants and termites. I don't
know where that idea came from either, I most
certainly didn't plan it. Uhm, Lasseg means "Little Leaf", therefore
Leafie, just in case you didn't find it. *g*
Firnsarnien - *ominously* And
so you should be. Teonvan is not to be trifled with. Plus, he's an idiot. Well,
I guess that would be possible for Cendan, but it's not his way, is it? He's
not the kind of man who would murder someone in his sleep. Idiot.
*g* LOL, glad we agree that Teonvan served SOME purpose. I would have hated to
have created an useless villain. Hmm, I'll think about
not killing Anardir. No, let's say I won't kill him. Not that that's going to
do him any good, but... *g*
Carrie - I'm glad your op was a success! Congrats! *confetti falls from
ceiling* I hate doctors, hospitals and everything connected to them, so I'm
glad you made it. Hmm, I don't think that Cendan is redeemable, at least not in
the sense that he will see the error of his ways and will try to become a
better person. That would be very much unlike him. Hmm again,
Glorfindel losing his cool? That just might happen. I don't know yet,
but it might. LOL, yes, the tree-branch-thingie is
indeed only a splinter. As always: Things can get much worse... *evil cackle* And now that you mention it, all this might indeed be a
reason for Aragorn to choose exile. I would have. I would never again have left
Rivendell. *g* And yes, there might be another story
with Elrond after this one. *huggles* Great to have
you back!
Emiri-chan - *blushes* Well - thank you? I'm
glad you like it of course, even though there are loads of authors I could
never compare with. Try Thundera Tiger or Littlefish - they are just ... wow! *g* But thanks
nonetheless. And I would try and read some of your stuff, but I have never in
my whole life watched any of these Japanese series - Manga
or Anime? Or whatever they may be called. I wouldn't know what they're about at
all. Sorry. *g*
Lynette - Yes, that is of course the main problem. Our favourite ranger
is just extra baggage, isn't he? I don't know yet if the bad guys will find out
who Legolas is. I kinda want
them to, but I would have to put it into the chapter I am currently writing and
don't really know how to do it. *shrugs* We'll see. Is
it really that complicated? That's the problem when you're planning stories -
to yourself everything appears easy to understand and reasonable. *g* Thank for reviewing!
Ellyrianna - Uhm, yes, I guess I can. I can do
this to you, because I am the Almighty Authoress of Doom! Mhahahaha!
*runs away laughing evilly* LOL, I was laughing so hard! Legolas had had his
fun? He's really being selfish, isn't he? Well, let me think... We have a bit
of mistreatment this chapter and a LOT more next chapter, so much in fact that
it should even make you happy! Don't worry, there will
be some angst soon. I promise. *pats her back*
C. Hobbes - *pales* A literary analysis? Oh please, don't do that? As
soon as you start really looking at my weird little stories, you would notice
the plotholes ... then the implausibilities
... then the weird little coincidences... *shudders* No, we can't have that.
*blinks* The Triplets of Bellville? I've never heard of it. Is it good?
Snow-Glory - Well, yes, I guess it was a little bit un-elf-like. But he
was very worried and upset, so I guess he can be forgiven this once, don't you
think? Besides, I needed them to find the tree somehow. It wasn't really his
fault. *g* It's my alter ego's, as always.
Firniswin - Oh, don't worry. It happens that
Real Life doesn't allow you enough time to review. Uhm, you like Aragorn's and
Estel's oddness? There's something wrong about that! *g* And
who doesn't like Glorfindel? I love him too! *huggles*
Starlight - Na ja, ich dachte, sie koennten mal ein bischen Glueck gebrauchen, wie wir alle. Abgesehen davon kann niemand
so viel Pech auf einmal haben. Wer ist denn hier noch normal? Wir ganz sicher
nicht, und wenn es dich gluecklich macht... *zuckt
Schultern* Keine Angst, du musst mich nicht mit Reviews
bestechen, dein 'Gespraech' kommt schon noch. Ich weiss noch nicht, ob die Boeslinge
herausfinden, wer die beiden sind. Wird sich noch herausstellen. *fieses Grinsen*
Miaow Artsy - I would be mortified as
well if I had to work with my childhood hero. Well, I don't really have a
childhood hero, I guess, but I would be mortified if I had one. *blinks* You can bake with a microwave? Really?
I didn't know that. I always thought you used an oven. Well, I use one. Thanks
for the cake anyway. And please put back Celylith, or
his father should it have been him. I need both of them. *glares
grimly* Thank you.
Estelreader - Thank you. I'm glad to hear that
you liked the dialogue. That's the reason why the chapters are so long too, I
can't make them stop. I know, I'm rather pathetic. *g*
You're on the right track too with all that pain, angst, hurt and comfort of
course, and no, I wouldn't kill him, at least not in such a story. Since I
don't write AUs I could only write one of these
Aragorn-dies-and-Legolas-sails-to-Valinor-stories, and they're much too sad for
me. Thanks for the review! *huggles*
Grumpy - LOL, it would be very interesting indeed if the trees started
fighting back. Poor Elrohir. But you're right, at least they're not completely clueless anymore.
That's something indeed. *g*
Miruvor - Yes, I liked him too. He had to die,
sorry. *g* You're right, there was a lot of cluelessness, but now they have finally put two and two
together. You're right, it only took them two weeks or
something. *shrugs* They're a little bit stupid
sometimes. I hope this update was still quick enough!
Suzi9 - LOL, indeed. Mutiny is fun. Go join your respective armies and
try it. *g* AT LEAST 30 chapters, mate. I'm really sorry, and I'll try not to
exceed it by much, but I don't think I'll be very successful. *hangs head* They just don't shut up! *large grin* Oh yes, CONSTANT
VIGILANCE! If Reran had read HP, he would still be alive. I'm sure Celylith
would accept your bet. He would lose a lot of money though. *g* I'm glad you
liked the fire ants/termites. I swear I don't plan these things, the ideas just
... well, ambush me. Yes, that't the correct term,
they _ambush_ me. Vicious little things. *g* Well,
technically Aragorn is of course not a Noldo, but his elven forefathers and
-mothers were Noldorin, for the most part, with a dash of Sindarin blood and a
bit of Maia, of course.I am very happy to hear that
your head is better of course. And of course I love you! *huggles*
You're my only Scottish reviewer I know of! *huggles even more* I'm sure the grades aren't THAT bad,
right? And you passed Latin and Old English, congrats! *confetti falls from
ceiling* Well done! And I am looking forward to those pics!
Amelie - What do you mean, you can't sleep? I
mean, I can always sleep? Is that a real illness? Imsomnia? That's bad...
*shakes head* Poor you. I really hope you'll get better soon. Well, yes, maybe
the twins and Celylith will save him. Then again, maybe they won't since
they're days behind them. *g* Nope, you won't find out all about the evil
overlord's plan this chapter, try the next. Then he'll explain everything, I
promise! Get better soon!
*shakes head* Do you see that? Now the formatting is almost back to normal –
almost. I will never, EVER, understand FF.net… *grrrr*
Oh, yes, sorry: Thanks a lot for the great reviews!
