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A/N:
First of all, I have to vent my passionate feelings of hatred and
loathing for
this entire website. It didn't let me log in yesterday, and if you
can't log
in, you can't update, it's as simple as that. I am very sorry for the
delay,
but for once it truly wasn't my fault. There is also the problem that I
didn't
get any reviews till yesterday, so if I fail to reply to some of them
at the
bottom, please forgive me. I hope FF.net got most of them, but just in
case it
didn't I apologise in advance for not replying.
Second, about the names. I see now that it wasn't quite as clear as I
thought
who Girion is, even though there are quite a few who got very close. I
hereby
award Zam Kenobi, Starlight, Galadhriel Vornionien and Narina Nightfall
a
cookie each for finding out (more or less) who everyone's favourite
evil
overlord is. *thrown confetti into air* I'm afraid though that
only Sabercrazy
got the meaning of Lord Súliat's emissaries even remotely right. She
found out
the meaning of both delegates' names - well done! I hereby award her a
cookie
_and_ a copy of Teonvan's book! *throws more confetti into air* To all
the
others I can only say: You were searching in the wrong language, sorry.
*evil,
cryptic grin* If you want, I can tell you next chapter though.
And, finally, third: The twins & Co. I have to announce here that they're NOT in
this chapter, but that they will be in the next, at least briefly. I
think
they'll reach this cheerful little city in about chapter ... 23. Yes,
that
sounds about right. So there might be a partial reunion around chapter
25.
Please note that those are _estimates_. I am not promising anything. *g*
Alright, alright, I am shutting up. I know you can't wait to get to the
ranger
... angst. *g* Apart from that we also find out the evil overlord's
plans, find
out that he is - unsuprisingly - quite mad and have a few cheerful
discussions
between our favourite elf and ranger.
Have fun and review, please!
Chapter 20
It took Aragorn only a moment to decide that, if he had ever seen a
darker or
more depressing room, he certainly couldn't remember where right now.
The walls
and floor were of the same dark grey stone they had already seen in the
corridors and outside, and if there was a window somewhere in here he
could not
see it.
A shudder raced through him, only adding to the fear and worry in his
heart. He
would never understand how someone could build a room without even one
tiny
window – humans and dwarves were indeed curious races. The rest of the
room
wasn't much brighter and more cheerful either, he thought darkly a
second later
once his eyes had got used to the gloom. Some walls were draped with
dark grey
curtains to ward off the winter's chill, and torches burned in
wrought-iron
holders, casting a flickering light onto the dark surfaces.
The only real piece of furniture seemed to be a large, throne-like
chair that
stood at the far side of the room on a small podium. It was masterfully
crafted
and would have been beautiful hadn't it been made of such a dark,
gnarly wood
that only caused the chair to appear as dark as the rest of the room.
Apart from the guards who were once again pushing them forward, there
were
several more soldiers in the grey and black livery present; apart from
that the
room seemed empty. It was in fact empty, except for a man whose face
was just
as foreboding as the room's décor, and who had therefore to be the lord
of this
place, which was only logical since he was also sitting on the
throne-like
chair, Aragorn concluded, his growing panic being replaced by a
calmness he was
very thankful for. The last thing he needed now was to lose his head.
Cendan and Teonvan had bowed before fully entering the room and had now
straightened up again, dragging him and Legolas forward until they were
only a
few feet away from the podium. Teonvan once again inclined his head
respectfully before turning around slightly to the impassionate elf
whose arm
he was grasping.
"Bow before Lord Girion," he hissed at the friends, an unusual,
frightened
sparkle in his eyes.
Legolas and Aragorn didn't even have to trade a look but simply stared
at the brown
haired man, an expression of such disbelief on their faces that Teonvan
might
just as well have asked them to climb up to the highest tower and fly
around it
a few times. Teonvan didn't grin at them when it became clear that
neither of
the two intended to even grace that order with an answer, something he
would
have done under any other circumstances; the man's gleeful, sadistic
nature
seemed to have melted away with the snow they had brought into the
chilly room.
A curt nod into Cendan's direction and a few moments later both
prisoners
crashed to the ground due to a kick to the back of their knees, and the
four
guards quickly stepped forward to keep them there as Teonvan and the
dark
haired lieutenant stepped forward and to the side, once again bowing
slightly
before the man sitting on the large chair.
"Your prisoner, my lord," Teonvan said subserviently, keeping his eyes
fixed on
the ground.
"I don't know about you, but I see two," the dark haired lord retorted
icily,
his cold eyes wandering from the emotionless, bruised face of the elf
to the
equally emotionless and bruised face of the young man.
"The ranger was captured when he tried to free the prisoner, my lord.
We had no
choice but to…"
"I know," Girion interrupted the man coldly. "I actually talked with
the
messenger you sent ahead, Teonvan."
"Of course, my lord," Teonvan mumbled softly, shooting Cendan who was
standing
next to him a dark look which the other man either didn't notice or
ignored.
Trust Cendan to send a man who not only informed their lord of their
arrival
but also told him everything he had wanted to explain to him in person.
"And therefore I also know of Captain Reran's … demise," the dark-clad
man
added. "We have a lot of things to talk about later – Captain."
A dark, pleased smile spread over the brown haired man's face and he
nodded his
head while Cendan's already emotionless face froze in an even more
emotionless
façade. His lord knew, he thought incredulously, he knew that
Teonvan had killed Reran, and he not only did not throw him into the
dungeons,
he openly condoned it! He allowed a despicable creature like Teonvan to
kill a
good, fair captain just like that, just because it had got him what he
wanted.
Cendan did his best to uphold a steady, calm façade. If he himself
deserved
scorn and contempt for not protecting his captain, then what did his
lord
deserve for condoning Teonvan's actions?
Had Cendan's lord known about the dark haired lieutenant's thoughts, he
would
most likely not have been very amused, but the way things were he
simply sat on
his chair and studied the defiant faces of his prisoners, a small smile
on his
lips as he looked at the fair haired elf's bruised features.
"So you're too superior to bow before a mere man like me, are you, elf?"
"I bend the knee only before my king and before those who have earned
my
respect," Legolas told the man, not at all intimidated by the
threatening looks
he received from the guards and Teonvan. "Neither is the case here."
The room seemed to hold its breath, but the dark haired man did not
seem overly
distressed by the elven prisoner's bold answer, for his smile only grew
wider.
"Just the answer I expected from one of the Firstborn. It is good to
see that
some things always remain the same," he said friendly before turning
his head
slightly to the side, looking at the young ranger who was kneeling next
to the
elf, held in this position by the hands of two guards on his shoulders.
"What I
did not expect is you, ranger."
"I'm so sorry to ruin your plans," Aragorn said before he could stop
himself.
"Some people, however, like surprises, or so I've heard."
The dark-clad man's face darkened. He was apparently not willing to put
up with
such candour from the younger man, and before Aragorn in his amazing
stupidity
could add something that would get him killed, Legolas turned to the
side and
glared at his human friend.
"Nuitho lam lín, Estel," he told the young ranger insistently in
a low
hiss. "Ú- 'ado chin dîn, pedithon na chyn."
Aragorn glared back at the elf, trying to tell him without words that
there was
no way he would allow Legolas to distract these people for his sake,
but his
eyes were drawn to the face of the dark haired man when he began to
chuckle
loudly.
"Listen to your friend, Estel," he said in heavily accented,
but
understandable Sindarin. "An interesting name you have there, boy,
especially
for a man. Hope – rather ironic, is it not?"
Aragorn traded a shocked look with his friend before he looked at the
other man,
silver eyes wide and unbelieving.
"How do you know this language? What do you want? Who are you?"
"My family has always set a high value on following the old ways.
Especially in
terms of education," the man said cheekily in the Common Tongue, which
was a
good thing too, Aragorn thought defiantly. This man had obviously
learnt
Sindarin from a person who had never spent any time whatsoever in the
company
of a native speaker, and the language the young ranger had come to
consider his
mother tongue did not deserve to be butchered like this.
"And," the man went on, "if you want to know who I am, ask the elf. He
knows."
Legolas ignored Aragorn's questioning look and kept staring steadily at
the man
in front of him, searching for – and, to his vexation, also finding –
traces of
the man he had known so long ago in the dark haired human.
"You are from Dale," he said quietly, not ceasing his intense study of
the man.
"That's what is depicted on the flag; the burning valley
of Dale with the Lonely
Mountain and the River
Running."
"Girion," Aragorn nodded thoughtfully, oblivious to his friend's
pleading look
that asked him to stay silent, for Eru's sake. "The last Lord of Dale
before
the coming of the dragon."
"Very perceptive," Girion nodded, a smile once again appearing on his
face,
something that was entirely unusual for him. "Girion is my ancestor."
"If you are from Dale, then why are you doing this?" Legolas asked
hastily
before the dark haired man could fix his attention on Aragorn. He tried
to sit
up straighter, but was hindered by the restraining hands of his guards.
"The
Men of Dale have ever been the friends and allies of the Wood-elves of
Mirkwood!"
Girion leaned back in his chair, a dark frown marring his face.
"My family may be from Dale, but I am not of Dale," he
retorted darkly.
"The Lake-men and the Men of Dale are nothing but dogs fighting for the
scraps
you throw them!"
"Scraps?" Legolas asked incredulously, the contempt he felt for these
people
finally breaking through his carefully erected façade and spreading on
his
face. "We 'throw' them nothing! King Bard is our ally, and…"
Even the most unobservant person would have noticed that that had been
the
wrong thing to say. The sitting man shot to his feet and his face
assumed a red
colour in a matter of seconds.
"Bard!" the man spat. "Bard is no-one, nothing, a coward! The dragon is
finally
gone and dead and what does he do? He settles for what we had before!
He should
have taken Lake-town and Erebor and all that comes with it!"
"That would have meant war," Aragorn shook his head, not at all liking
the way
this man was losing his temper. "He only took what was his, what had
belonged
to Girion once, as every honourable man would have…"
In a movement almost too fast to follow, the dark haired man had moved
in front
of the ranger and grasped him by the throat, beginning to close his
hand around
the other man's unprotected neck.
"Heed your friend's advice, boy," he hissed furiously as he watched the
younger
man struggle to draw breath despite his fist that was blocking his
breathing.
"It is only because of a whim that I didn't have you killed at the
gates. It is
a mistake I am more than willing to rectify if you do not hold your
tongue now.
Understood?"
He closed his hand a little more tightly around the other's neck only
to
release the young ranger as quickly as he had seized him, spinning
around to
his chair and sitting down once again.
"Let me tell you something about Girion, my noble ancestor," he said,
calmer
now and ignoring the murderous looks the elf shot him while the younger
human
tried to get his erratic breathing under control. "He was not what he
is now
said to have been! Did you know that he had two sons? Probably not,
since
everyone was only ever interested in the safety and comfort of the
older of the
two. He was always the favourite; his father cared more for him than
for his
younger brother, he loved him more than his younger brother.
When the dragon
descended on the valley and Dale and her precious lord were destroyed,
no-one
cared for the younger of the two; all that mattered were that the heir
and his
mother got to safety."
"That is not true," Legolas said slowly in an attempt to reason with
this man
that was doomed from the start. "I knew Lord Girion. You did not. He
did love
his sons, both of them."
"Did you now?" Girion sneered. "The only reason my father named me
after him
was that I would never forget what he had done to my ancestor! He
deprived him
of his family inheritance, or he would have done it if the dragon had
not
forestalled him by destroying the city! No-one cared about the younger
son
then, and so he and some of the survivors left Wilderland instead of
settling
in Lake-town with the others. They journeyed for a long time until they
found
these mountains, the Ered Dhuir, and founded Baredlen, this city."
Legolas narrowed his eyes as he surveyed the man in front of him. If
what he
said was true – and he was sure it was, for he saw much of Girion and
even Bard
in his face – then Girion's second son hadn't been killed as had been
believed
so many years. Girion – junior – was wrong. His ancestor had loved both
his
children; it had been only the younger son's imagination that had made
him
think that the king favoured his brother.
Legolas had met him only once during a diplomatic trip to the then
prospering
city, and had disliked him from the very minute they had been
introduced. Lord
Girion's younger son had been pathologically jealous of his older
brother, up
to cataloguing every gift their father ever gave to his brother and
comparing
them to those he himself received.
All that however, he thought darkly, was unimportant, since this man
here
obviously believed that what he had always been told was the truth.
Dale had
fallen almost exactly 184 years ago, and that was a long time for lies
to grow
until they resembled the truth more than what had really happened. It
was time
enough for an old grudge to grow into an all-encompassing,
all-consuming need
for vengeance, and Legolas understood with frightening clarity what it
was this
man was planning.
"We have no quarrel with you or your people," the blond elf said
slowly,
unconsciously assuming the tone of voice he would use for talking to a
frightened, skittish colt. "Let us go, now, and I will beg my king to
consider
this a ... concatenation of unfortunate circumstances."
"Once again, very characteristic," Girion nodded, apparently having
regained
his icy, calm aloofness. "For how stupid do you take me? Do you
honestly expect
me to believe that you would simply ride back to that wood of yours and
actually tell your king to forget about this episode? After you have
seen my …
allies out there, in front of the city gates? Only a fool would believe
that,
and I am no fool."
"Is that so?" Legolas asked scornfully, ignoring the small voice in his
head
that screamed at him to stay silent and become part of the scenery.
"You send
your men to the woods of my king, disturb our borders, attack my
patrol, kill
one of my companions and ally yourself with the Easterlings, and you
expect
anyone not to believe you to be insane? If you are indeed one of
Girion's
descendants, you know that the Wood-elves are loyal friends but just as
fierce
enemies if we have to be! Do you expect King Thranduil to sit
idly by
while you attack his allies and bring war upon Rhovanion? If that is
so, then
you are indeed the greatest fool I have ever seen in my whole life, and
I have
seen many of them!"
Teonvan who seemed to be torn between fear and surprise that anyone
would dare
speak to his lord like this took a step closer to the elf and raised
his arm to
hit him, but Girion raised his hand and stopped him in his tracks.
"No, Master Elf, I do not expect you or your king to believe any of
this, and
that is why you're here."
Legolas' eyes narrowed and he gave Aragorn who had recovered his breath
by now
a small, worried glance. The dark-clad man leaned back into his chair
and gave
the two kneeling figures in front of him a content look.
"I see you are beginning to understand," he nodded at the stony-faced
elf in
front of him. "I know that you elves are older than you looks, so you
will know
that what determines the outcome of a war is, in the end, not only the
strategy, or the tactic, or the number of soldiers and how much money
you have,
but rather the amount of planning that precedes it. You can beat an
army twice
as large as yours if you surprise them and know the tactics they will
employ to
oppose you. Information can win a war."
The fair haired elf's eyes narrowed even further until they were no
more than
two narrow, silver-blue slits.
"Save your breath," he told the man in front of him, contempt on his
face. "You
will learn nothing from me."
"A rash statement," the man shook his head seriously. "I expected
nothing less,
of course, at the beginning, that is. You will tell me everything I
want to
know about Mirkwood, her defences and tactics – sooner or later."
"I will never betray my people or my king," Legolas shook his head in a
gesture
that was both calm and very determined.
"As I said: A rash statement," Girion repeated, appearing just as
determined.
"I will not go looking for trouble with your king, elf; you do not
concern me.
For all I care you can live forever in that forest of yours, as long as
you stay
there. Everything east of Mirkwood is mine; it should have been
mine and my
family's for the past 180 years! I am taking back what is mine, and you
and
your king are not going to stop me!"
"Wilderland is not yours," Legolas told the man in a cold, contemptuous
whisper. "Lake-town is not yours. Erebor is not yours. Dale is not
yours. Nothing
north of this place is yours. And nothing north of this place will
ever be
yours, not while one of my people still draws breath."
"Then," the man leaned forward, eyes cold and afire with a strange,
almost
insane glow, "that will have to be changed, won't it?"
He nodded at the guards holding the prisoners on their knees who
promptly
pulled the two of them upright, still grasping them tightly by their
bound
arms.
"You have seen my allies – they are getting restless," he told the elf
and
ranger in front of him. "Still, I'll give you till tomorrow to think
about my
words. After that we'll have to resort to less … civilised means
of
persuasion."
Aragorn bit onto his lower lip to prevent from making a stupid comment
that
would not be conducive to their situation, but Legolas was apparently
not of
the opinion that discretion was the better part of valour. The elf was
really
getting into the whole
insulting-their-obviously-insane-captor-even-in-the-face-of-death-and-torture-thing,
the young ranger decided as he watched Legolas raise his head and
square his
shoulders in a gesture oddly like his golden haired father.
"This city is as far from civilised as possible," the elven prince told
the
dark haired man with the arrogant contempt that only long practise
could bring.
"You are nothing but a descendant of a disgruntled, envious younger son
who
could never accept that his brother was worthier than he! King
Thranduil, King
Bard and even the Dwarf King of Erebor will continue to rule long after
your
army has scattered in the winds and your realm has crumbled into dust."
Once again the mention of King Bard's name was enough to provoke a
reaction,
and Girion was standing in front of the bound elf in a second, hands
twitching
in agitation.
"We will see about that," he hissed at the fair being that was far from
impressed. "We will see about that when you end your life in my
dungeons,
begging me for death."
The elf did not reply, but his eyes grew even colder, if such a thing
was even
possible. For another long moment the human lord continued staring at
the
other, but then he averted his eyes and gave Cendan a quick nod.
"Get them out of my sight."
The dark haired man bowed his head and was about to motion to the
guards to
take the prisoners away, when Teonvan's voice interrupted the icy
silence,
sounding both anxious and full of suppressed anticipation.
"What about the ranger, my lord? Do you need him or is he to be …
disposed of?"
Legolas felt his heart freeze in his chest but did not dare raise his
head to
look at his friend. That was the question he had been dreading the
whole time;
what if this man said Yes? What if he ordered Teonvan to kill Aragorn,
what if…
The dark-clad man seemed to ponder his captain's question for a moment,
but
then he slowly shook his head, a calculating sparkle in his eyes.
"No, don't kill him. I have the feeling that he might prove useful
later on –
as a kind of encouragement, yes?"
Legolas sensed more than saw Aragorn stiffen next to him, and as the
guards
grabbed his arms and dragged him out of the dark room into the
direction of the
dungeons, he thought to himself for the first time how much easier
everything
would have been for everyone had he just died with Galalith.
Several minutes later, the heavy, iron-mounted doors of their cell
swung closed
behind them, producing a sound as foreboding and ominous as everything
seemed
to be in this place. Legolas remained where the guards had pushed him,
namely
leaning against one of the rough, damp walls, and took a close look at
their
surroundings.
There wasn't much to look at, he concluded quickly. The room – their
cell – was
barely more than six square feet big, with only one large, thick wooden
door
and no windows. The walls were of a slightly darker, very solid-looking
stone
and so thick that Legolas could hear little of what went on outside the
room.
There was not a single light source, and it took even the fair haired
elf some
moments until his eyes had adjusted enough to see that the only piece
of
furniture was a wobbly cot that looked old enough to date back to this
city's
foundation.
Legolas took a deep breath and slowly turned fully around, just in time
to see
Aragorn flop down onto the cot he had just run into in the near
darkness of the
room, moving slightly stiffly and awkwardly due to the fact that his
hands were
still bound behind his back. The elf was studying the young human's
tired,
pained face and was just thinking about what he could possible say to
his
friend when Aragorn did the very last thing he had expected him to: He
started
to laugh.
For a moment, Legolas was too stunned to react, but then he carefully
leaned
back against the wall, actually enjoying the cold that soothed the pain
that
had developed in his bound arms.
"Would you kindly inform me of what is so very funny about all this? As
far as
I'm concerned, being captured by a madman bent on destroying all of
Rhovanion
is neither amusing nor enjoyable!"
"No," Aragorn gasped between fits of laughter, "No, of course not! I –
I don't
think it's funny!"
Legolas arched an eyebrow, mentally debating if Aragorn was on the way
of
losing his mind.
"Then what is?"
Aragorn finally regained control of himself, still gasping for breath
and
chuckling softly.
"You!" he finally replied, staring into the general direction of the
elf he
could still not see clearly. "You are! What was it you said, 'you must
cease
your foolish attempts to draw attention to yourself'? I? Draw
attention
to myself? Ha! Valar, the next time you say something like that I am
going to
laugh in your face!"
"You already are," Legolas grumbled under his breath.
"Of course I am!" Aragorn exclaimed, all mirth suddenly gone from his
face.
"What in the name of all the Valar were you thinking? You insulted this
insane
lord! You insulted him, his realm and his ancestors! Have you taken
complete
leave of your senses??"
"Maybe," the elf admitted testily. "Maybe I have, but he was wrong! I
knew
Girion; I met him when my father sent me to Dale with a delegation to…"
Before Legolas could finish the sentence, Aragorn had begun to shake
his head,
grey eyes darting to the heavy door.
"Queta Quenya lambë," he told the elf quickly. "Úmelvë ista
man
lastëa."
Legolas frowned, but immediately understood what the man was hinting
at. He
switched to the High Elven Tongue that was not commonly spoken anymore
on Arda.
"I do not hear anyone outside the door," he told Aragorn in the same
language.
"And even if there is anyone there, I doubt he would understand us if
we were
to speak in Sindarin."
"I think you are right," Aragorn nodded while Legolas walked stiffly
over to
the cot to sit beside him, "But I would rather not take the risk. I
don't know
if that Girion understands Quenya, but I suspect it's rather unlikely."
"He barely speaks Sindarin," Legolas shook his head somewhat
contemptuously.
"The ruling family of Dale always set value on a traditional education.
The
sons of the kings always learned Sindarin, but only to be able to
converse with
the Wood-elves in our language – as an advantage during negotiations,
you could
say. They were never taught the old tongue."
"Let's hope so," the man said quietly. "Otherwise we might have a whole
set of
new problems atop the old ones – and those are enough if you ask me."
"You could say that," Legolas agreed and leaned back, ignoring the soft
creaking noise the wooden cot made when one of them shifted ever so
slightly.
"We have to escape this cell, get out of these dungeons, make it into
the
courtyard, get two horses, escape the city, avoid being cut to pieces
by about
eight thousand Easterlings and reach Mirkwood in time to warn my father
of what
promises to become the largest invasion of more than half a millennium."
"Don't forget the fire-breathing dragon," Aragorn advised him wryly.
"Of course," Legolas nodded. "Let's not forget the dragon."
An uneasy silence fell over the small space while both of them tried to
listen
to anything that might indicate what was going on outside the thick
walls.
"Promise me one thing, my friend," Aragorn demanded suddenly, his eyes
gleaming
in the darkness of the room.
"What, Estel?" the elf asked cautiously.
"Don't tell them anything. No matter what."
"I am not planning to, Strider," Legolas said evasively, trying not to
think of
the look on Girion's face when he had referred to his human friend as a
means
to "encourage" him.
"Laiqualassë," Aragorn stressed his friend's Quenya name and looked
into the
shadowy oval he knew to be the elf's face, "Promise me. I would not
want to
live with the knowledge that I am responsible for the fall of Mirkwood.
Don't
tell them what they want to hear."
"Estel…"
"No!" Aragorn shook his head in sudden agitation, a hard, determined
expression
in his eyes. "You are a prince! You have a duty to your people, to your
realm
and your father! Royalty has not the privilege to choose its destiny,
that is
something we both know, do we not? You are honour bound to choose your
duty
above your personal feelings, and you would dishonour both your house
and mine
were you to comply!"
"This is about honour and duty, human?" Legolas hissed back. "Well, in
that
case, do not tell me about my duties to the kingdom! I have had duties
and
obligations since reaching my majority, long before your
forefathers even
lost their kingdoms! I would never betray my father or our
people! And
still, what honour could I claim for myself if I allowed my best friend
to be
killed for a cause that isn't even his?"
"Those are the burdens of your
position, my friend," Aragorn said a little bit more gently now. "Yet
your
personal honour does not matter here, and neither does my life. All
that
matters is that these people don't learn what they want to know. And
tell me
one thing: What honour could I claim for myself were I
responsible for
the destruction of the largest of the elven realms here on Arda? This is
my
cause, elf. I greatly respect your father, and your people. I would
rather die
than live knowing that I am responsible for causing them harm."
"You have much to live for,
Telcontar," Legolas used the Quenya equivalent of his friend's nickname
with an
affectionate sparkle in his eyes that the human could not see. "You are
so
young yet. There is much you must still see and do. You are too young
to die."
Under any other circumstances
Aragorn would at least have glared daggers at his elven friend for
calling him
young, but the dark, sad undertone in Legolas' voice had not been lost
on him.
He sat up straighter, trying to peer into the elf's face and cursing
the
darkness once more for hiding his friend's features.
"So are you, my friend. It is
too early to despair."
"Is it?" Legolas laughed
hollowly. "Fire-breathing dragons or not, we are not getting out of
this one,
Estel. We are in over our heads."
"Do not talk like this," the
man admonished his friend. "Not even Smaug himself could keep me here!
I
absolutely refuse to die here without having told my brothers or
Celylith about
your adorable new name." He narrowed his eyes at the other, trying to
pierce
the still lingering darkness. "This is not like you, my friend."
"I am not myself," Legolas
said softly, casting his eyes to the floor.
"What is it?" Aragorn asked
concernedly. "Please, Legolas, tell me."
A moment later, the elf raised
his head, his eyes so large in his face that even Aragorn could see
them more
than clearly.
"It is dark, Estel, that is
what it is."
Aragorn did not answer,
knowing that it was not only the darkness in this cell that his friend
was
referring to. Legolas fell silent again for a moment, but then he
continued,
the beautiful Quenya sounding hopeless and hollow in the inky blackness
that
surrounded them.
"I do not know if you can feel
it, but this land is … evil. I have known it for days now, and the
feeling has
become stronger the closer we have drawn to the city. Baredlen was
founded in
anger and hatred, and has been ruled by fear and terror, and the lands
reek of
it. The trees whisper it with the winds, the earth murmurs it in the
evenings
and the water mourns the deaths of hundreds of innocent people. This
whole
place is evil, it is malicious, and it is dark, and the most evil,
malicious
and darkest place is that room where Girion's descendant sits and plots
his war
that is meant to free him of a sense of inferiority that nothing could
erase,
not even were he to achieve all he dreams of. All he will obtain is a
feeling
of emptiness and betrayal when he realises that, a realisation that
will have
been bought with thousands of lives."
The elven prince paused for a
moment and laughed shortly, a soft, bitter sound that was swallowed by
the
heavy, dark air immediately.
"And here I sit, in the dark,
in a cell, and can do nothing to change that. One of my men has already
died,
one is probably on his way to the Halls of Mandos, my best friend will
die to
make me betray my people and my king, and in the end I will die as
well. In the
darkness, far away from the trees of my home, and my father will never
know
what happened to me."
Legolas fell silent, leaving
Aragorn at a profound loss what to say. There were several possible
answers
blossoming in his mind, and so the man finally said the first thing he
could
think of.
"You will not die. I will not
die. You will get back to Mirkwood and see your father again, and all
this will
seem like nothing but a dark dream."
"Aye," the prince nodded
bitterly. "A dark dream. A dream I will not wake up from."
"Legolas!" Aragorn called, and
had he had his hands free, he would at least have shaken his friend, if
not
even hit him in an attempt to snap him out of the dark despair the elf
was
sliding into. "Listen to yourself! You speak as if we are already dead!
We are
not! You are right, we are in a bad situation, and I am even objective
enough
to realise that it is probably the worst situation we have ever been
in, but we
still live! As long as we live, there is a chance to escape, and we will
escape,
or stay alive as long as it takes my brothers to reach us – and they
will reach
us." He looked at the fair haired elf, grey eyes locking with blue
ones. "They will
reach us, and if they have any sense at all, they will not be
alone. Trust
them, Legolas, and if you cannot, then trust me."
The elf briefly closed his
eyes and shook his head forcefully from side to side, as if trying not
to take
notice of his surroundings.
"It is too dark, Strider," he
whispered softly. "Look at this room; it is dark, just like the rest of
this
castle, of this city, of these lands. It is choking me, robbing me of
life and
light and hope, of my memories of things beyond this cell and these
dungeons.
It is a blackness that lays itself over my senses, and I don't know how
long I
will be able to fight it."
"As long as necessary, my
friend," Aragorn told the elf firmly, trying to look into his eyes. "Do
not
lose hope now. You are not alone. We can fight this darkness together
and
escape this place. You must believe in this."
"I try to," Legolas replied
quietly. "I try to, but how can I believe in anything but death and
despair
here? There is nothing but darkness."
"Darkness is only the
temporary absence of light," the young man said seriously. "No darkness
can
last forever, and certainly not this one."
"You speak wisely, young one,"
the elven prince nodded his head, and, for the second time in an hour,
Aragorn
did not protest against the loathed, naturally thoroughly inappropriate
term.
"Those are not my words,"
Aragorn confessed with a small smile, still eyeing the elf rather
warily who
was sitting next to him "They are my father's, who is counted
among the
Wise for a reason." His smile widened, and a look of home-sickness
spread over
the young ranger's face. "In fact, they remind me of something he told
me not
so long ago, just before he travelled back home last year."
"What did he tell you, Estel?"
Legolas asked softly, watching the young man smile wistfully at the
mention of
his home.
Aragorn gave a mental sigh of
relief when he saw that Legolas' dark, frightening mood seemed to have
abated,
at least for the time being.
"'Only when it is dark enough
you can hope to see the stars.'"
The elven prince nodded
slightly and lowered his head in thought. He waited for about as long
as it
would take Aragorn to get worried before he raised it again, his face
carefully
expressionless and his voice only half joking.
"There are no stars here."
For a moment, the man was
rendered speechless while he was trying to decide if Legolas was being
serious,
which he was not, he concluded quickly. There was a faint, but still
visible
mischievous sparkle in the other's silver-blue eyes that was definitely
a lot
better than the look of despair and desolation he had seen there
earlier.
He knew that Legolas had meant
it as a joke, to lighten the mood, and still he looked at his elven
friend
seriously, in a way that reminded the elf greatly of the other's foster
father.
"You must simply look hard
enough for them, my friend. No matter how dark, you can always see the
stars if
you only try hard enough to find them."
For a long time, neither of
the two said a word, and it must already have been late evening outside
their
small, dark prison when Legolas finally spoke up again after having
made sure
that Aragorn was in fact still awake and not asleep as he had thought
him to be
several times in the past hours.
"Your father is a very wise
elf; did you know that, Estel?"
Even though he could not
completely see it, Legolas could hear the smile in the man's voice.
"Yes, my friend, I did know
that," Aragorn replied softly. "And I have thanked the Valar for it
more times
than I can count."
"As have I," Legolas nodded in
the darkness. "I don't even dare to think about what you would be like
had you
not grown up in the House of Elrond. Even more reckless, I'd say."
"Are you sure that's
possible?" Aragorn asked wryly.
"No," Legolas shook his head.
"But I thank Ilúvatar I don't have to find out."
"Me too, my friend," the man
agreed. "Me too."
The both of them exchanged a
small, wry smile, and for a long time it remained silent in the little
cell,
even when the sun rose above the dark mountains close to the city,
bathing the
lands in a soft golden light that did not reach the two friends deep
underground.
It was almost a day later,
when the sun was once again sinking beneath the horizon after her
journey
across the heavens, that the door of the small cell opened again with
an eerie,
creaking sound that grated on Legolas' sensitive ears.
While the door swung open,
Legolas decided that he took everything back he had told Aragorn
earlier. About
two hours ago he had complained to the man that he would be happy for
anything
that interrupted the monotony that had lingered heavily in the room,
including
the fire-breathing dragon that still had to be here somewhere, but now
he took
it back. He might be close to going insane after spending a day in a
small,
pitch-black, damp closet-like cell, but now that he thought about it,
it wasn't
all that bad. He would gladly stay here for the rest of the day, and he
did not
wish for any additional company.
Next to him, Aragorn was
entertaining much the same thoughts. It had actually been him who had
started
complaining much earlier today, namely about the fact that their
captors seemed
to think food not a necessity. It had quickly got out of hand, and
about noon
they had started enumerating all their cell's shortcomings, having
quickly
agreed on the fact that it possessed not even one virtue they could
think of.
Both of them had stopped about
two hours later, but had kept talking about anything that came to their
minds
to keep their thoughts off their situation and, most importantly, off
the
darkness that seemed to have even grown these past hours, if such a
thing was
even possible. At the beginning, he'd had less trouble coping with the
blackness than Legolas, but the longer the shadows preyed on his mind
the more
memories seemed to rise to the front of his mind, threatening to pull
him down
into even greater darkness.
The past few hours he'd had
great trouble keeping his thoughts on the present, and more than once
he had
been convinced that the dark walls were beginning to close in on him as
they
had seemed to do in the small cave where Legolas had found him in
Eskadol when
he had been captured by Donyc and his men. This cell was downright
spacious in
comparison to that cave, but ever since then he had been anything but
comfortable in small, enclosed spaces. It had got better in the past
months,
but he was still having a hard time keeping his breathing even and
steady and
not to start trembling. He had tried to hide this fear from Legolas,
who had
already more than enough trouble not losing his own composure. It
wouldn't help
the elf at all if he knew that he was very close to losing his
self-restraint.
The door swung open wider, and
the bright light that poured into the cell brought both man and elf out
of
their thoughts and blinded them temporarily. Legolas' eyes adjusted to
the
sudden brightness more quickly than the ranger's, and he slowly got up
from the
cot and stood to his feet, pulling his human friend with him. A few
moments
later Aragorn's vision cleared as well, and he unconsciously
straightened his
back when he looked at the men standing in the entrance of the small
room.
At the very front stood
Girion, of course, wearing once again his emotionless expression.
Behind him
were at least ten guards, most of them with loaded crossbows that were
pointed
at the two of them and all looking alert and ready to pull back their
lord and
kill them should they see any reason to do so.
For a few moments, the two
groups simply stared at each other, and the contrast between them could
not
have been starker. Girion looked the two prisoners over, feeling
suddenly
rather glad he had brought so many guards with him. If looks had the
ability to
kill, he and two-thirds of his men would have dropped dead here and now.
Still, what he had heard about
the Elves seemed to be true: They didn't react well to darkness. The
fair
haired elf's face was still proud and determined, but he was paler than
yesterday and his eyes looked darker, somewhat haunted. The ranger
didn't seem
very well either, with dark circles under his defiant grey eyes that
seemed to
be drawn to the light that flooded the small, square cell. He smiled to
himself. The darkness had apparently not broken the two of them, but
the
haughty arrogance the prisoners had worn like a cloak had somewhat
diminished.
"I keep my word," he finally
broke the hostile silence. "I promised you time to think about my
words, and
you've had it. What is your answer, Master Elf?"
"You already
have my answer,"
Legolas retorted, resisting the urge to step in front of his human
friend to
shield him from view. "I will not help you plunge all of Rhovanion into
war
because of a baseless grudge your family has been nursing without the
slightest
reason for centuries! Go find your information somewhere else. I will
not tell
you anything."
The dark haired man seemed not
at all bothered by the elf's determined, soft words, for he only pursed
his
lips slightly and nodded his head.
"I had expected you to say
something like this, elf. Have it your way; the results will be the
same."
He took a step back and nodded
at his guards, and a second later four men stepped forward into the
cell,
nearly filling up all the space there still was inside the tiny room.
Legolas
gritted his teeth and squared his shoulders, but was unpleasantly
surprised
when the guards merely shoved him backwards, sending him crashing into
the wall
with enough force to almost throw him to the ground. Having pushed the
elf out
of the way, the men grabbed the ranger who was trying to get over to
his
friend's side and began to drag him out of the room. Bound as he was,
Aragorn
couldn't put up much of a fight, and so he was quickly manhandled out
of the
cell.
For a moment, Legolas couldn't
breathe because of the pain that had once again exploded in his side,
but the
panic that was beginning to fill his entire heart gave him enough
strength to
speak.
"Wait! You don't need him! He
is not one of my people, he knows nothing!"
For the smug expression alone
that spread now on the dark haired lord's face Legolas would have
killed him
with the greatest of pleasure.
"Oh, but I don't agree," the
man told the elf who was leaning against the wall, his face a sickly
grey
colour. "I know that your kind does not easily associate with
outsiders. If
he's followed you all that way to save you, he's indeed your friend,
and in
that case he knows at least some of what I want to know. Not as much as
a
captain like you would know, maybe, but…"
"You lie!" the elf spat,
taking a step forward but freezing when half a dozen crossbows were
aimed at
his chest. "You know he cannot tell you what you want to hear!"
"Maybe," Girion shrugged. "But
I still believe all you need is a little encouragement." He smiled
darkly,
turning a little to the side to look at the slightly wide-eyed ranger.
"And
Captain Teonvan is more than willing to provide you with it, he's
assured me."
The smile grew even darker as he turned back to the elf on whose face
shock and
rage seemed to war with each other. "The Firstborn are keen-eared,
correct?
Trust me, in two hours' time you will have all the encouragement you'll
ever
need."
He nodded at the guards again
who swung the door shut, cutting off the elf's desperate voice. Girion
turned
to one of the men, eyeing him sharply.
"Captain Teonvan is waiting
for him. Give the elf two hours and take him over to Glamir after that.
He's
been asking for a new assignment for days, it's time he is provided
with one."
The guard nodded and turned to
the rest of his men, motioning them to take the ranger away, but
Aragorn
refused to move, staring hard at the dark haired man with the empty,
cold eyes
who was just turning back to walk down the corridor into the direction
of the
stairs that would take him back to the ground level.
"He won't tell you anything,"
he said, quiet conviction colouring his words. "No matter what you do
to him,
or to me, he will never betray his king. You are wasting your time."
Girion stopped and turned
around, looking at the younger man who was staring at him with eyes
that were
full of anger and hatred, but totally devoid of fear.
"I beg to differ," he told him
friendly. "I am not wasting my time. Even if he doesn't tell me what I
want to
know, I will have done two of my captains a favour. No matter what
happens, I
will see you and the elf die in my dungeons, begging me to end your
suffering.
How could that be wasted time?"
Without another word the man
turned around and left, accompanied by his personal bodyguards, and
that was
the moment Aragorn decided that this man was completely, utterly mad.
He wasn't
insane in the sense that he didn't know what he was doing, but he was
mad with
anger and hatred and without the tiniest spark of morality and mercy.
He was
quickly torn out of his thoughts when the three remaining guards
grabbed his
bound arms and began to drag him down the corridors, taking so many
turns that
Aragorn quickly lost count.
In the end, they stopped in
front of a large, wooden door that looked disconcertingly like the door
leading
to the cell he and Legolas had occupied, but Aragorn had the feeling
that they
were in fact not that far away from where his elven friend was –
probably
indeed close enough so that the elf would be able to hear him if he
screamed
loud enou…
Aragorn's mind shied away from
these thoughts, and a second later the door was opened from the inside
and he
was shoved into a rather large room that was lit by several torches on
the
walls. In the middle of the roughly circular space dangled two long,
rusty
manacles from the ceiling, long enough to allow a man to stand –
barely. On the
one side of the room was a long, wooden table on whose surface lay
several
instruments whose function he did not know, but which was not too hard
to guess
now that he thought about it. The wooden surface looked worn and was
spotted
with quite a large amount of a dark brown liquid. What that liquid was
he
didn't even have to think about.
All in all, the young man
concluded wryly as he was pushed forward, unsurprisingly into the
direction of
the chains, this was the stereotypical torture chamber. All that was
missing
now was a slimy, maliciously smiling torturer with a hood over his head
who was
rubbing his hands together in glee and telling him that he would enjoy
breaking
him and…
"So, ranger, we meet again. I
hope you're as pleased to see me as I am to see you."
Aragorn briefly closed his
eyes and gritted his teeth when Teonvan's voice cut through the eerie
silence
of the room, sounding so pleased that it was almost unnatural. Why had
he
thought something as stupid as that!? If he had learned one thing in
the past,
it was never to think anything beginning with "All that is missing now
is…".
He did not answer though as he tried
to keep his mounting fear and panic under control while the guards
pushed him
forward, pulled him to a stop, cut his bonds and forced his wrists into
the
chains hanging from the ceiling. All this happened so quickly and with
such a
practiced efficiency that it caused a cold shiver of dread to run down
Aragorn's spine.
After the guards had made sure
that the prisoner was secured tightly, they bowed slightly to someone
standing
at Aragorn's back and withdrew, and the door closed with a thoroughly
ominous
bang. For a few moments, the room was completely silent, and Aragorn
stubbornly
refused to look anywhere but straight ahead. The last thing he would do
was to
voluntarily show nervousness, fear or any other emotion in front of
Teonvan.
Patience, however, did not
seem to be Teonvan's strong point, and so Aragorn soon heard heavy
footsteps
behind him, and a moment later Teonvan stepped in front of him, looking
about
as smug as a wolf that had just cornered a fawn.
"Well … Strider," the brown
haired man grinned. "I assume you know why you're here?"
"Uhm," Aragorn frowned as in
deep thought, "Well, it's either because your lord is insane or because
you are
a sick coward. I'm just not sure."
Being back home had apparently
not increased the other man's self-restraint, and so the young ranger's
head
was whipped to the side when Teonvan's fist connected with the side of
his
face. It took Aragorn only a few moments to straighten up again, and he
locked
eyes with the other man, mocking surprise and contempt on his face.
"What? You are doing the dirty
work yourself?" he asked tauntingly, "Where are Caellan and Lybran?"
"This is no dirty work, boy,"
Teonvan grinned at him. "This is my reward for capturing the elf."
"Your reward for capturing …
Lasseg?" Aragorn asked incredulously, remembering just in time to use
Legolas'
nickname. "You? You couldn't have captured him had he been tied to a
tree!
Reran captured him!"
That earned him another blow
to the face, but Aragorn did not regret his words. He did not know what
Teonvan
was planning to do with him, but he did know that nothing he could say
now
would change anything anymore. Then again, a small voice told him
teasingly, it
just might get a whole lot worse.
"You are just like him,"
Teonvan told him when he had raised his head again. "Just as proud,
just as
arrogant, just as cheeky. But you know what? I changed all that that
afternoon,
even if only for a short while. Had I had more time, I would have
broken him,
but I knew I couldn't do that; I had my orders, after all. You,
however, I must
not keep alive."
"You lie," Aragorn told the
other man after a moment, fervently hoping that he was correct. "You
are not
allowed to kill me yet."
Barely hidden anger flashed in
Teonvan's eyes, and Aragorn grinned openly. So it was as he had thought
and
hoped, Girion didn't want to risk killing him just yet. This was only
to pacify
Teonvan and to "encourage" Legolas, they would not let him die yet.
Looking
into Teonvan's dark, malicious eyes, Aragorn asked himself if that was
really
such a good thing.
"You are clever, boy," Teonvan
told him, walking over to the table. "That's the thing that got you
into
trouble in the first place."
"Like Reran?" Aragorn shot
back, eyeing the man closely. "Did you kill him because of that?
Because he saw
through you and wanted to accuse you in front of your lord?"
Teonvan seemed to freeze and
slowly turned back to his prisoner who was doing his best to stand on
his toes
to take some strain off his arms.
"You should be careful with
what you say, ranger," he advised him, walking back to stand in front
of the
younger man. "Someone might take such accusations seriously one day."
"I accuse no-one," Aragorn
retorted. "It is the truth. You killed your own captain. You are not
only a
coward, you are a traitor."
This time, it took the ranger
a lot longer to raise his head again, and he needed to shake it from
side to
side until the ringing in his ears had subsided enough for him to take
notice
of his surroundings again. Teonvan watched with fascination as the
stubborn
glint that had wavered for a few seconds returned to the dark haired
man's
eyes, now burning even stronger than before.
"Treason, boy," he began
languidly, "is in the eye of the beholder. Reran was weak and careless.
It I
hadn't killed him, someone else would have, sooner or later. All these
ideas
about loyalty and honour clouded his mind. I actually did our lord a
favour."
"You did yourself a favour,
no-one else," Aragorn shook his head contemptuously.
"Yes," Teonvan nodded
thoughtfully, turning back around and walking back to the table, "I
think you
are right, I did. If not for the dear captain's little … 'accident', we
wouldn't be here, or, you wouldn't be here because he would have killed
you.
You should be grateful."
"To you?"
It were only two words, but in
them the young ranger managed to convey surprise, sarcasm, disbelief
and such a
profound contempt that it caused Teonvan to grip the tool he had just
picked up
so tightly that his knuckles showed white through the skin. A moment
later he
turned, the old, complacent smile once again firmly attached to his
sallow,
sunken features.
"Do you know what this is?" he
asked brightly, holding up the small, dully gleaming object. The ranger
refused
to look into his direction, however, and so he stepped back to where
the other
was chained upright and roughly grasped his chin, forcing him to look
at the
tool he held up in front of his eyes. "Well?"
Aragorn's eyes fixed on the
small object in Teonvan's hand, and he was hard-pressed to keep the
sudden
surge of fear that twisted his insides off his face and out of his
eyes. The
grip the other man had on his bruised jaw grew more painful as he
burrowed his
fingers into the skin, and so he finally looked up to fix emotionless
grey eyes
on Teonvan.
"No."
The brown haired man released
his prisoner's chin and took a step backward, beginning to languidly
twist the
tool between his fingers.
"It's a very small, simple
thing," he began to explain, an almost friendly expression on his
yellowish
face. He held up the object he held, a metal spike a little longer than
a man's
spread hand. "It's a spike."
"You don't say," Aragorn
commented wryly, resorting to his old, tested and not very successful
plan of
action when faced with a maniac who wanted nothing more than to torture
you to
death: Trying to make him angry. Afterwards he never knew why he had
done
something as stupid and suicidal as that, but at those times – this
being no
exception – it always seemed like a good idea.
Teonvan, however, didn't pay
him any attention and continued, his fingers beginning to twitch
slightly with
impatience or anticipation.
"It's designed to penetrate
almost everything effortlessly – including flesh and bones, of course,"
he
added, an evil glint in his eyes. "The wonderful thing about it is that
you can
get much deeper than with a knife, and you have much better control
over what
you do. Knives are always so messy."
'You would know,' Aragorn
thought to himself, but didn't say it for once. He didn't like that
glint in
Teonvan's eyes, and if he wasn't very much mistaken, the man would soon…
Yes. Do something just like
that, he thought wryly as Teonvan reached for the knife at his belt and
cut
through the straps holding his now rather tattered cloak around his
shoulders.
A moment later the bright steel cut through the fabric of his shirt and
it
joined the cloak on the floor, leaving Aragorn cold and very angry.
That had
been his last shirt, the last shirt he had had from home. He had given
his
spare shirt to Legolas when he had found him in the camp since the
elf's had
been ruined beyond repair, and the only one he had left now was one
that had
been made for him in Mirkwood during the winter. Apart from the fact
that it
was in one of his bags that he would very likely never see again, it
was of
that abominable brown colour the Silvan Elves seemed to treasure so
much.
Aragorn shuddered inwardly, doing his best to think of anything but
Teonvan who
had once again begun one of his boring, smug monologues. That shirt was
indeed
horrible, and he'd only not burnt it when he had first laid eyes on it
because
he hadn't wanted to insult Legolas or his people…
For a few seconds, the young
man's way of distracting himself from what was going on around him
worked quite
well, but his musings of what he would say to the Mirkwood tailor
should he
ever get out of here were interrupted when something sharp and very
pointy was
placed against his left upper arm and was pushed forward, just enough
to break
the skin and tear him out of his thoughts.
With an internal sigh he
allowed his eyes to focus on Teonvan who was standing in front of him,
his eyes
so malicious and filled with dark anticipation that he would have
shrunk back
had the ability to do so. Aragorn waited for the brown haired man to
speak or
to gloat, but Teonvan did no such thing, much to the younger man's
surprise.
All the warning the ranger
received was a small, almost benevolent smile before Teonvan's eyes
shifted to
the metal spike that was still pressed against Aragorn's flesh, and
with a
quick thrust of the man's hands it was driven deeply into the flesh of
the
young man's arm. In the split second of calm rationality before the
pain washed
over him, Aragorn had to admit grudgingly that, at least this one time,
Teonvan
had spoken the truth: The spike did bore into the flesh of his arm
amazingly
easily.
A moment later, however, all
thoughts about how amazing it was that Teonvan had spoken the truth for
once
vanished from his mind and were washed away with a wave of agony that
swept up
and down his arm, causing sweat to break out on his brow. His mind
automatically searched for a reference or something to compare this to,
but he
just couldn't remember anything. He had been shot with arrows of almost
all sizes
before, at least it seemed to him that way, but arrows usually weren't
at least
an inch in diameter.
Teonvan's face that was filled
with the utmost concentration began to blur around the edges, something
Aragorn
welcomed even despite the pain that was beginning to rob him of his
composure.
Anything that enabled him to block out Teonvan was welcome. A few
seconds
later, he felt the tip of the spike penetrate the back of his arm,
causing him
to moan softly even despite his resolve not to give the other man the
satisfaction of hearing him voice his pain.
The brown haired man's eyes
flickered from the spike that was deeply embedded in the other's arm to
his
face, and his concentrated countenance broke into a bright smile when
he saw
the pain on the younger man's face he was so desperately trying to
conceal. The
smile widening slightly, he grabbed the end of the spike that protruded
from
the ranger's arm and twisted the length of metal from side to side,
causing the
prisoner to bite down hard on his lower lip to stifle another moan. Not
bad,
Teonvan nodded to himself, twisting the spike once again and watching
the
grimace of pain that flickered over the ranger's face. This one wasn't
quite as
skilled at hiding his feelings as the elf, but more skilled than most
men he'd
seen until now – and he'd seen a lot. This, he thought gleefully,
should get
interesting…
Teonvan took a step backwards
to survey his handiwork and finally nodded approvingly. The ranger
appeared to
have trouble keeping his breathing under control, but otherwise he
appeared
relatively calm and composed, apart from the cold sweat on his brow and
the
white colour of his face. The younger man stared straight ahead, giving
Teonvan
a look of such furious contempt that the brown haired captain found it
hard not
to avert his eyes.
"Interesting little things,
aren't they?" he asked friendly. "But I have to apologise for scraping
over the
bone. I have used them only once before and am slightly out of
practice."
The reasonable voice in Aragorn's
head screamed at him to stay silent and not say anything stupid, and,
to the
voice's profound surprise, he really did remain silent. It was mostly
because
he didn't trust himself to keep his voice steady and pain-free and
because his
thoughts were too jumbled by what was happening to come up with
anything that
wouldn't sound idiotic, but still, he did the reasonable thing and
remained
silent.
Teonvan studied him for a
moment longer before he turned around, back to the table, and Aragorn
seized
that opportunity to look at his left arm, something he had refused to
do while
the brown haired commander had been watching him. Well, he thought
after a
moment, he had seen far worse things than a spike sticking out of
somebody's
arm, and the sight wouldn't have bothered him overly much either, had
it not
been his arm it was sticking out of.
Since it was his arm,
however, the sight was none too pleasant indeed, Aragorn decided darkly
as he
narrowed his eyes at the metal spike that was now stained with quite a
lot of
blood. The tool's tip protruded from the back of his upper arm, about
five or
six inches from his shoulder that was by now covered in small rivulets
of dark
red blood that sneaked down his arm to run down his torso. The injured
muscles
tried to contract around the foreign body that had torn through skin,
muscles
and sinews, only adding to the pain that already burned brightly in the
wound.
And apart from that, Aragorn thought with a half-angry, half-annoyed
frown, the
constant strain on his arm that came from hanging from the ceiling by
his
wrists didn't help much either.
Heavy footsteps drew his
pain-dulled mind out of its musings and he slowly returned his
attention to
Teonvan who had walked back in front of him, holding a rather large,
brown
bottle in his left hand. Aragorn felt his mouth go dry. He didn't know
what was
in it, but very sure he didn't want to find out either.
Without another word but with
an exceptionally smug expression on his face Teonvan reached out with
his right
hand and grasped the spike, ignoring the way his prisoner's body tried
to jerk
away from the painful touch. The brown haired man tightened his hold on
the
metal tool that was slippery with blood and pulled the spike out of the
ranger's shoulder in a single movement.
Aragorn gritted his teeth so
tightly that he was sure they would crumble into tiny little pieces,
but he
didn't cry out even though he couldn't stop his body from spasming with
the
sudden pain. A few moments later the greyness that had laid itself over
his
senses receded, giving him a clear view on Teonvan who was waiting
patiently
for him to regain control over his senses, which should have been a
warning to
him, really.
"Is this it?" the young man
finally ground out between his teeth, deciding that he had remained
silent for
far too long now. "Now I see why you need the help of those two idiots."
"Oh, not at all," Teonvan
grinned and stopped playing with the spike he had just removed from the
ranger's shoulder. Letting the bloody piece of metal fall to the floor,
he
opened the bottle with a flick of his thumb and stepped closer. "We're
just
starting."
Aragorn had just enough time
to note that the liquid that poured out of the body was of a muddy
brown colour
before it made contact with the bleeding, raw wound the spike had left.
In less
than half a second the bottom of his world fell away and he was plunged
into a
black abyss of pain that was unrivalled by anything he had ever
experienced –
and that meant quite a lot in his opinion.
He dimly noticed that his
whole body trembled and tried pull away from what was causing it such
agony,
but that was entirely useless since the source of the pain was the
wound itself
which was filled with liquid fire that showed no signs of abating. It
continued
to burn deeper into the wound and spread into the rest of his body, and
with
every heartbeat pain of such intensity shot through him that he firmly
believed
that he would pass out.
After an eternity or two, the
agony slowly receded, and while Aragorn was still trying to find enough
strength to raise his head, he noticed that there was a strange,
ringing sound
in his ears, and it took him quite a long time to realise that it were
the
lingering remnants of a scream. His scream. Hadn't his head
been hanging
forward already, he would have let it sink onto his chest on his own.
He had
sworn himself not to cry out loud enough for Legolas to hear him, and
only ten
minutes later what was he doing?
He was still berating himself
for his lack of self control and trying to convince his neck that it
had lifted
his head for years and that it wouldn't hurt it at all to do it once
more when
Teonvan solved that problem for him by tangling a hand in his hair and
jerking
his head up. The bottle was no longer in the other man's hands, but
Aragorn had
not nearly enough energy to look anywhere but straight ahead. For
several
moments, Teonvan merely looked at the younger man's glazed, pain-filled
eyes
until he reached out with his free hand and almost tenderly wiped away
the thin
trickle of blood that had run down from the other's bit lip. Aragorn
did his
best to suppress a shudder at the touch, but didn't have the strength
to shy
away.
"It took the master torturer
years to find the right mixture," Teonvan told the dark haired man, his
hand
still keeping his head upright. "But now it works quite well, doesn't
it?" It
soon became clear that the ranger had no intention of answering him,
and so he
continued, his dark eyes boring into Aragorn's grey ones. "You were
right, you
know. I am not allowed to kill you yet. I do have you for another three
or four
hours though, and all that is required is that you're still alive at
the end."
He let reluctantly go of the handful of dark hair he was grabbing and
took a
step backwards, the grin once again returning to his face. "And that is
an
awfully vague term, isn't it?"
Teonvan walked back to the
table and grabbed another dully gleaming spike, running his fingers
over the
smooth surface before he turned around, looking at the bound ranger who
was
hanging from his wrists a few feet away from him. He gave the brown
bottle
sitting next to the small pile of remaining spikes an almost fond look
and
began to stalk over to his captive, an expectant smile on his face.
"So, ranger, I have always
been adherent to symmetry. What about you?"
TBC...
Nuitho lam lín,
Estel (S.) -
Hold your tongue, Estel
Ú-'ado chin dîn, pedithon na chyn (S.) - Don't attract their attention,
I will
talk to them
Queta Quenya lambë (Q.) - Speak Quenya
Úmelvë ista man lastëa (Q.) - We do not know who is listening
Yes, I admit that I made Girion's second son up. But this whole
story was
inspired by that one sentence in The Hobbit ... yes, here it is: "...They
wondered if they were still lying there unharmed in the hall below:
(...) the
necklace of Girion, Lord of Dale, made of five hundred emeralds green as grass,
which he gave for the arming of his eldest son in a coat of
dwarf-linked rings
the like of which had never been made before, for it was wrought of
pure silver
to the power and strength of triple steel." (Chapter 12, Inside Information) *g* Well, you see, the word
"eldest"suggests that Girion had other sons as well even though they
were never mentioned in canon, so my mind simply started working and
working
and hasn't stopped until now. It's scary, I know.
Other than that, I realise that this was an evil cliffy and that
Teonvan is
an even more evil person, as is my alter ego. *hits herself* I
am trying
to get rid of her, without much success, however. Okay, so, barring a
natural
disaster or another problem with FF.net, the next chapter should be
here around
Thursday and will contain more angst for everyone involved, we meet
Glamir and
the twins, Celylith and Glorfindel make an appearance. Great,
huh? And yes, reviews are still greatly appreciated, as always. *g*
Additional A/N:
Deana - Well, I hope you didn't _really_ feel it. That would be
disconcerting and rather scary. *g* Glad you liked it, thanks for the
review!
Tychen - Hmm, yes, it might. I am not yet completely sure about
that,
but it might. *g* And you are completely right: The odds are NOT in our
heroes'
favour here! But, as Han Solo once put it so eloquently: Never tell me
the
odds! *g* Uhm, Girion is a man and has therefore nothing to do with
Thranduil
personally, which is quite a good thing too since the king would kill
him, but
that's beside the point. *sheepish grin*
Carrie - Uhm, yes. That was the last bit of the calm before the
storm,
at least I think so. And you know what: You are beginning to
think just
like me, which is, at least for you, a highly dangerous development. I
suggest
you go and find a capable psychiatrist as soon as possible. *g*
Yeah,
that bit with Legolas' cover: Believe it or not, it won't be blown so
soon.
There just is no way for anyone to recognise him, even though the evil
lord
will finally find out, but not for the next few chapters. Sorry. *g* I
hope you
got over your bad day - there are days so bed that you just want to
crawl into
bed and stay there for the rest of the week, right? *g*
Nikara - Yeah, you know the evil overlords - they always tell
the heroes
about their plans and then give them a chance to escape. In the words
of the
wonderfully evil Dr. Evil: "I'm going to leave them alone and not
actually
witness them dying. I'm just gonna assume it all went to plan"
*sighs* Evil dudes ARE stupid, huh?
Firniswin - I don't agree. It wasn't a major cliffy. It was
quite a
little one, and not even very evil. I agree with you about my alter ego
though:
She IS evil, even though I think I am beginning to like her no matter
what. I
know, I need help, don't tell me. *g* Teonvan is spelled, well, T - e -
o - n -
v - a - n? Quite simple really, once you've typed it a few dozen times.
*g*
Mouse5 - Come on, you _know_ how I could do that to you! I am
EVIL,
remember!? I enjoy doing such things to people. I ENJOY it!!!
Mhahahahaha!
*runs off cackling evilly* I can assure you though that it's not my
intention
to give anyone a heart attack. I hope you are well, and every time you
feel one
creeping up, just repeat to yourself: "It's just fiction, it can't harm
me, it's just fiction, it can't harm me." *shrugs* Almost never works,
but
what the heck. *evil grin*
CrazyLOTRfan - *pats her back in sympathy* Poor you. I know how
horible
it is not to have internet access. It's like ... having an arm cut off,
right?
Or a part of your brain. *evil grin* Or both. And no, this evil lord
won't
discover Aragorn's identity. You must remember that most humans don't
even know
anything about Isildur, the ranger, old kings and all that, besides,
he'll be
more than busy finding out Legolas' identity. *g* And if you tell me
what Lord
Súliat's name means, you can have a cookie _and_ a copy of Teonvan's
book _and_
your Nólad clone! *g* Deal?
Someone Reading - *blushes* Well, thank you! I am very glad to
hear that
you are enjoying this bit of mindless insanity thus far! I regret
having to
kill Reran too, but otherwise Cendan would never have got really angry
with
Teonvan, and that will still be very important. There was nothing I
could do.
*g* Oh, and I hate to be nitpicking, but about that one Sindarin
sentence you
used: 'Naur dan i gwath' - that should be 'Naur dan i 'wath'. The
singular
article 'i' triggers lenition, therefore turning "i gw..." to "i
'w". In Gandalf's sentence "Naur dan i ngaurhoth" you see the
same, even though one would usually expect a lenition to "...
'aurhoth". It's changed to 'ngaurhoth' because the primitive stem of
the
word was a ng-stem, which means it changes back, representing 'i
ñaurhoth'. *stops
and blinks* Jeez, I'm a freak, aren't I? Sorry. *g* And thanks a lot
for the
reviews!
Zam - *watches as Zam blows herself up* Yes!!! Finally!!! Thank
you,
thank you, thank you! There IS a God after all! *finally notices Zam's
not
dead* Hey! Nice to see you! I am SO glad you didn't hurt yourself - too
much...
*g* J/K, DO be careful with these staffs. Your guess about men
colonising the
area is very good. You get another cookie! *snickers* So Celylith is
getting
jealous, huh? Better be careful, he just might kill Cendan! You never
know what
a jealous Silvan elf might do! *g* Once again cograts for figuring out
Girion's
identity! And I honestly hope that the student shall never surpass the
master!
*shudders* No, everything but that...
Miaow Artsy - Well, thank you! It's great that you like this
story, and
I take it as a huge compliment that you read this even though you don't
usually
read WIP's. Hmm, right now I can't think of anyone Cendan could remind
you of.
I mean, I didn't write him with someone in mind, but I guess there are
always
people you base your OCs on, even if you do it unconsciously. *shrugs*
Tell me
once you remember, okay? LOL, yes, it would indeed be a clever trap!
And I
could give you a clone of any character you would like, either now once
you
tell me what Súliat's name means or at the end of this story. Okay? *g*
Thanks
for the link, but the problem is that I don't know all these series the
fanfic
is based on. So I could read as many stories I would like and still
wouldn't
understand a thing. *sheepish smile*
Cosmic Castaway - Oh, it's great you appreaciate being killed.
Most
people are awfully testy about it - glad to see you're different! *g*
No, j/k,
I'm glad that you like it, but I really hope I did not cause any
lasting
damage. I would hate to harm my reviewers. *g* Oh, and you DID review
twice. I
am not complaining, of course, but I have to come to FF.net's defence
for once.
Once. *g*
Starlight - *g* Ja, genau den hab' ich gemeint, den guten altern
Girion.
Gut gemacht! *ueberreicht wunderschoenen Keks* Viel Spass damit! Ich
sehe
schon, dass meine Tips nicht ganz so eindeutig waren, wie ich dachte -
du hast
recht, natuerlich kann kein Mensch so alt werden, abgesehen davon
sollte Girion
schon seit 184 Jahren tot sein. Aber keine Angst, der Fiesling erklaert
alles
in diesem Kapitel, wie Fieslinge das eben gern tun. *g* Und du hast
natuerlich
wieder recht, es kommt so ziemlich so, wie du dachtest. *schluchz*
Armer
Legolas, armer Aragorn. *g* Sorry wegen der Zwillinge, aber ich hab'
einfach
nicht genug Platz fuer alle. *g*
Sirihiliel - Well, yeah, at least the thing with the motif
should become
clear. I hope the rest too, but you never know. *g* Thanks for the
review!
Aromene - *g* Yes indeed, the scale must be balanced. We can't
have it
that Legolas is injured and our dear friend Aragorn is not, now can we?
I try
to keep everything nice and fair. *g* But "Poor Estel" about sums it
up.
Orlandofan13 - They would have, wouldn't they? I mean, how hard
can it
be to slay a dragon? Bard did it, so Legolas wouldn't have any trouble
doing it
either - one would think so at least. Considering his luck, he would
probably
get burnt to a crisp. *g* Stupid wood-elf.
Elenillor - LOL, I like Dr. Evil. We have a few of them
ourselves. They
are indeed evil, and some of them are downright scary. And I realise
that
you're not complaining, I think I am complaining to myself. I hate it
when I
can't control the plot - and it seems that I can't right now. *grrr*
Stupid elf
and ranger. I'm glad you like our sarcastic ranger. I love sarcasm,
it's what
makes life wonderful. *g*
Jenihenpen - Nope, it hasn't. It tells me to do the one thing
and I do
the other. *shakes fist* You shall not control me!!! Hmm, everything is
black
and depressing and scary? Well, I guess you could say that - it's not
the most
cheerful town in history, I'll give you that... And would you care to
define
"in one piece"? *g*
Alilacia - Thanks a lot, I will need all the luck I can get. The
papers
aren't about anything I'm really interested in, so I'll have to manage
somehow.
*grimaces* Hmm, grey and black livery = Wormtongue? I have to admit I
never
made that connection. *g* No, this isn't Mordor, and it isn't Dol
Guldur
either. And I like the stinking creatures. You are right of course.
They must
probably stink by now. But we won't tell them, will we? *places finger
on lips*
No, preciousss, we won't. *g*
Shauna - *raises eyebrow* The "beetroot-forgot-the-word
award"? Why, I am honoured! Thank you! *g* And don't we all want to
know
what Legolas knows? Well, to be honest, I don't really, but you known I
mean.
*g* Thanks a lot for the review, and it's very nice to hear that you
liked it
so far!
Stacee Phelps - Hmm, you could do both. You could hate me _and_
bow at
my feet, only if you want to, of course. I apologise for the cliffy,
but I
couldn't stop myself. *evil grin* Sorry about not updating sooner, it
wasn't my
fault this time, at least I think so. Thanks for reviewing!
Isadora2 - Na, wen haben wir denn da? Wenn das nicht Isadora
ist, die
mir in der Tat noch 30 Gazillionen Reviews schuldet! *g* Schoen, dich
zu sehen,
und mach dir keinen Kopf wegen der anderen Reviews. Ich bin bereit, die
zu
vergessen. *g* Ich muss auch zugeben, dass die Abkuerzungen ein wenig
komisch
klingen, aber das waren diese englischsprachigen Leute. Ich glaube, die
sterben, wenn sie nicht was abkuerzen duerfen... *g* Und ...
*schuettelt Kopf*
... ich muss sagen, dass du absolut ... daneben liegst. *g* Sorry. Ich
weiss,
dass der Titel so was vermuten laesst, und du bist nicht die erste, die
auf
solche Ideen kommt, aber nein, das ist nicht so, sorry. Das mit den
Augen ist
immer so die Sache, und da ich mich immer bemuehe "realistische"
Fanfics zu schreiben, ist Blenden so 'ne Sache. Die Chancen, jemanden
ohne
moderne Medizin nur voruebergehend zu blenden sind extrem gering. Danke
allerdings fuer die guten Wuensche, und wie es so schoen heisst: Sorry
to burst
your bubble. *knuddelt*
Sadie Elfgirl - I'm evil incarnate? Why, thank you! That was a
very nice
thing to say! Well yes, the evil lord id marching somewhere, or wants
to march
somewhere, even if it's not really Mirkwood. I think you're not the
only one
who hates Teonvan, there should be a few dozen people right now. Sorry
for not
really posting "tomorrow", but this time it was F.net's fault. *g*
Finally, I am not to blame for once.
Galadhriel Vornionien - Yes, indeed, you are quite right. There
are only
a few other people who even remotely figured out who Girion is - even
though I
thought it rather obvious. If not because of the name, I thought that
the flag
was going to give it away. *shrugs* Well, I guess not everyone can be a
freak
like me. *g* I don't think that your brothers would be overly happy to
be
there, though. It's not the nicest city, you know. *g*
Sabercrazy - I really have to congratulate you! Most of the
people were
looking in the wrong dictionary, so to say. Both names are correct, and
I just
added the 'r' to Sangwar's name since it's a rather common male ending.
But you
were wrong with Súliat. Don't worry, it's the hardest name too, since
*whispers* it's a compound, that's makes it hard to figure out. *g* And
that
line was meant to be funny, don't worry. *huggles* Once again, congrats!
Elvendancer - Yeah, pillow fights are fun, but only if your
siblings
aren't violent. Mine are. *g* So it can be a very bad idea. I
understand your
other sister though, HP is quite good too. I don't really like the new
books,
but I-III are very good indeed. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Firnsarnien - I know, I know, I hate it too! I really hope your
troll
bashes it... *grrrr* And yes, I could tell that you were angry with
FF.net -
the curses at the beginning were kind of a giveaway... *g* LOL, that
would be
great, to have college courses about something like that! Believe me,
I'd be
the first to attend! And I hope that cliffy was bad since it was
supposed to
_be_ bad. Would have been a shame otherwise, wouldn't it? *g* Yup,
definitely.
Grumpy - Well, the bribe was a nice idea, apart from the
fact that
I got the review only yesterday. Sorry about that. *g* And I like the
idea with
the balrog! The nad thing is that they're so hard to control... *shakes
head*
No, a balrog wouldn't be such a good idea after all...
Jazmin3 Firewing - Nicenicenicenicenice... chapter? *g* Thanks!
Hmm, as
I said in the A/N, the twins and the others won't get there for some
time. They
are at least three days behind them, after all. Uhm, yes, Girion would
be the
name of the men's lord. I hope this chapter answers at least a few of
your
questions!
Narina Nightfall - It was your birthday? Sorry! *throws even
more
confetti into air* Happy Birthday!! And I think you mean Anardir, not
Adruran,
because Adruran has never met Galalith - and now he won't either. *evil
grin*
Uhm, about the silver hair: Sure do other elves have it! Just look at
Celeborn's and Celebrían's names! Sure there are other silver haired
elves. And
yes, Cendan looks a little bit like Aragorn, but I somehow doubt that
the
exchange would work. About the names: Halla means tall. And you're
looking in
the wrong language, sorry. *g* The OC won't be here for a while yet.
Yes, Rhûn
means East, and so does Rómen, but you have to remember that Quenya is
the
older - and frankly, more beautiful - of the two languages. The Tengwa
Aragorn
carved into the tree is called Rómen, not Rhûn, since the Tengwar all
retained
their Quenya names. Humans have twelve pairs of ribs, at least I think
so, so
out of 24 five aren't that much, are they? And as far as I know
Arathorn and Gilraen
were related, but then again I think most Dúnedain were related in one
way or
another since there were so few left. Apart from that, Dírhael was a
descendant
of Aranarth, who died in III, 2106, so they were _very_ distantly
related. And
I guess you could marry a cousin. I mean, now you can, and I don't
think people
saw it differently then. And I doubt there's a term for how Aragorn is
related
to Boromir. Were Boromir the son of a king and therefore a descendant
of
Anárion, I guess they would be _very_ distant cousins, but since he's
from the
House of Húrin, I guess they have ceased to be really related.
Snow-Glory - *g* Great, because it was meant to sound
terrifying. It
worked then, very good... *g* And I am _sure_ Legolas would agree. He
hasn't
understood anyway that the palace is a cave, so... *evil grin* You'll
have to
wait a bit to find out what will happen with the twins, sorry! *even
more evil
grin*
Just Jordy - I'm sorry you don't like cliffies. I LOVE them, but
only
when I write them. If I have to wait for ages for another chapter I
don't like
it overly much either... Great you liked it so far, thanks for the
review!
Amelie - Well, that all sounds ... very interesting. The sugar
and all
that, I mean. Oh, don't worry, the bad guys don't really want Legolas
at the
moment. I mean, they want him, but not really. *grimaces* I am not
making a lot
of sense at the moment, right? Well, you'll see what I mean.
Eventually, I
think. As I said in the A/N, there won't be any twins or Celylith in
this
chapter, sorry. I really hope you're better and get more sleep in the
future!
Not sleeping can't be healthy! *g*
Crystal-Rose15 - I know, I know, FF.net hates us. And it's great
ROTK
won all these Oscars, huh? Even though I think that it won all them for
all the
movies, because I really don't think that ROTK is the best of the
three. And I
have to admit that I never before heard of a miniature, vegetarian
balrog.
Silly me. *g* *shakes head* I really don't see why you people love the
horses
so much. They're just ... horses, right? And Bob is VERY scary. Very
scary
indeed. *g*
Alex Mistress Squirrel - Yeah, too uch violence can ruin the
whole
story. I've always said so. There are stories that are nothing but - I
don't
like them overly much, or rather not at all. Thanks for the review!
Jera - Your review makes in fact more sense than most of my
stories. *g*
Hmm, you want Sangwar? Well, that's a new one! I don't think anyone
likes him
overly much at the moment, even though I do. But then again, I like all
my OCs,
so that doesn't mean much. LOL, yes, it's indeed hard being an evil
overlord
these days. When I was a kid, it was far easier and more rewarding...
*drones
on* Oh, and I liked the orc captain too. He was ... cute. *shudders* I
need
help, I know. And you're the second person to tell me about the
"blonde" thing - why in the name of all the Gods did no-one tell me
before??? My dictionary doesn't make a difference, which only proves
that it's
not a very good dictionary. I'll start using "blond" then, and I'll
chance it in all the other chapters once I have too much time. Thank
you
very much for pointing that out - how am I supposed to learn if
no-one
tells me what I am doing wrong? *g* Well, thanks for the review!
*huggles*
*Falling Star* - Well, there is a lot of sarcasm in this story,
I think
I would die if I had to write a chapter without a single sarcastic
comment. No,
I am sure I would die. *g* You forgot to eat? That's certainly a
compliment!
Thanks! I am glad you liked this, and thanks a lot for reviewing!
C Hobbes - *g* I see what you mean. "Next week: Another episode
of
'The Ill-fated Adventured of the Reckless Human and His Companion the
Stubborn
Elf'"... I like that! *g* I know, in school or college or whatever they
make you analyse everything, even the analyses of analyses of analyses.
*shakes
head* Horrible. If that movie is in French, it explains why I haven't
seen it
yet. I speak about ten words of French. I speak more Quenya than that.
It's
sad, don't tell me.
Bailey - It doesn't mean that you're stupid that you don't know
who
Girion is, it only means that you're not quite as freakish as I am.
Which is
good. *hands her a cookie* Well done. I think that most questions will
be
answered in this chapter. That's what I hope though. *g*
Karone Evertree - Well, I just received this review yesterday,
so sorry
for not mailing it to you. I just hope I can post this today, otherwise
I will
perhaps really send it to you. I hate FF.net, but I'm sure you know
that... *g*
A rather ticked off Suzi - I whole-heartedly agree. FF.net is
evil and
mean and hates me. But I hate it too, so that's okay.
Iverson - Sorry to hear that you're so busy. It's absolutely
okay if you
don't review. We all know how much time Real Life can cost - much of
one's
time, in fact... It's great that you liked the bad guys, I very much
enjoy
writing them too. And don't worry, most of the people here are looking
forward
to Aragorn Angst. We're all insane here. *insane grin* See?
Marbienl - It's not really cool! It's rather scary, in fact,
VERY
scary... And she's only 17, too! *g* You didn't miss anything.
Gladiator
was laughable, _especially_ when you know a thing or two about that
time
period. It made me weep on several occasions - and not because it was
tragic.
*g* Oh, and really? You are REALLY looking forward to ranger torture?
*sarcastically* Who'd have thought...
Crippled Raven - An angst addict, huh? Well, there seem to be
lots of
them... *g* I'm sorry to disappoint you though, he doesn't get to
watch. A
little bit next chapter, but only a little, if at all. Sorry. *g* I
know what
you mean, there are loads of fics that simply overdo the whole torture
thing. I
mean, it's not that I don't like it (not that anyone would believe me
if I said
I didn't anyway *g*), but you can really destroy an otherwise good
story with
too much of it. *blinks* I like your comparisons though. Very ...
figurative. I love the cow. *stupid grin* I'm also glad to hear that
this
insane little fic meets your approval. I tried to think of an
alliteration
myself, but failed, sorry. *g* It's nice to hear that you like
Celylith, even
though I have to insist that you do in fact not abduct him. He's quite
happy
where he is, or so he's assured me. And you're right: If anyone steals
him, I
would have to stop writing. Good threat. *g* You did not bore me at
all, I
thank you very much for taking the time to review and I hope you're
finished
with your exams now. *huggles*
As always, thanks a lot for the reviews! I hope I got all of them,
but
knowing FF.net, one or two have slipped through. If that is the case,
I'm
sorry. Blame FF.net, not me. *g*
