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A/N:
I tried. I tried very hard, really, but I have to admit that I gave up in the
end. Once again I have been bested by my characters who simply refuse to shut
up! growls darkly You have no idea what I'm talking about, right? readers
shake heads cautiously Well, let me explain then. I tried to write a nice,
simple chapter - you know, full of the funny, amusing things: Blood, mayhem,
chaos, death, destruction and so on and so forth. The problem was that I reached
page 38 and hadn't even killed all the villains, which was essentially the point
when I decided that it really was TOO LONG. Yes, I needed 38 pages to realise
that. g
So I have to announce that there will be two more chapters after this one, not
one as I had planned in the beginning. I am still rather unhappy about having 33
chapter instead of 32 as I intended, but I would have ended up with a
50-pages-chapter, which would have been a bit excessive even for me. The
cliffies that inevitably popped up in this chapter are also unintentional,
because I hadn't even planned to write two separate chapters. g This time you
can't even blame my alter ego, which will most certainly not stop most of you.
g
Okay, I won't bother you with any more of my mindless blabbering, because I
guess you want to get to the interesting part about the blood, mayhem etc. g
There is quite a lot of it in this chapter too, in which we also see Legolas who
carries out the second part of his brilliant plan (snicker), a bit of Aragorn
and Glorfindel and also a bit of Laenro and Cendan. Sero, Menvan and a multitude
of face- and nameless minions make an appearance too, as well as one of our
missing prisoners. No, I won't tell you which one now. evil grin
Have fun and review, please!
Chapter 31
If Legolas hadn't been expecting Cendan's actions, the speed and efficiency with which they were executed would have surprised even him. He had indeed been right about one thing: The half-Easterling lieutenant was an extremely dangerous man, and he was glad he wouldn't have to fight him – at least not straight away. He didn't trust him implicitly after all, and he was still not sure where exactly his loyalties lay.
The way things were, however, he didn't even need half a second to adapt to the new situation. Before Cendan had even turned back around, Legolas' fingers had closed around the knife's handle and he had swivelled to the left, into the direction of the second guard who had flanked him and had still not fully understood that half of the guards were turning against him and his companions.
Cendan's men had just begun to lunge at the other soldiers when Legolas closed the distance between himself and the man and slammed the hilt of Cendan's knife against the guard's skull. The man crumbled to the floor without a sound, his blade clattering onto the wooden floorboards, and Legolas avoided his falling body with the agility that long practice brought and turned to the left. He just managed to avoid a guard that had shaken off his temporary paralysis, his sword held in front of him like a spear in the very clear intention of running him through.
Legolas swore inwardly and moved backwards and to the side, his back nearly hitting the wooden wall behind him. The guard rushed past him, unable to compensate for his "victim's" quick movements, and in the moment the man passed him Legolas gave him a kick that sent him flying forward. The man impacted with the wooden railing with an audible thud that was quickly followed by a gasp as the breath was knocked out of him, and before the man had time to gather his wits the elf was behind him and slammed his head hard against the carved balustrade.
The guard collapsed just as soundlessly as his comrade had a second earlier, and the elven prince let go of his head, not even trying to find some sympathy or remorse in his heart. In his eyes every soldier in this city deserved what he got, and they could count themselves lucky if he didn't kill them right away – something he was more than willing to do now that he thought about it.
Legolas abandoned that train of thought and quickly turned back around, taking a few seconds to survey his surroundings even despite the urgency that nearly overwhelmed his senses. A starker contrast to earlier was not thinkable, and the elf would nearly not have recognised the small space. Cendan's men seemed to be just as effective as their commander, the elf decided in a split second as he watched the dark haired lieutenant's guards dispatch their former colleagues with practised efficiency. At least half a dozen men were already lying on the ground, most of them motionless and surrounded by quite a bit of blood.
Still, Legolas thought darkly, the situation was far from under control – and if he was perfectly honest, he would be very much astonished if they managed to get it under control, his more pessimistic side whispered softly. More soldiers were beginning to rush up the stairs, and Girion's personal bodyguards had drawn a tight circle around their lord, Teonvan and several of the councilmen who had been lucky enough to be close to Girion when the attack had started. The men were undoubtedly professionals, and the ease and skill with which they fought to protect their charges was something that, as admirable as it may have been under different circumstances, was decidedly annoying now.
Legolas didn't have any time to dwell any further on that rather depressing subject, because Cendan's voice could be heard over the noise of the fighting, sounding mildly troubled, which was probably the lieutenant's equivalent of deep concern.
"Elf! Get down!!"
No matter how much or little he trusted the dark haired man, he was not stupid enough to ignore such a warning in the heat of battle. With hesitating for even a second, the elf allowed himself to drop to the floor, wincing slightly as his side hit the hard floorboards. A split second later he heard something cut through the air above his head where his chest had been only a moment ago, and after another second a dagger imbedded itself in the wall behind him. Legolas remained where he was for a moment, slightly stunned by the impact, before he scrambled back to his feet and narrowly avoided being skewered by another guard who had apparently decided to seize this chance to kill the troublesome elf once and for all. He hadn't counted on his intended victim's speed though, and so he quickly joined his fallen companions on the floor, clutching his bloody arm.
Legolas spared the man not even a second glance and quickly scanned his surroundings, cursing softly when he saw that a large number of guards had moved between him and the part of the room that was overlooking the field, surrounded by the carved wooden balustrade. The elf cursed again as he rushed over to the men that had clustered around Girion's abandoned chair, his grip on his knife tightening. How much time had passed since the dark haired man had given the order to hang Glorfindel, thirty, forty, fifty seconds? He shook his head quickly, the dread in his heart only intensifying. No matter how much time it was, it was too much.
The elf side-stepped a group of Cendan's men who were trying to stop Girion's men who were still rushing up the stairs, at least until their companions in the crowd could offer them some assistance. In a matter of moments he had reached the group of guards who had apparently decided to make their stand here, and immediately began attacking the man standing closest to him, trying not to give the men enough time to come to terms with this new threat.
It were about a dozen men that were separating him from the railing, and while Legolas was spinning and dodging blows, he asked himself once again why – and when – exactly he had thought this to be a good idea. Well, he thought as he danced to the side to avoid a sword that would have pinned him to the wall like a worm on a hook, this was the only place from which an archer could hope to be of any help here. The field was too flat for anyone to fire an arrow and there were too many people anyway, the castle was too heavily guarded and the houses of the city were too far away, so the only structure available that was higher or as high as the scaffold was this one.
Still, he decided, now that he was actually on said structure and in the process of being cut to pieces by a group of rather ill-tempered guards, it did not appear like a very good idea. He should have listened to Aragorn after all – even if that was something he wouldn't tell the man, at least not voluntarily or in a sober state.
He had dwelled on this for half a second too long, and one of his adversaries was quick to use his short time of distraction. The elf gritted his teeth and gripped his dagger more tightly as one of the guards managed to break through his defences while he was fighting two others, and the man's sword left a long, bleeding line on his left arm. Legolas forced himself to ignore the injury and switched the knife from his right to his left hand, which was about the last thing the man had expected him to do. Before the guard could even react, the elf's knife had buried itself in his right shoulder and the man stumbled back, screaming in pain as his blade fell to the floor with a clanking noise.
Legolas yanked the knife back with a sudden movement, not trying to cause the man any more pain, but not overly concerned about being gentle either. The other men fell back for a second, and Legolas felt how his face twisted into a dark, annoyed grimace. He didn't have time for this, he thought desperately, he didn't have time to trifle with these men. The plan had been that Cendan and his men held the other guards back so he could get to the balustrade for a few seconds, but it appeared that both they and the dark haired lieutenant had underestimated the number of guards that would be present.
The urgency began to spread, only fuelled by the roaring of the crowd he could hear but not see. It could mean any number of things, from mere excitement to surprise to readiness to try and help Laenro and his men, but Legolas' worried mind automatically came up with the worst scenarios imaginable. With an inward growl he switched the knife back to his right hand, noticing that the left began to become slick with the blood that was flowing down from the cut in his upper arm, and a moment later he moved forward, right into the midst of the men that were still watching him, their eyes full of apprehension and hatred.
The first two men were too surprised by his sudden, to the human eye unbelievingly fast movements, and were incapable of putting up much of a fight, but the resistance of the rest of the guards wasn't so easily overcome. Legolas sensed how he became increasingly frantic and desperate; this was taking too long, far too long! He should have been finished already, if he didn't manage to eliminate these men in the next few seconds he'd be too late and then…
A sudden, swishing noise startled the elf and caused him to move to the side on instinct, and only half a second later something black and vaguely cylindrical was protruding from the chest of the man Legolas was currently fighting. Legolas narrowed his eyes at the object, truly puzzled for a moment, but then he realised that the object was in fact a knife hilt. Another soft noise drew his attention to the left where another guard collapsed with a gurgling sound as another knife found its mark in the middle of his throat, and a second later three men joined the fray, pushing Legolas' remaining adversaries back and catching them totally by surprise.
Legolas used this short reprieve and thrust his own weapon into the side of the only guard close to him that had managed to withstand the onslaught of the three newcomers. The man went down without uttering a sound, and Legolas rushed forward, already knowing who the three men would be. Just as he had thought, he saw Cendan and two of his men who were rather earnestly occupied with eliminating the shrinking group of guards and preventing any of Girion's soldiers from coming to their aid.
Cendan, now lacking his knives that usually hung from his belt, wrenched his sword out of the armour of one of the soldiers he had just killed and gave the elf a dark look, who appeared to be torn between coming to their aid and rushing over to the balustrade.
"You should have told me you have a death wish, elf," he told him quickly before ducking under a blow that had been aimed at his head. "I could have accommodated you." The man ignored the annoyed look on the elf's face and added, "Go. I will keep my part of the bargain, so go and keep yours. We'll make sure no one disturbs you."
Legolas merely gave the man a curt nod and raced over to the balcony, for the first time feeling as if the plan just might work. He didn't really trust Cendan, but he believed what he had just said. He had given him his word that he would cover his back, and if Legolas had learned one thing in the past, it was that Cendan would never break his word.
The optimistic feeling lasted for only a second, and when he reached the wooden balustrade where Girion had stood and watched the crowd only a few minutes ago, he felt how his heart and with it his composure fell straight into his stomach. The elf didn't notice the sleet that hit his unprotected face, he didn't notice the wind that whipped his hair around his face; all his attention was focused on the sight that spread out in front of his eyes.
The first thing he noticed was that Laenro had indeed not exaggerated when he had promised that his men could throw the field into chaos within a matter of minutes. Even Legolas' elven eyes had trouble identifying which people were which, and every square inch of the large area seemed to be covered with groups of people who were either fighting or trying to escape the mêlée. Legolas watched as a group of humans who appeared to be trying to leave the field stopped, and after a second of arguing, launched themselves at a pair of soldiers who were busy fighting a few of Laenro's men. Girion's men were overwhelmed almost instantly, and the small part of Legolas that was still capable of reasonable thought noted with satisfaction that at least some of the town's inhabitants were willing to help them.
All this the elf saw in less than a second, for his eyes were drawn almost immediately to the tall figure of Glorfindel who was standing on the wooden platform, his head held high in a manner that told every observer that he had nothing but contempt for the people around him. The lines of the guards that surrounded the scaffold were still strong and unbroken, and Legolas saw in an instant that it would take Laenro's men several more minutes to reach it – minutes they did not have. It was just as they had thought, the guards were too many and there was no way to reach Glorfindel before…
The elf's thoughts trailed off into nothing, and he watched as if in a trance how one of the officers who were trying to organise their men into something resembling a fighting formation shouted something at the men standing behind the other elf. One of them nodded fervently and motioned to his companions, and all Legolas could do was stare as one of the men reached out and pulled a lever at the back of the gallows.
Surprise flickered briefly over the golden haired elf's face as the trapdoor he was standing on opened and the ground was pulled out from under his feet. Legolas thought he heard Aragorn scream as the elf fell, even though it might only have been his imagination, because screaming was exactly what he wanted to do now. The sounds of fighting and even of the excited crowd below faded as time seemed to speed up again and Legolas sprang into action, feeling as if he had just been dumped into the Forest River in mid-winter.
Without waiting to see whether or not Glorfindel had survived the fall Legolas whirled around, his eyes wandering fervently over Girion's chair. Where was it, he screamed inwardly as his hands desperately searched the base of the seat. Menvan had said it was here, it should be here, what would he do if it wasn't here, what…
His nearly frantic musings were cut short as his fingers closed around a hard, smooth, comfortingly familiar object someone had cleverly hidden in the folds of the dark red velvet that had been draped decoratively over the carved chair, and with an inward prayer of thanks to whichever Vala was listening right now he pulled it out of its hiding place. Legolas didn't even stop to give his quiver which he had never expected to see again a second look and turned back around to the balustrade, his hands pulling the bow out of the quiver without thinking. The beautifully crafted weapon instilled him with new confidence, and he knew with certainty that it had been the right decision to persuade Cendan and his second-in-command to get him his bow. If he had to get used to another one now, he was rather sure that all this would be in vain.
How long could an elf survive without air, the fair haired prince mused frantically as he struggled to string his bow. Two minutes? Three? More? Less? Aragorn would probably be able to tell him, a part of him provided quietly, if the man was still alive, that was. If he knew him at all, he would do everything in his power to get to Glorfindel, and Ilúvatar alone knew what kinds of situation he would get himself into…
The elf cursed Cendan several times for not already stringing the weapon – something which the man would have been unable to do, of course, since it must have been hard enough to get the weapon here at all, but Legolas was really not in the mood to be reasonable about this – and after what felt like several ages the elf's fingers finally managed to force the string into place. He took a step forward, his eyes wandering over the scene in front of him. Relief so strong that it nearly sent him to his knees raced through him as he saw that the other elf was still alive – slowly suffocating and desperately struggling while he was beginning to spin around his own axis, but alive.
Legolas sent another prayer to the Valar and raised his bow, doing his best not to think about what consequences a failure on his part would have. This was not how it had been planned, he thought furiously as he reached for an arrow and notched his bow. He had been supposed to shoot the men guarding Glorfindel, to distract the guards and to buy them some time until Aragorn, Laenro and the others could reach him, and not to do anything like this! That had been their wonderful master plan, and if he had known it would come to something like this he would have…
…done just the same, he decided in a split second while he carefully took aim, blocking out both the other elf's increasingly red features and the sounds of battle behind him. This was not the time for self-doubt or diffidence; if he failed, Lord Glorfindel would die, it was as simple as that. He had made shots far more difficult, even though he could remember few made under direr circumstances. The visibility was poor but good enough, the wind was bearable and not strong enough to knock an arrow off course, he had clear view of his target that was moving in a reasonably predictably way and … he was out of time.
The blond elf's struggles were beginning to grow weaker, and even though Legolas did his best not to look at his face for fear of losing the rest of his composure, the elven prince saw that the elf lord's eyes were slowly beginning to drift shut. If he wanted to do something, he had to do it now.
Legolas took a deep breath and pushed all the fears and doubts that still preyed on his heart back, concentrating only on his target as he had been taught when he had still been an elfling and dreaming about fame, glory and exciting adventures, just like about every young male of that age did, regardless his race.
A moment later he exhaled and let the projectile fly, and in the moment the arrow left his bow the elven prince found himself praying that Aragorn had been right and that the trust the young human had put in him had not been misplaced.
A part of Aragorn had frozen with fear and panic when
he had seen Glorfindel fall, while another part of him was angry, no, that
wasn't the right word to describe it. He had left angry far behind and was now
furious, so furious that he would have been hard-pressed to name an occasion
when he had been more infuriated.
A scream he couldn't remember uttering was still
echoing in his ears, reverberating through his head and threatening to rob him
of the last shreds of his composure. With an unarticulated growl of rage the
young ranger threw himself at the nearest guard, ignoring the cautioning call of
Laenro or one of his men. Aragorn thrust his sword forward and down, eliminating
two guards in the process, all this attention focused on the wooden structure
and the struggling figure of his teacher who was beginning to spin around his
own axis by the thick rope that hung from the gallows.
How dare these people, he thought furiously as he
pushed forward, engaging the next guard and then the next. How dare they do
this, how dare they try to kill his friend, his
father's friend! The sudden image of his adoptive father's face appeared
in his mind's eye, the elf's grey eyes filled with tears and looking so desolate
that Aragorn's heart broke at the mere thought of it. It would be a crushing
blow to Elrond to lose his best friend like this, after so many ages and all the
battles the two of them had survived together, a blow from which the half-elven
lord would most likely never fully recover.
Aragorn tightened his grip on his sword and slammed the
hilt into the face of an attacking guard, his healing wounds protesting against
the strain placed on them by the abrupt movements. He would not
return home to his father bearing such news, he – would – not. There was
absolutely no way he would allow these people to kill Glorfindel just like that,
and he would make them pay for even attempting it. Suddenly a hand grabbed his
coat and over shirt and pulled him to the side, causing a sword to miss him by
inches. Aragorn didn't turn to see who had just saved him from injury or death
and brought his own sword down, thrusting the blade into the shoulder of his
opponent who went down with a scream.
A moment later he looked up and to the right, straight
into the face of Laenro's second-in-command. Sero's grey hair had come loose of
its braid and flew wildly around his head, something that, in combination with
the grin on his face, served to give him a reckless, bloodthirsty look. Aragorn
smiled slightly at the older man who returned it, apparently enjoying himself
immensely.
"Careful, boy," the older man advised him with a wide
grin, "Don't be so eager to get yourself killed, or these gentlemen just might
oblige your wish."
Aragorn shook his head unwillingly, already pushing
forward again, into the directions of the wooden platform. He didn't have time
for idle conversation, couldn't this man see that?
"Help me get to the gallows!" he yelled curtly over the
sound of battle that nearly drowned out all other noises around them. "We have
to help him!"
"We will be too late," Sero yelled back and thrust his
sword into the side of another attacking guard, doing his best to stay close to
the obviously rather insane lad. He had taking a liking to him, he didn't really
know why, and he would most certainly not allow him to get himself killed on a
fool's errand. "Your friend wasn't fast enough. There's nothing we can do but
try to get to Girion's podium and stop him from escaping!"
Before Sero even knew what was happening, the younger
man had whirled around, a look of such fury and determination in his silver eyes
that Sero would nearly have taken a step back. Even without the now
blood-stained sword one of the men had thrust into the boy's hands before all
this had begun the ranger looked more than ready to kill him and anyone who
tried to stop him from coming to his friend's aid, and Sero suddenly found
himself wishing that he had kept his mouth shut.
"I don't care about Girion!" the younger man hissed at
Sero, eyes hard and steely in his face. "I will not let Glorfindel
die! Legolas will think of something, and now you can either help me get to my
friend or you can be quiet and leave me be!"
Sero shook his head at the younger man, inwardly asking
himself if no one had ever taught this youth to respect his elders. Apparently
not, he decided with an inward grin as he saw the determined, dangerous sparkle
in the ranger's eyes, and instead of an anwer he took a step forward and slammed
his fist into the face of a guard who had decided to use their moment of
distraction.
"After you, boy."
Aragorn nodded at the older man and followed his
example, throwing himself at the next guard who was following in his comrade's
wake. How much time had passed since the guard had pulled that lever? Two
minutes? Even more? He honestly couldn't tell, and that was beginning to send
him into a state closely resembling a panic. He knew that elves, even more so
than humans, could survive strangulation for several minutes, and that even when
a person stopped breathing, he or she wasn't necessarily dead, but that didn't
comfort him in the slightest. That the elf's neck hadn't been broken once his
body had been jerked to stop was a blessing, but he knew that, unless Legolas
did something or they reached the golden haired elf in the next minute or so, it
wouldn't matter and would in fact have been more merciful if his neck
had been snapped on impact.
'Please, Legolas, do something,' he found himself
wishing with all his heart while he did his best to break through the slowly
crumbling lines of guards that were still guarding the scaffold, flanked by Sero
and a few of his men. 'Do something, I know you can make it, mellon nín,
you are the only one who can. Do something, please…'
It was almost as if the fair haired elf had been able
to hear his fervent pleas, for half a second later a brown feathered cut through
the air a few metres ahead of them, nearly impaling one of the guards that
jumped to the side in sudden fright. The arrow continued its trajectory and
sliced through the rope wrapped around the golden haired elf's neck. It was no
perfectly clean shot since it severed only half of the rope, and the frayed
threads gave way abruptly, dropping the still weakly struggling elf another few
inches. He was still far too high up for him to get his feet under his body
(even if he'd had the strength to attempt such a thing), and Aragorn was just
turning to Girion's gallery to look for Legolas when a second arrow passed over
their heads, this time slicing neatly through the remaining fibres of the rope.
Aragorn released a breath he hadn't realised he'd been
holding when Glorfindel dropped the remaining seven or eight feet to the ground,
hitting the frozen earth hard. A moment later another arrow imbedded itself in
the throat of the guard who had pulled the lever, something that filled Aragorn
with far more satisfaction than it should have. The next one hit the officer who
had given the order, and that was the moment when the guards still standing on
the scaffold realised that it was a bad idea to remain where they were like
sitting ducks and let themselves be killed one by one. A mad dash for the stairs
set in, and Aragorn realised that this was his best chance to get to the fallen
elf before any of the soldiers could get the idea to kill him rather than allow
him to be freed.
"Cover me!" he yelled at no one in particular and
rushed forward, completely ignoring Sero's calls for him to wait and
side-stepping two guards who were quite intent on putting as much distance as
humanly possible between themselves and the platform. In a matter of moments he
had reached the base of the scaffold and with it the last remaining guards
separating him from the unmoving elf and Aragorn threw himself at them, fuelled
both by his mounting worry and the fury that still filled the bigger part of
him.
He realised a moment too late that it just might have
been a mistake to engage a group of eight humans all alone and not up to his
full strength, a suspicion that was only fortified when a blow he could hardly
block threw him back against a wooden pole at his back. The impact stunned him
for a few seconds as pain flared to life in his still healing wounds, and he
couldn't react in time when another guard stepped forward and, an insufferably
smug smile on his face, thrust his blade through the young ranger's left
shoulder, securely pinning him to the pole.
For a moment, Aragorn didn't feel anything, but then
pain exploded in his upper arm and he would have sunken to his knees if the
sword through his shoulder hadn't kept him upright. The young man couldn't quite
suppress a pained scream as the guard wrenched his blade out of his shoulder
and, paralysed with pain as he was for the moment, he could do nothing but stare
as the man drew back and prepared to thrust his sword through his middle.
Before the soldier could impale him though, the man's
body was thrown forward and to the side as an arrow hit him in the back of his
shoulder, the force of the impact spinning him around. A second arrow hit the
guard next to Aragorn in the throat, and a second later two more men others
joined their companions on the ground, both of them holding bloody arrow wounds.
Aragorn needed only a second to react, and a few moments later all the guards
lay on the cold earth or had fled.
The young ranger gritted his teeth and sheathed his
sword, doing his best to ignore the pain in his shoulder. He quickly turned
around and made sure that there were no more soldiers that posed an immediate
threat before his eyes searched for Legolas' figure among the fighting men that
could be seen on the other wooden structure. A flash of blond hair caught his
attention, and Aragorn smiled and waved quickly as Legolas raised a hand in
greeting before notching another arrow to his bow with lightning speed and
letting it fly, hitting a man in the chest who had been sneaking up on the
distracted ranger.
Aragorn whirled around, the pain in his arm forgotten
for the moment, and shook his head as he saw the dead man behind him who had
come disconcertingly close to running him through.
"Show-off," he muttered between gritted teeth and
turned around to rush over to the motionless elf. Sero and two of his men
arrived on the scene just as he was turning to the scaffold, and without waiting
for them to say anything he once again told them to cover him and began to run
over to Glorfindel's body.
His heart was beating in his chest so quickly that
Aragorn feared it might explode, and when he had reached the golden haired elf,
he was sure that he was dead. They had been too late after all, they had been
too late to save Glorfindel and now he was dead, and it was all his fault. All
he could think about was the fact that he would never again speak to the wise
re-born warrior from Gondolin, whose death would surely destroy his father, he
was sure about it…
With hands shaking with grief, fear and suppressed pain
he gently grasped the fair haired elf's shoulders and turned him onto his back,
his breath catching in his throat as he saw his injuries close up. The man
pressed a hand against the elf's throat next to the rope, hoping against hope
that he would find a heartbeat there, and nearly fell over in surprise when he
did feel the weak beating of a heart and even detected the soft signs of
breathing.
For a moment, Aragorn was too stunned to react, so much
had he expected to find the ancient elf dead, but a second later he shook off
the shock that had laid itself over his senses. With a movement almost too quick
for the human eye to follow he had drawn the knife Laenro had reluctantly
provided him with and had sliced through the noose that was still wrapped
tightly around the elf's throat. Another second later he had cut the bonds that
secured the other's hands behind his back. As soon as the ropes fell away, the
blond elf coughed and sucked in a deep breath, his hands automatically going to
his bruised throat, and Aragorn was helpless to suppress the wide grin that
spread over his face as he decided that he had never heard a more beautiful
sound than Glorfindel struggling to draw air into his lungs.
The noise of fighting seemed to fade away as Aragorn
helped the semi-conscious elf to sit up, so concentrated was the young human on
his elven friend. After a few more seconds the elf's breathing had evened out a
little and he had stopped coughing, and a moment later he opened his uninjured
eye, a slightly amused sparkle shining through the pain and last remnants of
panic that still filled them.
"That was … about time."
The grin on Aragorn's face widened even more as he
looked at the elf he held upright, his eye narrowing in concern when he saw the
raw, red marks on Glorfindel's throat where the rope had bit into his skin.
"Forgive us, my lord," he answered lightly. "You are
right; Legolas and I have to be severely reprimanded for our tardiness. The next
time we will try to rescue you more quickly and without causing you so much
inconvenience."
"I seriously … hope so, Estel," Glorfindel all but
croaked. "I must admit that I was beginning to … get slightly … annoyed towards
the end." He paused for a moment before his head flew up anxiously. "The …
twins?"
"Are fine," Aragorn soothed softly. "Do not trouble
yourself. They are safe. And I am very sorry about all this, my lord," Aragorn
bowed slightly. "We'll do better next time."
An answering grin began to spread over Glorfindel's
face and he struggled to sit up on his own, something he managed to do after a
few seconds with the young ranger's help.
"There won't be a next time, young one,"
he shook his head, wavering slightly back and forth. "I will tell your father
about all this, and if Elrond has any sense at all, he will lock you in the
cellars and will never allow you to leave Imladris again." He grimaced slightly.
"And he'll kill me, but that's another story."
"Most likely," Aragorn agreed and looked about him,
slowly beginning to take in their surroundings again. His eyes wandered over the
chaotic field in front of them and he inwardly shook his head in slight
self-reproach. They had lingered far too long here already. He returned his
attention to the elf in front of him, a concerned expression on his face. "Can
you stand, my friend? We must hurry."
"Stand?" Glorfindel echoed unbelievingly and struggled
to get to his feet. "I can do more than that! Give me that knife of yours and
you'll see how well I can 'stand'."
Aragorn smiled as he pulled the elf into a standing
position, inwardly frowning when he sensed how much weight the blond elf had
lost. Glorfindel had always been broad-shouldered and muscular for an elf, and
right now the man had the feeling that he weighted not nearly enough. Once he
was sure that Glorfindel wouldn't collapse immediately – something that most
likely only the elf's pride prevented – Aragorn quickly shrugged out of his
cloak and draped it over the elf's bare shoulders. He ignored the other's
protests and pressed his dagger into his hands, smiling once again when he saw
the dark, indignant expression on his face.
"Don't waste your breath arguing with me," he shook his
head and touched the other's arm, motioning him to follow him. He would have
liked to stay close to the elf to make sure that he wouldn't stumble or fall,
but he knew better than to offer any more assistance. "You are hurt and need the
warmth."
Glorfindel gave the far younger being a dark look as he
followed him out from under the scaffold, his eyes wandering over his
surroundings. The pain in his body had lessened considerably as it was
suppressed by the adrenaline that flowed through his veins, but he knew that it
was only a matter of time before he would reach his limits. He had still trouble
drawing breath, his throat feeling as if someone had squeezed it in a vice
(which, now that he thought about it, wasn't even that far from the truth), and
the welts and cuts and his broken ribs were still a dull, ever-present painful
throbbing at the back of his mind.
He was still of the opinion that nothing could ever hurt as much as his
encounter with the balrog all those ages ago, but he had to admit that being
hanged did have its disadvantages as well. The feeling of falling into nothing
had already been highly unpleasant, but to feel the rope tighten around his neck
and start to suffocate slowly had been even worse. There were few things that
could wake panic into one's heart quite like the inability to draw breath,
and Glorfindel was honest enough to admit to himself that, in the end, he had
been close to terrified.
To make matters even worse, he thought wryly, he had landed on his shoulder when
the rope had been severed, and he was rather certain that, if his collarbone
hadn't been broken before, it was now. Still, he added stubbornly as he hurried
to keep up with the young man, these were things he wouldn't tell a child like
Aragorn.
Soon he needed most of his concentration to keep
standing and to follow Aragorn, who was reasonable enough not to offer him any
assistance. They needed only a few seconds to step out from under the scaffold,
and Aragorn quickly saw how much the field had changed in the past few moments.
The fighting had moved off into the direction of the castle and the edges of the
area, and even though it was still hard to tell, it appeared that Laenro's and
Cendan's men had managed to push the main part of the guards back and away from
the scaffold and Girion's gallery. The soldiers' lines were still holding, but
it was clear that it was only a matter of time before they would crumble. One
could almost watch how the soldiers either fled or even changed sides once they
saw that their officers were dead, and suddenly Aragorn realised that they
really might make this plan work.
Before he could turn around to Glorfindel and tell him
to follow him over to the wooden gallery, they were joined by Sero and two of
his men who appeared as if out of nowhere from around the scaffold. Sero
appeared unhurt except for a large cut that ran over his left cheek, and the
blood that covered most of his face only added to the rather disconcerting
impression that he was having the time of his life.
The grey haired man raised an eyebrow and looked at the
slightly swaying elf, who looked healthier than he had thought anyone who had
just been nearly hanged and had spent several days in Glamir's dungeons could
look. He shrugged inwardly. Maybe some of the old stories were true after all:
Elves were not normal, which was something he should have realised by now,
really. The blond one had been something of a giveaway, hadn't he?
Sero gave the elf a curt nod before he redirected his
attention to the dark haired ranger who had acquired a rather bloody hole in his
left shoulder since he had last seen him.
"We need to get over to the others. The guards are
retreating to the castle, but the rest of Cendan's men is waiting for them – if
you can trust his word, that is, which I don't. Not even for a minute."
"You can trust him, at least in this matter," Aragorn
assured the man. "Where is…"
Before he could say more, a man wearing the grey and
black livery of Girion's house came running up to them, and Aragorn felt
Glorfindel tense next to him as the elf's eyes narrowed to take in the new
threat. The ranger would almost have reached for his sword as well, but then he
saw the strip of red cloth the man had wrapped around his sword arm, the sign
Cendan and Laenro had agreed on to prevent their men from killing each other. A
moment later Aragorn realised that it was Menvan who was now skidding to a halt
next to them, an urgent expression on his blood-stained face.
Sero merely cocked an eyebrow at the younger man and
waited for him to regain his breath sufficiently to speak. It appeared that he
liked Cendan's second-in-command about as little as his lieutenant. Menvan
needed another second to gulp air into his lungs before he looked up at the four
men and the elf, not even flinching when he saw the fair haired being's
injuries. He had seen much worse in his time, and he was an elf,
after all.
"Girion's escaped," he finally gasped out. "We need to
get to the castle to stop him, or all this will have been in vain. As long as he
lives, he'll try to retake the city. We must kill him now, before he can rally
his men or get out of the town."
"Teonvan?" was all the ranger asked, a dark glint in
his eyes.
"Gone as well," Menvan answered just as curtly. "He and
his lieutenants managed to break away from the main force and escaped with
Girion and some of the councilmen while Girion's bodyguards covered their
escape." He grimaced and something that may have been regret flittered over his
face. "They fought well, just as I had known they would."
Nobody needed to ask what had happened to the
bodyguards, and Aragorn finally shook his head slightly, noticing that the pain
in his shoulder was once again starting to distract him.
"Where are my friend and Cendan? And Laenro?"
Now it was most definitely regret that was visible on
the brown haired man's face, and something like anger and disapproval quickly
mixed with it.
"They went to the dungeons," he replied tensely. "The
lieutenant keeps his word. He will show them the way down there, even if it
means that he has to let Teonvan escape." He shook his head. "The castle is not
secure, far from it. The fighting has shifted there now, and they are only a
small group. They'll get themselves killed for sure."
He said more, but Aragorn hardly heard his words. He
should have known Legolas would rush to the dungeons as quickly as he could;
there was absolutely no way the elf would allow Celylith to stay there any
longer than necessary. For a few moments his thoughts were in turmoil, but then
he quickly turned back to Menvan, a determined expression on his face.
"Take us to the castle," he ordered curtly. "We must
buy them enough time to get to the dungeons and free Celylith and the girl. If
we can find and stop Girion, fine, but we need to cover their backs and give
them enough time to carry out their plan."
Sero hesitated for a moment, but then he nodded and
turned to his two companions, giving them a few brief instructions. A moment
later he turned back to the young ranger and gave him another nod, seriously
wondering if he would see this reckless boy ever again.
"Alright," he told Aragorn quickly. "I'll give you all
the men I can spare. I need to get to the gates so we can barricade them just in
case the dear lieutenant's kin don't keep their word. We'll do our best to keep
the soldiers occupied and away from the castle."
Menvan's eyes narrowed slightly and it appeared that he
wanted to say something in defence of his lietenant's honour, but Aragorn cut
him off quickly.
"Thank you. Good luck to you and your men, Sero."
"You'll need that, not me," the older man shook his
head and motioned to the men he wanted to accompany him. "Do me a favour and
look out for Laenro for me … and Ethoani, should you find her. Please."
"Consider it done," Aragorn nodded and was already
turning into the direction of the castle. Sero gave him a last nod before he and
his men disappeared into the direction of the eastern gates, and the ranger
turned to his elven friend while he nodded at Menvan to take point. "My friend,
I think…"
"If you think that I will remain here like a meek child
while you go off to fight that madman, you are mistaken, Estel," Glorfindel
shook his head darkly, ignoring the way his neck protested against the movement.
"I will not let you out of my sight until we get home."
"My lord…"
"No, young one," the elf shook his head and began to
follow Menvan and his men who were already hurrying into the direction of the
castle. "Do not even think about saying it. I have a score to
settle with Girion and his men; they will pay for laying hands on all of you. If
I can't go and help the prince to find his friend, I will stay with you and make
sure that you don't get yourself killed."
Aragorn was about to argue, but then he saw the
determined, steely sparkle in the elf's eyes and closed his mouth with a snap.
He had neither the time nor the desire to fight with the blond elf about this
now, and he knew that it would be futile anyway. Nothing but an order from the
Valar themselves or maybe Elrond's reasonable voice would be able to sway the
elf now, and since he was neither a Vala nor his elven father, he didn't even
try to persuade him to stay behind.
The man merely inclined his head at the golden haired
elf and hurried to catch up with Menvan and Sero's men, inwardly praying to
Ilúvatar to keep Legolas and the others safe, and be it only long enough so they
could come to their aid.
Legolas was beginning to have trouble keeping up with
Cendan, Laenro and the few men that were accompanying them, something that
bothered him immensely. Oh, and he was beginning to doubt his sanity, but that
was neither anything new nor as annoying as his inability to keep pace with
mortals, especially when the mortals were Cendan and Laenro.
The elf wrenched the sword he had … "borrowed" from one
of Girion's fallen guards out of the body of another who had so foolishly
refused to surrender and paused for a moment, trying to force his surroundings
back into focus. After a couple of seconds he succeeded and pushed the pain that
raged in his head to the back of his mind.
It was his fault that he had been injured, of course.
He had been so focused on keeping Aragorn safe earlier on the gallery that he
had failed to keep some of his attention on what was happening behind him, and
so Cendan's warning cry had reached him too late. Just after he had watched the
ranger disappear under the scaffold a soldier had managed to break through the
lines of Cendan's men behind him and had very nearly run him through.
Legolas hadn't managed to jump to the side fast enough
to avoid the man completely, and the human had managed to get a hold of him and
to slam him head-first into the very solid back of Girion's chair. His attacker
had quickly been shown how stupid it was to attack a wood-elf, be he distracted
or not, but the entire episode had resulted in him having suffered a rather
spectacular-looking head wound so that he now bore the close resemblance with
someone who had just been dunked into a pot of red paint.
The elf growled inwardly. That in itself wouldn't have
been too bad, of course, at least not in his opinion – he was sure Aragorn and
the rest of his friends would see it differently though. He had deserved it to
some degree since he really should have paid more attention, and what was really
bothering him was that the attack had made him drop his bow, which had of course
fallen promptly over the railing. He truly didn't know why every other person
seemed to want to separate him from his weapon, but this man had definitely
succeeded, something that filled him with quite a lot of annoyance. The last
thing he needed now was that someone hit him in the side and his day would be
positively perfect.
The blond elf took his thoughts off his beloved weapon
and the question of whether or not he would ever find it again and returned to
the present, just in time to throw himself down and to the side to avoid an
arrow that would have hit him straight in the throat. Two of Cendan's bowmen
whirled around and tried to locate this new threat, and a moment later the
formerly hidden archer sailed through the air and made contact with the cobbled
ground with a rather sickening thud.
Legolas scrambled back to his feet and once again began
to make his way over to the side entrance where the dark haired lieutenant and
Laenro were already waiting, giving the much better guarded front doors a wide
berth. Some minutes ago they had reached the courtyard which more or less
resembled an anthill after someone had poked it repeatedly with a stick, a
comparison that nearly caused the elf to start giggling. There were people
running around everywhere, and no one seemed to have even the slightest idea
what to do, which was of course exactly what they had been counting on from the
beginning. It appeared that Cendan and his men had been rather successful in
eliminating most of the higher-ranking officers, and, unbidden as that thought
may have been, he was now rather glad that the dark haired lieutenant was
willing to pursue his goals so ruthlessly.
A moment later Legolas reached the door that was being
held open by Cendan who seemed to be rather amused, even though he didn't show
it openly in the face of the elf's obvious annoyance.
"Are you having trouble keeping up with us, Master
Elf?"
The elf turned around to him, pushed a strand of
blood-soaked hair out of his eyes and gave him a glare that made the man very
glad that looks couldn't kill.
"Not at all," he answered curtly, his fingers fingering
his sword hilt in a faintly threatening manner. "Lead the way, Lieutenant. I'll
be right behind you, trust me."
"With pleasure," the dark haired man retorted
emotionlessly, but an amused sparkle shone in his eyes which Legolas decided to
ignore. "Just try not to get lost." He turned to Laenro who was beginning to
look so impatient that it was a miracle he hadn't started tearing out chunks of
his own hair. "That goes for you too. I promised you to take you to the
dungeons, but I won't be chasing you through the castle. Teonvan has an
appointment with my knives, and it would be most rude to keep him waiting,
wouldn't it?"
Cendan ignored the outraged expression on the elf's and
the other man's face, turned and began to hurry down the corridor, past several
wooden doors that seemed to lead to storage rooms of some sort. The man quickly
divided his men into three groups and ordered one of them to stay behind and try
to keep the guards off their backs as long as possible. The second was sent off
further into the building to try and cause as much confusion as possible so that
only the third remained, a rather small group of humans now that Legolas thought
about it.
The fair haired elf ignored the dark whispers and
predictions of doom the more reasonable part of him insisted on running through
his head and hurried his steps, rushing through the dark, depressing corridors
as quickly as he could. The burning pain in his cut arm worsened, and Legolas
sent a quick prayer of thanks to the Valar that it had been his left arm that
had been injured and not his right. Now that he had lost his bow he had to rely
on his sword arm – not that he bow would have done him much good anyway in these
narrow corridors.
These contemplations served to bring his thoughts back
to Aragorn and Glorfindel, and he found himself desperately wishing that they
were alright. He had lost sight of them after that one guard had had confused
his head with an exercise device, and soon after that Cendan, Laenro and he had
left and fought their way over to the castle. The lieutenant had pointed out
that they needed to hurry if they wanted to free Celylith and Ethoani, something
which both Legolas and Laenro were very well aware of. They both knew that there
was the very real chance that someone would get the idea that it was more
advantageous to Girion if his prisoners were killed rather than freed, and no
matter what differences may stand between them, they were united in their
determination that they wouldn't allow that to happen.
Legolas clenched his teeth as he looked at the
grey-faced Laenro next to him. He was sure that his face would have been the
same colour if it hadn't been so covered with blood. The anxiety that had been
residing in the pit of his stomach had developed into a full-blown panic, and he
was hard-pressed not to let that feeling show, especially considering the way
that dark memories were beginning to well up inside of him. Cendan would most
likely enjoy it immensely if he lost it here and now.
'Just wait until I get my hands on that stupid,
reckless excuse for an elf,' the elven prince fumed in mock fury. 'I will teach
him to stay in the palace when he's told to do so, Eru help me…'
He had barely noticed that they had begun to climb down
several sets of stairs, and he was still musing on what he would do to Celylith
when they would finally reach the dungeons, when it was brought to his attention
that they had in fact been there for quite some time. The were just rounding a
corner, about to climb down some more stairs, when they came face to face with a
group of rather startled guards who were apparently in the process of rushing up
the stairs to aid their comrades.
For a second, the two parties merely stared at each
other, but the spell was quickly broken when Legolas reacted first and gave the
guard standing at the front a kick, sending the man crashing backwards and down
the stairs. The other men were rather slow to react, and so most of them were
unable to step aside and were pulled down the stairs with him. Laenro, Cendan
and the others quickly joined the fight, and a moment later the stairs were
littered with the bodies of the dead guards.
Legolas made sure that there weren't more soldiers
lurking around the corner and leaned against the damp stone wall for a second,
willing his head to stop spinning. He had tried to deny this as long as
possible, but it was beginning to become apparent that his little knock to the
head was more serious than he had first thought. He had enough experience with
concussions to know when he was suffering from one, and for a split second he
saw Elrohir's grinning face in his mind's eye, who appeared to be overjoyed that
he wasn't the only one with this particular kind of injury.
"Elf?" Laenro's voice ripped him out of his brief
reverie. "Are you alright?"
Legolas opened his eyes, looking at the young man who
appeared rather unconcerned about whether or not he was alright. Laenro was most
likely only concerned about him delaying all of them, and so Legolas quickly
nodded his head which promptly very nearly exploded.
"Yes, I'm fine. Let's go."
Laenro didn't even nod back but merely turned around,
his eyes darting over the bodies. It took the elf's pain-filled mind a moment to
realise that the man was looking for Cendan, who was just standing to his feet
and returning a bloody knife to its sheath.
"The girl is down here and then to the left," he nodded
down the stairs. He returned his gaze to the body of the man lying in front of
him. "He died before he could tell me where the elf is, but I think he said
something about Glamir. I'm not sure."
Legolas was very surprised that his heart didn't
actually freeze in his chest, and found himself nodding calmly. With a
tremendous effort he pushed the fear and panic that threatened to overcome him
at the lieutenant's words to the back of his mind, forcing himself to think
logically. It wouldn't help anyone if he ran off and started searching every
cell in the dungeons; it was far more reasonable to get the girl first and then
search for Celylith.
The elf ignored the part of him that wanted to throw
reason and logic out of the window and nodded again, his face pale and devoid of
all emotions.
"Lead the way then. We'll find him, sooner or later."
He didn't add that he would turn this entire castle
upside-down until he had found his silver haired friend, not that he would have
needed to. The expression on his face spoke of his determination not to leave
before he had found the other elf, and this time not even Laenro said anything.
Cendan nodded at one of his men to take point and a second later they were
moving once again, rushing down the stairs with renewed urgency.
It quickly became apparent why Cendan had picked this
particular man to lead them, since he appeared to know exactly where he was
going. He led them down the stairs and then down the left corridor. They reached
another corner, but before they could catch up with their guide, the man had
pressed himself to the wall and looked back at them with wide eyes. It
immediately became apparent why the man had stopped so suddenly: Voices were
beginning to float down the corridor, and a short burst of coarse laughter
interrupted the eerie silence of the dark passageway.
"… told them to be a bit more careful," one voice said,
the grin its owner was surely wearing plain to hear. "It's rare to have one
quite as pretty, and what do they do? Go and ruin everything!"
A second voice snorted.
"The captain was a bit overeager, yes. She won't make
it long now; it's probably for the best, too, all things considered."
"Just like that elf," the first voice agreed. "Gods, I
will enjoy watching the two of them die! I have never met more annoying
creatures, and I really find it hard to tell which one is worse."
The second voice said something, but Legolas was too
concentrated on not losing his temper to listen any further. Laenro seemed to
have much the same problem, and the two of them only exchanged a quick look
before gripping their swords more tightly and rushing around the corner. Cendan
raised his eyes to the dark grey stone ceiling and once again asked himself just
why he had agreed to lead the two of them down here; it was easier to keep track
of a pair of five-year-old children. The sounds of fighting died down quickly,
and the lieutenant gave his men the sign to follow the elf and Laenro with an
annoyed gesture of his hand.
He wasn't very surprised by what he saw when he rounded
the corner and spared the two fallen guards not even a second glance. He had
never liked the men who worked down here, most of them were far too much like
Teonvan, at least in his opinion. When he reached the two of them, the elf was
just slowly getting back to his feet, pulling his sword out of one of the
guards' side. Laenro was still kneeling next to the other soldier, searching his
clothing, before he finally shot back to his feet, a small ring of keys clutched
tightly in his fist.
The brown haired man turned to Cendan, an almost wild
look in his eyes.
"Which one?"
The lieutenant needn't be told what the other man was
talking about and merely nodded at one of the cell doors a bit further down the
corridor.
"Over there."
Without another word Laenro whirled around and rushed
down the corridor, skidding to a halt in front of the door Cendan had pointed
at. In less time than anyone would have thought possible he had found the right
key, had thrust it into the lock and turned it. A moment later the cell door
swung open with an ominous, creaking sound that sent shivers down Legolas'
spine, and one of the men stepped forward, bringing his torch closer to the now
open door.
It took the men and even Legolas some moments to adjust
their eyes to the darkness of the small room, even despite the burning torch,
but soon a heavy, grim silence fell over the small group. No one moved a muscle
until Laenro finally took a step forward and walked into the cell as if in a
trance, moving with the slowness of a man who was desperately hoping that what
he was seeing was not real.
Laenro stopped next to what Legolas had thought to be
pile of rags on first glance, and which he would hardly have believed to be a
human being if not for the pale hand that stuck out from the bundle at an odd
angle. The man let his sword fall down next to him, paying the clattering sound
it made when it connected with the stone floor no heed, and slowly sank to his
knees, reaching out with one hand to turn the body in front of him around.
Cendan gave the body in the cell only one look; the
only outward reaction that was visible was a brief clenching of his jaw muscles.
Then he turned back to his men, giving them a hard look that was not to be
disobeyed.
"Search this part of the dungeons. Get everyone who is
in here up into the courtyard and then help the others. Menvan and his men
should already be here, and if they are not, they will get here soon. I'll join
you later."
"But sir," one of them shook his head, his eyes darting
unsubtly from Legolas to the other man in the cell, "What about you? We can't
just…"
"I'll be fine," Cendan said curtly. "Go. Now."
Legolas heard the young lieutenant's words only dimly
and he didn't truly notice the other men leaving, for he had followed Laenro
into the cell, his keen eyes seeing far more than he wanted to see. Laenro had
turned his sister's body over onto her back, and if Legolas' face hadn't already
been so white, he would almost certainly have paled. He had seen the girl only a
few times, but he seriously doubted that even people who had known her for most
of her life would have recognised her in this condition.
The first thing he noticed was that it wasn't only the
young woman's one hand that was bent at an odd angle. Her other hand looked just
the same, and Legolas knew without really looking more closely that the wrists
were broken, and had been for some time. Most of her clothing was ripped and
torn, and every bit of visible skin – and there was quite a lot of it – was
either bruised or cut. Ethoani's face looked even worse if such a thing was even
possible, her nose obviously broken and her mouth bloody and swollen and of an
alarmingly blue colour.
Legolas swallowed hard, feeling strangely numb inside.
He had thought that Cendan had sent his men away because of the girl's barely
decent state of dress, but now he realised that, if that had been one the
lieutenant's reasons, it hadn't been the only one. Cendan had made sure that
Laenro had some time alone with his sister to say good-bye, and Legolas couldn't
honestly say that he disagreed. He had seen many people just before their souls
left their bodies, and most of them had looked more lively than this girl.
If Laenro was aware of that fact, he hid it well, but
he was unable to hide the horror and fear on his face as he carefully pulled up
his sister's broken body, peering intently into her bruised, apparently
unconscious face.
"Sister? Ethoani? Answer me! I need you to wake up now,
little one, we need to get you out of here! Ethoani? Can you hear me?"
Legolas' heart broke when he heard the hope in the
brown haired man's voice, and slowly stepped closer, allowing himself to sink to
his knees next to Laenro and his sister. Maybe he could help, a small voice
inside his head whispered, perhaps what all his instincts were telling him was
not true and there was still a way to save the girl... She had saved Aragorn,
the twins and him, and he owed her a debt he would never be able to repay. She
had got caught because of him after all; he should have stopped her from
returning to the castle, just like Laenro had tried…
The elf gave Laenro a quick look, asking for
permission, and when the man ignored him and just kept whispering softly to his
younger sister, he carefully reached out and began to examine the girl, the
irrational hope in his heart dying bit by bit the more of her body was revealed.
Laenro barely noticed that the elf was even in the same room and continued
trying to rouse his sister, a task on which he was so focused that, at first, he
didn't realise that he had succeeded. Whether she had heard her brother's voice
or had somehow sensed his presence they would never know, but a few moments
after Legolas had knelt down next to her Ethoani's eyelids opened slowly, her
eyes staring straight ahead.
It took Laenro a moment to realise that his sister was
awake, but when he did a rather shaky smile spread over his face that looked
more than a little bit fake and forced.
"Thank the Gods!" the man breathed softly. "Stay awake,
little one, we will get you to Thesieni as quickly as possible."
The girl needed some time to get the face that was
hovering over hers into focus, but she finally smiled as well, only faintly and
with no real mirth or strength behind it.
"You … should not … have … come."
"Aye, I shouldn't have," Laenro agreed shakily. "But I
did nonetheless."
"Typical," Ethoani smiled weakly. "Stubborn…"
"Yes, I am, and that is why I won't let you go back to
sleep," Laenro nodded, his eyes bright and desperate. "You will be fine, you'll
see. Just stay awake."
His sister wanted to say something, but a sudden
coughing fit caused her to double over, gasping for breath. Laenro held her as
best as he could and looked at Legolas, his eyes fixed pleadingly on the elf's
bowed head. Legolas sensed very well that the young man was looking at him, that
he was searching for a bit of hope, and simply couldn't raise his head to tell
him that there was none.
He was no healer, but he had seen enough wounds like
these to know that the girl would die, here and now and in agony. It hadn't
taken him long to find the broken ribs, but they weren't even remotely as
serious as the hard, rigid muscles of her abdomen. He timidly applied the
tiniest bit of pressure on the girl's upper left abdomen which, even though she
was so busy coughing, nearly caused her to jump off the ground with pain.
Legolas ignored Laenro's murderous look and suppressed a tired sigh. He
recognised internal injuries when he saw them, and judging by the way Ethoani's
heartbeat was weakening by the minute, she had been suffering from them for some
time now. He seriously doubted that even Lord Elrond or Hithrawyn would have
been able to help her in this condition, when she was so far gone already. There
was nothing they could do.
Legolas finally took a deep breath and looked up,
meeting Laenro's eyes with some reluctance. He didn't have to say anything or
even shake his head, and only a few seconds later understanding spread over the
man's face, causing the tentative smile on his lips to freeze. He stared at
Legolas for a few moments, until Ethoani blindly grasped for her brother's hand
despite the pain that movement must have caused her.
"I didn't … tell them anything, I swear I … didn't…"
"Shhh," Laenro soothed, gently taking her hand. "I know
you didn't. It doesn't matter now, save your strength."
"No," the girl shook her head stubbornly. "The elves …
Girion's mustn't have them."
"We already freed one of them and will find the other,
too," the brown haired man said quietly. "Girion is falling, sister. The town is
in an uproar and most of the soldiers are on our side. We will overthrow him
this time, Ethoani. This time we will win."
It took the dying girl some time to understand what her
brother was saying, but finally a genuine, happy smile spread over her face.
"Good," she whispered. She paused for a moment, regret
appearing in her eyes. "I should have listened … to you, brother. I'm … sorry…"
Laenro bowed his head and said nothing, obviously
struggling not to lose control over his emotions, and so Legolas edged a bit
closer and smiled at the young woman.
"You have nothing to be sorry about, Ethoani. You saved
my friends and me as well. We are in your debt, and couldn't repay you in a
thousand years."
"I did what I had to do," Ethoani simply whispered, the
blue colour on her lips intensifying.
"No," Legolas shook his head earnestly, the sadness he
felt visible in his eyes. This girl was barely more than a child, barely younger
than Aragorn, and there was nothing he could do to stop her from passing from
this world, nothing at all. "You did what you chose to do, and that
took a lot of courage. I thank you, my lady. Thank you for saving our lives."
Ethoani merely nodded tiredly, the lines that pain and
fear had burrowed into her face slowly smoothing. Legolas had seen this too many
times in the past not to know what it meant, and so had Laenro, it appeared.
"No!" he exclaimed, tightening his grip on his sister.
"You cannot die, sister! I promised our father and uncle to look after you; you
can't leave me, not now that we are achieving all we ever dreamt of! Don't go,
please, not now…"
The young woman merely smiled, her body already
beginning to relax as it began to accept the inevitable.
"Laenro," she said softly, her eyes fixed on her
brother who was crying openly now. "Laenro. Girion will die and … our home will
be free, is this … not so?"
"Yes," the man nodded through the tears that were
streaming down his face. "Yes, I promise."
"Then I am content," she whispered, the smile widening
before a look of sadness flittered over her face. "I only wish that … Ciran
could have seen it, he would have loved to…"
Ethoani's words had dropped to a whisper and she
finally fell silent in mid-sentence, her eyes fixed unblinkingly on her
brother's face. For a few moments both Legolas and Laenro simply stared at the
young woman before they realised what had just happened, and when the man did
not move at all for what felt like at least several minutes, the elf reached out
and gently closed the dead girl's eyes, grief and guilt warring in his heart.
Her brother kept staring at her now relaxed face, and finally nodded, tears
still running down his cheeks.
"You are right, little sister. He would have."
Legolas slowly got to his feet, the numbness that had
been filling him torn asunder and his entire being filled with conflicting
emotions. As much as he wanted to stay here longer, he knew that he couldn't.
There was nothing he could to help Ethoani or her brother, but Celylith may very
well still be alive. Now that he had seen what had happened to Laenro's sister,
the fear in his heart had grown to incredible proportions, but he still couldn't
find it in him to simply leave the young man.
The elf stopped at the open cell door, trading a quick
look with the stony-faced Cendan whose presence he had completely forgotten, and
when he was just turning back to Laenro he saw that the man was gently placing
his sister's body on the ground, treating her with such tenderness that Legolas'
heart once more clenched inside his chest. The brown haired man slowly stood to
his feet and picked up his sword, opening the brooch that secured the cloak at
his neck and draping the heavy cloth over Ethoani's body. He remained where he
was for some more moments, staring at the body of his sister, before he turned
around to the door and began to walk out of the cell.
"Wait!" Legolas said urgently when the man was passing
them. "Where are you going?"
For a few seconds it appeared as if the man wouldn't
stop, but he finally did and turned to look at Cendan and the elven prince.
Legolas wasn't sure if he had ever seen such a look in a mortal's eyes before;
there was so much pain and hatred and grief in Laenro's gaze that the elf was
simply rendered speechless. He didn't protest again when Laenro turned into the
direction of the stairs they had used to get down here without uttering a word
and began walking, the purposeful walk of a person who had only one goal left in
his life.
Not even Cendan said anything and merely shook his
head, turning back to look at Legolas when Laenro had disappeared around the
nearby corner.
"Let him go," he said softly, almost as if to himself.
"They were both fools. Only fools fight against such odds."
"Oh?" Legolas arched an eyebrow, too tired and in too
much pain to argue with the young lieutenant. "What does that make us then?"
"Point taken, Master Elf," Cendan smiled thinly. "Point
taken indeed." He gave the still body of the dead girl a last look before he
turned around and motioned to the elf to follow him. "Come. I don't know if that
guard spoke the truth, but I will take you to Glamir's chambers. From then on
you're on your own, I have to…"
"…kill Teonvan," Legolas finished the man's sentence as he forced himself not to
touch his still lightly bleeding head wound in a vain attempt to ease the pain
that pounded through his skull. "Yes. I know."
Cendan ignored the elf's comment and began to lead him
down the maze of corridors, and Legolas quickly lost his bearing just as he had
lost them the first time he had been here. He was no dwarf, after all, and one
dark corridor looked just like the next to him. They walked through dark, damp
passageways that were only lit by few torches here and there for what felt like
an eternity, but finally Cendan turned to Legolas before returning his eyes
quickly to his surroundings, his gaze guarded and cautious.
"We should be there soon," he informed the elf curtly.
"There is a fork in this corridor a few yards ahead. The passageway to the right
leads up to the main staircase. Just ignore it and follow this one until you
reach a door to your left which…"
"I know," Legolas interrupted the man curtly. "I'll
recognise the door, trust me."
"I see," Cendan said dispassionately. "Well, then I
think I can leave you there and…"
The lieutenant trailed off in the same moment he
stopped as if rooted to the spot, and only Legolas' quick reflexes prevented a
graceless collision. Knowing that there would be a good reason for Cendan's
abrupt behaviour, the elf looked up quickly, inwardly deciding that he had to be
hurt worse than he had thought; he should have been able to hear whatever had
caused Cendan to stop a long time before him.
Legolas raised his head and felt how his eyes grew wide
and his hands automatically clutched his still drawn sword more tightly. He
realised that they had reached the fork the man had spoken of, and to his
surprise he recognised the spot. It was the place where Ethoani had led him and
Aragorn only three days ago, something he would have noticed sooner hadn't he
been so busy keeping up with his human guide. The tapestry that concealed the
secret passage he remembered so well had been pushed to the side, and the wooden
door behind it stood open, partly blocking the corridor.
The elven prince felt how his mouth went dry, because,
no matter how dark the memories were he associated with the long trek through
the narrow passage that had been overshadowed by fear of recapture and worry for
Aragorn, they didn't measure up to the sight in front of him.
Cendan had had a very good reason to stop, indeed. Next
to the open door stood Teonvan, one of his lieutenants and a contingent of
guards, all of them looking at least as surprised as Legolas felt.
The courtyard reminded him of something, Aragorn
thought dimly as he and the others entered it at a run. It looked almost like …
like an anthill that someone had poked repeatedly with a stick, yes, that was
it. A moment later he shook his head, inwardly asking himself from where he got
these ridiculous ideas. He was reasonably certain that no one else would liken
this courtyard to an anthill – at least nobody with his or her sanity intact.
He didn't have enough time to dwell on this any
further, since he had just enough time to twist to the side to escape a spear
that was rudely being thrust into his direction. He had wondered how long it
would take the remaining soldiers in the courtyard to realise that a new group
of hostiles had arrived on the scene. Well, now he knew, he thought wryly. Not
very long.
The young man ignored the way his shoulder was
protesting against the abrupt movements and brought his body fully around so
that he was facing the man who had just tried to impale him on his spear. A
moment later the guard fell to the ground, almost crushing his weapon which had
been wrenched from his grasp a few moments earlier, and Aragorn quickly took the
time to survey his surroundings.
The courtyard was full of fighting people, and even
though Laenro's and Cendan's men wore the red marks around their arms, he was
hard-pressed to say which side was which, at least for a moment. It quickly
became apparent that the men wearing the red strips of cloth were outnumbered by
those who didn't, and Aragorn realised with a quick stab of fear and dread that
went through his heart that even with the reinforcements Sero had sent with
them, it would merely even the odds a little. They were
still fewer in number than Girion's men.
Menvan who had stopped next to him and Glorfindel
seemed to come to the same conclusion, and Cendan's second-in-command narrowed
his eyes, already beginning to direct his men to split up. He sent one part of
his men to strengthen the main group close to the middle of the courtyard that
was slowly being pushed backwards into the direction of the gates, mainly men
wearing the black-grey livery of Girion's house and the red strip of cloth
around their arms. The man took a step forward to avoid and strike down one of
the soldiers that had managed to get past his men that were beginning to rush
forward to aid their comrades, and turned around to Aragorn and the white-faced
elf next to him when the ranger called his name.
"Menvan!" Aragorn all but yelled, trying to make
himself heard over the sounds of battle. "Where are the entrances to the
dungeons?"
The brown haired man wrenched his sword out of the body
of the man he had just killed, realising with curious detachment that he had had
a tankard of ale with him once, and used it to point into the direction of the
main gates, and from there to the smaller door Legolas and the others had used.
"There are two main entrances: One close to the great
hall and Girion's audience chambers, and the other further to the right, over
there." He nodded at the small group of Cendan's men who were still defending
the smaller gates furiously. "It appears that they went that way."
"What makes you say that?" Aragorn asked wryly, wincing
slightly as another stab of pain went through his injured shoulder. "The dark
cloud of doom hanging over the door or the horde of guards trying to break it
down?"
Menvan shot him a look cold enough to freeze a hot
spring, and Aragorn suppressed a sheepish smile. He had forgotten that not
everybody had the same tolerance as Legolas and his brothers for his way of
dealing with stress.
"Alright," he nodded thoughtfully. "We need to help
your men to hold their positions. If the guards break through, they'll surprise
Legolas and Cendan before they know what has happened."
"We don't have enough men to do that and to prevent
this group over there from outflanking us," Glorfindel pointed out calmly, his
mind that had been schooled in more battled than he could count taking in the
situation at a glance and analysing it in mere seconds. "Our men will be pushed
back, right into their main group if we don't help them."
"We need a diversion," Menvan nodded at the elf, taking
his eyes off the sight in front of him only for a second. "Maybe we can draw
enough of them away from the side entrance so all of our groups can hold their
positions."
"Yes," Aragorn nodded slowly and began to walk forward,
beginning to increase his pace until he was almost running. He motioned to
Glorfindel and the men to follow him with a curt gesture, his eyes fixed on the
side entrance. "Come! We'll just have to persuade them to follow us over to the
main gates."
"Wait!" Menvan called, hurrying after him after giving
the elf an accusing glare. He wasn't really at fault for anything here, but he
appeared to know the ranger. He didn't have any proof, but he was sure that the
elf was at least partly to blame for the man's reckless nature. "Just how are
you going to 'persuade' them to 'follow' you to the main entrance?"
"Oh, that's easy," Aragorn shrugged without turning
around to the other man. "I'm going to make them angry."
Menvan would almost have stopped and had to force
himself not to grind his teeth, a habit that was beginning to get out of hand
lately. He continued walking, gesturing his men to follow, and just barely heard
the elf mumble something under his breath he couldn't understand. It didn't
sound complimentary though, and judging by the way the ranger's shoulders
stiffened slightly, Menvan was rather sure that it had been a particularly dark
threat. He didn't have time to dwell on the subject any longer, because they
reached the side entrance only a few moments later.
Before Menvan even knew what was happening, he was in
the midst of the fighting, and he quickly realised that they really needed to
draw a part of the guards away, or all of his men would be killed. Their lines
were beginning to crumble slowly but surely, and he knew that it was only the
respect and loyalty they held for Cendan that enabled them to keep fighting.
Another thing he realised was that the ranger was either incredibly lucky or
incredibly insane.
Most likely both, he thought to himself, side-stepping
the falling body of a guard who had just made the mistake to underestimate one
of his men. He was sure that without the blond elf's assistance, who was staying
as firmly at the young man's left side as if someone had glued him there, he
would have been killed right in the beginning. The dark haired man was
constantly darting forward and back again, engaging as many men as he could, but
never staying in one spot long enough to actually fight them properly.
Menvan shook his head inwardly as he saw that the elf
mimicked the young man's actions, and soon mounting frustration could be seen on
the men's faces. As unhappy as he was to admit something like this, but it
appeared that the ranger's plan was working. A sizable part of the men was
clearly beginning to get quite annoyed, in fact so annoyed that Menvan and the
others were pushed back after a few more minutes, into the direction of the main
doors. After a few dozen steps Menvan was beginning to think that the ranger
might not be quite as suicidal as he had thought, and he dispatched his latest
adversary and used the brief respite to cast a look behind him. His eyes widened
as he saw that they had nearly been pushed back to the doors, and called out a
warning just in time so that the men at his back could turn around and engage
the men who were guarding the main gates.
Wonderful, Cendan's second-in-command ranted inwardly,
this was just wonderful. Now they were trapped between two groups of enemies –
two groups of angry enemies – that wanted to do nothing but cut
them into little pieces. A sharp blow he barely managed to block nearly sent him
to his knees and brought him back to reality, and Menvan suppressed a hiss when
he felt his opponent's knife cut through his shirt and skin and draw blood. He
threw himself into the fight with renewed fierceness, and a few moments later he
turned to the dark haired ranger who was right now in the process of being
pushed back against the wall at his back.
"Well done, ranger!" he called, his voice positively
dripping with sarcasm. "You wanted to make them angry? They're angry!!"
Aragorn didn't have time or enough breath left to
answer, and barely managed to duck under a blow that would nearly have taken his
head off. He managed to twist to the side to avoid the next blow, but before he
could bring up his sword to fend off his opponent's next attack, the man's eyes
suddenly grew wide and he fell to the floor without another sound. He blinked
and looked up, straight into Glorfindel's bruised face that looked remarkably
amused.
"The human has a point, pen-neth," he told
the ranger breathlessly. "They are angry."
Aragorn didn't answer but merely thrust his sword
forward, missing Glorfindel's chest by inches and impaling a man who had come up
behind the elf and was just about to bring down his sword onto the distracted
elf's back.
"Indeed," the man grinned slightly while they were
pushed back through the main gates and into the entrance hall. "And I wonder
why."
"It's a family trait," Glorfindel provided, his eyes
darkening with pain while he did his best to ignore his left, very broken
collarbone as he tried not to let himself be cut to pieces by a pair of very
determined guards. "Elrond, the twins, and you … you are all the same. No one
can infuriate people as quickly as the four of you."
Aragorn would have loudly protested against such an
outrageous accusation, but right now he was rather busy fending off a very big
and obviously very angry guard. While he was avoiding the man's
axe, his eyes swept over their surroundings, and with a small pang of surprise
he realised that they were already rather deep in the castle. He had just
managed to eliminate his latest opponent as they reached the end of the corridor
they were currently fighting in, and for a second the ranger feared that they
had been pushed into a dead end and were trapped now. A moment later he saw that
there was a door to their right which burst open now, soldiers streaming out of
it. For a second Aragorn saw Girion at the back of the room before he
disappeared through another door, and a small sigh escaped his lips. As much as
he wanted to stop this madman, it was just their kind of luck to run straight
into him and the rest of his bodyguards when they were already outnumbered,
wasn't it?
Menvan had apparently seen the other man as well, for a
dark, dangerous sparkle appeared in his eyes and he attacked the newly arrived
guards with wild ferocity, trying to force his way through their lines to pursue
him. The numbers of the soldiers who were still fighting them in the narrow
corridor shrank slowly, and Aragorn was just thinking that they were really
going to make it and was beginning to look around for Glorfindel from whom he
had been separated in this last attack, when another soldier stepped in front of
him. The other man's figure seemed to literally block out the light the
flickering torches cast over the chaotic scene, and it took Aragorn's eyes a
disconcertingly long time until they had travelled up the man's massive chest to
his face.
Aragorn groaned inwardly and felt how his wounds were
beginning to ache anew at the mere sight of the other man. It was Caellan,
Teonvan's large, brutal lieutenant, who had surely some troll-blood in him, that
was something Aragorn had concluded a long time ago. The tall, burly man grinned
at him, the grin of a cat that had just cornered a mouse, but there was a dark,
furious sparkle in his eyes that wasn't completely hidden by his obvious
enjoyment of the situation.
The young ranger groaned again, this time out loud, and
gripped his blood-stained sword more tightly, trying to push the exhaustion and
pain he was feeling to the side. He had really managed to get most of the men
angry, hadn't he?
"Well, well, well," the other man said and slowly came
closer, causing Aragorn to back away, into the direction of the corridor's end
and away from the main fighting. "If that's not the little ranger who
disappeared so suddenly. You and I have unfinished business, boy."
"We do?" Aragorn inquired and arched an eyebrow, his
eyes not leaving the other man's face.
"Oh yes," Caellan grinned somewhat stupidly, something
that did not lessen the malice and hatred in his eyes. "The captain had promised
us some fun with you after the elf had talked. We never got round to doing
anything, did we?"
Aragorn suppressed a shudder and tried not to think of
the "fun" Teonvan had had with him the last time he'd seen him.
"Teonvan is a coward and a liar; you of all people
should know that, Caellan."
"And you, ranger, are a dead man," the larger man
hissed at him, brandishing his sword in a threatening manner. Not that there was
an unthreatening manner in which one could brandish one's sword, a part of
Aragorn's mind provided wryly. Caellan took a step closer to the younger man, a
grin beginning to spread over his face. "But before I kill you, I think I'll
have some fun after all."
"Then, by all means," Aragorn answered softly, grey
eyes boring into his opponent, "Come and try to get me."
"You read my mind, boy," the other man grinned,
displaying a rather fragmentary set of teeth. "I am planning to do just that."
Before Aragorn could even think of a reply, the large
man had lunged at him, and all the young ranger could do to avoid being impaled
on the man's sword was jump to the side, hitting the wall in the process – hard.
For a few moments, Aragorn's vision clouded over with pain as his body impacted
with the stone wall, his old injuries and the fresh shoulder wound shrieking
with pain, and he just barely managed to stagger to the side to avoid the next
attack that came so quickly that Aragorn nearly did not seen it coming.
With an effort, he finally pushed the pain to the side
as best as he could and concentrated on not getting cut to pieces, and while he
was parrying the larger man's blows as best as he could, Aragorn smiled wryly
even despite his pain and exhaustion.
If there was one thing he could do really well, it was making people angry, that
much was certain.
TBC...
mellon nín - my friend
pen-neth - young one
I
won't even try to convince you that I'm sorry. You won't believe me anyway...
g It's not really my fault, you know. There is my evil alter ego to consider,
after all, and Jack is not really all that innocent either. She made me do it,
since Ethoani was the character I wrote for her, kind of at least. I didn't
really have a choice. g So, the rest of this interesting little fight scene
will be here soon, I promise I'll try to update sooner than Thursday. I'm
aiming for Tuesday, but it will depend on how much work I'll get done during the
weekend. I'll try my best though, I promise. Reviews might help, as you probably
know by now.
g So: Review?
Yes please!
Additional A/N:
Deana- sheepishly Yeah, well, and chapter 32 as
well now, I'm afraid... It's not my fault. Really. It's not. That's what I try
to tell me all the time, that is. g And "=" works as well? Hmm, that's good to
know, but I think "/" is still the best replacement for my stars. I still miss
them. sighs sadly
Red Tigress - g Yes, I knew that. I was just kidding. So you're looking
forward to the chaos, huh? It's come to my attention that quite a few of you
people have expressed that particular sentiment. You're beginning to scare me.
I'm serious. g
CSI3 - You don't have to feel "honoured" or anything of the like! It's
just a way to repay you guys for your faithful and wonderful reviews; it's the
least I can do. I love every bit of feedback I get. g Hmm, I see, but I have
to tell you that I'm not really frightened of your pet balrog. I have one of my
own, you know, Stan's his name. He's rather sweet and has been with me since ...
hmm, Winter 01/02, I think. Wow, it's been really that long... g Well, time
flies when you're having fun.
Ellyrianna - huggles Thanks for the star! It's not really bothering me
that much anymore; I've got used to it - mostly. Sometimes I still suffer from
uncontrollable bouts of screaming, but I'll get over it eventually, I guess...
g Legolas IS an idiot, yes, I'm the first to agree with you on that. It's also
nice to know that you like Cendan so much - I like him quite a lot myself. huggles
Cendan He's adorable, in an evil sort of way. g I can't promise you that
Teonvan will be killed by Legolas; in fact, I can tell you now that he won't.
Sorry about that, but we had that in AEFAE and also in THOM, more or less,
anyway. Can't get repetitive, can I?
Jazmin3 Firewing - winces Wow, I'd better not be here when you've read
THIS chapter - if you're reacting like that after ch. 30, I'd hate to see what
you're going to be like after this one... I'm saddened by the news that you will
kill my alter ego the next time I need to hide for some time, but now that I
think about it, it might be quite a nice way to finally get rid of her. evil
grin I'll have to think about that. Just take a deep breath and repeat after
me: It's only a story. g
AngelMouse5 - hangs head It's not use denying it, huh? I have to admit
I have been planning this scene for some time. There are a few scenes I've
always wanted to put into one of my stories, and this was one of them. Another
is one of the last scenes in ch. 32, you'll see what I mean, I think. g
Sirithiliel - Yes, I'm very happy. huggles Thanks! Five stars, that's
enough to keep me happy for several minutes. g At least. Great you liked the
chapter, and I hope you'll enjoy the last two as well!
LOTRFaith - Yup, I totally understand your friend. I just HATE spiders, I
can't even tell you why. I think it's because they have too many legs. They can
move too fast, and they have a way of ... "feeling" with their legs before they
move that just freaks me out. shudders Horrible little things. And yes, this
is ch. 31. It's terrible, I know. I never wanted to have a story longer than 30
chapters, but alas, it seems that the characters just won't learn how to shut
up. Ah well, could be worse...
Someone Reading - Uhm, yes, that's what I call a little cliffy. The one
in this chapter is quite a big one though, I'll admit that. g I'm glad you
liked the twins and their birthday-problem, I think that's something that can
just happend when you're worried out of your mind and need something you can
distract yourself with. It's something that would happen to me if I was in that
kind of situation - which I wouldn't survive for more than a few seconds, but
that's another story... g
Firnsarnien - I don't understand why you don't like orcs. I think they're
... interesting. Yes, they might be evil, but that's only a small triviality if
you ask me. g LOL, you could indeed say that Fëanor was a bad elf. I mean, he
started the Kinslaying and all that, so yes, I guess he wasn't really your
epitome of kindness. g LOL again, Girion is what? A twisted sick puppy? I have
to admit that that's one of the most interesting descriptions I've ever heard.
Hmm, Celylith is indeed in the dungeons, that's all I can tell you. I'm evil, I
know. g
Katie - I completely understand. It happens to me all the time as well,
and when I write I review, I always copy it before I try to post it. FF.net has
deleted more than one of my reviews as well. grrr Evil site from Hell. Hmm, to
be honest I have never really considered writing an "early days" story about
Celylith and Legolas. It would depend on how early, I guess. I am not very good
at writing children, so it would have to be after them reaching their majority I
guess. shrugs I might write a little one someday, if I can find the time. g
LOL, so my story meanders around? I'll try to take that as a compliment... g
Don't worry, you're not behind schedule or anything. I'm sure you'll encounter
an evil megolomania bent on conquering/destroying all of the world soon enough.
g I am indeed thinking about writing another story, and I am sure there will
be quite a lot of villains just lining up near Rivendell. g Elrond will be so
happy about that, won't he? Oh, and you just might be right about Celylith's
shoulder. evil grin Poor elf. Well, thanks a lot for the great review, I'm
glad you liked the story so far!
Falling Star - Well, thank you. It's nice to know that you liked the
chapter, even though you don't have words to decribe what you think. g I hope
you'll enjoy the rest of this insane little tale as well!
SeventhSpanishAngel - I liked the cliffy, actually. I also like the
cliffies in this chapter. But then again, I love ALL cliffies, as long as I
don't have to read them. g Thanks so much for saying that you like the chapter
titles. I literally spend days thinking of something that will describe each
chapter. Sometimes it's really easy, but sometimes it really takes me ages.
shrugs I'm a little obssessed with them, I guess. The end will take a bit
longer now, I'm sorry. It wasn't what I had planned.
LegolasGreenleafGil-Estel - Yup, he's insane. Really, did it take you so
long to figure that out? g And you're insane too, really. I mean, Glorfindel's
neck is in considerably more danger than Legolas' now. You were reading the
chapter at school? Shame on you! g Then again, I do it sometimes as well, soI
shouldn't complain...
Strider's Girl - Yeah, well, all good things must come to an end. I'm
actually rather glad that it will end soon, because ... well, the story isn't
really beginning to annoy me, I'm just getting a bit tired of it. I just want to
wrap it up and be done with it. Well, only one more chapter to write, so that
should be doable. g I really appreciate all your kind words, and thanks a lot
for taking the time to review! I hope your GCSEs are going well! I'm sure they
are. nods
Dragonchic1 - Thank you on both accounts! It's very nice that you decided
to drop me a line, and just as nice that you want to add me to your favourites!
Thanks!
Crippled Raven - Well, my friend, that's the POINT, isn't it? To stop at
an evil place? Otherwise it wouldn't be a real cliffy, and you know how I love
them. g Maybe you're right, I just might be a little control freak. thinks
Actually, I don't think I am, but that's beside the point. LOL, great you loved
that line so much. It was actually kind of late when I wrote that part, I think
about 1 am. or something, so I guess I was in a rather strange mood. You'll have
to wait a bit longer to find out who'll kill who, though, sorry. It just got too
long. shrugs Second set sounds like fun. I would have loved it, but we had
this horrible Maths teacher whose main characteristic was cynicism. Strangely
enough, I got even worse when we got another teacher who was actually quite
nice. shrugs I still blame the probability calculations. I hated them. I'm
sure you'll do well in Maths, though. Don't aske me how I know that, I'm
psychic, I think. g LOL, you're right: FF.net IS out there to get me. Figures,
it's just my kind of luck. g
Elvendancer - Sure, blame me. They all blame me, but in the end they just
do it so that they don't have to admit that they were insane to begin with. g
I hate all you people, btw. School's out? I have two more months to go... sighs
hopelessly Well, I guess that's not your fault. I think.
Bailey - Uhm, well, yes, I think it was. Evil, that is. I love being
evil, which would explain it. g You're right of course. The twins don't need
to worry - we love Aragorn and Legolas too much to kill them. Then again,
hurting them intensely is an entirely different thing... evil grin You hope
everything will go according to plan? pitiful smile You keep hoping that,
mate. Who knows, it might even help. thinks No. It actually won't, but still.
g
Aratfeniel - You're not the only one who loves chaos. A couple of other
people expressed the same sentiments, in fact. looks at her suspiciously You
people are beginning to scare me. Great you're not too upset about the cliffy -
let's see how you deal with this one! Mhahahaah! runs off cackling madly I
like your song btw. It's nice and cheery. g
Alariel - nods I want my stars back too. But it appears FF.net doesn't
like them overly much... grrr Hmm, what was the silly elf thinking? The answer
it: He's not thinking. That's his problem, he doesn't THINK! almost chokes I
wrote it in a more reasonable way, huh? Well - just you wait. I haven't even
begun yet. g LOL, yes, something bad is going to happen to the two of them
yet, but I think we all knew that. It happens all the time, after all. g
Pyro - Of course it was fair! I can't really tell you why or in what way,
but I'm sure it was fair! It might also have been evil, but that's another
story... g No, I haven't done a "how they met" story. I don't really know if I
want to write one. Right now I don't, but that might change. shrugs We'll see.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review!
Iccle Fairy - shakes head You too? A disconcertingly large percentage
of you guys loves chaos and mayhem. I would like to say that it surprises me,
but... g LOL, yes, Legolas' plans ARE quite terrible. That's why Aragorn
doesn't like them. Then again, his aren't much better either, are they... g
You're living in a "majorly mental and crazed and deranged etc. world"? Well, it
DOES sound like fun - kind of. g
CrazyLOTRfan - Yeah, the poor twins. Their little brother and friend are
walking into almost certain doom AND they don't have honey-cakes! Poor them. g
And you're right of course. Estel will need all the Valar's protection if he
wants to reach his 23rd birtday... g So you liked Legolas' speech? Well, at
least someone did; neither Girion nor Teonvan were really all that fond of it. I
don't know why either. g LOL, Canada's PM is an evil dictator? I admit I
didn't know that - but wait, he just decided to have reeletions, didn't he? I
think I read it somewhere a few days ago. No need to overthrow him then... g
Great to hear that you enjoyed the cliffy, there are a few more in this chapter.
I think two. Might be more though. shrugs I lost count.
Snow-Glory - LOL, yes, Cendan does have some fighting to do at the
moment. You may huggle him later - if he survives all this, that is. evil grin
Hmm, let me think. The main reason that Lord Súliat's delegates were in this
story was indeed to make Girion angry. Oh yes, and to give a little political
side story. And a few other reasons, I think, I just can't remember them now.
They'll make an appearance in the end, don't worry. Your English teacher really
did that? That really sounds ... interesting. Rather frightening, but
interesting nonetheless. g There will probably be another story after this
one, but not for some time I'm afraid. I need a break.
Smile Neumann - Ah, don't worry about the stars. I'm actually getting
used to it. LOL, no, this was not all of Legolas' plan. You're right, if it
were, I wouldn't allow him to make any more plans either. g Everybody could
have made a better plan. Even Teonvan. No, not him now that I think about it.
But everyone else. g Just give him some time. He might surprise you yet. Might
being the main word here, of course. evil grin
Tychen - No, things never go quite according to plan. It's a curse,
that's what it is. g Hmm, your feeling might be correct - or it might not. I
know, that's an evil thing to say, but I really can't tell you. So you have a
broadband connection now? I couldn't live without mine! huggles her ADSL modem
I love it! I would die if I had to use ISDN or a gulps "normal" modem! g
Don't tell me, I need to get a new hobby. I hope you'll have loads of fun on
holiday! I'm sure you will.
Grumpy - Well, the Lay of Leithian isn't exactly something I would read
to my child. It really might start giving someone the wrong ideas. shrugs I
bet Elrond read it to the twins as well, so it's his fault. g Great to hear
that you liked the chapter, thanks a lot for all your reviews!
Narina Nightfall - huggles Great to see that you're back. I missed you
- but I hope you had fun in the void, wherever it may be. g LOL, you would
steal Legolas out of the dungeons? You know, I actually believe you. That's
scary. I've always had trouble making these sandwiches myself. The worst thing
is that I don't even like them, and always had to make them for someone else.
sighs Poor me. And poor Ethoani too, of course. They're all rather sad at the
moment. g Oh, and I never gave you or anyone else any guarantee that Celylith
would survive. He's an OC, and not needed for LOTR, so, essentially, he's fair
game. g Great to hear that you like Oswald Spalding. I like him too, he's
simply adorable! I have th bad feeling though that he doesn't talk, so he can't
embarass Legolas or anyone else. Uhm, yes, I used the word bovine? Why? Is it
wrong or something? anxiously I hope not. Hmm, Súliat. Let me make that clear
once and for all: Súliat is Saruman. There. I said it. I don't think I will
write a story about him anytime soon. Sorry about the word, but I REALLY can't
tell you. Glorfy - I mean Glorfindel of course, sorry - would kill me. He really
would, and Erestor as well. Sorry. Hmm, I guess you're right about eternal life,
but only when you think of something like Highlander. If you're an elf, you
won't necessarily associate so much with other races. Your family and friends
will be elves as well, and therefore don't die. Even if they do, you know that
they will eventually be released from the Halls of Mandos and you'll see them
again in Valinor. So, it's not really that bad if you ask me. g
Alison H - You know, when I got your review, Jack (who was visiting) and
I just looked at each other and said: "She printed ALL the stories??" I mean,
Wow! You really did that? Please, tell me what kind of printer you have! Mine
would have given up after page 1200. g It's great to see you de-lurking! huggles
Thanks! You really are a twin? Wow, that's ... well, great! You know I was
really afraid to read on for a few moments, but now I'm very glad that you
approve of the way I write the twins. I was rather nervous that you'd tell me
something like "Get real, girl. It's not like that at all!" g Hmm, I would
actually take the chocolate buttons. Skittles are the most perfect sweets ever
invented, but chocolate is a close second if you ask me. Thank you so much for
all your kind words, and I really hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as
well!
Chip - takes box Thanks! I love stars! LOL, you want to pet Celylith
and Glorfindel? Well, I guess as soon as they're free and more or less patched
back together, you can pet them, if you promise not to break them, that is. g
Thanks a lot for taking the time to review! I'm glad you liked it so far!
Celebdil-galad Tinlaure - Well, I guess it's because I'm evil. It helps
most of the time. g Celylith ... hmm, yes, I guess he's in the dungeons at the
moment. LOL, yes, I understand your desire to put out Glamir's "eyeses". Nice
idea, really. g Hmm, your next prediction isn't too bad either. Not entirely
true, of course, but very close if you ask me. g How can you join the CLF?
Well, I have no idea actually. I think you just have to .. do it. I don't know.
Ask Firsarnien, I think she's a kind of chairman or something. Oh, and I
understand the spider thing. I HATE them, I really do. It's silly, but I can't
help myself. I don't have anything against snakes though. g Hmm, about Stacee:
I would be more than willing to help, of course, I mean, I know her, after all.
The only thing is that I don't think it would work that way. I mean, no matter
how much you told me about the story, I still couldn't really begin to
understand the characters and what was really going on. Besides, it wouldn't be
HER story anymore, if you know what I mean. I don't really think I can actually
explain this, but I just don't think that it would work. Writing summaries or
beta-reading for someone is one thing, but to actually write a part of the story
if you're not the co-author... I don't really think so. If you really want me
to, I could try to come up with something. I just think it wouldn't really fit
the rest of the story, but hey, that's just me. g
Marbienl - Well, trust me, I hadn't heard about it either. I knew about
the rebellion and Count Alba and all that, but no details. Now I know more about
Spínola and Oldenbarneveldt and Prince Maurits and the VOC and the WIC and all
that than I ever wanted to. I even know where Ostende and Breda and all the
other nice towns are. g A biography won't really help me much, I fear. If you
have something about the Dutch expansion in the East though I'll love you
forever. g No, Legolas would most likely not appreciate it if I shaved his
head. He has no sense of humour, really. shakes head I don't think that
Glorfindel would be ashamed of dying or anything like that, I just don't think
that he would willingly talk about it. It's just that I don't think that it's
something he would discuss with the broad public, if you understand what I mean.
Nope, you're not evil. Keep telling yourself that. g I think Aragorn has
forgotten about his birthday, actually. I'm rather sure that Legolas will
remember though. Hmm, I think the twins would be celebrating their birthdays,
even though most likely not in the way we do. Oh, and don't even try it! I won't
decide on a date for Legolas' birthday. No one knows how old he is, so I won't
just invent a date. g Thanks a lot for the huge review - as always!
Cosmic Castaway - Oh yes, firewalls can be tricky. I have one myself,
which works fine though. At the moment. g ducks knife Well, thank you! It's
nice to hear that you like it so far! Thanks for the review!
Karone Evertree - Your weekend sounds busy indeed. I hope it's a bit more
relaxed now. g And I know exactly what you mean. Before I got my own computer
and put up a network, I had to fight with my siblings for the right to use the
internet all the time as well. shudders It was horrible. g
Bookworm, .303 - Uhm, yes, I guess you could say that: They're all silly
elves and rangers. g Very silly in fact - and stupid, reckless, slightly
suicidal, impertinent... Should I go on? g No, I don't think I need to. You
knew all that from the beginning, hm? g
Linuvial Greenleaf - blushes Don't say that ... really ... ah, what the
heck! Thank you! It's very nice of you to say something like that - it will give
me delusions of grandeur one day, but it's nice to hear nonetheless. g I'm
glad to hear that your cat is okay. I love cats. Younger brothers, on the other
hand... g Thanks for the review! It's very nice to see that you're still
enjoying this!
Jera - I'm sorry to hear about the jeep. I mean, not the jeep per se, but
the fact that you were stuck in a village. I just hope you weren't bitten by a
venomous snake or something like that. g That's a nice theory about the owners
of FF.net. They would have to be especially sadistic copyright owners though.
g LOL, yes, they might start fighting each other for the right to kill Teonvan.
I'm not sure if that's scary or just insane. And I know what you mean. I can
tell you almost exactly where every little town is in ME (and patly even in
Valinor, Númenor and Beleriand), but I have no idea how many states Germany has.
Could be 16. Or 17, I just don't know, and I could even begin to tell you where
the majority of the cities is. sheepishly That's rather pathetic. LOL, it's
one of my pet theories too, that Glorfindel annoyed Mandos and all the other
inhabitants of his halls so much that he was kicked out in the end. g I think
I can tell you that yes, Sangwar and Halyo will be just fine, don't worry.
They'll get out of this alive, even though I don't think their lord will be
overly pleased. Hmm, I don't think we have a Glorfindel POV scene this chapter,
sorry. It would have been nice, you're right, but it's already too long as it
is. There might be one in ch. 32 though. Once again, thanks for all your
reviews!!
Crystal-Rose15 - blinks Well - congratulations. I'm sure you and the DVD
will be very happy together. g I don't think I wil buy it right away. I hate
to say it, but I didn't like the movie all that much. I guess I'll buy it
eventually (I'm far too obsessed not to), but I think I can live without it for
a while. So you're on summer vacation, huh? I hate you. I have two more months
to go. grrr Don't worry about your computer though. Mine eats things all the
time as well. I think they all do. g No one knows how old Legolas really is,
and I don't believe PJ's version. I've always thought him younger than the
twins, about Arwen's age. But that's just my idea. And no, I haven't read that.
Is it good? I think I read a review once. I just can't remember if it was good
or bad. g
Kathleen LaCorneille - Wow, you typed all that in twenty seconds? Not
bad... g Thanks for taking the time to review if you had only twenty seconds
left, it's great to hear that you stilllike it! huggles
Once again, I'm sorry for dividing this into two chapters. There was really
no other way. Ah well, what's done is done. Thanks for all the
reviews!
