Ok, you've been for warned. I don't own Evangelion, but I wish I did. If
you read this story and like it, tell me a plot line you'd like to see, and
I might make it this stories plot, and I'll give you due credit. If you
hate it with a bitter passion, I would love to see you do better on a story
that has no plot. Now, on with the story.
By the way, sentence one of the story has no errors, I wrote it that way on purpose.
Chapter Three:
A Story with no Plot:
Mishaps.
The groups sat in the library, at one particular table, there was an air of extremely, extreme tension. At this table were, of course, Shinji, Rei, Toji, Kensuke, Asuka, and Hikari.
Kensuke, was absently pulling off facts from web sites, while Shinji and Rei took notes from books. Toji and Asuka were in a heated argument, with Hikari keeping them both in line.
"They are noisy," Rei said quietly.
"Ya, they are," agreed Shinji, "can you pass me that book over there please?"
"Here you go, Shinji."
"Thanks."
"You are working in mother's diner today, are you not?"
"Um, yeah," replied Shinji confuses, normally Rei didn't care what other people did, if it didn't effect her in any way, "why do you ask?"
"I am working there as well. I clean the dishes there every day after school. I started last week. You were not informed?"
"I guess not."
"Please pass over a few more sheets of paper."
"Here you go."
Over at the other end of the table....
"Stooge!" shouted Asuka.
"Devil!" shouted Toji.
There was a dull thud, as Asuka brought the thickest encyclopedia crashing down on Toji's head.
"Ouch! What did you do that for you stupid Bitch!"
"You...."
Smack---slap to the right side of Toji's face.
"....Did not..."
Smack---slap to the left side of Toji's face.
"....Just...."
Smack---another slap to the right side of Toji's face.
"....Call me...."
Smack---another slap to the left side of Toji's Face.
"...A Bitch!"
Smack---punch to Toji's stomach.
Thud---Toji falling and hitting the ground.
"That was...." Hikari said in a shocked tone, "...unexpected."
"Damn it," said Toji weakly, while getting up, "When you came in, I though you were a quiet girl, but now I see you're true colors, you're completely bitch to the bone."
"Toji...."stammered Kensuke, "you just screwed up again."
"What do you mean?"
"Look up."
"Um....."
There was a large crashing sound as the entire collection, yes collection not just one set, of encyclopedias came raining down onto poor beloved Toji. He was to say the least, out cold after the down poor had stopped.
"Asuka?" Hikari asked quietly, "Is that what you meant by keeping him in line?"
"Yep," Asuka said triumphantly.
"Wasn't that a little, extensive?"
"Nope. That Shinji kid, is gona get it worse. Look at him flirt with that blue haired girl. I bet they're writing note to each other....they should be working."
"Asuka, Shinji's not flirting with Rei. They're brother and sister."
"What! They don't look anything alike!"
"I know, but, they are twins. At times, they act similar, but Shinji's, a little bit more, open, with people."
The bell rang; Shinji packed up, and then helped Kensuke drag Toji to the detention room, while Rei carried Toji's stuff, at the request of Shinji. Asuka, dragged Hikari with her, as she just packed up and left.
End Chapter Three.
You guys thought, the project was a plot? Nope, it's not; it's just an excuse I need in order to write this one. Now, as for the.... comment.... about my.... first failure, namely, my story Evangelion meets ZOE.... I would just like to say that was a little below the belt. That was my first fan fiction, and, I am thinking, that I just, attempt to salvage it, in some way shape or form. So, for future reference, leave my failures from other stories, out of this story, or else. On a lighter note, for any one that wishes to write a fan fiction, I believe I have stumbled upon the perfect recipe for one. Here it is: Write something that, fits in with what most people are writing, leave the characters the way they were originally created, or try to any way, have lots of arguments with in the story, and most importantly, try to make your self look like the complete idiot you are, while writing the story. This seems to draw readers, like moths to a flame.
By the way, sentence one of the story has no errors, I wrote it that way on purpose.
Chapter Three:
A Story with no Plot:
Mishaps.
The groups sat in the library, at one particular table, there was an air of extremely, extreme tension. At this table were, of course, Shinji, Rei, Toji, Kensuke, Asuka, and Hikari.
Kensuke, was absently pulling off facts from web sites, while Shinji and Rei took notes from books. Toji and Asuka were in a heated argument, with Hikari keeping them both in line.
"They are noisy," Rei said quietly.
"Ya, they are," agreed Shinji, "can you pass me that book over there please?"
"Here you go, Shinji."
"Thanks."
"You are working in mother's diner today, are you not?"
"Um, yeah," replied Shinji confuses, normally Rei didn't care what other people did, if it didn't effect her in any way, "why do you ask?"
"I am working there as well. I clean the dishes there every day after school. I started last week. You were not informed?"
"I guess not."
"Please pass over a few more sheets of paper."
"Here you go."
Over at the other end of the table....
"Stooge!" shouted Asuka.
"Devil!" shouted Toji.
There was a dull thud, as Asuka brought the thickest encyclopedia crashing down on Toji's head.
"Ouch! What did you do that for you stupid Bitch!"
"You...."
Smack---slap to the right side of Toji's face.
"....Did not..."
Smack---slap to the left side of Toji's face.
"....Just...."
Smack---another slap to the right side of Toji's face.
"....Call me...."
Smack---another slap to the left side of Toji's Face.
"...A Bitch!"
Smack---punch to Toji's stomach.
Thud---Toji falling and hitting the ground.
"That was...." Hikari said in a shocked tone, "...unexpected."
"Damn it," said Toji weakly, while getting up, "When you came in, I though you were a quiet girl, but now I see you're true colors, you're completely bitch to the bone."
"Toji...."stammered Kensuke, "you just screwed up again."
"What do you mean?"
"Look up."
"Um....."
There was a large crashing sound as the entire collection, yes collection not just one set, of encyclopedias came raining down onto poor beloved Toji. He was to say the least, out cold after the down poor had stopped.
"Asuka?" Hikari asked quietly, "Is that what you meant by keeping him in line?"
"Yep," Asuka said triumphantly.
"Wasn't that a little, extensive?"
"Nope. That Shinji kid, is gona get it worse. Look at him flirt with that blue haired girl. I bet they're writing note to each other....they should be working."
"Asuka, Shinji's not flirting with Rei. They're brother and sister."
"What! They don't look anything alike!"
"I know, but, they are twins. At times, they act similar, but Shinji's, a little bit more, open, with people."
The bell rang; Shinji packed up, and then helped Kensuke drag Toji to the detention room, while Rei carried Toji's stuff, at the request of Shinji. Asuka, dragged Hikari with her, as she just packed up and left.
End Chapter Three.
You guys thought, the project was a plot? Nope, it's not; it's just an excuse I need in order to write this one. Now, as for the.... comment.... about my.... first failure, namely, my story Evangelion meets ZOE.... I would just like to say that was a little below the belt. That was my first fan fiction, and, I am thinking, that I just, attempt to salvage it, in some way shape or form. So, for future reference, leave my failures from other stories, out of this story, or else. On a lighter note, for any one that wishes to write a fan fiction, I believe I have stumbled upon the perfect recipe for one. Here it is: Write something that, fits in with what most people are writing, leave the characters the way they were originally created, or try to any way, have lots of arguments with in the story, and most importantly, try to make your self look like the complete idiot you are, while writing the story. This seems to draw readers, like moths to a flame.