OK- This is not a chapter. It is an A/N. To respond to a review that I received from Snarky Dragonwolf. First off, I'd like to thank you for taking time to review and put so much thought into what you wrote supplied with reasoning.
Your first point: My story would have nothing if she didn't have her visions. There are characters in Harry Potter (Tonks) who have a power that is unusual to come by, and so I believe that I shall leave her to her powers.
Your second point: I don't see where in the book it says that they can't take American transfers, if at all I don't believe that they take transfers at all.
But, her going to Hogwarts will play a big role in this fic as it progresses and so I shall keep her a transfer. The wizarding world is on the brink of a devestating war. I believe that if they catch wind of someone who may very well
be their ticket to saving millions of lives I'm sure that they'd take it.
Your third point: My story being a Mary Sue. I agree, and thanks to your suggestion I will be going back and perfecting the first paragraph of my story about her looks. And quite typically, I do not give such big summaries of looks. I do most likely tend
to put it in the way you suggested. To me, the most difficult part of writing a story is creating a begining to it, that is interesting but doesn't rocket off into a whole new genre of fic.
But, I will keep this comment in mind.
Your fourth point: This girl is an Italian-American. Her name is Italian and her mother speaks "broken English". There are quite a lot of stories with un-imaginative names. My character is unique, and I want to give people a taste of another culture.
The name is long and hard to pronounce, therefore she is called simply Jennie. Which is not a difficult name at all. But is very common.
And the thought about Mrs. Weasley- She was not the person setting up all of these things, and despite whether or not she protested profusely, do you honestly think that a large group of wizards who are frusterated and anxious to do something about the recent events will be thinking
in their right minds and/or take heed of one witch who is uncooperative? She is only the bearer of bad news and she's getting frusterated at Jennie's hostility! A person can only bend so much.
And take note- she did offer to attempt to return her as many privelages as she could. THEIR conversation is being monitered so of course she's nervous and doesn't wish to upset them any more than necessary.
I also would like to add: It's easy to sit on the sidelines and critisise my story. But it's not so easy to go and write a fic with lots of factors in making it plausible.
Thank You, Snarky Dragonwolf for your review and thank you to all the readers bearing my rant.
Please continue to read the story; There are reasons for many of the things that seem...off.
Your first point: My story would have nothing if she didn't have her visions. There are characters in Harry Potter (Tonks) who have a power that is unusual to come by, and so I believe that I shall leave her to her powers.
Your second point: I don't see where in the book it says that they can't take American transfers, if at all I don't believe that they take transfers at all.
But, her going to Hogwarts will play a big role in this fic as it progresses and so I shall keep her a transfer. The wizarding world is on the brink of a devestating war. I believe that if they catch wind of someone who may very well
be their ticket to saving millions of lives I'm sure that they'd take it.
Your third point: My story being a Mary Sue. I agree, and thanks to your suggestion I will be going back and perfecting the first paragraph of my story about her looks. And quite typically, I do not give such big summaries of looks. I do most likely tend
to put it in the way you suggested. To me, the most difficult part of writing a story is creating a begining to it, that is interesting but doesn't rocket off into a whole new genre of fic.
But, I will keep this comment in mind.
Your fourth point: This girl is an Italian-American. Her name is Italian and her mother speaks "broken English". There are quite a lot of stories with un-imaginative names. My character is unique, and I want to give people a taste of another culture.
The name is long and hard to pronounce, therefore she is called simply Jennie. Which is not a difficult name at all. But is very common.
And the thought about Mrs. Weasley- She was not the person setting up all of these things, and despite whether or not she protested profusely, do you honestly think that a large group of wizards who are frusterated and anxious to do something about the recent events will be thinking
in their right minds and/or take heed of one witch who is uncooperative? She is only the bearer of bad news and she's getting frusterated at Jennie's hostility! A person can only bend so much.
And take note- she did offer to attempt to return her as many privelages as she could. THEIR conversation is being monitered so of course she's nervous and doesn't wish to upset them any more than necessary.
I also would like to add: It's easy to sit on the sidelines and critisise my story. But it's not so easy to go and write a fic with lots of factors in making it plausible.
Thank You, Snarky Dragonwolf for your review and thank you to all the readers bearing my rant.
Please continue to read the story; There are reasons for many of the things that seem...off.