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True Scars Never Heal
Chapter 2: The Earth Shakes and A Single Heart Brakes
Radio Free Roscoe
My pain was gone, although more pain would start as tomorrow arrived, I just didn't know It then all I wanted was the stay there on the couch and kiss Ray forever. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Our lips pulled apart and we went back to gazing into each others eyes.
"Wow, was that real?" was all I could manage to let out, I was trying to read him and how he felt, but now it was like reading Travis, nothing, absolutely nothing, his eye's just gazed at me, but nothing were they saying.
"Yea Lily, I don't think any dream of mine could have ever gotten that real" I felt happy. He dreamt of me before, just as I had of him, many many times I had dreamt of our first date and how romantic it would be, but I had also dreamt about Travis, who had an apparent crush on me, because I felt him kiss back once I kissed him a while ago.
"Ray, you ever think that me and you would ever work out?" I asked half afraid to hear the answer and half waiting anxiously for it.
"There's one way to find out, Lil" He said, I apparently had given him a confused look, and he leaned in and kissed me again, again his minty breath mingled with mine. I grasped my hands around his neck and I felt his hands around my waist and on my back, we had only been here 2 hours, I was watching the clock, but it felt like we had been here for years, like this was meant to happen... like we were meant to happen. We broke loose after an amazingly passionate kiss.
"Well could you answer your question now?" Ray asked obviously with a nervous tone. I wasn't going to let him down, I loved him and I finally had someone who cared for me, who had known me and loved me, and finally someone who really understood me and loved me and saw through my flaws, and loved me for whoever I was.
"Yes Ray, I can answer my own question, I love you and this will definitely work out" With that Ray smiled and kissed me one last time, I didn't want to let go, but I had to, I had a physics test I needed to study for, I needed to get home.
"Ray, physics calls I have to go" Ray got up and politely walked me home once we were a few feet from my house, I turned around I could barely tell where Ray was it was a very dark night, but I could tell I was going to get a kiss goodnite.
"Thanks for the walk home Ray"
"Thank you Lily, for letting me walk you home" With that I looked into his brown eyes, and was amazed that we were a couple, Me and Ray. Wow, at school we would be labeled, labeled as a couple hopefully it never gets to him.
"How about a kiss goodnite?"
"Wow, Ray asking to kiss me very...different" He gave me a smile and I closed my eyes as I felt his lips press against mine I even felt his tongue against mine, we broke apart from either our 3rd or 4th kiss of the night, Ray held my hands until he left and smiled at me. I began to walk up my steps and ran into an obviously hurt Travis.
"Travis, what are you doing here?" I asked staring at him.
"Not Much Lily, just coming to tell you how much I cared for you" he began to walk away, but then stopped and came back "Oh hey Lily this is for you" he said with a hurt tone to his voice and also completely annoyed tone as well, he had just given me a single red rose. Which I held tightly in my hand I felt tears run down my cheeks, Travis had loved me, HAD loved me, now he hated me, I had just kissed Ray while Travis was sitting there heartbroken, I heard sobs, I just then realized they were my own, I wiped away my tears and found blood, the rose I have squeezed had cut up my hand really bad, I had three thorns driven into my hand, but it didn't hurt as much as I thought it would. I also had drops of blood on my t-shirt and tear drops stained my eyes. I went inside, and saw Simone asleep on the couch, I went up to my room, and pulled out the thorns I bled more, I cried more, I felt more awful. I cried myself to sleep that night, and into a dreamless sleep nonetheless.
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True Scars Never Heal
Chapter 2: The Earth Shakes and A Single Heart Brakes
Radio Free Roscoe
My pain was gone, although more pain would start as tomorrow arrived, I just didn't know It then all I wanted was the stay there on the couch and kiss Ray forever. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Our lips pulled apart and we went back to gazing into each others eyes.
"Wow, was that real?" was all I could manage to let out, I was trying to read him and how he felt, but now it was like reading Travis, nothing, absolutely nothing, his eye's just gazed at me, but nothing were they saying.
"Yea Lily, I don't think any dream of mine could have ever gotten that real" I felt happy. He dreamt of me before, just as I had of him, many many times I had dreamt of our first date and how romantic it would be, but I had also dreamt about Travis, who had an apparent crush on me, because I felt him kiss back once I kissed him a while ago.
"Ray, you ever think that me and you would ever work out?" I asked half afraid to hear the answer and half waiting anxiously for it.
"There's one way to find out, Lil" He said, I apparently had given him a confused look, and he leaned in and kissed me again, again his minty breath mingled with mine. I grasped my hands around his neck and I felt his hands around my waist and on my back, we had only been here 2 hours, I was watching the clock, but it felt like we had been here for years, like this was meant to happen... like we were meant to happen. We broke loose after an amazingly passionate kiss.
"Well could you answer your question now?" Ray asked obviously with a nervous tone. I wasn't going to let him down, I loved him and I finally had someone who cared for me, who had known me and loved me, and finally someone who really understood me and loved me and saw through my flaws, and loved me for whoever I was.
"Yes Ray, I can answer my own question, I love you and this will definitely work out" With that Ray smiled and kissed me one last time, I didn't want to let go, but I had to, I had a physics test I needed to study for, I needed to get home.
"Ray, physics calls I have to go" Ray got up and politely walked me home once we were a few feet from my house, I turned around I could barely tell where Ray was it was a very dark night, but I could tell I was going to get a kiss goodnite.
"Thanks for the walk home Ray"
"Thank you Lily, for letting me walk you home" With that I looked into his brown eyes, and was amazed that we were a couple, Me and Ray. Wow, at school we would be labeled, labeled as a couple hopefully it never gets to him.
"How about a kiss goodnite?"
"Wow, Ray asking to kiss me very...different" He gave me a smile and I closed my eyes as I felt his lips press against mine I even felt his tongue against mine, we broke apart from either our 3rd or 4th kiss of the night, Ray held my hands until he left and smiled at me. I began to walk up my steps and ran into an obviously hurt Travis.
"Travis, what are you doing here?" I asked staring at him.
"Not Much Lily, just coming to tell you how much I cared for you" he began to walk away, but then stopped and came back "Oh hey Lily this is for you" he said with a hurt tone to his voice and also completely annoyed tone as well, he had just given me a single red rose. Which I held tightly in my hand I felt tears run down my cheeks, Travis had loved me, HAD loved me, now he hated me, I had just kissed Ray while Travis was sitting there heartbroken, I heard sobs, I just then realized they were my own, I wiped away my tears and found blood, the rose I have squeezed had cut up my hand really bad, I had three thorns driven into my hand, but it didn't hurt as much as I thought it would. I also had drops of blood on my t-shirt and tear drops stained my eyes. I went inside, and saw Simone asleep on the couch, I went up to my room, and pulled out the thorns I bled more, I cried more, I felt more awful. I cried myself to sleep that night, and into a dreamless sleep nonetheless.