Hey! This is my first time writing a fic! I really have no common
sense and it's my first time....ahh... what the heck? Let me try it out and
please give me advice on my writing because so many people writes better
than me... hey, what could you expect from a 13 year old like me? no talent!
But I'll try it out anyways! (o) (Go easy please no flames! What are
those again?)
Hina ½
Chapter 1 It was Summer Vacation......
It was a peaceful day at the Hinata Inn, or should I say.... Another jaw breaking, sword swinging, type of day? WWWWWWWAHHHHHH!!!!!!!! ''I didn't mean to!''
Naru: ''KEITARO!''
Motoko: ''URASHIMA!'' ''ROCK SPILTTING SWORD!''
Keitaro luckily dodge the deadly attack until Naru did a spin kick! Naru: You never change do ya? Kitusne: ''I think we may need a vacation from all this carp....'' Su: ''I have just the invention!'' Said the tan blonde girl who was carrying a banana. Everyone stared; ''Su you don't mean that huge Mega Tama thing..... Do you? '' Whimpered Shinobu.
''Of course not...BOOM! There was suddenly a massive turtle under their foots, ''I'm using my latest invention the ULTRA TAMA 2000!'' Everyone was stunned by the massive turtle but had a huge sweat drops. EVERYONE except Su: ''NO WAYS WHERE FLYING ON THAT THING!'' Su: ''Why not?'' Naru: ''Su almost all of your inventions killed us last time!'' Keitaro: ''That's right, remember the missiles?!''
Su: You mean the time I caught you doing a threesome with Naru and Mutsumi?'' Keitaro blushed, ''WAHHHHH!'' ''WAIT THAT WAS AN ACCIDENT!'' Motoko began to draw her sword, ''Urashima you sicken me you beast!'' Keitaro moved backward, than he felt like he stepped on something. Su: KEITARO YOU ACTIVATED THE ULTRA TAMA 2000!!! NARU: KEITARO YOU BAKA!!!!! But it was too late to punched or slices Keitaro up into the air, because they were like team rocket, except Keitaro said '' I'M GOING TO GET KILLED AGAIN.....!!!!!''
At Nerima (In the dojo)
Ryoga: ''Ranma today is the day to Defeat you!'' Ranma: ''Come on Ryoga, the only
Time you could defeat me is when I call ya P-Chan!'' ''Ya wimp!'' Ryoga: ARGHHHHHHH!!!!! I'LL MAKE YOU REGRET THE DAY YOU WERE BORN CROSS DRESSER!! Ryoga was about to knock Ranma out of the dojo, until... the Ultra Tama 2000 Crashed right outside the Tendo's home. ''BOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!'' Smoke was everywhere! Ranma: ''What the hell was that!?'' Ryoga: ''I don't know but let's check it out!'' They both saw five beautiful girls' unconscious and one man that looked dead but was actually alive. They carefully picked up the people and one person repeatedly said ''sister.... Sister!'' Ranma stared horrifying wondering why he felt so worried about this person he doesn't he even know. Akane: ''Ranma don't worry too much they'll be fine so just keep out those perverted thoughts and quit drooling over these innocent girls!'' She poured cold water over Ranma , and out comes a female voice '' What the hell was that for?! ''They could of fainted again!''
Akane: '' Well your going to have to tell them one day anyways!
Hina ½
Chapter 1 It was Summer Vacation......
It was a peaceful day at the Hinata Inn, or should I say.... Another jaw breaking, sword swinging, type of day? WWWWWWWAHHHHHH!!!!!!!! ''I didn't mean to!''
Naru: ''KEITARO!''
Motoko: ''URASHIMA!'' ''ROCK SPILTTING SWORD!''
Keitaro luckily dodge the deadly attack until Naru did a spin kick! Naru: You never change do ya? Kitusne: ''I think we may need a vacation from all this carp....'' Su: ''I have just the invention!'' Said the tan blonde girl who was carrying a banana. Everyone stared; ''Su you don't mean that huge Mega Tama thing..... Do you? '' Whimpered Shinobu.
''Of course not...BOOM! There was suddenly a massive turtle under their foots, ''I'm using my latest invention the ULTRA TAMA 2000!'' Everyone was stunned by the massive turtle but had a huge sweat drops. EVERYONE except Su: ''NO WAYS WHERE FLYING ON THAT THING!'' Su: ''Why not?'' Naru: ''Su almost all of your inventions killed us last time!'' Keitaro: ''That's right, remember the missiles?!''
Su: You mean the time I caught you doing a threesome with Naru and Mutsumi?'' Keitaro blushed, ''WAHHHHH!'' ''WAIT THAT WAS AN ACCIDENT!'' Motoko began to draw her sword, ''Urashima you sicken me you beast!'' Keitaro moved backward, than he felt like he stepped on something. Su: KEITARO YOU ACTIVATED THE ULTRA TAMA 2000!!! NARU: KEITARO YOU BAKA!!!!! But it was too late to punched or slices Keitaro up into the air, because they were like team rocket, except Keitaro said '' I'M GOING TO GET KILLED AGAIN.....!!!!!''
At Nerima (In the dojo)
Ryoga: ''Ranma today is the day to Defeat you!'' Ranma: ''Come on Ryoga, the only
Time you could defeat me is when I call ya P-Chan!'' ''Ya wimp!'' Ryoga: ARGHHHHHHH!!!!! I'LL MAKE YOU REGRET THE DAY YOU WERE BORN CROSS DRESSER!! Ryoga was about to knock Ranma out of the dojo, until... the Ultra Tama 2000 Crashed right outside the Tendo's home. ''BOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!'' Smoke was everywhere! Ranma: ''What the hell was that!?'' Ryoga: ''I don't know but let's check it out!'' They both saw five beautiful girls' unconscious and one man that looked dead but was actually alive. They carefully picked up the people and one person repeatedly said ''sister.... Sister!'' Ranma stared horrifying wondering why he felt so worried about this person he doesn't he even know. Akane: ''Ranma don't worry too much they'll be fine so just keep out those perverted thoughts and quit drooling over these innocent girls!'' She poured cold water over Ranma , and out comes a female voice '' What the hell was that for?! ''They could of fainted again!''
Akane: '' Well your going to have to tell them one day anyways!