Author's Ending Notes: There's the rest of the story. I know I didn't
finish it all the way but believe me I am going to write a second to it.
Don't worry. I'll give you a story just as good as the first. Read the
excerpt here:
Chapter One
Link turned his body over on the dirt and rubbed his side where he had fallen on it. He moaned a little and then threw himself to his feet. Kohaku only stared at him, about to burst out laughing.
"No! No!" said Kohaku waving his hands over his head, "You have to concentrate on what you're doing. Do expect to go face to face with Ganondorf fighting like that? You'll humiliate yourself!"
Link shook his head slowly and then looked up towards the sky, "Ever since Zelda left us, I've haven't been concentrating on anything."
Kohaku hated when he talked about Zelda...since she was dead now, " She's gone...so just stop thinking about it," he saw that Link was really sad. He saw him sit down in a patch of dirt and start dragging a stick back and forth, drawing a sword. Kohaku walked over and sat down next to him. He patted his back, "Come on, Link. Zelda is safer up there than she was down here...why don't we just stop for today. I think you've earned a rest."
"I don't want to rest," he said as he gazed up at the sky and leaned back on his elbows, "I want to get back that pendant...if it wasn't for that stupid thing...Hyrule wouldn't be destroyed now."
"We're just gonna have to learn to like it."
Link sat up again, "Say, you think Kokiri Forest is still standing?" he asked, "We could go there...it's better then staying here, with all this dirt."
"True..." said Kohaku, "But I'm just afraid Ganondorf had destroyed that too. But we can go, if you like."
"It's the only place I'd like to go to right now..." he said, "Let's go...I can't bare to stay here any longer. It brings too many memories of Zelda. How I hate how fate can just devour us like this."
Kohaku shrugged, feeling totally defeated. He missed Zelda too. She was his sister, now probably rotting like a pile of ashes on the bottom of a pit of lava. He remembered the last thing that escaped her mouth, a loud, mind-weaving scream of fear for her life. Then there was nothing. He remembered looking at Link, struggling to get the guards off of him so somehow he would be able to get to Zelda. But after she fell, he remembered seeing his whole body go limp, he burst into tears and kept pleading 'no!' to himself. He must have past out after that. The guards carried them both to a dungeon where they kept them there for but a measly hour, and then they suspended them out to Hyrule Field, on a patch of dirt. Right where Hyrule Castle used to stand.
It's not the full chapter one but it's nice anyway, isn't it? Look out because in a month or two it'll be posted. Happy reading until then. BloodBiter461.
Chapter One
Link turned his body over on the dirt and rubbed his side where he had fallen on it. He moaned a little and then threw himself to his feet. Kohaku only stared at him, about to burst out laughing.
"No! No!" said Kohaku waving his hands over his head, "You have to concentrate on what you're doing. Do expect to go face to face with Ganondorf fighting like that? You'll humiliate yourself!"
Link shook his head slowly and then looked up towards the sky, "Ever since Zelda left us, I've haven't been concentrating on anything."
Kohaku hated when he talked about Zelda...since she was dead now, " She's gone...so just stop thinking about it," he saw that Link was really sad. He saw him sit down in a patch of dirt and start dragging a stick back and forth, drawing a sword. Kohaku walked over and sat down next to him. He patted his back, "Come on, Link. Zelda is safer up there than she was down here...why don't we just stop for today. I think you've earned a rest."
"I don't want to rest," he said as he gazed up at the sky and leaned back on his elbows, "I want to get back that pendant...if it wasn't for that stupid thing...Hyrule wouldn't be destroyed now."
"We're just gonna have to learn to like it."
Link sat up again, "Say, you think Kokiri Forest is still standing?" he asked, "We could go there...it's better then staying here, with all this dirt."
"True..." said Kohaku, "But I'm just afraid Ganondorf had destroyed that too. But we can go, if you like."
"It's the only place I'd like to go to right now..." he said, "Let's go...I can't bare to stay here any longer. It brings too many memories of Zelda. How I hate how fate can just devour us like this."
Kohaku shrugged, feeling totally defeated. He missed Zelda too. She was his sister, now probably rotting like a pile of ashes on the bottom of a pit of lava. He remembered the last thing that escaped her mouth, a loud, mind-weaving scream of fear for her life. Then there was nothing. He remembered looking at Link, struggling to get the guards off of him so somehow he would be able to get to Zelda. But after she fell, he remembered seeing his whole body go limp, he burst into tears and kept pleading 'no!' to himself. He must have past out after that. The guards carried them both to a dungeon where they kept them there for but a measly hour, and then they suspended them out to Hyrule Field, on a patch of dirt. Right where Hyrule Castle used to stand.
It's not the full chapter one but it's nice anyway, isn't it? Look out because in a month or two it'll be posted. Happy reading until then. BloodBiter461.