I got a review saying that Kai and Tyson like Zarine, which is not true. So
in case I haven't made this clear...In the last chapter, Kai was wondering
about Zarine because he thought it was strange that her blade could hold up
four that have bit-beasts in them, not because he likes her. Tyson was just
being nice fetching the first-aid box. Ray is the one that'll like her! Not
anyone else!
Oh ya, and I got the name Zarine from a book. (The Dragon Reborn, 3rd book of The Wheel of Time) (You should read them sometime, they're good!) This is directly from the book, "No woman would name her daughter that unless she expected her to be a great beauty. And a heartbreaker. One to lie on cushions in palaces, surrounded by servants and suitors." I just thought it would be a nice name to use for this character. Don't worry, Ray's not going to get his heart broken.
Chapter Four – Four against One???
Within an hour, they cooked a huge dinner for the team. Zarine looked at the food on the table and said, "Uh, Ray??"
"Yeah?" he replied as he got the roast beef from the oven.
"How are we supposed to finish all this food?" she asked.
Ray laughed, "I guess you don't know about Tyson's appetite. Last night, he ate a whole meal to feed twenty people."
"Really?" she said, raising her eye brow, and was silent. Ray couldn't help looking at her eyes. They were a deeper blue now. Those eyes fascinated him for some reason.
"Let's go tell the others to eat now," he said when everything was ready.
Ray and Zarine walked to the living room. In front of the door, Zarine stopped him. "Let's scare them! I don't think they're expecting us yet!" she said mischievously.
"Yeah," Ray agreed with a smile on his face.
They opened the door and screamed, "Dinner's ready!!"
Tyson, Max and Kenny jumped. Their backs were facing them, so they didn't see Ray and Zarine. "Ah!!! We're being attacked!!" Tyson yelled, running around.
Zarine and Ray were laughing, while Max yelled, "Tyson, calm down, it's just Zarine and Ray! We're not being attacked!"
"Oh," Tyson said, as he realized there was nothing to be scared about.
Kai just looked disapprovingly. He sighed. It was going to be a long time before he can get away from Tyson.
"I think Tyson's ability to think was diminished when he had to wait so long for dinner," Ray commented, "I also think you'll think it's worth the wait."
"Well, I'll be the judge of that!" Tyson said, running to the dining room. "Wow, this smells and looks really good. But does it taste good?"
He started eating, "It is good, come on, you guys!"
They all sat down and ate. The meal was delicious. Kenny complimented, "Ray, Zarine, you guys make a good meal!"
"Oh ya, after dinner I wasn't to battle against all four of you at the same time," Zarine informed them calmly.
They all look at her in surprise, even Kai. "What?!" Tyson said, "There's no way you can beat us! Why would you ask us to do such a thing?"
"Well, Ray asked me to show him my little secret in exchange for his cooking secrets," she told him.
After dinner, they went to the beydish. Kenny was the referee. He said, "3...2...1..."
"Let it rip!" the bladders yelled.
"Go Driger!" Ray summoned his bit-beast.
"Dranzer!" Kai called.
"Attack, Dragoon!" Tyson yelled.
"Draciel!" Max cried.
"Xeora!" Zarine called out her bit-beast, "Change into a shape of a falcon!" Her bit-beast shimmered and changed into a falcon. Suddenly, she was glowing like her bit-beast.
The others gawked at her, except Kai, nothing can break his concentration when it comes to blading. She looked at them and her face flickered with annoyance. "Concentrate!" she snapped.
They stopped looking at her like she was an alien, and focused on the battle. Their blades went for the attack, but her blade was still as immovable as a rock.
"Attack!" Zarine commanded, even though it was four against one, she wasn't losing. Her blade slammed into Tyson's blade and knocked it right out. She made a sharp turn and went for Draciel. Wham! Draciel was out too. Tyson and Max gasped, they couldn't believe they'd out so soon.
Ray and Kai tried to attack her, but she dodged them and knocked their blades out. "And the winner is Zarine!" Kenny announced.
I would write more, but I don't have time right now. Maybe tonight. Please review! What do you think of my bit-beast and the idea that it's a shapeshifter?
Oh ya, and I got the name Zarine from a book. (The Dragon Reborn, 3rd book of The Wheel of Time) (You should read them sometime, they're good!) This is directly from the book, "No woman would name her daughter that unless she expected her to be a great beauty. And a heartbreaker. One to lie on cushions in palaces, surrounded by servants and suitors." I just thought it would be a nice name to use for this character. Don't worry, Ray's not going to get his heart broken.
Chapter Four – Four against One???
Within an hour, they cooked a huge dinner for the team. Zarine looked at the food on the table and said, "Uh, Ray??"
"Yeah?" he replied as he got the roast beef from the oven.
"How are we supposed to finish all this food?" she asked.
Ray laughed, "I guess you don't know about Tyson's appetite. Last night, he ate a whole meal to feed twenty people."
"Really?" she said, raising her eye brow, and was silent. Ray couldn't help looking at her eyes. They were a deeper blue now. Those eyes fascinated him for some reason.
"Let's go tell the others to eat now," he said when everything was ready.
Ray and Zarine walked to the living room. In front of the door, Zarine stopped him. "Let's scare them! I don't think they're expecting us yet!" she said mischievously.
"Yeah," Ray agreed with a smile on his face.
They opened the door and screamed, "Dinner's ready!!"
Tyson, Max and Kenny jumped. Their backs were facing them, so they didn't see Ray and Zarine. "Ah!!! We're being attacked!!" Tyson yelled, running around.
Zarine and Ray were laughing, while Max yelled, "Tyson, calm down, it's just Zarine and Ray! We're not being attacked!"
"Oh," Tyson said, as he realized there was nothing to be scared about.
Kai just looked disapprovingly. He sighed. It was going to be a long time before he can get away from Tyson.
"I think Tyson's ability to think was diminished when he had to wait so long for dinner," Ray commented, "I also think you'll think it's worth the wait."
"Well, I'll be the judge of that!" Tyson said, running to the dining room. "Wow, this smells and looks really good. But does it taste good?"
He started eating, "It is good, come on, you guys!"
They all sat down and ate. The meal was delicious. Kenny complimented, "Ray, Zarine, you guys make a good meal!"
"Oh ya, after dinner I wasn't to battle against all four of you at the same time," Zarine informed them calmly.
They all look at her in surprise, even Kai. "What?!" Tyson said, "There's no way you can beat us! Why would you ask us to do such a thing?"
"Well, Ray asked me to show him my little secret in exchange for his cooking secrets," she told him.
After dinner, they went to the beydish. Kenny was the referee. He said, "3...2...1..."
"Let it rip!" the bladders yelled.
"Go Driger!" Ray summoned his bit-beast.
"Dranzer!" Kai called.
"Attack, Dragoon!" Tyson yelled.
"Draciel!" Max cried.
"Xeora!" Zarine called out her bit-beast, "Change into a shape of a falcon!" Her bit-beast shimmered and changed into a falcon. Suddenly, she was glowing like her bit-beast.
The others gawked at her, except Kai, nothing can break his concentration when it comes to blading. She looked at them and her face flickered with annoyance. "Concentrate!" she snapped.
They stopped looking at her like she was an alien, and focused on the battle. Their blades went for the attack, but her blade was still as immovable as a rock.
"Attack!" Zarine commanded, even though it was four against one, she wasn't losing. Her blade slammed into Tyson's blade and knocked it right out. She made a sharp turn and went for Draciel. Wham! Draciel was out too. Tyson and Max gasped, they couldn't believe they'd out so soon.
Ray and Kai tried to attack her, but she dodged them and knocked their blades out. "And the winner is Zarine!" Kenny announced.
I would write more, but I don't have time right now. Maybe tonight. Please review! What do you think of my bit-beast and the idea that it's a shapeshifter?