DISCLAIMER: I don't own any of the characters except for Kei, and Nami.
Author's Note: Yet another part of the prologue. I know my writing isn't that great, but the least you could do is give me some constructive criticism. I'm working on making my chapters longer, but I can only spend so much time typing this up. I would also definitely appreciate some feedback on my original characters Kei and Nami.
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"You are an idiot. He said he wouldn't come after you unless you're alone. You still haven't even explained to me why he is after you in the first place." Inuyasha couldn't stay mad at her for very long. It was quite odd; normally he only acted like this around Kagome.
"I do not have to explain such things to a mere dog. Besides, you won't be with me for long. No one stays for very long." Nami looked up at Inuyasha. Her dark eyes pleading for an answer, for some reassurance that he would stay. It never came. Inuyasha turned around and walked back towards the village while Nami still stared at him, waiting.
"Hurry up, I'm not going to make you come, but if you don't I will forget you." Inuyasha turned away, avoiding answering her question. He wished that he could reassure her, but it just wasn't that simple.
"Just leave! It's not like I asked you to help me." Nami tried to sound strong, but the tears cascading down her face made it difficult. She sat down burying her face in her hands. He abandoned me, just like everyone else. She didn't mean to be so difficult to get along with, but that was all she knew how to do. I tried to be good, once, but then I was given to that monster. Upon hearing the faint sound of a snapping twig behind her she turned. Nami had hoped it would be Inuyasha, but she couldn't be more wrong. The most frightening thing about seeing the demon was that he wasn't smiling. That was never a good sign.
Kei wasn't happy to say the least. He had been having so much fun playing with Nami, but then that stupid dog had to get involved. Now his master had ordered him, Kei, to return Nami to him. Kei wanted to argue, to say that Nami was his, but no one argues with Lord Sesshoumaru. It was just another one of his master's plans to get rid of his stupid half- brother, but why did it have to involve Nami? Lord Sesshoumaru had given Nami to him, and said Kei could do whatever he wanted to her. Now he was demanding that Kei give her back. As he approached Nami he tried to clear his head of these mutinous thoughts, and complete his task.
"Lord Sesshoumaru has requested that I return you to him. It would be wise for you to come willingly, or risk his anger." Kei was tempted to unsheathe his sword and stab her right where she sat. The little fox girl seemed to be off in her own world.
What was going on? Lord Sesshoumaru had given her to Kei long ago. What could he possibly want with her now? "Sesshoumaru-sama," how she had missed the sound of his name. Nami had been a slave to Lord Sesshoumaru for many years, and in that time she had been happy. She was happier as a slave then she had been at any other time in her life. Banishing any questions from her head Nami stood. "Bring me to him, now," Her voice betrayed none of her emotion. It was a trick she had picked up from her master.
Author's Note: Yet another part of the prologue. I know my writing isn't that great, but the least you could do is give me some constructive criticism. I'm working on making my chapters longer, but I can only spend so much time typing this up. I would also definitely appreciate some feedback on my original characters Kei and Nami.
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"You are an idiot. He said he wouldn't come after you unless you're alone. You still haven't even explained to me why he is after you in the first place." Inuyasha couldn't stay mad at her for very long. It was quite odd; normally he only acted like this around Kagome.
"I do not have to explain such things to a mere dog. Besides, you won't be with me for long. No one stays for very long." Nami looked up at Inuyasha. Her dark eyes pleading for an answer, for some reassurance that he would stay. It never came. Inuyasha turned around and walked back towards the village while Nami still stared at him, waiting.
"Hurry up, I'm not going to make you come, but if you don't I will forget you." Inuyasha turned away, avoiding answering her question. He wished that he could reassure her, but it just wasn't that simple.
"Just leave! It's not like I asked you to help me." Nami tried to sound strong, but the tears cascading down her face made it difficult. She sat down burying her face in her hands. He abandoned me, just like everyone else. She didn't mean to be so difficult to get along with, but that was all she knew how to do. I tried to be good, once, but then I was given to that monster. Upon hearing the faint sound of a snapping twig behind her she turned. Nami had hoped it would be Inuyasha, but she couldn't be more wrong. The most frightening thing about seeing the demon was that he wasn't smiling. That was never a good sign.
Kei wasn't happy to say the least. He had been having so much fun playing with Nami, but then that stupid dog had to get involved. Now his master had ordered him, Kei, to return Nami to him. Kei wanted to argue, to say that Nami was his, but no one argues with Lord Sesshoumaru. It was just another one of his master's plans to get rid of his stupid half- brother, but why did it have to involve Nami? Lord Sesshoumaru had given Nami to him, and said Kei could do whatever he wanted to her. Now he was demanding that Kei give her back. As he approached Nami he tried to clear his head of these mutinous thoughts, and complete his task.
"Lord Sesshoumaru has requested that I return you to him. It would be wise for you to come willingly, or risk his anger." Kei was tempted to unsheathe his sword and stab her right where she sat. The little fox girl seemed to be off in her own world.
What was going on? Lord Sesshoumaru had given her to Kei long ago. What could he possibly want with her now? "Sesshoumaru-sama," how she had missed the sound of his name. Nami had been a slave to Lord Sesshoumaru for many years, and in that time she had been happy. She was happier as a slave then she had been at any other time in her life. Banishing any questions from her head Nami stood. "Bring me to him, now," Her voice betrayed none of her emotion. It was a trick she had picked up from her master.