Right. I have had a review that I simply cannot ignore. It was from a boy
(Legolas, thank you) and I realised that my story should also be for the
opposite sex too. So this is why I am going to give the main character
(formally you) a name, but I hope you still enjoy my story. Please don't
hurt me......Her name will be Nienna Pallanén
Recap: "When are you leaving?" you say, trying to sound normal.
"Tomorrow,"
Nienna walked back into her room, trying not to let the tears fall so fast. He had arranged to meet her after supper on the bench in the garden.
"Why do you have to leave me, just as I start to have a life?" She shouted at the wall separating her and the man she loved. Loved? Why was this word suddenly used? Did she love him?
Nienna walked around in a small circle, pondering on those questions. There was lust, there was desire, and there was a sense of peace and safety she felt when she was in his arms. But she barely knew him. How could she love him? She brought her hands up to her head and ran them through her hair.
Just as another fresh flow of tears ran down her face, there was a knock at the door. Not even bothering to look up, she called a muffled 'come in' and continued to cry.
"Nienna?" came his soft voice, "I heard your shouting. I think we should spend as much time together as we can......" he walked over, sitting on the bed next to her. He draped an arm over her shoulder and she leaned against his chiselled chest.
"Why are you going? Isn't there anyone else who can go?" she moaned into his chest.
"I'm sorry, I have pledged my bow. I promise you, when our journey is over, I will return to you, and we can start again"
"Really?" Nienna sniffed, accepting the cotton hankie he handed her.
"Anything for you," he whispered, wiping away her tears with his thumb. She leaned away from him and bent her head.
"Why do you like me? Why not all the other servant girls?"
"There is something about you...... you are different, special, like, there are no words to describe you. I can't help but feel a connection,"
She nodded and leaned in against him, listening to his heartbeat and revelling in the warmth of his skin against hers.
"I have the rest of the day off," she said timidly.
"I have no plans......" he left off, her lips meeting his in a soft kiss.
"Then lets use the time we have then" Nienna whispered huskily, throwing the hankie to the floor and pushing him back onto her bed.
"Why wait till tonight?" he grinned back. She smiled as she straddled him, and still fully clothed, bucked her hips forward, earning a satisfied groan from his throat. She smiled devilishly and did it again, this time feeling the bulge underneath her grow larger. She slowly started to unlace his loose shirt, running her cool hands over his tight pale skin. He simply lay there, letting her have her fun.
"Enjoying yourself?" he asked.
"Much," she replied, leaning over him and placing her hands either sides of his body. She bent in to kiss him, but he turned his head and began to kiss her neck, reaching to undo the front of her dress. She pulled away, still straddling him and wagging her finger.
"Wait till your turn" she said, stroking her hand down his exposed chest before ripping it off him and throwing it to the floor. She felt him tighten beneath her.
"So you like a bit of feistiness then?" she asked. She bent down and unleashed her tongue all over his upper torso, his lips, his neck, his body......
Legolas groaned and gripped the sides of the bed as she did the most wonderful things to him. She sat up once more, panting, her chest rising and falling in a seductive manner. Legolas could not take it anymore; he reached forward and tore off the laces on the front of her dress, ripping it open to reveal her milky white skin, her perfect bosom waiting to be touched.
"You are an angel," he exclaimed, reaching forward and cupping her breasts. She moved her legs and rolled them both over so he was on top, pressed against her. He placed his hands either side of them both, and leaned down to whisper in her ear:
"I will dream of you every night and we shall fulfil our fantasies when I return,"
Nienna shivered slightly and smiled warmly. She propped herself up with her elbows, effectively rubbing and pushing her breasts against his body. He groaned once more, putting a hand behind her head and pulling her towards him. She searched his face, following little lines and smooth skin.
"What?" he breathed.
"Just printing a memory of you, into my mind. I don't know why I would, but I don't want to forget you," Nienna said, brushing his long hair away form his face. He turned his head to the side and looked at his tunic on the floor. Nienna followed his gaze and cupped the side of his face, turning it to her.
"Please, lets share the time we have together, do it for us,"
US. That word echoed in Legolas' head as she kissed his neck. So she wanted to continue with the relationship? He smiled at her and moved off her so he was resting on his elbow beside her. He used he free hand to slip the top of her dress right off her, letting her wriggle out of the skirt part. The dress was added to his tunic.
She pressed her naked body against his half naked one. Slowly, she grinded her hip against his groin, earning a loud open mouthed moan. She loved that sound and repeated her action again. Legolas rid himself of his trousers, leaving them both naked. Slowly, he ran a single finger down from her chin to her sex. He drifted the finger lazily over her and she sighed, longing for more.
"Make it last......" she whispered......
He thrust a single finger into her and she grasped his back with her nails, leaving little marks.
"Mmmm, oh god, oh Valar, touch me! GODDD!" Nienna moaned as he probed her with his slender finger, adding another. He obeyed her command, pressing down on her nub with his thumb, enjoying her loud sigh and feeling her fluids soak his hand.
"God, that was good!" she exclaimed, releasing her tight grip from his back and stroking his silky hair that cascaded over them both.
He smiled and looked downwards to his body. Nienna understood his gesture and pushed him off her with a strong shove. He landed next to her and she immediately straddled his legs leaving his crotch open to her. He was ready.
She gripped his length with one hand, moving up and down it a few times until a bead of pre-cum formed. She gladly bent over him and licked it off with a sharp pointy tongue.
"Nienna!" he whispered hoarsely, a large smile forming on his face as he stared at the carved ceiling.
She took his whole length into her mouth and proceeded to suck and lick, moving her head around and following him as he gripped her head with his beautiful hands. After a short while, he could no longer take the heat building up inside of him and he warned her before releasing into her mouth. She swallowed before throwing her head back, her hair whipping into the air.
"That was......" Legolas panted as he pulled her up to his side, placing tiny kissed all over her. They lay together until they got their breath back.
"What shall we do, wait till tonight?"
"Under the stars......"
"I know just the spot," finished Legolas, turning to his lover and smiling.
Sorry guys, but I wanted to have the next chapter really good you know? And if anyone has suggestions to when where how etc, u can get my email on my profile page. Please keep reading, you keep me going! Nikee xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Recap: "When are you leaving?" you say, trying to sound normal.
"Tomorrow,"
Nienna walked back into her room, trying not to let the tears fall so fast. He had arranged to meet her after supper on the bench in the garden.
"Why do you have to leave me, just as I start to have a life?" She shouted at the wall separating her and the man she loved. Loved? Why was this word suddenly used? Did she love him?
Nienna walked around in a small circle, pondering on those questions. There was lust, there was desire, and there was a sense of peace and safety she felt when she was in his arms. But she barely knew him. How could she love him? She brought her hands up to her head and ran them through her hair.
Just as another fresh flow of tears ran down her face, there was a knock at the door. Not even bothering to look up, she called a muffled 'come in' and continued to cry.
"Nienna?" came his soft voice, "I heard your shouting. I think we should spend as much time together as we can......" he walked over, sitting on the bed next to her. He draped an arm over her shoulder and she leaned against his chiselled chest.
"Why are you going? Isn't there anyone else who can go?" she moaned into his chest.
"I'm sorry, I have pledged my bow. I promise you, when our journey is over, I will return to you, and we can start again"
"Really?" Nienna sniffed, accepting the cotton hankie he handed her.
"Anything for you," he whispered, wiping away her tears with his thumb. She leaned away from him and bent her head.
"Why do you like me? Why not all the other servant girls?"
"There is something about you...... you are different, special, like, there are no words to describe you. I can't help but feel a connection,"
She nodded and leaned in against him, listening to his heartbeat and revelling in the warmth of his skin against hers.
"I have the rest of the day off," she said timidly.
"I have no plans......" he left off, her lips meeting his in a soft kiss.
"Then lets use the time we have then" Nienna whispered huskily, throwing the hankie to the floor and pushing him back onto her bed.
"Why wait till tonight?" he grinned back. She smiled as she straddled him, and still fully clothed, bucked her hips forward, earning a satisfied groan from his throat. She smiled devilishly and did it again, this time feeling the bulge underneath her grow larger. She slowly started to unlace his loose shirt, running her cool hands over his tight pale skin. He simply lay there, letting her have her fun.
"Enjoying yourself?" he asked.
"Much," she replied, leaning over him and placing her hands either sides of his body. She bent in to kiss him, but he turned his head and began to kiss her neck, reaching to undo the front of her dress. She pulled away, still straddling him and wagging her finger.
"Wait till your turn" she said, stroking her hand down his exposed chest before ripping it off him and throwing it to the floor. She felt him tighten beneath her.
"So you like a bit of feistiness then?" she asked. She bent down and unleashed her tongue all over his upper torso, his lips, his neck, his body......
Legolas groaned and gripped the sides of the bed as she did the most wonderful things to him. She sat up once more, panting, her chest rising and falling in a seductive manner. Legolas could not take it anymore; he reached forward and tore off the laces on the front of her dress, ripping it open to reveal her milky white skin, her perfect bosom waiting to be touched.
"You are an angel," he exclaimed, reaching forward and cupping her breasts. She moved her legs and rolled them both over so he was on top, pressed against her. He placed his hands either side of them both, and leaned down to whisper in her ear:
"I will dream of you every night and we shall fulfil our fantasies when I return,"
Nienna shivered slightly and smiled warmly. She propped herself up with her elbows, effectively rubbing and pushing her breasts against his body. He groaned once more, putting a hand behind her head and pulling her towards him. She searched his face, following little lines and smooth skin.
"What?" he breathed.
"Just printing a memory of you, into my mind. I don't know why I would, but I don't want to forget you," Nienna said, brushing his long hair away form his face. He turned his head to the side and looked at his tunic on the floor. Nienna followed his gaze and cupped the side of his face, turning it to her.
"Please, lets share the time we have together, do it for us,"
US. That word echoed in Legolas' head as she kissed his neck. So she wanted to continue with the relationship? He smiled at her and moved off her so he was resting on his elbow beside her. He used he free hand to slip the top of her dress right off her, letting her wriggle out of the skirt part. The dress was added to his tunic.
She pressed her naked body against his half naked one. Slowly, she grinded her hip against his groin, earning a loud open mouthed moan. She loved that sound and repeated her action again. Legolas rid himself of his trousers, leaving them both naked. Slowly, he ran a single finger down from her chin to her sex. He drifted the finger lazily over her and she sighed, longing for more.
"Make it last......" she whispered......
He thrust a single finger into her and she grasped his back with her nails, leaving little marks.
"Mmmm, oh god, oh Valar, touch me! GODDD!" Nienna moaned as he probed her with his slender finger, adding another. He obeyed her command, pressing down on her nub with his thumb, enjoying her loud sigh and feeling her fluids soak his hand.
"God, that was good!" she exclaimed, releasing her tight grip from his back and stroking his silky hair that cascaded over them both.
He smiled and looked downwards to his body. Nienna understood his gesture and pushed him off her with a strong shove. He landed next to her and she immediately straddled his legs leaving his crotch open to her. He was ready.
She gripped his length with one hand, moving up and down it a few times until a bead of pre-cum formed. She gladly bent over him and licked it off with a sharp pointy tongue.
"Nienna!" he whispered hoarsely, a large smile forming on his face as he stared at the carved ceiling.
She took his whole length into her mouth and proceeded to suck and lick, moving her head around and following him as he gripped her head with his beautiful hands. After a short while, he could no longer take the heat building up inside of him and he warned her before releasing into her mouth. She swallowed before throwing her head back, her hair whipping into the air.
"That was......" Legolas panted as he pulled her up to his side, placing tiny kissed all over her. They lay together until they got their breath back.
"What shall we do, wait till tonight?"
"Under the stars......"
"I know just the spot," finished Legolas, turning to his lover and smiling.
Sorry guys, but I wanted to have the next chapter really good you know? And if anyone has suggestions to when where how etc, u can get my email on my profile page. Please keep reading, you keep me going! Nikee xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx