crescente nuwedes: well at least some people are sending me preview even it's only three… well here's the summary before I give you the story.
Summary:
Long ago there was a war between people, heron and the divine celestials. And that war was over until some people, heron and celestials joined forces because they didn't like the people who was taking control they killed the two kings of both party and that all begun... different people but one mission is to save the world and they succeed…. Twenty centuries later the ancient war between the three kinds will start again in the new generations.
Note: Tyson, Max and Oliver are girl's here there girly names are Takeno, Maxine and Olivia.
The couples are Tyson/Kai, Max/Rei, Oliver/Enrique, Mariah/Kevin, Emily/Michael and if you want male pairing you can suggest some.
(_) Reminders
*_* Thoughts
And tell me the truth if my story is lame or lamer.
Here goes!
They were in the airplane Max and Rei sitting together behind them is Tyson and Kai, Mariah and Emily, Michael and Robert, Oliver and Enrique. To the other side were Mr. Dickenson and Kenny, Steve and Gary, Tala and Spencer, Bryan and Ian, lee and Eddie. All of them are thinking what they will do in Egypt.
" Hey guys isn't Egypt full of desert." Enrique asked.
" Yes, Egypt is the world's wonderful places and many explorers all over the world go there to find out more mysteries about the world's past." Kenny said amuse.
" Not only that Kenny… Egypt is the center of the great battle that took twenty centuries ago the war ended about two year and the three clans agreed to have peace for the future. But it was cut short about two months when the three kings of the clans died in the middle of the ceremony it took four years, six months and seventeen days when the war ended you know." Tyson said.
" Whoa! Are you really Tyson and how in the world you know that!" Emily asked.
" It's because I've been there and I have to listen to dad's boring lecture." Tyson said while rolling his eyes.
" And I can't believe you actually remember those lectures!" Michael said.
" Hey Tyson!" Oliver said.
" Yeah?"
" Can I talk to you… alone."
" Sure, follow me."
And then they left. They went to the kitchen (hey it's a private plane)
" What you want to talk about Oliver?" Tyson asked.
" Your dad knows I'm a girl right?" Oliver asked.
" Yes, he knows don't worry about that Olivia."
" I know but Takeno sooner or later they'll know who we are?" Oliver said worried.
Tyson sigh before saying, " Even thought they know that can't keep us for hiding our true selves and besides were not the only two who were girls here."
" Really? Who?"
" Max, Mrs. Judy told me about it but Max doesn't know and don't tell Max or Mrs. Judy okay?"
" Sure, we better go back before they get suspicious."
The flight took about four hours when they arrived. They saw Tyson's father waiting for them when…
" Tyson pwede ba kita makausap" = Tyson may I talk to you? = Bruce said. (CN: I don't know how to speak in Egypt that's why I'm using this language)
" Sure"
The others weren't sure what they talk about but they know it's important so they went to the hotel to rest.
At Tyson and his Father.
" Tyson there's some writing that I couldn't understand." Bruce said.
" And you want me to translate it?"
" Yes."
" Dad I have to tell you something it's about the book that you gave me at the party." Tyson said.
" What about the book Takeno?" Bruce said worried.
" Well ever since you gave me that book I've been dreaming about a blue haired girl not only that." Takeno gather all her courage to say this. " I read the book."
" What d-do you mean?"
" I understand what it says is like I'm a part of it not only that I been having some vision that I couldn't understand and I believe that something is going to happen." Takeno said while looking straight to her father telling she's telling the truth.
" I guess your friends have to go to the ruins tomorrow then."
" Are you sure about that?"
" Yeah, they have the right to know if danger was really coming."
After that Tyson followed his friends to the hotel where he saw them. Rei was rubbing his cheek and Max was sitting a bit red while Mrs. Judy was scolding Max.
// Looks like they got to a rough fight? //
// Yeah and look like Max is angry Mistress. // Dragoon said.
" What happened while I'm gone?" Tyson asked.
" Well, it started…." Spencer started.
~ Earlier ~
" Wow" Rei stated.
" Cool hotel these guys have." Kevin said amused.
" Hey guys a little help here?" Max said.
" Sure I'll give you a hand there." Rei said.
And with that Rei did help Max carried the luggage but when they were about to put the luggage down Rei accidentally trip over and with that Max also was push down with Rei on top worst his left hand was on Max left chest and Rei felt a very soft in Max chest and Rei realized that Max was a girl and Rei saw Max's eyes twitching and wanted to scream instead Max slapped Rei so hard that Reid's cheek was burning red and with this Mrs. Judy's face was red angry.
~ End Flashback~
" And that's what happened." Spencer ended his story.
" I see… I guess Max will be staying with Mrs. Judy then." Tyson stated.
With that they went to their rooms and rested. Tyson and Oliver talk for a little while.
" Hey Tyson what did you and your father talk about?" Oliver asked.
" About those ancient writing again… tomorrow we'll be going to the ruins and believe me it's beautiful there." Tyson said.
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