crescente nuwedes: oh well exams is almost in the way so it will take long to update cause I want to pass to do that I have to study hard well…. I almost forgot about silverykitsune if alright I'm gonna post what you send me here kei? Kei!
Oh yeah before I forgot I want the description of the bit beast especially from the majestic, all-stars, white tiger and the demolition boys. Please sugar and raspberry on top. Thanks!!
Silverykitsune: ?? Max hit Rei? That's a different way of expressing there
hate...especially something girlish ^^
Max: Well...I am a girl in this fanfic...
Rei: ::got the red mark from Max:: Max~~
Max: Well Rei, never mess with me, or you get hit from me, and my mom
can't stop me from hitting you this time.
Rei: ::sweat drop::
Silverykitsune: Meow? I can't remember long sentences...
Max: ::sigh::
Rei: ::envelopes Max into a hug::
Max: ::lay his head on his shoulder:: I'm sleepy...
Well here's the summary....
Summary:
Long ago there was a war between people, heron and the divine celestials. And that war was over until some people, heron and celestials joined forces because they didn't like the people who was taking control they killed the two kings of both party and that all begun... different people but one mission is to save the world and they succeed…. Twenty centuries later the ancient war between the three kinds will start again in the new generations.
Note: Tyson, Max and Olivier are girl's here there girly names are Takeno, Maxine and Olivia.
The couples are Tyson/Kai, Max/Rei, Olivier/Enrique, Mariah/Kevin, Emily/Michael and if you want male pairing you can suggest some.
//_// Talking to bit beast and masters/mistress
(_) Reminders
*_* Thoughts
[_ ] different language ( I don't know any language but English and tagalong and a little Japanese and Chinese okay!)
And tell me the truth if my story is lame or lamer
" Were here!" Mrs. Judy said.
" Glad of it…" Max uttered.
" Come on Max it was accident! Please I beg your forgiveness!" Rei pleading.
" I think you should forgive him Max and beside he doesn't know you're a girl." Olivier reasoned out.
" Are you with him or with me?" Max asked.
" With Max I was just… Oh! Never mind!" Olivier said.
" There you guys are come on you must see this!" Bruce exclaimed.
" Oh! Brother [ Next time I'm going here I better bring my hood to hide on…" Tyson said.
" What?!" The others question except for Olivier who was grinning.
" [ Well next time I'll buy you one but not a hood… a crying mask should match your attitude] isn't Tyson." Olivier said sarcastically.
" Very funny Oli-vier!" Tyson replied in a mimicked voice.
" They actually speak in different language?" Lee said.
" It must be Egyptian speaking?" Gary asked.
" I don't know I never heard of those language before…" Emily said.
" Come on guys these two are leaving us already!" Ian shouted.
When they went inside the ruins their mouths almost drop out. The surroundings was beautiful simply wonderful ancient writing that's was so old seem that they were left untouched by the world outside. A sudden picture caught their eyes that were so old some of the writings were gone.
" Wondering what's that?" Bruce asked.
All of them nodded except from Tyson and Olivier. Mrs. Judy, Mr. Tate and Mr. Dickenson also appeared in the corner who was interested to listen at Tyson's dad.
" Those pictures were your bit beast they looked exactly like you but there's a difference… they came in different two kinds. The other kind was mysterious actually their sacred they are called Celestials, they are people who doesn't like the outside world…" Bruce ended there for their questions.
" You mean that Celestials aren't like the two kingdom?" Emily asked.
" And if they don't like the outside world where do they stay and survived?" Kenny asked next.
" What will they do if an outsider came in their place or they have been outcast by the leader?" Mrs. Judy asked the last question.
" It's because… umm Tyson a little help here?" Bruce said with this Tyson sighed.
" Celestials have powers that is no match for the two kinds they decided to keep away because the two kinds abuse their power so they decide to hide… they hide in the mountain actually they made the mountain and inside of it is a city like a garden if you live at it, it was beautiful and about your question Mrs. Judy if an outsider get in the sacred place it depends." Tyson said.
" What do mean it depends?" Mr. Tate questioned.
" What condition are you but sometimes they killed them or erased there memory about the place they usually use that and if someone betray them well they take away his power and banish him from the sacred place called Emerald." Bruce said.
" Have you still uncovered some secrets about the ancient war Mr. Bruce." Tala asked.
" No I haven't." Bruce said while sweat dropping.
" He haven't interpret those writings yet? Haven't you dad?" Tyson asked.
" Well I…" Bruce sweat dropped a bit embarrassed. " Yeah your right I haven't I was waiting for you.. you have straight A's and you know how to interpret them as well-"
" O-Kay that's enough dad how about you guy's explore if you want to split up then does it and dad." Tyson said.
" Yes son?"
" Don't talk to much it's irritating really dad." Tyson said.
" Well… let's split up so we could enjoy the sights more." Mariah and Emily said in the same time.
" How about go in partner's am with Spencer." Tala said.
" I'm with Gary." Steve.
" Emily." Michael said while smiling.
" WHAT! Oh well I'm pairing with him." Emily sighs.
" YES!" Michael shouted.
" I'll be going with Johnny I don't want to be paired with Enrique." Robert said.
" Me too Robert." Johnny said.
" HEY!!!" Enrique shouted.
Olivier was laugh at Enrique for acting like a kid.
" Don't worry Enrique I'll paired up with you." Olivier said still laughing.
" I'll be pairing up with Kevin is that okay brother?" Mariah asked.
" Sure I'll be pairing with Eddie." Lee said.
" I'm with Ian." Bryan said.
" I'm always paired up with you!" Ian whine.
" Deal with it big nose!"
" Freak!"
" Stop it!" Tala shouted.
" I'm going with Mr. Dickenson right?" Kenny asked.
" Yes your right." Mr. Dickenson replied.
" Hey Tyson can I" Max pleaded.
" Sorry Max Kai's will be going along with Kenny and Mr. Dickenson and you have only Rei left to be partner for?" Tyson said.
" Come on Tyson!" Bruce shouted.
" Coming! Sheesh he always rush things well gotta go Max bye!" Tyson said and went to his father.
The others already left with their partners and the only one's left was Max and Rei. They stayed quiet and started walk around.
~ Rei's POV~
*I got to talk to her I got to say sorry or I'm gonna die if I won't. damn she's so beautiful if you look at her very close. Good thing that Tyson agreed with me to set this up. I'm getting nervous around her and why in seven hells I can't tell her that I'm sorry… do I like her more than a friend…* I sigh as I walk behind her and watch her look at the writings with amusement with her eyes. And I though it was the perfect time to tell her. * Tyson's right I'm in love with her ever since I saw her. I didn't know Max was a girl and I know that publicity doesn't like gays so I thought oh well… here goes.*
" Max…" I said a bit nervous.
She turns around and looks at me.
~ Max POV~
*I got a feeling that Rei persuade Tyson into pairing me with him… beside he's been awfully quiet he doesn't even plead for his forgiveness and why am I saying this I'm glad he stop its irritating… funny thing thought I kinda like him when I first saw him heck why am I thinking of him I don't like him a bit… he's been staring at my back for hours when we started to walk… I kinda like to hear his voice again… guess Tyson right again I do love him when I first saw him… I better say sorry to him I kinda treated him a bit hard… okay harsh if you put it that way I have been ignoring his pleas and presence… oh well hear goes.* I still hesitated to talk to him when…
" Max…" He sounded a bit nervous.
I knew what's he going to say and I decided that I better turn around and tell him I really feel. I turn around but I froze when I saw him * Damn this is too difficult than I thought.
~ normal POV~
Max and Rei were locked in each other's eyes when they didn't notice that their breathing was too close… Rei lift his hands ( CN: okay this is it Max and Rei moment!) into Max's cheek while Max is still locked at Rei eyes.
" I'm sorry Max I didn't know you were a girl if I know I'll never want to do that to you." Rei said while touching Max's cheek.
" It's okay I'm sorry too… I… I wasn't supposed to do that you didn't you and yet I slap you I'm sorry Rei the truth is I…" Max said while touching the hand that Rei lift to touch her cheek.
" I really like you!" They both said and stared at each other.
Rei wasn't really thinking but put his face closer to Max to get closer to her face while Max saw what Rei's doing suddenly Max started to close her eyes slowly while Rei's lips was so close to Max's and felt their breathing was so close they were about to kiss…
" AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" Someone scream so loud. That cause Max and Rei jumped away from each other and started to run where the scream was.
crescente nuwedes: thought I'm going to let them kiss can't do that! Well you'll be surprised who scream and who did it!
I'll like to thanks to the people who sent reviews and I don't care if its only few besides at least I'm glad this idea and I thank for the writer's who inspired me to write this story shall I name them of course their my inspiration here they are:
Hitawara_kai
Ojamajo Doremi DOKKAN
Darkspider
Maria Christina
And special thanks for Max Mizuhara for giving me the details THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH THANKS!!!
Oh yeah before I forgot kindly described me the bit beast of the majestic, all-stars, white tigers and the demolition boys and again thank you and keep those reviews going! Thanks.