Kitty Kibbles: Hey everybody! I'm glad to see that most of you liked this
fic ( and thank you for all the constructive criticism that you offered. I
fixed the first chapter so you may want to re-read it ( it now includes
some changes that you all offered ( Enjoy!!
Etcy
The fire of the sun rose slowly over the hill tops on the remote countryside, as the dawn finally arrived. The sun couldn't send its rays into the tank that the fiery woman was contained in, but it wouldn't matter anyway, she'd been awake before the sun.
She was found pacing back and forth in her small confines, for she knew this was the day she would get to see her baby. The one that was forced upon her, but she wanted him all the same. It was her's...she'd never had something that belonged to her. This would be something special.
The door creaked open behind her as a petite little nurse sashayed into the room holding the tiny baby. The woman dashed over to the nurse, her black hair shinning in the artificial lighting. A wide smile came across her face as she saw the furry form wiggling in its wrap. She looked up at the nurse unable to contain her smile.
"My precious baby boy! Oh! He's so beautiful." She lifted the child from the nurse's arms and held him tightly to her bosom. She gently caressed his furry face with a dainty hand.
The poor young nurse smiled, though somewhat confused and finally broke the silence with her question. "Nicole, how did you know it was a boy? You can't even see his entire body. He's all wrapped up." Her question glance was meant by a warm smile.
Nicole shrugged still entranced by her son. "I guess it's just a mother's intuition." She smiled and returned to her creation's gaze. "Bethany?" Nicole regarded the nurse, "You are the only one here who treats me with any dignity or decency whatsoever! I wanted to just thank you for your kindness. It means so much to me, when I'm stuck here with all this hate and despair." Bethany smiled but gave no response. "Could you please leave us alone for a bit?" Nicole's pleading tone could not go unanswered. "I'd just like some time alone with my baby." Nicole looked at the microphone place in the tank so the scientists could hear her. She got up close to the mic and screamed into it, "And would you also ask those good for nothing doctors to leave me the hell alone!" She smiled and giggled at her accomplishment to have hopefully deafened them for quite a while.
Bethany giggled along with Nicole and finally turned to leave, "Nicole, he's a beautiful baby, by the way." The door shut and the beep of the electronic lock could be heard. Nicole sighed at the sound, but immediately brought her attention back to the infant in her arms.
The black and white baby looked around the room with curiosity, as any kitten or feline would. His bright blue eyes looked into Nicole's and he gurgled a baby laugh and attempted to break free from his wrap. She laughed at his antics and quickly unwrapped him to get a better look.
His pattern was remarkable! She'd never seen a real cat whose coat looked as if he were wearing a tuxedo! The ebony fur sparkled as he became comfortable in his mother's clutch. His tail was the blackest of black with a white tip that looked as if it had been dipped in a can of paint.
"Well! You are a handsome boy, aren't you?" She cooed and tickled his belly with her fingers. In playfulness, he pawed at her fingers while giggling and caught one of her fingers with a claw making her barely bleed. She pulled back in a little shock and analyzed her finger. "You little devil kitten!" She laughed at his antics and sat in a rocking chair that was placed in the corner near her bed. "You need a name my little fiend." She quickly relaxed and rocked the baby while humming a sweet tune that her mother had sung to her as a child. She lay her head back on the cushioned pillow and thought for a moment of a name that suited the rascal in her arms.
"I've got it!" She smiled with enthusiasm at her brilliant name. "You'll be my little Mistoffelees...or is it Mephistopheles? Oh well I think Mistoffelees sounds much better don't you?" she asked the sleepy kitten in her arms. "And you will be named for your..." she looked at her finger, "devilish ways." She chuckled and cuddled him closer to her.
Mistoffelees let a squeak of a yawn escape his lips and showed white stubs of where fangs would shortly appear. He gently rubbed his nose into the baby blue terry cloth of the robe that fit Nicole's now slender form. A soft purr could be heard rumbling from his tiny chest as Nicole lifted him and herself onto the bed that was provided for her. She quietly pulled the sheets over them and protectively held him to her chest as they both quickly fell into a peaceful slumber.
Etcy
The fire of the sun rose slowly over the hill tops on the remote countryside, as the dawn finally arrived. The sun couldn't send its rays into the tank that the fiery woman was contained in, but it wouldn't matter anyway, she'd been awake before the sun.
She was found pacing back and forth in her small confines, for she knew this was the day she would get to see her baby. The one that was forced upon her, but she wanted him all the same. It was her's...she'd never had something that belonged to her. This would be something special.
The door creaked open behind her as a petite little nurse sashayed into the room holding the tiny baby. The woman dashed over to the nurse, her black hair shinning in the artificial lighting. A wide smile came across her face as she saw the furry form wiggling in its wrap. She looked up at the nurse unable to contain her smile.
"My precious baby boy! Oh! He's so beautiful." She lifted the child from the nurse's arms and held him tightly to her bosom. She gently caressed his furry face with a dainty hand.
The poor young nurse smiled, though somewhat confused and finally broke the silence with her question. "Nicole, how did you know it was a boy? You can't even see his entire body. He's all wrapped up." Her question glance was meant by a warm smile.
Nicole shrugged still entranced by her son. "I guess it's just a mother's intuition." She smiled and returned to her creation's gaze. "Bethany?" Nicole regarded the nurse, "You are the only one here who treats me with any dignity or decency whatsoever! I wanted to just thank you for your kindness. It means so much to me, when I'm stuck here with all this hate and despair." Bethany smiled but gave no response. "Could you please leave us alone for a bit?" Nicole's pleading tone could not go unanswered. "I'd just like some time alone with my baby." Nicole looked at the microphone place in the tank so the scientists could hear her. She got up close to the mic and screamed into it, "And would you also ask those good for nothing doctors to leave me the hell alone!" She smiled and giggled at her accomplishment to have hopefully deafened them for quite a while.
Bethany giggled along with Nicole and finally turned to leave, "Nicole, he's a beautiful baby, by the way." The door shut and the beep of the electronic lock could be heard. Nicole sighed at the sound, but immediately brought her attention back to the infant in her arms.
The black and white baby looked around the room with curiosity, as any kitten or feline would. His bright blue eyes looked into Nicole's and he gurgled a baby laugh and attempted to break free from his wrap. She laughed at his antics and quickly unwrapped him to get a better look.
His pattern was remarkable! She'd never seen a real cat whose coat looked as if he were wearing a tuxedo! The ebony fur sparkled as he became comfortable in his mother's clutch. His tail was the blackest of black with a white tip that looked as if it had been dipped in a can of paint.
"Well! You are a handsome boy, aren't you?" She cooed and tickled his belly with her fingers. In playfulness, he pawed at her fingers while giggling and caught one of her fingers with a claw making her barely bleed. She pulled back in a little shock and analyzed her finger. "You little devil kitten!" She laughed at his antics and sat in a rocking chair that was placed in the corner near her bed. "You need a name my little fiend." She quickly relaxed and rocked the baby while humming a sweet tune that her mother had sung to her as a child. She lay her head back on the cushioned pillow and thought for a moment of a name that suited the rascal in her arms.
"I've got it!" She smiled with enthusiasm at her brilliant name. "You'll be my little Mistoffelees...or is it Mephistopheles? Oh well I think Mistoffelees sounds much better don't you?" she asked the sleepy kitten in her arms. "And you will be named for your..." she looked at her finger, "devilish ways." She chuckled and cuddled him closer to her.
Mistoffelees let a squeak of a yawn escape his lips and showed white stubs of where fangs would shortly appear. He gently rubbed his nose into the baby blue terry cloth of the robe that fit Nicole's now slender form. A soft purr could be heard rumbling from his tiny chest as Nicole lifted him and herself onto the bed that was provided for her. She quietly pulled the sheets over them and protectively held him to her chest as they both quickly fell into a peaceful slumber.