Hello one and all! Thanks for reviewing my story thus far! I've been having
fun, and I plan on making this story a long one, consisting of romance,
romantic drama, angst, and the like. It's a Yaoi, so if you don't like that
type of stuff, then don't read this story, lol. I'm sorry if the monolog
isn't as good as some people, but I promise it will get better as time goes
on, and I promise things will get MUCH better in the next chapter, which is
coming VERY soon. It will consist of a deeper plot, explaining more, and
will be one of the best chapters in this story...or I'm hoping at least, lol.
Well...that's it for now. I will have shout-outs at the end of the chapter.
Thanks again everyone! Later days!
Disclaimer: I own none of the characters in this story. They belong to the original storywriter, Yukiru Sugisaki, published by TOKYOPOP. (Sorry it took so long to put in a disclaimer, and I'll add one every few chapters, to keep it up to date.)
Love Hurts
By: Chris Golden
Ch. 3, Feelings and Enlightenment
"Admit it! You like him! You like the Prince of Frost!"
"No! Just leave me alone! GO AWAY!"
"You like him, why don't you just admit it already?"
"I don't! Just stop...please...please just stop..."
"Stop!" screamed Daisuke as he jutted upward from his sleep on the bus seat.
"Whoa!" exclaimed a surprised Satoshi, jumping back from the punch Daisuke through, just missing his face.
Daisuke blinked a few times, confused as to what was going on. He peered around the back of the bus, glimpsing into the puzzled eyes of Risa and Riku, and then to Satoshi's ice pools. He couldn't understand what they were looking at, until he noticed his outstretched fist, clamped tightly. He blushed, pulling it back, curling up into the seat. That's when he noticed they were at the mall and the bus driver was waiting for them to step off of the bus.
"Are you okay Daisuke-san?" questioned Satoshi confusedly.
"Huh? What? Uh...yeah, I'm fine. Just a bad dream...," mumbled a sleepy Daisuke, rubbing his ruby orbs.
"Well, we've been trying to wake you up for like, ten minutes!" said Riku firmly with an annoyed smile on her face, "And now we've lost almost fifteen minutes of good mall time. Now march your sleepy ass off the bus, Niwa-san, before I kick it!"
Daisuke gulped as he stood up and stretched. He straightened out his shirt, smoothing out the wrinkles, and stepped off the bus. He sighed with relief as his foot met the concrete of the parking lot, but was quickly turned into a gasp as he clumsily tripped over the curb, and fell towards the grass. Daisuke squinted his eyes, bracing himself for impact, yet never made contact. He peaked his eyes open, and blinked in confusion. He was hovering a mere foot above the grass. Turning his head around, he locked eyes with Satoshi, who was grinning and shaking his head. Daisuke felt himself being pulled upward, and was sat down on his feet, expected to catch his own balance. After regaining his footing, he turned to Satoshi who was still holding onto his chest by his underarms. He couldn't believe how right it felt to be in his arms, feeling a warm tingly sensation surge through his body as he absorbed the moment. Glancing down at Satoshi's arms, he noticed how perfectly built his arms were. He flushed a bright red, as crimson as his hair, and peered at Satoshi, who let go of him, much to Daisuke's dismay. Daisuke carefully climbed up the steps to the mall entrance with care, as Satoshi talked calmly with the girls.
"Wow Satoshi! You're so sweet! I wish I could have a boyfriend like you! You're a regular prince charming!" clapped a happy Risa.
"Yeah Hiwatari-san! A true 'Night In Shining Armor'!" chimed in Riku, with a grin from ear to ear.
"Thanks girls, but it's nothing big. Daisuke here is just out of it today. I'm sure he's not minding the attention though..." said Satoshi calmly as he looked at Daisuke from the corner of his eye, wearing a small smile on his face that made the girls practically melt on the asphalt stairs.
Daisuke winced, and flushed red once again. He blocked out his thoughts, thinking of where he wanted to go, just so Dark couldn't chime in with his sarcastic comments. He immediately remembered that he had a shirt on hold at AE Japan, and a video game on lay away at EB Games of Japan, so he quickened his pace until he reached the top of the stairs, and waited at the large metal and glass doors for his friends, holding one open.
"Thanks Daisuke!" said Riku happily.
"Yes, thank you," said Risa in a low voice, smiling.
Satoshi just nodded at Daisuke, who nodded in return. They all walked into the gigantic entrance of Tokyo Millennia, and were bathed in the cold air-conditioned atmosphere. They peered around, talking happily as they strolled down the first short hallway. Once they came to the fork, they all stopped and sat down on the edge of the black marble fountain. The fountain's statue was of two angels, one darker then the other, embracing one another in loving passion, yet holding daggers to one another's throat. Daisuke took note of this, for it was the first time he had noticed it's appearance in a different way. His attention was quickly brought back to his friends as Riku poked his chest in annoyance.
"Daisuke-san! Anyone home?" asked Riku with a look of confusion on her face, mixed with annoyance.
"Huh? Oh, yeah I'm here. I was just thinking. What now?" he blurted, not really caring for what was going on.
"Okay well, we need to know what everyone wants to do. Should we all stay together and take longer with what we want to do, or should we split up and do what we all need to do first and then meet up to finish off together, or just split off and periodically meet, or what?" stated Riku almost slurring from talking so fast, making Daisuke a little dizzy.
"Heh, well, I think we should get done what we each need to get done now, and then have fun together, that way it's more fun. Sound good?" beamed Daisuke, smiling happily at Riku.
"That's great! See Risa, I told you he'd decide for us!" gloated Riku with a look of arrogance in her eyes.
"So, we all split here, do what we need to do, and then meet back here right afterwards, na?" asked Satoshi, trying to get the conversation over with quickly.
"Yes," blurted Risa swiftly, "Me and Riku need to go check something real quick, and we'll meet you guys back here."
"Okay. I need to go pick up a chip for my computer at the electronic store, so I'll only be a few as well. What about you Daisuke?" said Satoshi with a warm stare.
"I just have to pick up a shirt and a video game, but it won't take long," said Daisuke blankly.
They all stood up with nods, and went their separate ways, each in a different direction.
Satoshi walked quietly into the electronic store, and winced in annoyance as the "ding" of the door went off.
"Welcome to Electronic Comp.!" called one of the employee's to Satoshi, who just nodded in reply.
He walked to the back of the store and searched the self for what he was looking for. It took him all about ten seconds to scan the ten foot by five foot rack to find what he was looking for. He picked it up, being the last one on the shelf, and sauntered over to the check out line to buy it. Once he reached the cashier, he handed her the box with a blank look on his face. The cashier gave him a puzzled look, with a bit of sweat on her forehead.
"You okay kid? You have like, no emotion in your eyes," said the girl calmly.
"I'm fine, just not in a good mood. How much is it?" blurted Satoshi, a bit annoyed.
"Oh, sorry! It's $43.69. Will that be it?" questioned the cashier, sounding a little nervous.
"No, that's all. Oh, and a small bag please," said Satoshi blankly, handing the cashier the Yen.
"Here you are sir. Have a nice day..." uttered the cashier, handing him the bag with a shaky hand.
Satoshi stuffed the bag into his little brown backpack and strolled out of the store, wanting to get away from the stares of the people still in line.
'What the hell did I do anyway?' Satoshi asked himself.
'Maybe they knew you were gay, and were wanting you out the establishment or something,' taunted Krad with a smirk that made Satoshi red with annoyance.
'Oh screw off and shut up, Krad. Just mind your own damn business for one frigging day,' blurted Satoshi mentally at his alter ego.
'Yeah, whatever Icy. You just have fun with your precious Daisuke- kun,' said Krad with a smile as he snuck into the darkness of Satoshi's mind.
Satoshi sighed with relief as he stood in the middle of the walkway, people looking at him with odd gazes. He just rolled his eyes and walked down towards the black marble fountain, he thoughts drifting to Daisuke.
Daisuke strolled down the long east hallway of Japan Millennia, his eyes shifting periodically from side to side, checking out what new items stores were advertising in the display windows. Nothing interesting caught his eyes, until he saw two children running around a large potted plant in an enclosed area set with tables and chairs. One of the children, was a boy with short crimson colored hair, smiling happily as he chased the other boy. The boy being chased bore an arctic shade of hair, longer then the scarlet haired child. They both giggled happily as they circled the plant, calling to one another in giddy voices. This caused Daisuke to smile, his mind drifting to Satoshi and how he can't stand not being able to hold onto him under the covers of Satoshi's bed. His thought's caused the annoying churning in his groin yet again, making him pout, turning his glance forward just in time to step out of the way of a tall, dark haired man running through the walkway. Time seemed to almost pause briefly as the man passed Daisuke, their eyes meeting, and then resuming as two mall police chased after the raven-haired man.
"Stop! Thief!" cried one of the mall police, expecting someone to actually be able to help.
Daisuke grinned, remembering all the times he was in a similar situation at the Hiwatari family's art museum, being run down by Satoshi's squad as Dark laughed maniacally jumping through the nearest window. He turned forward again and continued his journey to the walkway's end. After arriving at AE Japan, Daisuke sauntered to the counter and smiled happily at the cashier.
"Konichiwa Yuri-san!" greeted Daisuke with a beaming smile on his face.
"Konichiwa Daisuke-san," replied Yuri happily, smiling contently at Daisuke.
"Is my shirt still here? I finally have the Yen," asked Daisuke with a small laugh.
"Of course Daisuke-san, I've been saving it for you. You're lucky, I could get in trouble for doing this," said Yuri, smiling calmly.
"I'm sorry for troubling you Yuri-san. But...I'm in a bit of a hurry, so I can't talk today. I'm with friends, and they're probably waiting for me, so I'll try and come around later on," said Daisuke happily.
"It's no problem for you. You're my best, and favorite customer," smiled Yuri.
"Cool, thanks. It's still $30 right?" asked with Daisuke, smiling nervously.
"Actually, it's on sale now. 35% off. So it's $20.50," giggled Yuri.
"No way!? Totally awesome! Now I can buy something else!" exclaimed Daisuke, giggling happily.
Daisuke handed Yuri the Yen, and waited for her to put it into the register and print the receipt. After the receipt was printed, Yuri folded the shirt neatly and put it into a bag with the receipt and handed it to Daisuke, still smiling happily.
"Thanks Yuri-san," mumbled Daisuke, his thoughts drifting around Satoshi.
"Your welcome Daisuke-san...You have a dreamy look in your eyes. Does that mean what I think it means?" asked Yuri with an evil smile, poking Daisuke's forehead. Daisuke gulped, swallowing hard.
"Uh-n-no! You know me, daydreaming as usual. Heh, heh..." stumbled Daisuke, trying to cover up his front side with the bag.
"Mm-hmm...Sure. Well, have a nice day Daisuke-san. Come again," said Yuri with a wink.
"L-later Yuri-san!" replied Daisuke as he toddled out the store's entrance.
After reaching the walkway, Daisuke wiped his forehead with a sigh of relief. He put a finger to his chin thinking, pondering what to do next.
"Oh! The game! My bad," Daisuke mumbled to himself.
Daisuke strolled down the hallway once more, reaching several stores down from AE Japan and across the way, and walked through the buzzer entry of EB Games of Japan. He asked the cashier for his game, and paid, walking out the door stuffing the game into his clothing bag. As he walked down the walkway, he held his hands behind his head, elbows extended, and allowed his thoughts to drift once again. He peered ahead of him, as to not run into anyone or anything as he swam in his own thoughts.
'Why don't you just marry him for crying-out-loud?' asked Dark out of nowhere.
'Because he doesn't like me like that, and he probably never will. Where did that come from anyway?' replied Daisuke as he zoned.
'Well, every time I go to talk to you, you're thinking of Satoshi. It's like you're in love with him or something,' stated Dark.
'Yeah well...I don't, thank you very much. I don't know what I think. Plus, it's none of your damn business, so do me a favor and don't worry about it,' blurted Daisuke mentally, annoyance in his voice.
'Whatever kid. You keep telling yourself that. I forget what I wanted to tell you anyhow. Talk to you later...' sighed Dark, once again sliding into the corner of Daisuke's mind.
Daisuke continued to walk down the breezeway, his tongue sticking out in boredom. He thought to himself about what Dark had said, and about what he had been feeling the past few days.
"Could...it be...love? Why must my life be so complicated...?" Daisuke whispered to himself.
He kept his pace, his mind drifting in the notions of his feelings.
Hello everyone! How did you like the chapter? I'm sorry again for the monolog, it could be better, but if you disagree, let me know! I need to know what to improve on for future chapters. Speaking of which, anyone have any ideas for the next chapter or one in the future? I'll make sure that you get a shout-out and named for the idea, promise. And don't be afraid to put negative things in the review section. I know how to take it, lol. Well...I guess that's it for my "editor's note"...now for the shout-outs! Later days!
Jade Starr: MY BESTEST FRIEND Nicki!!! She's my editor, and I'd be lost without her! Read her stories, they're totally awesome, and she's where I learned from, which means she's WAY better then me! Lol. I LOVE YOU NICKI!!!
Chibis Unleashed: You've given me a spark of inspiration to keep this story going. You and everyone else have kept my spirits up. Keep reading! Thanks!
Atealia: Thanks allot to you! Your words inspired me allot to keep the story going, and to keep up the plot that I've got going. Keep reading! Thanks!
KirbY4: Thanks for the comment, it also helped me to keep writing. Keep reading! Thanks!
Sesshymoon25: Thanks for your short comment, it was the last one that helped me get started on chapter 3. Keep reading! Thanks!
Disclaimer: I own none of the characters in this story. They belong to the original storywriter, Yukiru Sugisaki, published by TOKYOPOP. (Sorry it took so long to put in a disclaimer, and I'll add one every few chapters, to keep it up to date.)
Love Hurts
By: Chris Golden
Ch. 3, Feelings and Enlightenment
"Admit it! You like him! You like the Prince of Frost!"
"No! Just leave me alone! GO AWAY!"
"You like him, why don't you just admit it already?"
"I don't! Just stop...please...please just stop..."
"Stop!" screamed Daisuke as he jutted upward from his sleep on the bus seat.
"Whoa!" exclaimed a surprised Satoshi, jumping back from the punch Daisuke through, just missing his face.
Daisuke blinked a few times, confused as to what was going on. He peered around the back of the bus, glimpsing into the puzzled eyes of Risa and Riku, and then to Satoshi's ice pools. He couldn't understand what they were looking at, until he noticed his outstretched fist, clamped tightly. He blushed, pulling it back, curling up into the seat. That's when he noticed they were at the mall and the bus driver was waiting for them to step off of the bus.
"Are you okay Daisuke-san?" questioned Satoshi confusedly.
"Huh? What? Uh...yeah, I'm fine. Just a bad dream...," mumbled a sleepy Daisuke, rubbing his ruby orbs.
"Well, we've been trying to wake you up for like, ten minutes!" said Riku firmly with an annoyed smile on her face, "And now we've lost almost fifteen minutes of good mall time. Now march your sleepy ass off the bus, Niwa-san, before I kick it!"
Daisuke gulped as he stood up and stretched. He straightened out his shirt, smoothing out the wrinkles, and stepped off the bus. He sighed with relief as his foot met the concrete of the parking lot, but was quickly turned into a gasp as he clumsily tripped over the curb, and fell towards the grass. Daisuke squinted his eyes, bracing himself for impact, yet never made contact. He peaked his eyes open, and blinked in confusion. He was hovering a mere foot above the grass. Turning his head around, he locked eyes with Satoshi, who was grinning and shaking his head. Daisuke felt himself being pulled upward, and was sat down on his feet, expected to catch his own balance. After regaining his footing, he turned to Satoshi who was still holding onto his chest by his underarms. He couldn't believe how right it felt to be in his arms, feeling a warm tingly sensation surge through his body as he absorbed the moment. Glancing down at Satoshi's arms, he noticed how perfectly built his arms were. He flushed a bright red, as crimson as his hair, and peered at Satoshi, who let go of him, much to Daisuke's dismay. Daisuke carefully climbed up the steps to the mall entrance with care, as Satoshi talked calmly with the girls.
"Wow Satoshi! You're so sweet! I wish I could have a boyfriend like you! You're a regular prince charming!" clapped a happy Risa.
"Yeah Hiwatari-san! A true 'Night In Shining Armor'!" chimed in Riku, with a grin from ear to ear.
"Thanks girls, but it's nothing big. Daisuke here is just out of it today. I'm sure he's not minding the attention though..." said Satoshi calmly as he looked at Daisuke from the corner of his eye, wearing a small smile on his face that made the girls practically melt on the asphalt stairs.
Daisuke winced, and flushed red once again. He blocked out his thoughts, thinking of where he wanted to go, just so Dark couldn't chime in with his sarcastic comments. He immediately remembered that he had a shirt on hold at AE Japan, and a video game on lay away at EB Games of Japan, so he quickened his pace until he reached the top of the stairs, and waited at the large metal and glass doors for his friends, holding one open.
"Thanks Daisuke!" said Riku happily.
"Yes, thank you," said Risa in a low voice, smiling.
Satoshi just nodded at Daisuke, who nodded in return. They all walked into the gigantic entrance of Tokyo Millennia, and were bathed in the cold air-conditioned atmosphere. They peered around, talking happily as they strolled down the first short hallway. Once they came to the fork, they all stopped and sat down on the edge of the black marble fountain. The fountain's statue was of two angels, one darker then the other, embracing one another in loving passion, yet holding daggers to one another's throat. Daisuke took note of this, for it was the first time he had noticed it's appearance in a different way. His attention was quickly brought back to his friends as Riku poked his chest in annoyance.
"Daisuke-san! Anyone home?" asked Riku with a look of confusion on her face, mixed with annoyance.
"Huh? Oh, yeah I'm here. I was just thinking. What now?" he blurted, not really caring for what was going on.
"Okay well, we need to know what everyone wants to do. Should we all stay together and take longer with what we want to do, or should we split up and do what we all need to do first and then meet up to finish off together, or just split off and periodically meet, or what?" stated Riku almost slurring from talking so fast, making Daisuke a little dizzy.
"Heh, well, I think we should get done what we each need to get done now, and then have fun together, that way it's more fun. Sound good?" beamed Daisuke, smiling happily at Riku.
"That's great! See Risa, I told you he'd decide for us!" gloated Riku with a look of arrogance in her eyes.
"So, we all split here, do what we need to do, and then meet back here right afterwards, na?" asked Satoshi, trying to get the conversation over with quickly.
"Yes," blurted Risa swiftly, "Me and Riku need to go check something real quick, and we'll meet you guys back here."
"Okay. I need to go pick up a chip for my computer at the electronic store, so I'll only be a few as well. What about you Daisuke?" said Satoshi with a warm stare.
"I just have to pick up a shirt and a video game, but it won't take long," said Daisuke blankly.
They all stood up with nods, and went their separate ways, each in a different direction.
Satoshi walked quietly into the electronic store, and winced in annoyance as the "ding" of the door went off.
"Welcome to Electronic Comp.!" called one of the employee's to Satoshi, who just nodded in reply.
He walked to the back of the store and searched the self for what he was looking for. It took him all about ten seconds to scan the ten foot by five foot rack to find what he was looking for. He picked it up, being the last one on the shelf, and sauntered over to the check out line to buy it. Once he reached the cashier, he handed her the box with a blank look on his face. The cashier gave him a puzzled look, with a bit of sweat on her forehead.
"You okay kid? You have like, no emotion in your eyes," said the girl calmly.
"I'm fine, just not in a good mood. How much is it?" blurted Satoshi, a bit annoyed.
"Oh, sorry! It's $43.69. Will that be it?" questioned the cashier, sounding a little nervous.
"No, that's all. Oh, and a small bag please," said Satoshi blankly, handing the cashier the Yen.
"Here you are sir. Have a nice day..." uttered the cashier, handing him the bag with a shaky hand.
Satoshi stuffed the bag into his little brown backpack and strolled out of the store, wanting to get away from the stares of the people still in line.
'What the hell did I do anyway?' Satoshi asked himself.
'Maybe they knew you were gay, and were wanting you out the establishment or something,' taunted Krad with a smirk that made Satoshi red with annoyance.
'Oh screw off and shut up, Krad. Just mind your own damn business for one frigging day,' blurted Satoshi mentally at his alter ego.
'Yeah, whatever Icy. You just have fun with your precious Daisuke- kun,' said Krad with a smile as he snuck into the darkness of Satoshi's mind.
Satoshi sighed with relief as he stood in the middle of the walkway, people looking at him with odd gazes. He just rolled his eyes and walked down towards the black marble fountain, he thoughts drifting to Daisuke.
Daisuke strolled down the long east hallway of Japan Millennia, his eyes shifting periodically from side to side, checking out what new items stores were advertising in the display windows. Nothing interesting caught his eyes, until he saw two children running around a large potted plant in an enclosed area set with tables and chairs. One of the children, was a boy with short crimson colored hair, smiling happily as he chased the other boy. The boy being chased bore an arctic shade of hair, longer then the scarlet haired child. They both giggled happily as they circled the plant, calling to one another in giddy voices. This caused Daisuke to smile, his mind drifting to Satoshi and how he can't stand not being able to hold onto him under the covers of Satoshi's bed. His thought's caused the annoying churning in his groin yet again, making him pout, turning his glance forward just in time to step out of the way of a tall, dark haired man running through the walkway. Time seemed to almost pause briefly as the man passed Daisuke, their eyes meeting, and then resuming as two mall police chased after the raven-haired man.
"Stop! Thief!" cried one of the mall police, expecting someone to actually be able to help.
Daisuke grinned, remembering all the times he was in a similar situation at the Hiwatari family's art museum, being run down by Satoshi's squad as Dark laughed maniacally jumping through the nearest window. He turned forward again and continued his journey to the walkway's end. After arriving at AE Japan, Daisuke sauntered to the counter and smiled happily at the cashier.
"Konichiwa Yuri-san!" greeted Daisuke with a beaming smile on his face.
"Konichiwa Daisuke-san," replied Yuri happily, smiling contently at Daisuke.
"Is my shirt still here? I finally have the Yen," asked Daisuke with a small laugh.
"Of course Daisuke-san, I've been saving it for you. You're lucky, I could get in trouble for doing this," said Yuri, smiling calmly.
"I'm sorry for troubling you Yuri-san. But...I'm in a bit of a hurry, so I can't talk today. I'm with friends, and they're probably waiting for me, so I'll try and come around later on," said Daisuke happily.
"It's no problem for you. You're my best, and favorite customer," smiled Yuri.
"Cool, thanks. It's still $30 right?" asked with Daisuke, smiling nervously.
"Actually, it's on sale now. 35% off. So it's $20.50," giggled Yuri.
"No way!? Totally awesome! Now I can buy something else!" exclaimed Daisuke, giggling happily.
Daisuke handed Yuri the Yen, and waited for her to put it into the register and print the receipt. After the receipt was printed, Yuri folded the shirt neatly and put it into a bag with the receipt and handed it to Daisuke, still smiling happily.
"Thanks Yuri-san," mumbled Daisuke, his thoughts drifting around Satoshi.
"Your welcome Daisuke-san...You have a dreamy look in your eyes. Does that mean what I think it means?" asked Yuri with an evil smile, poking Daisuke's forehead. Daisuke gulped, swallowing hard.
"Uh-n-no! You know me, daydreaming as usual. Heh, heh..." stumbled Daisuke, trying to cover up his front side with the bag.
"Mm-hmm...Sure. Well, have a nice day Daisuke-san. Come again," said Yuri with a wink.
"L-later Yuri-san!" replied Daisuke as he toddled out the store's entrance.
After reaching the walkway, Daisuke wiped his forehead with a sigh of relief. He put a finger to his chin thinking, pondering what to do next.
"Oh! The game! My bad," Daisuke mumbled to himself.
Daisuke strolled down the hallway once more, reaching several stores down from AE Japan and across the way, and walked through the buzzer entry of EB Games of Japan. He asked the cashier for his game, and paid, walking out the door stuffing the game into his clothing bag. As he walked down the walkway, he held his hands behind his head, elbows extended, and allowed his thoughts to drift once again. He peered ahead of him, as to not run into anyone or anything as he swam in his own thoughts.
'Why don't you just marry him for crying-out-loud?' asked Dark out of nowhere.
'Because he doesn't like me like that, and he probably never will. Where did that come from anyway?' replied Daisuke as he zoned.
'Well, every time I go to talk to you, you're thinking of Satoshi. It's like you're in love with him or something,' stated Dark.
'Yeah well...I don't, thank you very much. I don't know what I think. Plus, it's none of your damn business, so do me a favor and don't worry about it,' blurted Daisuke mentally, annoyance in his voice.
'Whatever kid. You keep telling yourself that. I forget what I wanted to tell you anyhow. Talk to you later...' sighed Dark, once again sliding into the corner of Daisuke's mind.
Daisuke continued to walk down the breezeway, his tongue sticking out in boredom. He thought to himself about what Dark had said, and about what he had been feeling the past few days.
"Could...it be...love? Why must my life be so complicated...?" Daisuke whispered to himself.
He kept his pace, his mind drifting in the notions of his feelings.
Hello everyone! How did you like the chapter? I'm sorry again for the monolog, it could be better, but if you disagree, let me know! I need to know what to improve on for future chapters. Speaking of which, anyone have any ideas for the next chapter or one in the future? I'll make sure that you get a shout-out and named for the idea, promise. And don't be afraid to put negative things in the review section. I know how to take it, lol. Well...I guess that's it for my "editor's note"...now for the shout-outs! Later days!
Jade Starr: MY BESTEST FRIEND Nicki!!! She's my editor, and I'd be lost without her! Read her stories, they're totally awesome, and she's where I learned from, which means she's WAY better then me! Lol. I LOVE YOU NICKI!!!
Chibis Unleashed: You've given me a spark of inspiration to keep this story going. You and everyone else have kept my spirits up. Keep reading! Thanks!
Atealia: Thanks allot to you! Your words inspired me allot to keep the story going, and to keep up the plot that I've got going. Keep reading! Thanks!
KirbY4: Thanks for the comment, it also helped me to keep writing. Keep reading! Thanks!
Sesshymoon25: Thanks for your short comment, it was the last one that helped me get started on chapter 3. Keep reading! Thanks!