Chapter 2
Long ago, there was a 17-year-old boy named Zeratul. He wanted adventure, but his parents wouldn't allow it. His family was blacksmiths. They could forge anything from weapons to armor. Zeratul was 6ft tall. He had blond hair down to his shoulders. He carried around a sword that was extremely sharp, and it had some weird engraved words on it. He also had magical powers that nobody else in his family could explain. He had strong powers. He can use only fire spells. He had a bad temper. Most people in his town were afraid of him because of his bad reputation for getting into fights. He isn't all bad. He likes to help people; they just get the wrong idea.
One day, chaos struck the small town of Gul-Dur (Zeratul's town). Monsters invaded his town, and captured all the shards. Many people were killed during this action, including Zeratul's mother. Zeratul was furious. He unveiled his sword, and went on a rampage, killing all monsters in his town. He jumped through the air, and swung the sword violently, dismembering body parts. He stuck out his fist, and opened it, palm forward. It started to glow. Then BOOM! An explosion loud enough to make your ears bleed had killed all the monsters. All the monsters were dead, but the shards were nowhere to be found. Zeratul, after killing the monsters, fainted for loss of energy.
When he awoke, he was in his bed. He walked downstairs, only to see his family in tears for the loss of his mother. Zeratul couldn't stand it. He was so angry. He was about to explode again. He ran to his father and told him he will get revenge for his mother, and will get back the shards. His father forbade (past tense of forbid, IT'S A WORD!!!) him to go, he said that his anger would cloud his judgment. After a long time of arguing, his father finally let him go on his adventure for the shards. And so begins Zeratul's first adventure (You guys like it so far? Give me some reviews, tell me what to improve, ill have more chapters and better chapters if you give me reviews.)
Long ago, there was a 17-year-old boy named Zeratul. He wanted adventure, but his parents wouldn't allow it. His family was blacksmiths. They could forge anything from weapons to armor. Zeratul was 6ft tall. He had blond hair down to his shoulders. He carried around a sword that was extremely sharp, and it had some weird engraved words on it. He also had magical powers that nobody else in his family could explain. He had strong powers. He can use only fire spells. He had a bad temper. Most people in his town were afraid of him because of his bad reputation for getting into fights. He isn't all bad. He likes to help people; they just get the wrong idea.
One day, chaos struck the small town of Gul-Dur (Zeratul's town). Monsters invaded his town, and captured all the shards. Many people were killed during this action, including Zeratul's mother. Zeratul was furious. He unveiled his sword, and went on a rampage, killing all monsters in his town. He jumped through the air, and swung the sword violently, dismembering body parts. He stuck out his fist, and opened it, palm forward. It started to glow. Then BOOM! An explosion loud enough to make your ears bleed had killed all the monsters. All the monsters were dead, but the shards were nowhere to be found. Zeratul, after killing the monsters, fainted for loss of energy.
When he awoke, he was in his bed. He walked downstairs, only to see his family in tears for the loss of his mother. Zeratul couldn't stand it. He was so angry. He was about to explode again. He ran to his father and told him he will get revenge for his mother, and will get back the shards. His father forbade (past tense of forbid, IT'S A WORD!!!) him to go, he said that his anger would cloud his judgment. After a long time of arguing, his father finally let him go on his adventure for the shards. And so begins Zeratul's first adventure (You guys like it so far? Give me some reviews, tell me what to improve, ill have more chapters and better chapters if you give me reviews.)