I walked out of the change room after the final bell with a heavy heart.
Despite the fact that Charlie was completely and totally right (Which
scared me half to death; I was the one who was supposed to be right, and he
was supposed to screw things up!) I didn't really want to do the right
thing, which was telling Josie.
The Bashes, Charlie and I were all walking towards our dormitory when we saw Josie approaching us with Charlotte, who still wasn't on good speaking terms after Charlie only got a B on his math exam, barely making him able to play hockey. But I wasn't really worrying about our Captain, he was very charismatic; he could make it work regardless of the fact that his last couple relationships, like Linda, and that one girl who lived around the block from him and that other girl he was chatting up while we were in California, didn't exactly last long. Linda was about a month, and the other two were a week, if not less.
No I was worrying about how Josie was going to take it.
"Ladies." Fulton flirted, granted the fact that he had a completely platonic relationship with both girls.
Josie cocked an eyebrow. "Fulton . . ." She replied suspiciously and turned her eyes on me and smiled.
Charlie swallowed. "Come on, I think we ought to leave these two alone." He smiled at Charlotte. "You're coming right?"
She sighed and nodded. "If I must." She touched Josie's arm quickly. "I'll come to your room tonight to start on that project ok?"
Josie nodded and waved as they turned and walked in the opposite direction. I thanked God that she didn't see Charlie give me a thumbs up before walking away.
"So what's with the thumbs up?" Josie asked gripping my hand and beginning to walk to the dormitory.
Spoke too soon. "Oh, Charlie was just . . . being weird Charlie." I smiled.
She looked over her shoulder at them. "Oh. I've never really thought of him being weird; a little headstrong and opinionated, but not weird. Averman is weird." She pointed out smiling, bumping her shoulder against mine.
"Agreed." I smiled. Ok, this is going to be our last happy conversation. I'm glad it was good. "Josie we need to talk."
She groaned. "Ad-am! I know you're always tired and serious after Phys. Ed but I just sat through an hour and fifteen minute lecture on the signing of our constitution. I'm all up for freedom and all that junk but I'm so filled with energy its crazy." She whined with pleading eyes. "No more talking. Let's do something fun."
"We can't we have to talk. You and me, one on one."
She pouted. "But nothing good ever happens after someone says 'we have to talk,' therefore, I say we ignore the whole thing and go do something fun until you have to do to practice which is in exactly. . ." She looked down at her watch. "And hour and a half." If only she knew. . .
"Josie, I'm being serious here! I think we need to ta-"
She quickly pressed her lips against mine forcefully, silencing the worries that were screaming in my head. She pulled away from me staring me in the eyes. "That is what I have to say about what you think."
My jaw dropped. "Ah . . . blah . . ."
She curled her hair behind her ear and shifted her weight onto one of her feet, smiling innocently. "Any questions?"
I grinned back at her. "Yeah; your room or mine?"
She laughed throwing her arms over my shoulders and kissing my cheek. "Julie has a study group in our room so . . ."
I squeezed her waist and sat her back onto the ground. "So it's synonymous. My room it is."
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I looked down at my shirt and frowned. Ok, after about an hour of making out with my girlfriend (I swear it was making out! If we did . . . other stuff . . . her father would kill me!), my shirt was completely wrinkled. I knew I should've changed before I came and now it is completely obvious what I've been up to for the last little while. I pulled at my shirt straightening out most of the creases and ran my fingers through my hair quickly. It would have to do.
I pushed open the door of the change room and rolled my eyes at the howls from some of my teammates.
"Looks like Banksie has been busy!!" Russ yelled in between howls.
Averman shuttered. "Just tell me it was on your bed . . ."
I punched his arm. "Shut up!"
I reached my normal spot beside Charlie who shook his head, sneering and looked away from me. "Looks like Josie took it well." He mumbled as he tied his skates after everyone went back to getting ready.
I licked my lips. "I couldn't tell her alright?" I sighed as I slipped on my hockey pants and sat back down onto the bench.
"Obviously." He snapped quietly. "By the way the shade of lipstick on your jaw isn't your color."
I wiped my jaw quickly and exhaled. "Charlie look, you wouldn't understand. You don't know what it's like ok?"
He shot a look at me. "And neither does she." He shot angrily grabbing his stick and stormed out of the change room slamming the door behind him.
Everyone's eyes followed him out of the room and exchanged confused glances, however just as quickly went back to tying their skates, only silent. The last time Charlie had stormed out of a room like that was when we had that major upset against one of the top teams earlier this year, but since freshmen year Charlie had basically given up his stormy attitude when it came to hockey or his social life.
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"Conway! Pass the puck!" Orion yelled. "Other people are out there too! Pass it!"
Charlie tried to fake around Kenny, but Wu was too quick for him and slipped in and passed it off to Mendoza who immediately flew down the ice.
"Stop! Freeze!" Orion yelped, blowing his whistle angrily. "Conway, I told you to pass it. Banks was open."
Charlie glanced at me, taking his helmet off, letting his damp curls fall freely on his forehead. "I didn't see anyone."
Orion blinked and looked around at the rest of the team. "Ok, I don't know if I were thinking it or yelling it, did I not say to Conway, pass the puck?"
I looked away from them and looked up at the stands where Josie had taken a quick break from homework and was watching us with worry written all over her face.
A quiet murmur echoed off the walls and the Ducks that surrounded me nodded carefully. They didn't want to go again their Captain and best friend or their Coach.
"Ok, then I'm not hallucinating." He nodded. "Why didn't you pass it?! Banks was wide open!" He directed at Charlie slightly peeved.
Charlie shot an angry look at me. "He looked preoccupied."
"With what!" Orion was not only confused, because Charlie and I usually worked awesome together, but getting rather frustrated.
"Ask him." Charlie shrugged.
Orion frowned. "Well, I'm not. I'm asking you 'Captain'." He looked up at the clock above the scoreboard and shook his head. "Well that's practice." He mumbled. "The game is on Saturday, so I want you guys in the gym tomorrow afternoon at 3:30 and then we're coming here after our run, so bring water, and eat a big lunch. Now . . . get changed."
I skated beside Charlie and tried to talk to him. "Charlie, we can't let this go onto the ice. It isn't fair to the team."
He sneered angrily. "You talk a whole lot about fair Banks. Maybe you should be fair to her." He looked up at Josie and elbowed me hard in the stomach. "Cake-eater." He spat.
"That's none of your business." I hissed to him as I caught up to him, walking toward the change room and bursting through the doors.
He collapsed. "Well you seemed pretty interested in my opinion during gym." He whispered back leaning down and untying his skates.
I frowned. "And even now I think that was a mistake." I muttered as I mimicked Charlie and pulled off my skates.
"That's only because you know I'm right and you're wrong."
"I don't even know why I'm taking you're advice." I scoffed. "I mean, I've taken pisses longer than your last couple relationships."
"Jackass."
"Asshole."
I pulled off my jersey and shoulder pads in a quick movement and got up at the same time as Charlie; bumping shoulders with him, making him fall back onto the bench.
"What the hell was that for?!" He burst at me, pushing my shoulders, tossing me into Portman who helped me back onto my feet.
I frowned at him. "Nothing! Maybe you should stay out of my way!"
"Maybe you should watch where you're going, preppy!"
After that, I can't remember who threw the first punch, but the next thing either of us knew, we were on the locker room floor, fighting like we used to when we were ten.
"Hey!! Hey!! Break it up!" I heard Orion yell, grabbing the back of my shirt and Fulton quickly grabbed Charlie's. He looked at us both quickly doing a double take. "Conway, Banks? You were fighting!" He raised his eyebrows. "Did you know you were fighting each other?"
I brought by finger to my lip and hissed. Cut. I looked at the damage I had done to Charlie. I hit him right under his left eye so the next day he might have a shiner. We both looked away from each other.
Orion looked at both of us. "Well one of you has to talk."
Silence.
"This is what I get for working with teenagers." He grumbled. He looked at the rest of the team. "Does anyone of you know what they were fighting about?"
Everyone shook their head. Of course not. Charlie and I were very vague about what we were fighting about. I was just hoping that he wouldn't go back on his word after I hit him.
Coach looked over at me. "Do we need to sit in my office and work this out?"
We both shook our head. "No, we'll work it out, right Banks?" Charlie replied with bitterness in his voice.
"I mean without beating each other to a pulp." Orion added.
I nodded. "We'll work it out."
Orion let go of my shirt and watched carefully as Fulton let go of Charlie. "Ok. Do it quick. I don't need my players at each other's throats if we're going against the Mud Dogs on Saturday." He took one last look at us before walking out of the change room.
I slipped out of my hockey pants and shoved on my shoes and grabbed my coat off the hook. I'd shower at my dorm. I rushed out of there with my hockey gear in my hand.
I looked up at the stands where Josie ran down to meet me. "Hey Adam!" She replied happily, the look on her face dropping off. "Oh my God! What happened to your face?"
I winced as she touched my lip. "Charlie and I had a few words and I hit his hand with my face. And he got angry and he fit his face to my fist."
Josie's eyes widened. "You fought with Charlie? You're best friend?"
I shrugged. "Consider it male bonding."
"I don't understand." She bit her lip looking over her shoulder towards the change rooms in hopes of seeing our slightly bruised Captain.
"Good, you're a girl. You shouldn't." I smiled.
She groaned. "Adam, you just fought with your friend, you shouldn't be cracking jokes, especially un-funny ones."
"Actually I think it's the perfect time to crack jokes." I shrugged, pasting on a smile. "And I thought they were funny."
She licked her lips. "Are we going to talk about this?"
I quickly kissed her. "I want to do something else."
She crossed her arms. "Unfair."
"All is fair in love and war. You taught me that." I smirked.
She nodded. "Later then."
I nodded. "Maybe."
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A/N: Whoa!! Yeah another chapter! Go me! I'm excited! Ok, I had the ending of this chapter planned different but I kind of wanted Orion to break up the fight so I had to have it in the arena so, that's how it worked out! Yes, this is one of my classic fights/ arguments. If you've read Don't Speak you know exactly what I'm talking about. I love writing them. I can't stop it!! So . . . I should do shout outs now eh?
Shout outs!
Pyro44- *squeals and jumps up and down excitedly* New Reviewer! Welcome!! Welcome!! Ok, so you're not exact 'new' per say, but sort of. Whatever!! I think I remember a Jennifer, but I'm not sure. I'd have to check. Oh! I love writing Charlie so it's awesome that you enjoy him. Don't get me wrong, I love writing Adam (no duh . . . the story is in his perspective Katie!!), but Charlie has so many comedy possibilities and can play so many different roles! He is so versatile! I didn't have any Coach Wilson in last story, which is sad because he's an awesome character to write because he was so underdeveloped in the movie and I love to develop characters! I made Coach Wilson like that because my friend plays volleyball for a rep team and her coach is like that and I had to just borrow that little aspect! I love character quirks. Thanks so much for reviewing, come back anytime and tip your waitress!!
SqUiDsLiLpYrO- Well, guess what? I love writing this story so you don't have to worry about it being over soon! It's just good? *gasps* Just Kidding! Oh, don't worry; I constantly can't think of the right word. I've sat through almost an entire English class trying to figure out a word. I think the word was eclectic. I love words. I love writing. *rolls eyes* my friends call me the walking dictionary/thesaurus. Yeah just a few hours too late; but you're right, at least the review went through. I'm sorry about you're lonely squishy room! Who's Benny? Ooo . . . Does SqUiDsLiLpYrO have a LOVA??? *giggles* I'm teasing! Yeah go find him! Talk Later!
Rach- Hey! Where've you been? I'm glad you liked both chapter 4 and 5. Yeah, I agree last chapter wasn't my best, but it was leading up to this chapter. It was necessary. Sorry! Oh and I still love you even if you gave me a review that didn't say you dropped to your knees and worshiped the ground I walked on.(hint! hint!) I need reviews like that! Where else am I going to get some pressure to work harder and make my next chapter better? Last chapter also was mainly humor, and not really plot based. I'm glad I'm in that 10% of better stuff you read! That's cool! I'm reaching your update demand! Now just don't hurt me!! *runs and cowers!*
Beaner- Katie!! You're on the internet without you're parent's consent? *gasps* Jk! You better come on AOL soon. I'm bored and I want to talk to someone. I'm so glad you loved Charlie! I loved writing him! He's awesome! He's like my favorite next to Adam and Averman (Avie is going to get some awesome lines too!). I have no clue how I got that manhood line though! It was scary! After I got it I started cracking up and my brother was looking at me funny. I looked over at him and was like 'Adam is going to loose his manhood!!' and my brother was like. . . 'Katie, you should lay off the drugs for a while.' My brother is the spawn on Satan, I swear. I'm glad I'm cheering you up! I found out that my 'True Color' today was blue and I'm a compassionate person. I supposedly don't like confrontation and arguments. *giggles* Have they ever READ my stories before? But it's turns out I like 'pleasing' people and helping them so. . . I HAVE to keep writing!!
DuckHockey00214496- Hey!! Don't Speak was too good to not finish? You're too kind! *laughs* my updates are world famous! I love updating and writing and I'm fairly quick too, so it's all good for you guys. Everyone is hoping Adam won't loose his manhood! (Read Beaner's note to hear the whole story!). Ok, seeing you read last chapter, if Josie and Adam had children now, Adam wouldn't only have to worry about his manhood, but his life, because his father and Josie's father would murder him, slowly. But I guess it's something to ponder about. You ponder, I write deal?
Joc- Yeah, Katie told me about those State wide test thingers. She told me and I was like wha . . .?? Oh, I was totally like that, write the test and go to sleep after my exams and after the Ontario, grade 10 testing last semester and the EQAO tests in math in grade 9. God my country really like to test their high school students! Don't they know that some come home and write stories? Don't they know these things? Oh yeah, I agree Adam should tell Josie! Hello! I am a girl here! However, I'm looking at this from a guy's perspective and it's either be honest or have manhood. It's a heavy decision. Yes I write stories in French class. My French teacher lectures in French too, but think about it. What is she supposed to lecture in? Portuguese? Latin? Do you want her to sit in front of the class and Moo? *blinks* actually, yes that would be fun. I want my French teacher to sit in front of our class and Moo. It would be great fun. Ok, you keep reviewing (I missed you *pouts*) and I'll keep writing! Actually I would write whether or not you review whatever. Come back!! Run away from the light!!
Shelbers- Hey you! Sup?? Naw . . . Charlie isn't scared. I think after Bombay and Orion, he's basically prepared for anything. *shrugs* I like continuing jokes! I like to do that sort of thing so that was intentional. Yes the tables turned, but now I've put a new spin on them. I'm glad you liked last chapter and I hope you like this one! Review! Quick! Before the moment is over! Don't let the moment be over!! Nooo—
*giggles*
Ok yes, I'm very hyper at the moment so if these don't make any sense, don't worry. Ok, Lots of Love all!!
REVIEW!
~Toodles
KatieGurl!
The Bashes, Charlie and I were all walking towards our dormitory when we saw Josie approaching us with Charlotte, who still wasn't on good speaking terms after Charlie only got a B on his math exam, barely making him able to play hockey. But I wasn't really worrying about our Captain, he was very charismatic; he could make it work regardless of the fact that his last couple relationships, like Linda, and that one girl who lived around the block from him and that other girl he was chatting up while we were in California, didn't exactly last long. Linda was about a month, and the other two were a week, if not less.
No I was worrying about how Josie was going to take it.
"Ladies." Fulton flirted, granted the fact that he had a completely platonic relationship with both girls.
Josie cocked an eyebrow. "Fulton . . ." She replied suspiciously and turned her eyes on me and smiled.
Charlie swallowed. "Come on, I think we ought to leave these two alone." He smiled at Charlotte. "You're coming right?"
She sighed and nodded. "If I must." She touched Josie's arm quickly. "I'll come to your room tonight to start on that project ok?"
Josie nodded and waved as they turned and walked in the opposite direction. I thanked God that she didn't see Charlie give me a thumbs up before walking away.
"So what's with the thumbs up?" Josie asked gripping my hand and beginning to walk to the dormitory.
Spoke too soon. "Oh, Charlie was just . . . being weird Charlie." I smiled.
She looked over her shoulder at them. "Oh. I've never really thought of him being weird; a little headstrong and opinionated, but not weird. Averman is weird." She pointed out smiling, bumping her shoulder against mine.
"Agreed." I smiled. Ok, this is going to be our last happy conversation. I'm glad it was good. "Josie we need to talk."
She groaned. "Ad-am! I know you're always tired and serious after Phys. Ed but I just sat through an hour and fifteen minute lecture on the signing of our constitution. I'm all up for freedom and all that junk but I'm so filled with energy its crazy." She whined with pleading eyes. "No more talking. Let's do something fun."
"We can't we have to talk. You and me, one on one."
She pouted. "But nothing good ever happens after someone says 'we have to talk,' therefore, I say we ignore the whole thing and go do something fun until you have to do to practice which is in exactly. . ." She looked down at her watch. "And hour and a half." If only she knew. . .
"Josie, I'm being serious here! I think we need to ta-"
She quickly pressed her lips against mine forcefully, silencing the worries that were screaming in my head. She pulled away from me staring me in the eyes. "That is what I have to say about what you think."
My jaw dropped. "Ah . . . blah . . ."
She curled her hair behind her ear and shifted her weight onto one of her feet, smiling innocently. "Any questions?"
I grinned back at her. "Yeah; your room or mine?"
She laughed throwing her arms over my shoulders and kissing my cheek. "Julie has a study group in our room so . . ."
I squeezed her waist and sat her back onto the ground. "So it's synonymous. My room it is."
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I looked down at my shirt and frowned. Ok, after about an hour of making out with my girlfriend (I swear it was making out! If we did . . . other stuff . . . her father would kill me!), my shirt was completely wrinkled. I knew I should've changed before I came and now it is completely obvious what I've been up to for the last little while. I pulled at my shirt straightening out most of the creases and ran my fingers through my hair quickly. It would have to do.
I pushed open the door of the change room and rolled my eyes at the howls from some of my teammates.
"Looks like Banksie has been busy!!" Russ yelled in between howls.
Averman shuttered. "Just tell me it was on your bed . . ."
I punched his arm. "Shut up!"
I reached my normal spot beside Charlie who shook his head, sneering and looked away from me. "Looks like Josie took it well." He mumbled as he tied his skates after everyone went back to getting ready.
I licked my lips. "I couldn't tell her alright?" I sighed as I slipped on my hockey pants and sat back down onto the bench.
"Obviously." He snapped quietly. "By the way the shade of lipstick on your jaw isn't your color."
I wiped my jaw quickly and exhaled. "Charlie look, you wouldn't understand. You don't know what it's like ok?"
He shot a look at me. "And neither does she." He shot angrily grabbing his stick and stormed out of the change room slamming the door behind him.
Everyone's eyes followed him out of the room and exchanged confused glances, however just as quickly went back to tying their skates, only silent. The last time Charlie had stormed out of a room like that was when we had that major upset against one of the top teams earlier this year, but since freshmen year Charlie had basically given up his stormy attitude when it came to hockey or his social life.
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"Conway! Pass the puck!" Orion yelled. "Other people are out there too! Pass it!"
Charlie tried to fake around Kenny, but Wu was too quick for him and slipped in and passed it off to Mendoza who immediately flew down the ice.
"Stop! Freeze!" Orion yelped, blowing his whistle angrily. "Conway, I told you to pass it. Banks was open."
Charlie glanced at me, taking his helmet off, letting his damp curls fall freely on his forehead. "I didn't see anyone."
Orion blinked and looked around at the rest of the team. "Ok, I don't know if I were thinking it or yelling it, did I not say to Conway, pass the puck?"
I looked away from them and looked up at the stands where Josie had taken a quick break from homework and was watching us with worry written all over her face.
A quiet murmur echoed off the walls and the Ducks that surrounded me nodded carefully. They didn't want to go again their Captain and best friend or their Coach.
"Ok, then I'm not hallucinating." He nodded. "Why didn't you pass it?! Banks was wide open!" He directed at Charlie slightly peeved.
Charlie shot an angry look at me. "He looked preoccupied."
"With what!" Orion was not only confused, because Charlie and I usually worked awesome together, but getting rather frustrated.
"Ask him." Charlie shrugged.
Orion frowned. "Well, I'm not. I'm asking you 'Captain'." He looked up at the clock above the scoreboard and shook his head. "Well that's practice." He mumbled. "The game is on Saturday, so I want you guys in the gym tomorrow afternoon at 3:30 and then we're coming here after our run, so bring water, and eat a big lunch. Now . . . get changed."
I skated beside Charlie and tried to talk to him. "Charlie, we can't let this go onto the ice. It isn't fair to the team."
He sneered angrily. "You talk a whole lot about fair Banks. Maybe you should be fair to her." He looked up at Josie and elbowed me hard in the stomach. "Cake-eater." He spat.
"That's none of your business." I hissed to him as I caught up to him, walking toward the change room and bursting through the doors.
He collapsed. "Well you seemed pretty interested in my opinion during gym." He whispered back leaning down and untying his skates.
I frowned. "And even now I think that was a mistake." I muttered as I mimicked Charlie and pulled off my skates.
"That's only because you know I'm right and you're wrong."
"I don't even know why I'm taking you're advice." I scoffed. "I mean, I've taken pisses longer than your last couple relationships."
"Jackass."
"Asshole."
I pulled off my jersey and shoulder pads in a quick movement and got up at the same time as Charlie; bumping shoulders with him, making him fall back onto the bench.
"What the hell was that for?!" He burst at me, pushing my shoulders, tossing me into Portman who helped me back onto my feet.
I frowned at him. "Nothing! Maybe you should stay out of my way!"
"Maybe you should watch where you're going, preppy!"
After that, I can't remember who threw the first punch, but the next thing either of us knew, we were on the locker room floor, fighting like we used to when we were ten.
"Hey!! Hey!! Break it up!" I heard Orion yell, grabbing the back of my shirt and Fulton quickly grabbed Charlie's. He looked at us both quickly doing a double take. "Conway, Banks? You were fighting!" He raised his eyebrows. "Did you know you were fighting each other?"
I brought by finger to my lip and hissed. Cut. I looked at the damage I had done to Charlie. I hit him right under his left eye so the next day he might have a shiner. We both looked away from each other.
Orion looked at both of us. "Well one of you has to talk."
Silence.
"This is what I get for working with teenagers." He grumbled. He looked at the rest of the team. "Does anyone of you know what they were fighting about?"
Everyone shook their head. Of course not. Charlie and I were very vague about what we were fighting about. I was just hoping that he wouldn't go back on his word after I hit him.
Coach looked over at me. "Do we need to sit in my office and work this out?"
We both shook our head. "No, we'll work it out, right Banks?" Charlie replied with bitterness in his voice.
"I mean without beating each other to a pulp." Orion added.
I nodded. "We'll work it out."
Orion let go of my shirt and watched carefully as Fulton let go of Charlie. "Ok. Do it quick. I don't need my players at each other's throats if we're going against the Mud Dogs on Saturday." He took one last look at us before walking out of the change room.
I slipped out of my hockey pants and shoved on my shoes and grabbed my coat off the hook. I'd shower at my dorm. I rushed out of there with my hockey gear in my hand.
I looked up at the stands where Josie ran down to meet me. "Hey Adam!" She replied happily, the look on her face dropping off. "Oh my God! What happened to your face?"
I winced as she touched my lip. "Charlie and I had a few words and I hit his hand with my face. And he got angry and he fit his face to my fist."
Josie's eyes widened. "You fought with Charlie? You're best friend?"
I shrugged. "Consider it male bonding."
"I don't understand." She bit her lip looking over her shoulder towards the change rooms in hopes of seeing our slightly bruised Captain.
"Good, you're a girl. You shouldn't." I smiled.
She groaned. "Adam, you just fought with your friend, you shouldn't be cracking jokes, especially un-funny ones."
"Actually I think it's the perfect time to crack jokes." I shrugged, pasting on a smile. "And I thought they were funny."
She licked her lips. "Are we going to talk about this?"
I quickly kissed her. "I want to do something else."
She crossed her arms. "Unfair."
"All is fair in love and war. You taught me that." I smirked.
She nodded. "Later then."
I nodded. "Maybe."
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A/N: Whoa!! Yeah another chapter! Go me! I'm excited! Ok, I had the ending of this chapter planned different but I kind of wanted Orion to break up the fight so I had to have it in the arena so, that's how it worked out! Yes, this is one of my classic fights/ arguments. If you've read Don't Speak you know exactly what I'm talking about. I love writing them. I can't stop it!! So . . . I should do shout outs now eh?
Shout outs!
Pyro44- *squeals and jumps up and down excitedly* New Reviewer! Welcome!! Welcome!! Ok, so you're not exact 'new' per say, but sort of. Whatever!! I think I remember a Jennifer, but I'm not sure. I'd have to check. Oh! I love writing Charlie so it's awesome that you enjoy him. Don't get me wrong, I love writing Adam (no duh . . . the story is in his perspective Katie!!), but Charlie has so many comedy possibilities and can play so many different roles! He is so versatile! I didn't have any Coach Wilson in last story, which is sad because he's an awesome character to write because he was so underdeveloped in the movie and I love to develop characters! I made Coach Wilson like that because my friend plays volleyball for a rep team and her coach is like that and I had to just borrow that little aspect! I love character quirks. Thanks so much for reviewing, come back anytime and tip your waitress!!
SqUiDsLiLpYrO- Well, guess what? I love writing this story so you don't have to worry about it being over soon! It's just good? *gasps* Just Kidding! Oh, don't worry; I constantly can't think of the right word. I've sat through almost an entire English class trying to figure out a word. I think the word was eclectic. I love words. I love writing. *rolls eyes* my friends call me the walking dictionary/thesaurus. Yeah just a few hours too late; but you're right, at least the review went through. I'm sorry about you're lonely squishy room! Who's Benny? Ooo . . . Does SqUiDsLiLpYrO have a LOVA??? *giggles* I'm teasing! Yeah go find him! Talk Later!
Rach- Hey! Where've you been? I'm glad you liked both chapter 4 and 5. Yeah, I agree last chapter wasn't my best, but it was leading up to this chapter. It was necessary. Sorry! Oh and I still love you even if you gave me a review that didn't say you dropped to your knees and worshiped the ground I walked on.(hint! hint!) I need reviews like that! Where else am I going to get some pressure to work harder and make my next chapter better? Last chapter also was mainly humor, and not really plot based. I'm glad I'm in that 10% of better stuff you read! That's cool! I'm reaching your update demand! Now just don't hurt me!! *runs and cowers!*
Beaner- Katie!! You're on the internet without you're parent's consent? *gasps* Jk! You better come on AOL soon. I'm bored and I want to talk to someone. I'm so glad you loved Charlie! I loved writing him! He's awesome! He's like my favorite next to Adam and Averman (Avie is going to get some awesome lines too!). I have no clue how I got that manhood line though! It was scary! After I got it I started cracking up and my brother was looking at me funny. I looked over at him and was like 'Adam is going to loose his manhood!!' and my brother was like. . . 'Katie, you should lay off the drugs for a while.' My brother is the spawn on Satan, I swear. I'm glad I'm cheering you up! I found out that my 'True Color' today was blue and I'm a compassionate person. I supposedly don't like confrontation and arguments. *giggles* Have they ever READ my stories before? But it's turns out I like 'pleasing' people and helping them so. . . I HAVE to keep writing!!
DuckHockey00214496- Hey!! Don't Speak was too good to not finish? You're too kind! *laughs* my updates are world famous! I love updating and writing and I'm fairly quick too, so it's all good for you guys. Everyone is hoping Adam won't loose his manhood! (Read Beaner's note to hear the whole story!). Ok, seeing you read last chapter, if Josie and Adam had children now, Adam wouldn't only have to worry about his manhood, but his life, because his father and Josie's father would murder him, slowly. But I guess it's something to ponder about. You ponder, I write deal?
Joc- Yeah, Katie told me about those State wide test thingers. She told me and I was like wha . . .?? Oh, I was totally like that, write the test and go to sleep after my exams and after the Ontario, grade 10 testing last semester and the EQAO tests in math in grade 9. God my country really like to test their high school students! Don't they know that some come home and write stories? Don't they know these things? Oh yeah, I agree Adam should tell Josie! Hello! I am a girl here! However, I'm looking at this from a guy's perspective and it's either be honest or have manhood. It's a heavy decision. Yes I write stories in French class. My French teacher lectures in French too, but think about it. What is she supposed to lecture in? Portuguese? Latin? Do you want her to sit in front of the class and Moo? *blinks* actually, yes that would be fun. I want my French teacher to sit in front of our class and Moo. It would be great fun. Ok, you keep reviewing (I missed you *pouts*) and I'll keep writing! Actually I would write whether or not you review whatever. Come back!! Run away from the light!!
Shelbers- Hey you! Sup?? Naw . . . Charlie isn't scared. I think after Bombay and Orion, he's basically prepared for anything. *shrugs* I like continuing jokes! I like to do that sort of thing so that was intentional. Yes the tables turned, but now I've put a new spin on them. I'm glad you liked last chapter and I hope you like this one! Review! Quick! Before the moment is over! Don't let the moment be over!! Nooo—
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Ok yes, I'm very hyper at the moment so if these don't make any sense, don't worry. Ok, Lots of Love all!!
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