I typed this story out on my computer a while ago so sorry if its
predictable.Please keep R&R
:) and thanks for the constructive critisism.I need it to make it better.
Roxanne got up and looked around.Her head was pounding and she didnt know where she was.Seconds later she remembered the night before.Her and Jake had went back to his place.He had brought out some booze.Roxanne didnt want to drink but Jake persuaded her into one.That one turned into 2 and after that they just kept coming.She couldn't see Jake anywhere.As she stumbled across the room she noticed Jake was on the floor asleep.
R:Jake.Are you awake? She waited for a reply but one didnt come.She tried to wake him up but he was sound asleep.She decided she would go home.First she looked in his bathroom for an aspirin.Finding the aspirin bottle which was almost empty she took two and went home in her car.
Lucy got home from school.She hadn't gotten sick all day but still wasn't feeling great.She sat down on her bed and started her work.Minutes later she was disrupted by Mary.
M:Hey Luce.Are you busy?
L:Hey.I'm just doing work, but other than that, no.
M:Can we talk?
L:Sure. Lucy got up and sat down at the table. Mary joined her but stayed silent.
L:So what did you want to talk about?
M:Well, I haven't been feeling good lately.
L:Really, neither have I.
M:But I don't think it's just a 24 hour bug.I haven't been feeling good, I've been tired and I'm smelling things people can't smell.
L:That's exactly how I've been feeling.
M:I don't know but I think I may be...
L:Pregnant.
M:Yah, how did you know?
L:I think I may be too.I didn't want to tell Kevin.I'm not sure yet, but I'm also late.
M:Are you going to find out?
L:Of course.I've been trying to avoid the fact, thinking it would go away, but I've been feeling this way for a while now.
M:We should go buy some tests.
L:Right now?
M: You know what they say, there's no time like the present.But do you want to tell Kevin first?
L:No.I think I should find out and then tell him.I'm still kind of scared about how he'll take it if I am.Do you want to tell Carlos?
M:No, I think I'll do the same thing as you.
L:Ok.So should we go get the tests now?
M:Yeah.Carlos is working until 4.
L:Kevin will be home around 5 so let's go now before anyone gets suspicious.
M:Ok.We can take my car. Lucy and Mary grabbed their coats and drove to the drugstore.
Simon was at his locker after the bell rang.Cecelia walked up to him.
S:Hey.How have you been?
C:Fine.I see you and that Megan girl have been spending time together lately.
S:Yeah, we're kind of going out.
C:I thought that you wanted to go out with me?
S:Well I did.But I finally get that me and you aren't going to be together.You obviously don't like me like that anymore.So I'm going to leave you alone now.I'd like to talk more but I have to get home.Talk to you some other time. Simon left Cecelia standing there.She was feeling angry and sad, but mostly she missed Simon.
Peter sunk another shot in a row.He was at the basketball try outs.
Coach:Great job Petrowski.Try another shot. Peter sunk the second one in and the third.The coach liked what he saw so he got Peter to do some different shots and passing.By the end of the try outs Peter's name was on the top of the list.
P:Thanks for letting me try out coach.
Coach:I'm glad you did.I'll be posting the list next week.Don't forget to check it, I think you'll be happy. Peter left basketball try outs very happy.Ruthie had been watching it from the bleachers.
R:Hey Peter wait up! Ruthie ran up beside Peter.
R:You were great.I told you you were great.
P:I think the coach really liked me.
R:Why wouldn't he.You sunk practically every shot.You're definitley going to make it.
P:Well I shouldnt expect it, but I think I have a really good chance of making the team.
R:You do.So do you want to hang out tonight.Watch a movie at my house maybe?
P:Sure. I have to go home and shower and I'll be over.
R:Ok.
Lucy and Mary stood in the pregnancy test aisle in the drugstore.Before them there were numerable amounts of different pregnancy tests.
L:So what kind are we supposed to get?
M:I'm not sure.Maybe we should ask someone.
L:Let's just read the back on some of them and see which one we like best. Lucy and Mary picked up different tests and read the boxes.
M:Not this one.This one is an early pregnancy test.You're already late.
L:This one would work.But it says it's only 85% right.It's pretty cheap so I'm guessing it isn't that good.
M:How about this one.It isn't that cheap and sounds like the kind we need. Lucy read the box.
L:Yeah, I think this is the one we need.
Lucy and Mary each bought a pregnancy test then nervously drove home.
Roxanne got up and looked around.Her head was pounding and she didnt know where she was.Seconds later she remembered the night before.Her and Jake had went back to his place.He had brought out some booze.Roxanne didnt want to drink but Jake persuaded her into one.That one turned into 2 and after that they just kept coming.She couldn't see Jake anywhere.As she stumbled across the room she noticed Jake was on the floor asleep.
R:Jake.Are you awake? She waited for a reply but one didnt come.She tried to wake him up but he was sound asleep.She decided she would go home.First she looked in his bathroom for an aspirin.Finding the aspirin bottle which was almost empty she took two and went home in her car.
Lucy got home from school.She hadn't gotten sick all day but still wasn't feeling great.She sat down on her bed and started her work.Minutes later she was disrupted by Mary.
M:Hey Luce.Are you busy?
L:Hey.I'm just doing work, but other than that, no.
M:Can we talk?
L:Sure. Lucy got up and sat down at the table. Mary joined her but stayed silent.
L:So what did you want to talk about?
M:Well, I haven't been feeling good lately.
L:Really, neither have I.
M:But I don't think it's just a 24 hour bug.I haven't been feeling good, I've been tired and I'm smelling things people can't smell.
L:That's exactly how I've been feeling.
M:I don't know but I think I may be...
L:Pregnant.
M:Yah, how did you know?
L:I think I may be too.I didn't want to tell Kevin.I'm not sure yet, but I'm also late.
M:Are you going to find out?
L:Of course.I've been trying to avoid the fact, thinking it would go away, but I've been feeling this way for a while now.
M:We should go buy some tests.
L:Right now?
M: You know what they say, there's no time like the present.But do you want to tell Kevin first?
L:No.I think I should find out and then tell him.I'm still kind of scared about how he'll take it if I am.Do you want to tell Carlos?
M:No, I think I'll do the same thing as you.
L:Ok.So should we go get the tests now?
M:Yeah.Carlos is working until 4.
L:Kevin will be home around 5 so let's go now before anyone gets suspicious.
M:Ok.We can take my car. Lucy and Mary grabbed their coats and drove to the drugstore.
Simon was at his locker after the bell rang.Cecelia walked up to him.
S:Hey.How have you been?
C:Fine.I see you and that Megan girl have been spending time together lately.
S:Yeah, we're kind of going out.
C:I thought that you wanted to go out with me?
S:Well I did.But I finally get that me and you aren't going to be together.You obviously don't like me like that anymore.So I'm going to leave you alone now.I'd like to talk more but I have to get home.Talk to you some other time. Simon left Cecelia standing there.She was feeling angry and sad, but mostly she missed Simon.
Peter sunk another shot in a row.He was at the basketball try outs.
Coach:Great job Petrowski.Try another shot. Peter sunk the second one in and the third.The coach liked what he saw so he got Peter to do some different shots and passing.By the end of the try outs Peter's name was on the top of the list.
P:Thanks for letting me try out coach.
Coach:I'm glad you did.I'll be posting the list next week.Don't forget to check it, I think you'll be happy. Peter left basketball try outs very happy.Ruthie had been watching it from the bleachers.
R:Hey Peter wait up! Ruthie ran up beside Peter.
R:You were great.I told you you were great.
P:I think the coach really liked me.
R:Why wouldn't he.You sunk practically every shot.You're definitley going to make it.
P:Well I shouldnt expect it, but I think I have a really good chance of making the team.
R:You do.So do you want to hang out tonight.Watch a movie at my house maybe?
P:Sure. I have to go home and shower and I'll be over.
R:Ok.
Lucy and Mary stood in the pregnancy test aisle in the drugstore.Before them there were numerable amounts of different pregnancy tests.
L:So what kind are we supposed to get?
M:I'm not sure.Maybe we should ask someone.
L:Let's just read the back on some of them and see which one we like best. Lucy and Mary picked up different tests and read the boxes.
M:Not this one.This one is an early pregnancy test.You're already late.
L:This one would work.But it says it's only 85% right.It's pretty cheap so I'm guessing it isn't that good.
M:How about this one.It isn't that cheap and sounds like the kind we need. Lucy read the box.
L:Yeah, I think this is the one we need.
Lucy and Mary each bought a pregnancy test then nervously drove home.