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A New Plan
The lady looked stright into Anakin's eyes and his knees felt weak. She was handsome with a pointed face and raven black and soft pink hair. She wore a loose cut shirt that revealed some clevage and her stmoach. A skirt that reached to her knees was a blackish color like her shirt.
Anakin stared at her until he came to his senses. He cleared his throat and stole a glance at Qui-Gon. He was looking, too at the woman but not in a fascinated way. More like a first meeting sort of way. The other two were also like that. In fact the only one that seemed to be pertrubed by her was Anakin.
"Hello," she said in a soft voice," I am called Chaisa. Welcome to our village. It is not often we get visitors. Come sit and tell me your names and your buisness here."
She flourished her hand to pieces of carpet on the floor. The jedi moved to one and got comfortable. With another motion of her hand a young women came in carrying a tray of drinks. She looked no older than Anakin and as she passed them out she sent a small smile to Anakin, who in return slightly bowed his head.
Once the girl was gone Chaisa said crisply," So you are indeed the new recruits, are you not?" After a brief nod from Obi-Wan and an inward gasp of shock from Anakin she continued.
"Good. We have waited for you. The rules are very simple but not always the easiest. Number one follow my instuctions to every word and you will do fine. In case you have not noticed yet, I am in charge. I am the leader. As new recruits I had expect all of you to ask when even the slightest doubt appears in your mind."
She took a sip of the drink and surveyed each of them with dark green eyes. Last she looked at Anakin and a thoughtful expression came over her. Then a split second later it disappeared. "I will have someone show you to you hut."
They stood up and bowed. Before exiting the hut Anakin looked at this Chaisa one last time. Chaisa looked at him and smiled softly. Anakin shuddered and quickly left to their tent...or hut.
As Qui-Gon took his boots off he surveyed his apprentice. Anakin was laying on his bunk looking, to the naked eye, composed and entertained but Qui-Gon knew better. He supposed that Anakin was thinking to hard to forget about his shields because fear and anxiety were coming off of the boy in waves.
Qui-Gon also noted that confusion was in there too, but it came off someone else bacuse just Anakin. It took Qui-Gon a few minutes to figure out who that person was. Then it clicked. Obi-Wan.
Qui-Gon looked up to see Obi-Wan "reading" over some papers. Even though Obi-Wan appeared to be concentrating he kept looking at Anakin with his blue eyes. Once in awhile the two would catch each others eyes and quickly look away.
Something is going on here that I must have missed,Qui-Gon thought. He sighed and lay back on his bunk. it was the most comfortable thing in the world but he supposed it would do for now. He thought about the days events and made a mental note to tell Anakin the real plan.
Qui-Gon had felt Anakin's shock at finding out they were recruits. He was proud that the boy had held it in so good. Although he was worried that Chaisa seemed to pay more attention to him than any of them.
Sighing to himsself Qui-Gon turned on his side and meditated. He could hear two of the other three jedi had fallen asleep by their even breathing. One was still awake yawning every now and then. Whether that person had fallen asleep or not, Qui-Gon didn't know because soon after his last thought the dream wold over took him.
A New Plan
The lady looked stright into Anakin's eyes and his knees felt weak. She was handsome with a pointed face and raven black and soft pink hair. She wore a loose cut shirt that revealed some clevage and her stmoach. A skirt that reached to her knees was a blackish color like her shirt.
Anakin stared at her until he came to his senses. He cleared his throat and stole a glance at Qui-Gon. He was looking, too at the woman but not in a fascinated way. More like a first meeting sort of way. The other two were also like that. In fact the only one that seemed to be pertrubed by her was Anakin.
"Hello," she said in a soft voice," I am called Chaisa. Welcome to our village. It is not often we get visitors. Come sit and tell me your names and your buisness here."
She flourished her hand to pieces of carpet on the floor. The jedi moved to one and got comfortable. With another motion of her hand a young women came in carrying a tray of drinks. She looked no older than Anakin and as she passed them out she sent a small smile to Anakin, who in return slightly bowed his head.
Once the girl was gone Chaisa said crisply," So you are indeed the new recruits, are you not?" After a brief nod from Obi-Wan and an inward gasp of shock from Anakin she continued.
"Good. We have waited for you. The rules are very simple but not always the easiest. Number one follow my instuctions to every word and you will do fine. In case you have not noticed yet, I am in charge. I am the leader. As new recruits I had expect all of you to ask when even the slightest doubt appears in your mind."
She took a sip of the drink and surveyed each of them with dark green eyes. Last she looked at Anakin and a thoughtful expression came over her. Then a split second later it disappeared. "I will have someone show you to you hut."
They stood up and bowed. Before exiting the hut Anakin looked at this Chaisa one last time. Chaisa looked at him and smiled softly. Anakin shuddered and quickly left to their tent...or hut.
As Qui-Gon took his boots off he surveyed his apprentice. Anakin was laying on his bunk looking, to the naked eye, composed and entertained but Qui-Gon knew better. He supposed that Anakin was thinking to hard to forget about his shields because fear and anxiety were coming off of the boy in waves.
Qui-Gon also noted that confusion was in there too, but it came off someone else bacuse just Anakin. It took Qui-Gon a few minutes to figure out who that person was. Then it clicked. Obi-Wan.
Qui-Gon looked up to see Obi-Wan "reading" over some papers. Even though Obi-Wan appeared to be concentrating he kept looking at Anakin with his blue eyes. Once in awhile the two would catch each others eyes and quickly look away.
Something is going on here that I must have missed,Qui-Gon thought. He sighed and lay back on his bunk. it was the most comfortable thing in the world but he supposed it would do for now. He thought about the days events and made a mental note to tell Anakin the real plan.
Qui-Gon had felt Anakin's shock at finding out they were recruits. He was proud that the boy had held it in so good. Although he was worried that Chaisa seemed to pay more attention to him than any of them.
Sighing to himsself Qui-Gon turned on his side and meditated. He could hear two of the other three jedi had fallen asleep by their even breathing. One was still awake yawning every now and then. Whether that person had fallen asleep or not, Qui-Gon didn't know because soon after his last thought the dream wold over took him.
