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Chapter 8----------------------
Anakin's eyes shot open. He realized he was looking at the top of a hut, not the sky. He gingerly touched his right shoulder and gasped out loud. Sith that hurt!
" It isn't healed yet, don't touch it!" came a soft voice.
Anakin looked to his left to see Chaisa sitting in a chair staring at him. He cleared his throat and tried to speak. All that came out was a hoarse croak. Chaisa held up a finger while shaking her head.
"No, no my Anakin, Don't talk. I'll go get you some water." Anakin nodded and glared at her back. This is pathetic, where is my master and the others, he thought worridly.(A/N: spelling, i forgot how to spell that wordgrins sheepishly)
Chaisa came back with the water, in which Anakin gulped down greedily. Once he was finished he asked," Where's m-Qui-Gon and the others?"
Chaisa frowned. "I told you toy, you are not to speak. They, like everyone else, are resting. Now since you are in rebellious mood, you can go back to them." With that she left annoyed.
Anakin rolled his eyes and carefully got up. He winced as his shoulder moved and slowly made his way to his hut. When he entered he could have laughed, but he didn't. Qui-Gon and the other two jedi were sprawled on the beds in such a unjedi like relaxed way.
"Having..fun?" he asked. They sat up startled.
Qui-Gon smiled and said," Actually yes." Anakin smiled back and Qui-Gon saw how rigid he was standing and how he was holding his right arm.
"Padawan, sit down. Let me check your arm." "How do-" " I was the first to look at it. Now sit"
Anakin sat down and relaxed. He hissed in pain as Qui-Go took the bandage off. As his master surveyed the wound with no expression Anakin's imagination went off. What if it was infected and he was going to die? What if they had to chop off that arm? What if? What if? What if it's-
"It's perfectly fine. It will heal nicely," Qui-Gon's voice broke into his absurd thoughts. Anakin nodded relieved. Obi-Wan was laughing at something Garen had said. Anakin smiled at their childishness when that new feeling came over him again.
Instead of getting out, Anakin reached further in. Obi-Wan was still laughing and talking. Perhaps, he doesn't feel this, good, Anakin thought happily. He could feel pain, from a cut. He could feel happiness yet sadness at the same time. Pretty soon he was in a void of thoughts and emotions that weren't his. Obi-Wan had stopped laughing and had his eyes closed.
Garen noticed this and asked quietly," Obi? Everything okay?"
Obi-Wan opened his eyes. He looked at Anakin who was staring, but not seeing Obi-Wan. Obi-Wan, also reached out to Anakin and went behind the boy's sheild. A blast of power and emotion shot out at him. Fear and secrecy pulsed through to him along with pain and a bit of happiness. Obi- Wan could feel the boy getting deeper and deeper without knowing what he was doing. Obi-Wan quickly stopped his bond and put up his shields. Anakin blinked and paled.
Obi-Wan stood up and walked out. Qui-Gon was looking at Anakin with concern. Anakin followed Obi-Wan to a tree. When he got there, Anakin immediatly began apologizing.
"Obi-Wan I'm..s-sorry. I did-couldn't help it. I-I know I shou-shouldn't have and I'm so sorry," he said weakly.
Obi-Wan turned toward Anakin expressionless. Anakin looked down ashamed.
Anakin POV
Oh man, I've blown it now. Sith, why did I do that? Now he's going to hate me and think I'm...I'm dumb. That the council was right, that I'm to quick and rash in my judgements.
He doesn't know how sorry I am and I can't express it.
Obi-Wan POV
What do I do? What do I do? No one has EVER done that before. I have NEVER felt that before! Such fear and power. I...I never thought I was that easy to...get into.
Qui-Gon, how come you always get the hard things.
THIRD PERSON
Obi-Wan stepped forward and said softly," What are you so afraid of?"
Anakin looked up hotly. " I'm not afraid of anything!" "Anakin," Obi-Wan replyed warningly.
Anakin took in a deep breath and said calmly," I'm not afraid of anything, Obi-Wan!" "You're...feelings prove your words false."
Anakin stared into the older man's eyes. He knew what Anakin kept hidden inside. He knew what he was trying to hide about Mistress Chaisa.
"What do you mean?" Anakin asked, faking puzzlement. "Something you are not telling us," Obi-Wan said in a hard voice," About this mission."
Anakin whispered dangerously," It is none of your buisness, you're not my master!"
Obi-Wan softened and whispered back, "No, I'm not, but I am your friend."
Anakin closed his eyes as his shoulders drooped. Inside he was debating whether or not to tell. The Mistress had only hit...well slapped him eight times total. All in one day. When he opened his eyes he spoke soft but strenly," You have to swear, until I say, that you will not tell my master."
Obi-Wan winced." Anakin if it's som-" "Swear you won't!" "I swear."
Anakin took a deep breath and looked around. "Fine, Mistress Chaisa...she's a bounty hunter." "Ani,I-" "Let me finish! She's a bounty hunter that hunts for new...people....new men. So she can take pleasure in making them her pet...or in her words her toy. Since I've became that if I don't do something right most of the time she will slap me. Hard. If you have noticed I have been going to her more frequently. Most of the time it's at night."
Anakin was slightly shaking near the end. Obi-Wan was staring at Anakin. Anakin shifted under the gaze and looked down. When he looked back up Obi- Wan was pacing.
"Well aren't you going to say something?" Anakin asked impatiently. "Yes, it sounds like Mistress Chaisa is a very sick women. How many times has she slapped you and when?"
"Eight, and the day before yesterday." "All in one day?" "Yes."
Obi-Wan stopped. "Anakin I kno-" Anakin burst out in anger. He yelled," Don't you DARE Obi-Wan! YOU SWORE!"
Obi-Wan opened his mouth to say something but closed it when Garen and Qui- Gon came out. They looked puzzled and Qui-Gon said," What's going on?" He looked at Anakin and back to Obi-Wan.
Anakin fixed a glare upon Obi-Wan and the latter sighed inside. "Nothing Qui-Gon. Just...it was nothing importent. I just had forgotten that I swore to Anakin to teach him a very difficult kata."
Anakin's expression cleared and he turned to face his master. "Master Qui-Gon, I'm sorry. Obi-Wan I'm sorry I should not have yelled. Next time perhaps?"
"Sure Anakin."
With that Anakin turned around and was about to go into the hut when a tinkling bell sounded. He switched directions and headed to Chaisa's room.
Qui-Gon turned to Obi-Wan and his voice was hard when he said, "Obi-Wan, tell me the truth I was your master for over twenty years. I know when you are lying."
Obi-Wan looked at Qui-Gon guiltly. "I am sorry, I swore."
Qui-Gon's glare shot daggers at Obi-Wan, who trembled inside.
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Chapter 8----------------------
Anakin's eyes shot open. He realized he was looking at the top of a hut, not the sky. He gingerly touched his right shoulder and gasped out loud. Sith that hurt!
" It isn't healed yet, don't touch it!" came a soft voice.
Anakin looked to his left to see Chaisa sitting in a chair staring at him. He cleared his throat and tried to speak. All that came out was a hoarse croak. Chaisa held up a finger while shaking her head.
"No, no my Anakin, Don't talk. I'll go get you some water." Anakin nodded and glared at her back. This is pathetic, where is my master and the others, he thought worridly.(A/N: spelling, i forgot how to spell that wordgrins sheepishly)
Chaisa came back with the water, in which Anakin gulped down greedily. Once he was finished he asked," Where's m-Qui-Gon and the others?"
Chaisa frowned. "I told you toy, you are not to speak. They, like everyone else, are resting. Now since you are in rebellious mood, you can go back to them." With that she left annoyed.
Anakin rolled his eyes and carefully got up. He winced as his shoulder moved and slowly made his way to his hut. When he entered he could have laughed, but he didn't. Qui-Gon and the other two jedi were sprawled on the beds in such a unjedi like relaxed way.
"Having..fun?" he asked. They sat up startled.
Qui-Gon smiled and said," Actually yes." Anakin smiled back and Qui-Gon saw how rigid he was standing and how he was holding his right arm.
"Padawan, sit down. Let me check your arm." "How do-" " I was the first to look at it. Now sit"
Anakin sat down and relaxed. He hissed in pain as Qui-Go took the bandage off. As his master surveyed the wound with no expression Anakin's imagination went off. What if it was infected and he was going to die? What if they had to chop off that arm? What if? What if? What if it's-
"It's perfectly fine. It will heal nicely," Qui-Gon's voice broke into his absurd thoughts. Anakin nodded relieved. Obi-Wan was laughing at something Garen had said. Anakin smiled at their childishness when that new feeling came over him again.
Instead of getting out, Anakin reached further in. Obi-Wan was still laughing and talking. Perhaps, he doesn't feel this, good, Anakin thought happily. He could feel pain, from a cut. He could feel happiness yet sadness at the same time. Pretty soon he was in a void of thoughts and emotions that weren't his. Obi-Wan had stopped laughing and had his eyes closed.
Garen noticed this and asked quietly," Obi? Everything okay?"
Obi-Wan opened his eyes. He looked at Anakin who was staring, but not seeing Obi-Wan. Obi-Wan, also reached out to Anakin and went behind the boy's sheild. A blast of power and emotion shot out at him. Fear and secrecy pulsed through to him along with pain and a bit of happiness. Obi- Wan could feel the boy getting deeper and deeper without knowing what he was doing. Obi-Wan quickly stopped his bond and put up his shields. Anakin blinked and paled.
Obi-Wan stood up and walked out. Qui-Gon was looking at Anakin with concern. Anakin followed Obi-Wan to a tree. When he got there, Anakin immediatly began apologizing.
"Obi-Wan I'm..s-sorry. I did-couldn't help it. I-I know I shou-shouldn't have and I'm so sorry," he said weakly.
Obi-Wan turned toward Anakin expressionless. Anakin looked down ashamed.
Anakin POV
Oh man, I've blown it now. Sith, why did I do that? Now he's going to hate me and think I'm...I'm dumb. That the council was right, that I'm to quick and rash in my judgements.
He doesn't know how sorry I am and I can't express it.
Obi-Wan POV
What do I do? What do I do? No one has EVER done that before. I have NEVER felt that before! Such fear and power. I...I never thought I was that easy to...get into.
Qui-Gon, how come you always get the hard things.
THIRD PERSON
Obi-Wan stepped forward and said softly," What are you so afraid of?"
Anakin looked up hotly. " I'm not afraid of anything!" "Anakin," Obi-Wan replyed warningly.
Anakin took in a deep breath and said calmly," I'm not afraid of anything, Obi-Wan!" "You're...feelings prove your words false."
Anakin stared into the older man's eyes. He knew what Anakin kept hidden inside. He knew what he was trying to hide about Mistress Chaisa.
"What do you mean?" Anakin asked, faking puzzlement. "Something you are not telling us," Obi-Wan said in a hard voice," About this mission."
Anakin whispered dangerously," It is none of your buisness, you're not my master!"
Obi-Wan softened and whispered back, "No, I'm not, but I am your friend."
Anakin closed his eyes as his shoulders drooped. Inside he was debating whether or not to tell. The Mistress had only hit...well slapped him eight times total. All in one day. When he opened his eyes he spoke soft but strenly," You have to swear, until I say, that you will not tell my master."
Obi-Wan winced." Anakin if it's som-" "Swear you won't!" "I swear."
Anakin took a deep breath and looked around. "Fine, Mistress Chaisa...she's a bounty hunter." "Ani,I-" "Let me finish! She's a bounty hunter that hunts for new...people....new men. So she can take pleasure in making them her pet...or in her words her toy. Since I've became that if I don't do something right most of the time she will slap me. Hard. If you have noticed I have been going to her more frequently. Most of the time it's at night."
Anakin was slightly shaking near the end. Obi-Wan was staring at Anakin. Anakin shifted under the gaze and looked down. When he looked back up Obi- Wan was pacing.
"Well aren't you going to say something?" Anakin asked impatiently. "Yes, it sounds like Mistress Chaisa is a very sick women. How many times has she slapped you and when?"
"Eight, and the day before yesterday." "All in one day?" "Yes."
Obi-Wan stopped. "Anakin I kno-" Anakin burst out in anger. He yelled," Don't you DARE Obi-Wan! YOU SWORE!"
Obi-Wan opened his mouth to say something but closed it when Garen and Qui- Gon came out. They looked puzzled and Qui-Gon said," What's going on?" He looked at Anakin and back to Obi-Wan.
Anakin fixed a glare upon Obi-Wan and the latter sighed inside. "Nothing Qui-Gon. Just...it was nothing importent. I just had forgotten that I swore to Anakin to teach him a very difficult kata."
Anakin's expression cleared and he turned to face his master. "Master Qui-Gon, I'm sorry. Obi-Wan I'm sorry I should not have yelled. Next time perhaps?"
"Sure Anakin."
With that Anakin turned around and was about to go into the hut when a tinkling bell sounded. He switched directions and headed to Chaisa's room.
Qui-Gon turned to Obi-Wan and his voice was hard when he said, "Obi-Wan, tell me the truth I was your master for over twenty years. I know when you are lying."
Obi-Wan looked at Qui-Gon guiltly. "I am sorry, I swore."
Qui-Gon's glare shot daggers at Obi-Wan, who trembled inside.
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