Hermione and Ron
JK Rowling's
Man! I luv you reviewers all so much! You spur me to keep writing!!! PLEASE keep your praises and constructive criticism up!!! You all are so motivating! I love writing this because of your reviews!!! Enjoy chappie 11!! – Moony
Chapter 11
Ron wrote a note back to Luna immediately.
"Are you sure this is going to work Ron?" Harry asked, he looked a little skeptic, "You know, making people jealous hardly ever works."
"Knowing Hermione, she'd be coming to forgive me in less than a few seconds."
"But even if that works, won't Luna be pissed off that you just used her?"
"She's Luna, Harry."
"Yea, but still, if it were Hermione, you wouldn't be saying that."
"Shut up, Harry you prat. Leave this to me."
"Ok, I was jus warning you mate."
"Thanks for the warning."
Once Luna had received the note, she was happy all week. She was blowing Ron kisses in the hall, telling everyone Ron was her boyfriend, and flirting with him. Ron smiled, it was going well. Soon Hermione would hear the news and come for forgiveness.
But when Hermione heard the news, she wasn't even moved. She was still her same ignoring self. Ron was disappointed, but decided to continue with the date. Luna was waiting for him by the door and she gave him a light peck.
Harry sniggered and said, "Good luck, loverboy."
"Go away!"
Harry moved and walked with Seamus and Neville. Luna took Ron's arm, and they stepped on the trolley.
"So where should we go, Ronnie?"
"Please don't call me Ronnie."
"Where should we go Ron?"
"Well, we could just browse around and then have a drink."
"That's a good plan," Luna said dreamily.
So they strolled around Hogsmeade. Luna bought Ron a beautiful Peacock feather pen, and Ron blushed furiously. Oh dear. How could Luna forgive him if Hermione came for forgiveness and he agreed? Maybe Harry was right. But he was having fun. He was sure it would have been better with Hermione though, but he couldn't help laughing and having a good time. When it began to rain, they stepped inside the Three Broomsticks and sat in a squashy booth. Ron bought a tankard of Butterbeer and Luna had a fruit cocktail. She also bought them a medium brownie with whipped cream.
"I really had fun today, Ron," Luna said, smiling.
"Yea, me too," Ron said uncomfortably, "Hey, Luna, I gotta use the bathroom, I'll be right back, ok?"
"All right! Be back before the whipped cream melts though!" she called.
"I will!" Ron replied and quickly waved his hand as he moved in the direction of the bathroom.
As he walked down the aisle, what he saw nearly made him fall over. Hermione was siting in a booth with Viktor Krum! Their heads were close and they were engaged in conversation. Hermione saw Ron at the corner of her eye, but paid him no attention.
'You don't like Ron, you don't like Ron, you don't like Ron! Remember what he said to you?' she thought mentally. She wasn't even paying attention to what Viktor was saying, only thinking about Ron. 'You don't care about Ron anymore! Viktor is a better choice!' But her mind was screaming, 'NO! Ron! Get him before he gets away! Not Krum! Look how hurt Ron is?' 'But you don't care anymore, Hermione. If he really liked you, he would apologize.' 'But' her other voice said, 'you didn't give him a chance to apologize.' Hermione tried to shut the voice. But it didn't work. Her mind kept telling her to go back to Ron.
Ron hurried away, angry and shocked by what he had seen. She really didn't care anymore. This whole plan, his feelings, it was all for nothing. He couldn't believe it. It hurt so much! One mistake – one stupid mistake, one emotional outburst cost him this? It wasn't fair! If Hermione really liked him, wouldn't she apologize? He didn't want to go back to Luna. No, he couldn't face Luna after what he had just saw. What would he say? He really didn't want to be with Luna, he wanted to be in the place of Krum. Sitting there, leaning close, engaged in conversation. But it wasn't going to happen. Because Hermione didn't like him anymore.
'Stop that Ron! She likes you inside! She's just too stubborn to admit it!'
'Or is that true?'
He hurriedly went back to Luna. After eating his brownie with her, he suddenly said – "Oh my gosh! Luna! I forgot! I had to go meet Harry ten minutes ago! I'm really really sorry!"
Luna smiled.
"It's all right, see you later, Ron."
"See you."
Ron hurried out of the shop. No, he was not going to Harry. Harry had been right. Jealousy never worked. And now Luna thought he liked him. It was such a tangled web he had woven. He should've never gotten into this world. This world of heartbreaks and love. There were hurts and pains. But there was happiness and light. If you wove the web right, that is. And Ron had woven it wrong, and he couldn't even tear it down and start over again. He was trapped inside. His web was too tangled, so tangled, he couldn't even tear it down. And he didn't know what to do. He was 17. When he had turned 17, he felt like an adult. He was of age now and he had felt proud. He felt like he knew everything. But yet, he seemed so lost. The web of love was the most confusing and difficult to weave. And he had stupidly tried to weave it.
He milled around Honeydukes, sampling chocolates and new candies, but didn't really pay attention to the taste. He was mainly thinking about how horrible his love life was. He wondered how many girls he would have to go through before he could finally have a good love life.
Did that chapter suck? I hope not! I am getting my ideas straight out of my head, so if it sounds bad please forgive me! (gets on knees and pleads forgiveness) Once again, thanks to all reviewers! I would reply to all, but there are too much!!! One thing I can say to everyone though – thanks for the motivation!!! – Moony
JK Rowling's
Man! I luv you reviewers all so much! You spur me to keep writing!!! PLEASE keep your praises and constructive criticism up!!! You all are so motivating! I love writing this because of your reviews!!! Enjoy chappie 11!! – Moony
Chapter 11
Ron wrote a note back to Luna immediately.
"Are you sure this is going to work Ron?" Harry asked, he looked a little skeptic, "You know, making people jealous hardly ever works."
"Knowing Hermione, she'd be coming to forgive me in less than a few seconds."
"But even if that works, won't Luna be pissed off that you just used her?"
"She's Luna, Harry."
"Yea, but still, if it were Hermione, you wouldn't be saying that."
"Shut up, Harry you prat. Leave this to me."
"Ok, I was jus warning you mate."
"Thanks for the warning."
Once Luna had received the note, she was happy all week. She was blowing Ron kisses in the hall, telling everyone Ron was her boyfriend, and flirting with him. Ron smiled, it was going well. Soon Hermione would hear the news and come for forgiveness.
But when Hermione heard the news, she wasn't even moved. She was still her same ignoring self. Ron was disappointed, but decided to continue with the date. Luna was waiting for him by the door and she gave him a light peck.
Harry sniggered and said, "Good luck, loverboy."
"Go away!"
Harry moved and walked with Seamus and Neville. Luna took Ron's arm, and they stepped on the trolley.
"So where should we go, Ronnie?"
"Please don't call me Ronnie."
"Where should we go Ron?"
"Well, we could just browse around and then have a drink."
"That's a good plan," Luna said dreamily.
So they strolled around Hogsmeade. Luna bought Ron a beautiful Peacock feather pen, and Ron blushed furiously. Oh dear. How could Luna forgive him if Hermione came for forgiveness and he agreed? Maybe Harry was right. But he was having fun. He was sure it would have been better with Hermione though, but he couldn't help laughing and having a good time. When it began to rain, they stepped inside the Three Broomsticks and sat in a squashy booth. Ron bought a tankard of Butterbeer and Luna had a fruit cocktail. She also bought them a medium brownie with whipped cream.
"I really had fun today, Ron," Luna said, smiling.
"Yea, me too," Ron said uncomfortably, "Hey, Luna, I gotta use the bathroom, I'll be right back, ok?"
"All right! Be back before the whipped cream melts though!" she called.
"I will!" Ron replied and quickly waved his hand as he moved in the direction of the bathroom.
As he walked down the aisle, what he saw nearly made him fall over. Hermione was siting in a booth with Viktor Krum! Their heads were close and they were engaged in conversation. Hermione saw Ron at the corner of her eye, but paid him no attention.
'You don't like Ron, you don't like Ron, you don't like Ron! Remember what he said to you?' she thought mentally. She wasn't even paying attention to what Viktor was saying, only thinking about Ron. 'You don't care about Ron anymore! Viktor is a better choice!' But her mind was screaming, 'NO! Ron! Get him before he gets away! Not Krum! Look how hurt Ron is?' 'But you don't care anymore, Hermione. If he really liked you, he would apologize.' 'But' her other voice said, 'you didn't give him a chance to apologize.' Hermione tried to shut the voice. But it didn't work. Her mind kept telling her to go back to Ron.
Ron hurried away, angry and shocked by what he had seen. She really didn't care anymore. This whole plan, his feelings, it was all for nothing. He couldn't believe it. It hurt so much! One mistake – one stupid mistake, one emotional outburst cost him this? It wasn't fair! If Hermione really liked him, wouldn't she apologize? He didn't want to go back to Luna. No, he couldn't face Luna after what he had just saw. What would he say? He really didn't want to be with Luna, he wanted to be in the place of Krum. Sitting there, leaning close, engaged in conversation. But it wasn't going to happen. Because Hermione didn't like him anymore.
'Stop that Ron! She likes you inside! She's just too stubborn to admit it!'
'Or is that true?'
He hurriedly went back to Luna. After eating his brownie with her, he suddenly said – "Oh my gosh! Luna! I forgot! I had to go meet Harry ten minutes ago! I'm really really sorry!"
Luna smiled.
"It's all right, see you later, Ron."
"See you."
Ron hurried out of the shop. No, he was not going to Harry. Harry had been right. Jealousy never worked. And now Luna thought he liked him. It was such a tangled web he had woven. He should've never gotten into this world. This world of heartbreaks and love. There were hurts and pains. But there was happiness and light. If you wove the web right, that is. And Ron had woven it wrong, and he couldn't even tear it down and start over again. He was trapped inside. His web was too tangled, so tangled, he couldn't even tear it down. And he didn't know what to do. He was 17. When he had turned 17, he felt like an adult. He was of age now and he had felt proud. He felt like he knew everything. But yet, he seemed so lost. The web of love was the most confusing and difficult to weave. And he had stupidly tried to weave it.
He milled around Honeydukes, sampling chocolates and new candies, but didn't really pay attention to the taste. He was mainly thinking about how horrible his love life was. He wondered how many girls he would have to go through before he could finally have a good love life.
Did that chapter suck? I hope not! I am getting my ideas straight out of my head, so if it sounds bad please forgive me! (gets on knees and pleads forgiveness) Once again, thanks to all reviewers! I would reply to all, but there are too much!!! One thing I can say to everyone though – thanks for the motivation!!! – Moony