Here's chapter 11!!!
Don't worry...I wouldn't let Ani die! That would be TOO cruel!!
Obi-Wan spat out blood for the millionth time in the waste basket. Although Qui-Gon had sustained his wound, he wasn't completely healed and out of danger yet. Garen patted him on the back and Obi-Wan nodded his thanks. He wiped his mouth on a napkin and sat back in his chair. Clearing his throat, Obi-Wan realized how hot it was.
Garen sat back, too and sneaked a glance at Qui-Gon. The old master hadn't spoken a single word since they had been knocked to the floor by a great sorce of power. The power was so great that, although the three jedi didn't know it, it had sent every single force sensitive being to their knees, unable to move.
What they did know was it could've only been one person, Anakin. The emotions coming off and in that burst of power was so great, so strong. Garen had been scared because he had felt like crying and even teared up. Qui-Gon had openly sobbed, feeling through his bond with Anakin the pain his appentice was feeling. Even Obi-Wan cried a little. As soon as the power had come it left, as if had never made an appearance.
Now they were going toward this reclusive place at full speed. Fear and sadness rolled off Qui-Gon in such waves that Obi-Wan put a hand on his old master's arm. The arm beneath his hand trembled and for the first time in his life Obi-Wan felt completely hopeless and at a loss for soothing words. He didn't know if Anakin was alive or not, he too could feel Anakin like Qui-Gon did. But now there was nothing.
"There it is," said Qui-Gon pointing to a building. Qui-Gon landed the plane swiftly and wasted no time getting off. The other two quickly followed.
The three drew their lightsabers in unison and stepped in the door. Bloodied bodies lay everyhere, sickening the air with a nasty odor. Moans of the dying echoed off the stone walls and the jedi walked forward. It got steadily worse as they went deeper into the prison. They searched doorless rooms, only to find more dead people. Obi-Wan just about gave up when he saw a hand.
He went closer and turned into the room, staring at the floor. There lay Chaisa, bleeding from private places, cold dead. Obi-Wan looked up and yelled. Qui-Gon and Garen quickly came in and stared. Qui-Gon hurried forward towards Anakin's body. Cutting the chains from the boys feet and hands, Anakin fell limp into Qui-Gon's arms. Obi-Wan took off his cloak and wrapped it around Anakin's naked body.
Qui-Gon shook as he turned Anakin over and gently laid the boy on the floor. He felt for a pulse and found a weak and unsteady one. He continued to look over the body and when he came to fine the sexual abuse he gasped and stood up quickly.
"Oh god..oh god..no."
Obi-Wan and Garen quickly moved into action. While Obi-Wan comforted Qui- Gon, Garen picked up the boy and quickly picked up from where Qui-Gon left off. He gasped and siad, "He's..fading. We have to get back to the temple. Anakin's dying!"
He looked up at his friends, at their shocked and saddened faces. They rushed to the ship and quickly took off to Coruscent.
Anakin opened his unfocused eyes. He felt sick and tired. His skin was hot but he felt cold. He looked weakly around the room and felt a cool hand on his forehead, soothing him.
"His fever hasn't gone down."
"It will, just give it and Anakin time. The boy has been through a great deal. He will heal completely physical, at least. When he gets released you..might want to consider thearpy, mental thearpy."
"Thank you."
Anakin's eyes focused more and saw Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan standing by his bed. He opened his mouth and managed to croak out, "Hey.."
Qui-Gon looked down and smiled. "Hi yourself."
Obi-Wan, too smiled and said," Hey, how're you feeling?"
Anakin cleared his throat and said slowly," I've been..better!" The older jedi laughed quietly. The door opened and Garen entered the room. He waved to Anakin cheerfully and took Obi-Wan aside. After a few moments Obi-Wan walked back over and put a hand on Ani's shoulder.
"I am sorry, but I have to go somewhere. I will be back later. Get well Anakin!"
"Thanks..and you..to," came the hoarse reply.
Obi-Wan smiled and he and Garen left. Qui0Gon had pulled up a chair and was now sitting in it, deep in thought. Anakin smiled softly and said," A..credit for..your thoughts."
"Hmmm...a credit for my thoughts, eh? Okay I'll take that credit," Qui-Gon smiled," Anakin, I don't want to press you but time is the issue. What happened in that prison?"
Anakin's smile disappeared and he looked away, tears forming already. He tried, unsuccessfully to say something but a lump had formed in his throat. Qui-Gon patted his arm gently and gave the boy an awkward hug. Anakin hugged back and let the tears flow. His sobs were one of anguish and deep pain. Exhausted, he fell asleep after awhile. Qui-Gon laid him back down and covered him up.
"It's okay Ani," Qui-Gon whispered," There are some things, even the worst things, that remain secret. But my padawan I know, I know."
EPILOGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Two months had passed since that mission on planet X-Tone. The council was informed of the Sith's movement and plans. Also Anakin was forced to relive the encounter over three times. Each time became easier, but not less painful. Each time he woould break down in racking sobs, but everyone understood.
After a few days since that hospital visit, Anakin was allowed out but told that he had to take it easy and nothing more.
The council was in fear for young Skywalker. He had touched the darkside many times during this mission and had come dangerously close to turning. They, ecspecially Yoda, feared for the jedi's lives and lives of everyone. Even now they sensed a disturbing change about Anakin.
He grew more sullen and angry at times. Most of the time he would get extra rash in his decisions and grew fierce in his studies. Anakin, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan continued to go on missions together and even with Anakin's new behavior the three were inseperable.
Without knowing, the three had formed an unbreakable bond, or so everyone thought.
When they were called to revisit Naboo, Anakin was once again entranced by Senator Anidala's beauty and charm. Lust and devotion verses the Jedi Code was a constant battle for Anakin. It soon turned to anger and hate, as Anakin saw that he couldn't have both. The dark side boiled inside of Anakin and led him deeper and deeper into its core.
The clone war came and Anakin fought to protect the one's he loved. During the battle Qui-Gon Jinn was killed by a bomb, unknowingly planted in his speeder. Obi-Wan took over as Anakin's master, but soon he too perished, by Anakin's or Darth Vadar's own hand.
Padme, who Anakin had married, had twins who were forced into hiding. Anakin learned of this and he killed his own wife. His children, without his knowledge were seperated, only to be rejoined much later.
Of course you know how it ends, but what you don't know is that even through all of the rest of his life, after the incident with Chaisa, Anakin never forgot the witch. She had burned a hole in his very soul and mind, a hole that never could be filled. That day she ruined the innocent boy. Also, that day she gave Anakin a lesson she didn't mean to.
Chaisa had taught him that taking your failures and anger out on someone else wasn't the way to let it out. Anakin didn't realized this lesson until he stared into the face of his own son, his flesh and blood, with his own blue eyes.
Because of Chaisa, Anakin, in the very last minutes of his life, turned back to light and died happily. Balance was brought back to the force, and remained that way for a very long time.
THE END!!!!!!!!!
A BIG HUG AND KISS TO ALL OF MY REVIEWERS. THIS HAS BEEN A VERY FUN STORY TO WRITE.
A VERY SPECIAL THANKS TO KYNSTAR!!!!!!!!! WHO GAVE ME THE WILL TO FINSIH THIS STORY. I DEDICATE THIS STORY TO YOU.
Don't worry...I wouldn't let Ani die! That would be TOO cruel!!
Obi-Wan spat out blood for the millionth time in the waste basket. Although Qui-Gon had sustained his wound, he wasn't completely healed and out of danger yet. Garen patted him on the back and Obi-Wan nodded his thanks. He wiped his mouth on a napkin and sat back in his chair. Clearing his throat, Obi-Wan realized how hot it was.
Garen sat back, too and sneaked a glance at Qui-Gon. The old master hadn't spoken a single word since they had been knocked to the floor by a great sorce of power. The power was so great that, although the three jedi didn't know it, it had sent every single force sensitive being to their knees, unable to move.
What they did know was it could've only been one person, Anakin. The emotions coming off and in that burst of power was so great, so strong. Garen had been scared because he had felt like crying and even teared up. Qui-Gon had openly sobbed, feeling through his bond with Anakin the pain his appentice was feeling. Even Obi-Wan cried a little. As soon as the power had come it left, as if had never made an appearance.
Now they were going toward this reclusive place at full speed. Fear and sadness rolled off Qui-Gon in such waves that Obi-Wan put a hand on his old master's arm. The arm beneath his hand trembled and for the first time in his life Obi-Wan felt completely hopeless and at a loss for soothing words. He didn't know if Anakin was alive or not, he too could feel Anakin like Qui-Gon did. But now there was nothing.
"There it is," said Qui-Gon pointing to a building. Qui-Gon landed the plane swiftly and wasted no time getting off. The other two quickly followed.
The three drew their lightsabers in unison and stepped in the door. Bloodied bodies lay everyhere, sickening the air with a nasty odor. Moans of the dying echoed off the stone walls and the jedi walked forward. It got steadily worse as they went deeper into the prison. They searched doorless rooms, only to find more dead people. Obi-Wan just about gave up when he saw a hand.
He went closer and turned into the room, staring at the floor. There lay Chaisa, bleeding from private places, cold dead. Obi-Wan looked up and yelled. Qui-Gon and Garen quickly came in and stared. Qui-Gon hurried forward towards Anakin's body. Cutting the chains from the boys feet and hands, Anakin fell limp into Qui-Gon's arms. Obi-Wan took off his cloak and wrapped it around Anakin's naked body.
Qui-Gon shook as he turned Anakin over and gently laid the boy on the floor. He felt for a pulse and found a weak and unsteady one. He continued to look over the body and when he came to fine the sexual abuse he gasped and stood up quickly.
"Oh god..oh god..no."
Obi-Wan and Garen quickly moved into action. While Obi-Wan comforted Qui- Gon, Garen picked up the boy and quickly picked up from where Qui-Gon left off. He gasped and siad, "He's..fading. We have to get back to the temple. Anakin's dying!"
He looked up at his friends, at their shocked and saddened faces. They rushed to the ship and quickly took off to Coruscent.
Anakin opened his unfocused eyes. He felt sick and tired. His skin was hot but he felt cold. He looked weakly around the room and felt a cool hand on his forehead, soothing him.
"His fever hasn't gone down."
"It will, just give it and Anakin time. The boy has been through a great deal. He will heal completely physical, at least. When he gets released you..might want to consider thearpy, mental thearpy."
"Thank you."
Anakin's eyes focused more and saw Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan standing by his bed. He opened his mouth and managed to croak out, "Hey.."
Qui-Gon looked down and smiled. "Hi yourself."
Obi-Wan, too smiled and said," Hey, how're you feeling?"
Anakin cleared his throat and said slowly," I've been..better!" The older jedi laughed quietly. The door opened and Garen entered the room. He waved to Anakin cheerfully and took Obi-Wan aside. After a few moments Obi-Wan walked back over and put a hand on Ani's shoulder.
"I am sorry, but I have to go somewhere. I will be back later. Get well Anakin!"
"Thanks..and you..to," came the hoarse reply.
Obi-Wan smiled and he and Garen left. Qui0Gon had pulled up a chair and was now sitting in it, deep in thought. Anakin smiled softly and said," A..credit for..your thoughts."
"Hmmm...a credit for my thoughts, eh? Okay I'll take that credit," Qui-Gon smiled," Anakin, I don't want to press you but time is the issue. What happened in that prison?"
Anakin's smile disappeared and he looked away, tears forming already. He tried, unsuccessfully to say something but a lump had formed in his throat. Qui-Gon patted his arm gently and gave the boy an awkward hug. Anakin hugged back and let the tears flow. His sobs were one of anguish and deep pain. Exhausted, he fell asleep after awhile. Qui-Gon laid him back down and covered him up.
"It's okay Ani," Qui-Gon whispered," There are some things, even the worst things, that remain secret. But my padawan I know, I know."
EPILOGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Two months had passed since that mission on planet X-Tone. The council was informed of the Sith's movement and plans. Also Anakin was forced to relive the encounter over three times. Each time became easier, but not less painful. Each time he woould break down in racking sobs, but everyone understood.
After a few days since that hospital visit, Anakin was allowed out but told that he had to take it easy and nothing more.
The council was in fear for young Skywalker. He had touched the darkside many times during this mission and had come dangerously close to turning. They, ecspecially Yoda, feared for the jedi's lives and lives of everyone. Even now they sensed a disturbing change about Anakin.
He grew more sullen and angry at times. Most of the time he would get extra rash in his decisions and grew fierce in his studies. Anakin, Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan continued to go on missions together and even with Anakin's new behavior the three were inseperable.
Without knowing, the three had formed an unbreakable bond, or so everyone thought.
When they were called to revisit Naboo, Anakin was once again entranced by Senator Anidala's beauty and charm. Lust and devotion verses the Jedi Code was a constant battle for Anakin. It soon turned to anger and hate, as Anakin saw that he couldn't have both. The dark side boiled inside of Anakin and led him deeper and deeper into its core.
The clone war came and Anakin fought to protect the one's he loved. During the battle Qui-Gon Jinn was killed by a bomb, unknowingly planted in his speeder. Obi-Wan took over as Anakin's master, but soon he too perished, by Anakin's or Darth Vadar's own hand.
Padme, who Anakin had married, had twins who were forced into hiding. Anakin learned of this and he killed his own wife. His children, without his knowledge were seperated, only to be rejoined much later.
Of course you know how it ends, but what you don't know is that even through all of the rest of his life, after the incident with Chaisa, Anakin never forgot the witch. She had burned a hole in his very soul and mind, a hole that never could be filled. That day she ruined the innocent boy. Also, that day she gave Anakin a lesson she didn't mean to.
Chaisa had taught him that taking your failures and anger out on someone else wasn't the way to let it out. Anakin didn't realized this lesson until he stared into the face of his own son, his flesh and blood, with his own blue eyes.
Because of Chaisa, Anakin, in the very last minutes of his life, turned back to light and died happily. Balance was brought back to the force, and remained that way for a very long time.
THE END!!!!!!!!!
A BIG HUG AND KISS TO ALL OF MY REVIEWERS. THIS HAS BEEN A VERY FUN STORY TO WRITE.
A VERY SPECIAL THANKS TO KYNSTAR!!!!!!!!! WHO GAVE ME THE WILL TO FINSIH THIS STORY. I DEDICATE THIS STORY TO YOU.