Hello, I'm back... Well one thing that I should say first (a review respond to 'Confused')...
Yes I'm the 'Foolproof' in 'Foamy and Foolproof' and yes 'Spring Feelings' and 'The Mistake' will be updated. The reason why I'm writing this story alone is that when Foamy and I wrote 'Spring Feelings' (or if it was 'The Mistake', I can't remember) some people were complaining about me, saying that Foamy should write alone and that kind of stuff. It made me sad. 'What if I can't write? What if the only reason we get good review is because of Foamy?' I wanted to see if I could write a story without making it end up in a mess. I've screwed up every single story that I wrote I just hope that I wouldn't make the same mistakes again. Happy with the explanation? (That's the longest review respond I have ever written...)
And to al the other reviewers: I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! (thank you)
And for the last time, I DON'T OWN NARUTO!
Anyway, on with the story!
Feeling Reviled- by Sliced
Naruto felt happy, holding on to Sasukes left arm. "This is the kitchen" Sasuke said.
"Oh" Naruto said and smiled when he saw the red apron on the chair. "Afraid of getting dirt on your clothes Sasuke?" He lifted up the apron. "Maybe I should kiss the cook..."
"Shouldn't you do that after the dinner? Maybe I have putt poison in the food.." Sasuke smirked. Naruto returned the smirk with an ear-to-ear smile. 'Sasuke is trying to be funny, that's so unlike him.' Naruto thought. 'But I like this new Sasuke so why complain?'
Sasuke pulled out a chair so that Naruto could sit down. Naruto hesitated before he sat down.
"Thank you Sasuke! Since when did you become such a gentleman?" Naruto asked.
"Since when did you become so cute?" Sasuke asked as a respond. Naruto blushed. 'What did I just said?' Sasuke thought and sat down on the chair next to Naruto.
"What's this?" Naruto asked and looked at the meatballs.
"Meatballs" Sasuke said and took one in his mouth. Naruto still looked confused so Sasuke explained that it was minced meat rolled in to balls that you fry in a frying pan.
"Oh, can you eat them?" Naruto asked. 'He's cuter then he normally is but that doesn't mean that he's smarter then usual' Sasuke thought and smirked.
"Yeah, that's the point...." Sasuke said. He was just about to ad 'dobe' but it didn't sound right anymore. He didn't know why, but it felt wrong to call Naruto a dobe. Naruto wasn't smarter, but he felt like it was going to spoil the moment.
"Oh, but you forgot the chop-sticks. You don't want us to eat with our fingers do ya? Because then we will get food on our fingers..." Naruto said and thought that he was cleaver. Sasuke just kept on smirking.
"Then I'll just have to lick the food of your fingers then..." Sasuke said and was shocked by his own words. 'What the hell did I just said?' Naruto froze and could not say a word. Sasuke reached out for one of Narutos hands. It was shivering when Sasuke pulled it closer to his mouth.
"I'll do just like this..." Sasuke said and slowly opened his mouth. Naruto started to freak out. 'WHAT THE HELL IS HE DOING?' Naruto thought and pulled his hand back before Sasuke could taste it.
"Are you scared?" Sasuke said trying to make his voice even lover then it already was. Naruto felt how his cheeks burn.
"Yes" he whispered. Sasuke reached out fore his hand again.
"You don't have to be..." he said before kissing the tip of Narutos index finger. Sasuke opened his mouth once again and now Narutos finger was resting on his lower lip. Naruto didn't look terrified any more. Now Sasukes tongue on the tip of his finger. Sasukes tongue was so warm.
Narutos POV
I can't believe he is doing this! It feels so good. Come on Naruto it just your finger he has in his mouth. Not like it's anything else. Oh my God! He is sucking on my finger. It feels so great!
Did I wash my hands? I hope I did. If I didn't, I feel sorry for Sasuke. Why did he stop? And why is he looking at me like this? He's moving closer. What shall I do? Kiss him? I've never kissed anyone before, at least not with tongues involved. He is so fucking close and he got so beautiful eyes.
He is kissing me! Oh man. I didn't see this coming. His hot lips pressing against mine. Is that his tongue? Well, what ever it is it's in my mouth now. It feels good, really good. How can a persons tongue taste so good? And feel that good? I mean it's just a tongue. But it's Sasukes tongue.
End of Narutos POV
Sasuke gently pulled away from Naruto. They looked at each other for a second before they kissed again. Naruto rested his hands on Sasukes waist. Sasukes left hand was making its way down Narutos chest.
When they took a pause to breath they Sasuke looked Naruto deeply in to his blue eyes. They seemed to sparkle. Narutos lips were slightly patterned. Sasuke gave them a quick kiss before he started to give Naruto butterfly kisses on his neck. Naruto moaned when he felt Sasukes teeth on his skin. He didn't know what to do. Sasukes hands were everywhere and it was making Naruto loose his mind.
The food on the table was forgotten a long time ago as they were moving to the bedroom.
(AN: if you want you can insert your own lemon here, because I wont write any.....sticks tongue out)
The next day: Sasuke woke up when he heard a scream. He looked at the sleeping blond beside him.
"Naruto, wake up! It's just a nightmare." He said hugging Naruto. Naruto hugged him back and kissed Sasuke on his cheek.
"Thank you Sasuke. Thank you for everything..." Naruto said in to Sasukes chest.
"You're welcome, but I did only wake you up..."
"But I was having such a horrible dream." Naruto said and Sasuke pulled him closer. Naruto was shivering.
"But it was only a dream. And it's over now..." Sasuke stroke Narutos blond hair trying to comfort Naruto.
"But what if it becomes reality?" he said and a tear feel from his eye down on Sasukes bare chest.
"It wont, I promise you. If it does I'll be there to protect you... I'll never leave you're side." Sasuke said and whipped the tear away.
"But that was what the dream was all about, first you said that you were going to stay by my side and then you walked away and you wrote me a letter. In that letter you wrote that last night meant nothing to you. You wrote that you were going to leave me and never come back." Naruto said having a very hard time holding his tears from soaking Sasukes, still naked, chest.
"Naruto I would never leave you! I love you dobe! Didn't you noticed that last night?" Sasuke asked and looked Naruto deeply in to his eyes.
"You love me?"
"Yes dobe. Why did you think last night was all about?" Sasuke said and kissed Naruto.
"Sasuke, do you want to know something?" Naruto asked after a minute of making out.
"Sure..."
"I love you."
"I love you to...I love you more then you love Ramen." Sasuke said and smirked.
"I love you more then Ramen..." Naruto said from the bottom of his heart.
OWARI!!
Sliced: So, did you like it or not? Please leave a review.
The end was kinda lame. But I liked it...and I'm the one who wrote this thing so...
Please REVIEW!!
Yes I'm the 'Foolproof' in 'Foamy and Foolproof' and yes 'Spring Feelings' and 'The Mistake' will be updated. The reason why I'm writing this story alone is that when Foamy and I wrote 'Spring Feelings' (or if it was 'The Mistake', I can't remember) some people were complaining about me, saying that Foamy should write alone and that kind of stuff. It made me sad. 'What if I can't write? What if the only reason we get good review is because of Foamy?' I wanted to see if I could write a story without making it end up in a mess. I've screwed up every single story that I wrote I just hope that I wouldn't make the same mistakes again. Happy with the explanation? (That's the longest review respond I have ever written...)
And to al the other reviewers: I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!! (thank you)
And for the last time, I DON'T OWN NARUTO!
Anyway, on with the story!
Feeling Reviled- by Sliced
Naruto felt happy, holding on to Sasukes left arm. "This is the kitchen" Sasuke said.
"Oh" Naruto said and smiled when he saw the red apron on the chair. "Afraid of getting dirt on your clothes Sasuke?" He lifted up the apron. "Maybe I should kiss the cook..."
"Shouldn't you do that after the dinner? Maybe I have putt poison in the food.." Sasuke smirked. Naruto returned the smirk with an ear-to-ear smile. 'Sasuke is trying to be funny, that's so unlike him.' Naruto thought. 'But I like this new Sasuke so why complain?'
Sasuke pulled out a chair so that Naruto could sit down. Naruto hesitated before he sat down.
"Thank you Sasuke! Since when did you become such a gentleman?" Naruto asked.
"Since when did you become so cute?" Sasuke asked as a respond. Naruto blushed. 'What did I just said?' Sasuke thought and sat down on the chair next to Naruto.
"What's this?" Naruto asked and looked at the meatballs.
"Meatballs" Sasuke said and took one in his mouth. Naruto still looked confused so Sasuke explained that it was minced meat rolled in to balls that you fry in a frying pan.
"Oh, can you eat them?" Naruto asked. 'He's cuter then he normally is but that doesn't mean that he's smarter then usual' Sasuke thought and smirked.
"Yeah, that's the point...." Sasuke said. He was just about to ad 'dobe' but it didn't sound right anymore. He didn't know why, but it felt wrong to call Naruto a dobe. Naruto wasn't smarter, but he felt like it was going to spoil the moment.
"Oh, but you forgot the chop-sticks. You don't want us to eat with our fingers do ya? Because then we will get food on our fingers..." Naruto said and thought that he was cleaver. Sasuke just kept on smirking.
"Then I'll just have to lick the food of your fingers then..." Sasuke said and was shocked by his own words. 'What the hell did I just said?' Naruto froze and could not say a word. Sasuke reached out for one of Narutos hands. It was shivering when Sasuke pulled it closer to his mouth.
"I'll do just like this..." Sasuke said and slowly opened his mouth. Naruto started to freak out. 'WHAT THE HELL IS HE DOING?' Naruto thought and pulled his hand back before Sasuke could taste it.
"Are you scared?" Sasuke said trying to make his voice even lover then it already was. Naruto felt how his cheeks burn.
"Yes" he whispered. Sasuke reached out fore his hand again.
"You don't have to be..." he said before kissing the tip of Narutos index finger. Sasuke opened his mouth once again and now Narutos finger was resting on his lower lip. Naruto didn't look terrified any more. Now Sasukes tongue on the tip of his finger. Sasukes tongue was so warm.
Narutos POV
I can't believe he is doing this! It feels so good. Come on Naruto it just your finger he has in his mouth. Not like it's anything else. Oh my God! He is sucking on my finger. It feels so great!
Did I wash my hands? I hope I did. If I didn't, I feel sorry for Sasuke. Why did he stop? And why is he looking at me like this? He's moving closer. What shall I do? Kiss him? I've never kissed anyone before, at least not with tongues involved. He is so fucking close and he got so beautiful eyes.
He is kissing me! Oh man. I didn't see this coming. His hot lips pressing against mine. Is that his tongue? Well, what ever it is it's in my mouth now. It feels good, really good. How can a persons tongue taste so good? And feel that good? I mean it's just a tongue. But it's Sasukes tongue.
End of Narutos POV
Sasuke gently pulled away from Naruto. They looked at each other for a second before they kissed again. Naruto rested his hands on Sasukes waist. Sasukes left hand was making its way down Narutos chest.
When they took a pause to breath they Sasuke looked Naruto deeply in to his blue eyes. They seemed to sparkle. Narutos lips were slightly patterned. Sasuke gave them a quick kiss before he started to give Naruto butterfly kisses on his neck. Naruto moaned when he felt Sasukes teeth on his skin. He didn't know what to do. Sasukes hands were everywhere and it was making Naruto loose his mind.
The food on the table was forgotten a long time ago as they were moving to the bedroom.
(AN: if you want you can insert your own lemon here, because I wont write any.....sticks tongue out)
The next day: Sasuke woke up when he heard a scream. He looked at the sleeping blond beside him.
"Naruto, wake up! It's just a nightmare." He said hugging Naruto. Naruto hugged him back and kissed Sasuke on his cheek.
"Thank you Sasuke. Thank you for everything..." Naruto said in to Sasukes chest.
"You're welcome, but I did only wake you up..."
"But I was having such a horrible dream." Naruto said and Sasuke pulled him closer. Naruto was shivering.
"But it was only a dream. And it's over now..." Sasuke stroke Narutos blond hair trying to comfort Naruto.
"But what if it becomes reality?" he said and a tear feel from his eye down on Sasukes bare chest.
"It wont, I promise you. If it does I'll be there to protect you... I'll never leave you're side." Sasuke said and whipped the tear away.
"But that was what the dream was all about, first you said that you were going to stay by my side and then you walked away and you wrote me a letter. In that letter you wrote that last night meant nothing to you. You wrote that you were going to leave me and never come back." Naruto said having a very hard time holding his tears from soaking Sasukes, still naked, chest.
"Naruto I would never leave you! I love you dobe! Didn't you noticed that last night?" Sasuke asked and looked Naruto deeply in to his eyes.
"You love me?"
"Yes dobe. Why did you think last night was all about?" Sasuke said and kissed Naruto.
"Sasuke, do you want to know something?" Naruto asked after a minute of making out.
"Sure..."
"I love you."
"I love you to...I love you more then you love Ramen." Sasuke said and smirked.
"I love you more then Ramen..." Naruto said from the bottom of his heart.
OWARI!!
Sliced: So, did you like it or not? Please leave a review.
The end was kinda lame. But I liked it...and I'm the one who wrote this thing so...
Please REVIEW!!