AN: Hello peoples! This is how I think Star Wars episode 3 will turn out
roughly. This is my first fan fiction so please be kind!
Thank you: preciousbabyblue for your review it was very encouraging! I hope you like this chapter. My first review!!!!! does dance around house and gets stared at by family
Disclaimer: I forgot in the other chapters Puts paper bag on head Ahem... I do not own anything to do with Star Wars except these stickers I bought at Coles and episode 2 on DVD.
Chapter 1
The usual calm of the sector was suddenly shattered as two ships burst out of hyperspace. The first was small and quick but badly damaged under the unyielding fire of its oppressor. The huge triangular battle ship was gaining fast, its victim had no way of escape...
A junior sensory officer named Shakira Rostoni sat aboard the Republic Fighter in the sunken area that surrounded a huge catwalk in the centre of the room, monitoring the proceedings of the battle. She looked around the bridge and once again marvelled at the sight. Clones were everywhere, their white armour filled the air with the constant reminder of the mystery surrounding their origin. Then there was the republic officers like herself, dressed in the traditional blue uniforms of the service, they were not soldiers but were the crew of the ship making sure that everything ran like clockwork for the Army...and the Jedi.
Suddenly the Bridge doors slid open with a hiss and the object of her new daydream strode on to the catwalk above her head. He was 6 foot tall and was clad in black Jedi robes with a flowing cape, his hair that had been kept short for so long during his Padawan years had now grown out and framed his chiselled face in sexy curls. The form of Anakin Skywalker was definitely an impressive sight to the eyes of many female officers aboard "Too bad they can't fall in love." She thought.
Surveying the proceedings as he went Anakin walked up to a young officer he noticed staring at him. "Report" he ordered down at her, curious as to who this particular separatist vessel might contain. "It's confirmed" she replied jumping out of the revine and glancing at her console hurriedly. "Shields are down and Nute Gunray is definitely aboard." "Excellent" he replied relieved, "prepare for boarding procedures, and inform General Kenobi of our success." "Yes sir"
Anakin allowed himself a moment to revel in his success. Finally he had captured the Niemodian who had made Padme's life hell for so long. Of course the senate had only issue the warrant for his capture when they discovered his dealings with Count Dokoo and in turn his mysterious sith master, but for Anakin Skywalker the motivation ran much closer to home. He then allowed his thoughts to turn to much more pleasurable thoughts. Padme, It had been eight months, and 3 days since they had parted and he was forced to attend to his duties, now that he was no longer Obi-Wan's apprentice, after his trials he had been on his own or with other knights. It was per chance that they were together again on this particular mission, but he still felt as though Obi-Wan was watching and evaluating his every move. At this he shook his head and smirked to himself, how Padme would laugh at him if she knew how he felt about his old master. He could almost hear her in his mind "Obi-Wan cares about you Anakin" she would exclaim, "You cant expect him to give up his fatherly tendencies overnight!" Of course she was right, he admitted she always was when it came to him...
Master Obi-Wan Kenobi sat in quarters meditating on recent events. Anakin had received his Knighthood, a mere year after his failure with Count Dokoo. Anakin was not then, and still wasn't able to control his reckless anger. He had brought this up with the counsel and protested to granting Anakin his rank. However, because of the loss of all the Jedi, killed during the battle of Geonosis, the order was becoming overwhelmed, especially in this critical time of war. And so Anakin's great skills had won out, definitely not helping the issues he had regarding his arrogance.
However this was not the reason he was so concerned for his old Apprentice. Ever since they had been reunited and even during the final months of his Apprenticeship, Obi-Wan had noticed something very mysterious in Anakin. All those years that they were together, the boy had never been able to keep his thoughts and feelings to himself and had encouraged his master to do the same. But now, he was aloof and he always kept his mental shields firmly up. This distressed Obi-Wan greatly because only something that would get him into immense trouble could cause this usually over exuberant, passionate young man to retreat inside himself this way.
The gentle chime of his doorbell shattered his deep revine. Bringing his attention back to the living force he climbed to his feet slowly, stretching out his muscles, which had become cramped from sitting for so long and crossed his room to open the door.
"General Kenobi" Shakira greeted bowing slightly, "Commander Skywalker wishes to inform you that we have captured the separatist ship and he requests you presence on the bridge. "Of course" he replied genially and shut the door behind him.
He entered the bridge to find Anakin standing above the heads of the crew on the catwalk, his view regally gliding over them and his hands on hips making him look much like an aristocrat overseeing his servants and minions as they worked.
"We have him!" the younger man exclaimed with glee apon seeing him. "The docking procedures have commenced and I have a boarding party ready to attack on command." "With you leading them I assume." Obi-Wan added knowingly, seeing the look of anticipation on Anakin's face that over the years had both aggravated and amused him. "Well..." he stuttered "They're going to need a command presence there to formally take command, but if you have a better idea, you're the boss." He finished somewhat bitterly. Obi-Wan inwardly smirked and sighed at once. It still nettled Anakin that after all this time Obi-Wan had wound up his senior yet again. It was hardly his fault though, he reflected to himself. All knights in the order who had more than ten years experience had been given the military rank 'General' and any less than that were referred to as 'Commander'. The titles had little real meaning but when it came to crunch time, it was the General who had the sway of authority. A fact that did not got down well with Anakin Skywalker. "Go ahead." Obi-Wan authorised happy to give the young Jedi his freedom and was rewarded with a million-dollar grin and a hurried "I'll contact you when we have control" as he rushed out the door.
Coming Soon! More Pre Trilogy Anakin foreshadowing! (I just love that) Padme makes her appearance!
I hope you enjoyed it! All reviews are welcome I hope to have the next chapter up soon it just depends how my writers block comes along!
May the force be with you!
Thank you: preciousbabyblue for your review it was very encouraging! I hope you like this chapter. My first review!!!!! does dance around house and gets stared at by family
Disclaimer: I forgot in the other chapters Puts paper bag on head Ahem... I do not own anything to do with Star Wars except these stickers I bought at Coles and episode 2 on DVD.
Chapter 1
The usual calm of the sector was suddenly shattered as two ships burst out of hyperspace. The first was small and quick but badly damaged under the unyielding fire of its oppressor. The huge triangular battle ship was gaining fast, its victim had no way of escape...
A junior sensory officer named Shakira Rostoni sat aboard the Republic Fighter in the sunken area that surrounded a huge catwalk in the centre of the room, monitoring the proceedings of the battle. She looked around the bridge and once again marvelled at the sight. Clones were everywhere, their white armour filled the air with the constant reminder of the mystery surrounding their origin. Then there was the republic officers like herself, dressed in the traditional blue uniforms of the service, they were not soldiers but were the crew of the ship making sure that everything ran like clockwork for the Army...and the Jedi.
Suddenly the Bridge doors slid open with a hiss and the object of her new daydream strode on to the catwalk above her head. He was 6 foot tall and was clad in black Jedi robes with a flowing cape, his hair that had been kept short for so long during his Padawan years had now grown out and framed his chiselled face in sexy curls. The form of Anakin Skywalker was definitely an impressive sight to the eyes of many female officers aboard "Too bad they can't fall in love." She thought.
Surveying the proceedings as he went Anakin walked up to a young officer he noticed staring at him. "Report" he ordered down at her, curious as to who this particular separatist vessel might contain. "It's confirmed" she replied jumping out of the revine and glancing at her console hurriedly. "Shields are down and Nute Gunray is definitely aboard." "Excellent" he replied relieved, "prepare for boarding procedures, and inform General Kenobi of our success." "Yes sir"
Anakin allowed himself a moment to revel in his success. Finally he had captured the Niemodian who had made Padme's life hell for so long. Of course the senate had only issue the warrant for his capture when they discovered his dealings with Count Dokoo and in turn his mysterious sith master, but for Anakin Skywalker the motivation ran much closer to home. He then allowed his thoughts to turn to much more pleasurable thoughts. Padme, It had been eight months, and 3 days since they had parted and he was forced to attend to his duties, now that he was no longer Obi-Wan's apprentice, after his trials he had been on his own or with other knights. It was per chance that they were together again on this particular mission, but he still felt as though Obi-Wan was watching and evaluating his every move. At this he shook his head and smirked to himself, how Padme would laugh at him if she knew how he felt about his old master. He could almost hear her in his mind "Obi-Wan cares about you Anakin" she would exclaim, "You cant expect him to give up his fatherly tendencies overnight!" Of course she was right, he admitted she always was when it came to him...
Master Obi-Wan Kenobi sat in quarters meditating on recent events. Anakin had received his Knighthood, a mere year after his failure with Count Dokoo. Anakin was not then, and still wasn't able to control his reckless anger. He had brought this up with the counsel and protested to granting Anakin his rank. However, because of the loss of all the Jedi, killed during the battle of Geonosis, the order was becoming overwhelmed, especially in this critical time of war. And so Anakin's great skills had won out, definitely not helping the issues he had regarding his arrogance.
However this was not the reason he was so concerned for his old Apprentice. Ever since they had been reunited and even during the final months of his Apprenticeship, Obi-Wan had noticed something very mysterious in Anakin. All those years that they were together, the boy had never been able to keep his thoughts and feelings to himself and had encouraged his master to do the same. But now, he was aloof and he always kept his mental shields firmly up. This distressed Obi-Wan greatly because only something that would get him into immense trouble could cause this usually over exuberant, passionate young man to retreat inside himself this way.
The gentle chime of his doorbell shattered his deep revine. Bringing his attention back to the living force he climbed to his feet slowly, stretching out his muscles, which had become cramped from sitting for so long and crossed his room to open the door.
"General Kenobi" Shakira greeted bowing slightly, "Commander Skywalker wishes to inform you that we have captured the separatist ship and he requests you presence on the bridge. "Of course" he replied genially and shut the door behind him.
He entered the bridge to find Anakin standing above the heads of the crew on the catwalk, his view regally gliding over them and his hands on hips making him look much like an aristocrat overseeing his servants and minions as they worked.
"We have him!" the younger man exclaimed with glee apon seeing him. "The docking procedures have commenced and I have a boarding party ready to attack on command." "With you leading them I assume." Obi-Wan added knowingly, seeing the look of anticipation on Anakin's face that over the years had both aggravated and amused him. "Well..." he stuttered "They're going to need a command presence there to formally take command, but if you have a better idea, you're the boss." He finished somewhat bitterly. Obi-Wan inwardly smirked and sighed at once. It still nettled Anakin that after all this time Obi-Wan had wound up his senior yet again. It was hardly his fault though, he reflected to himself. All knights in the order who had more than ten years experience had been given the military rank 'General' and any less than that were referred to as 'Commander'. The titles had little real meaning but when it came to crunch time, it was the General who had the sway of authority. A fact that did not got down well with Anakin Skywalker. "Go ahead." Obi-Wan authorised happy to give the young Jedi his freedom and was rewarded with a million-dollar grin and a hurried "I'll contact you when we have control" as he rushed out the door.
Coming Soon! More Pre Trilogy Anakin foreshadowing! (I just love that) Padme makes her appearance!
I hope you enjoyed it! All reviews are welcome I hope to have the next chapter up soon it just depends how my writers block comes along!
May the force be with you!