Here's the third chapter, hope everyone likes it!The rating may go up in
some later
Chapters. Please please read and review, I love writing Elizabeth/ and Jack stories, I mean whoever wrote Pirates of the Caribbean (it's a totally BRILLIANT movie) but I really
think that they should have Lizzie and Jack together. Will just isn't for her character, but Orlanda Bloom is hot but Johnny Depp is HOTTER! Sorry, the last chapter was so short. I'll try to make them longer. ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` ``````````````````````````````````
"Jack," she gasped. " That was you, what where, how, why am I here? What happened"
"Well, Miss, you took a little fall over there, and someone needed to save you. For old sake times I guess you could say," he replied.
"But did you kiss me? Where you the one?" Elizabeth asked.
" Well, umm Yes."
"Why?"
" I'll tell ya later Miss. Now, we need to get you home."
"Oh, it's alright, I can get myself home perfectly fine. We wouldn't want the Commadore chasing after you and my father and about twenty soldiers."
"Well, can I meet you somewhere today?"
"Of course, I can come back down to your ship, that would be safest I suppose."
"Alrighty then."
And Elizabeth walked back to her house. Something in Jack's eyes had sent jitters down her spine. She couldn't meet him, It caused too much pain. She would feel guilty. And that kiss, she knew she wanted to go beyond that. She wanted him then. So much. And Will only dead about a week. He would be hurt, she knew, and he was with her, all around her. I won't meet him, he'll understand. He'll just pack up and leave. But she knew in her heart that she never wanted him to leave. Never.
It had been 3 hours after Jack saved Elizabeth. They had barely even kissed, even talked, there were too long awkward silences. He knew she wanted that kiss, even wanted more. They both did. But did Elizabeth know it was Jack, would she still want the kiss if it was him. He doubted it. The sun was setting now. Elizabeth, wasn't coming he knew. She probably was all ladylike and thought that she couldn't talk to him. Or maybe it was something else. You could never know with her. It was like trying to read his compass. Somehow he would make her love him, but now he had to go pay a night-time visit.
Chapters. Please please read and review, I love writing Elizabeth/ and Jack stories, I mean whoever wrote Pirates of the Caribbean (it's a totally BRILLIANT movie) but I really
think that they should have Lizzie and Jack together. Will just isn't for her character, but Orlanda Bloom is hot but Johnny Depp is HOTTER! Sorry, the last chapter was so short. I'll try to make them longer. ```````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````` ``````````````````````````````````
"Jack," she gasped. " That was you, what where, how, why am I here? What happened"
"Well, Miss, you took a little fall over there, and someone needed to save you. For old sake times I guess you could say," he replied.
"But did you kiss me? Where you the one?" Elizabeth asked.
" Well, umm Yes."
"Why?"
" I'll tell ya later Miss. Now, we need to get you home."
"Oh, it's alright, I can get myself home perfectly fine. We wouldn't want the Commadore chasing after you and my father and about twenty soldiers."
"Well, can I meet you somewhere today?"
"Of course, I can come back down to your ship, that would be safest I suppose."
"Alrighty then."
And Elizabeth walked back to her house. Something in Jack's eyes had sent jitters down her spine. She couldn't meet him, It caused too much pain. She would feel guilty. And that kiss, she knew she wanted to go beyond that. She wanted him then. So much. And Will only dead about a week. He would be hurt, she knew, and he was with her, all around her. I won't meet him, he'll understand. He'll just pack up and leave. But she knew in her heart that she never wanted him to leave. Never.
It had been 3 hours after Jack saved Elizabeth. They had barely even kissed, even talked, there were too long awkward silences. He knew she wanted that kiss, even wanted more. They both did. But did Elizabeth know it was Jack, would she still want the kiss if it was him. He doubted it. The sun was setting now. Elizabeth, wasn't coming he knew. She probably was all ladylike and thought that she couldn't talk to him. Or maybe it was something else. You could never know with her. It was like trying to read his compass. Somehow he would make her love him, but now he had to go pay a night-time visit.