Voila! Here ya go w/ Chapter 12!~!~!Thanx 2 all my reviewers!Keep on
reviewing!Thanx ya'll! Also Please go to my story on Fictionpress.com and
tell me what you think!!
THANK YOU! I also
created Edina.
The maid placed the doll-like baby in her arms. She was so tiny! Her hands formed miniture balls and her feet slowly kicked. "What an energetic child you have Ms. Swann."
"Just like her father," Elizabeth replied, gently tracing her finger down the baby's rosy cheek.
"What will you name her?" the maid asked.
"I don't know, I've never really even thought about it. Isabelle sounds nice, kind of foreign or Spanish. Will would go to those far-off places and come back and tell me of strange people he had met and the names. I always wished I could go with him." Maybe Jack will take me, she thought off in her head.
"Then Isabelle she'll be," the maid replied smiling and bustling around the room, "She'll need her breakfast soon, and you will need to feed her."
"What!?Me, I can't do that, find someone else. I need to check u pon someone," Elizabeth replied thrusting the baby in the maid's arms. "I'll be back soon, I just need to check up on a old friend.
Elizabeth rushed to the dock scanning everywhere for the Pearl. Jack! How could you do this to me? Right when I need you, I can't be tied down. Just looking at that child reminded me of Will, her dark eyes and curly wisps of hair. I can't be the one to raise her, Jack, oh Jack. I can't be a parent, I can't show the child the ways of life. I'm still a child myself. I want to explored, to fly away. To forget all this happened, to have more days like the ones' on the island she had shared with Jack.There she forgot who she was, nothing ever tied her down or limited her soul. A pirates' life is the one for me. When Jack gets back I'll ask him to take me with him on his scavaging. Maybe the baby can come with, ...or not.
"Tsk, tsk," replied the nurse at Elizabeth wandering off, "That girl has no responsibility. Can't she see that her own child, who she's barely met needs her. She'll never be a good parent. She needs that Will Turner. He's the one who makes her world go round and he'd be the one to actually love the child. Right now I think she needs to get away. She's not ready for this responsibility."
"What are you saying, Edina?" asked Anne who had crept up behind her, " Elizabeth needs our support and help. She may not be the perfect parent but we're to be seen not heard. Do you understand? And be careful of what you say outloud and who hears you," Anne winked.
"Ms. Swann your father would like to speak with you in his office," Anne announced to Elizabeth in her chambers. "Coming," she replied. Elizabeth approached her father with dignity, she didn't even know if he had seen her child much less asked her name. "Elizabeth, I have something of great importance to tell you. Since now, you're a widow, stranded alone in the world I think that you should remarry as soon as possible."
"Father!- " "No, Elizbeth, it hurts me to see you in the way you are. You seem like a restless bird, I only want the best for you. This child needs a caring father that can support you and her. And that is why I think it is best for you to marry the Commadore."
Well there ya go, I hope you liked it. I'm gonna update as soon as possible, please also check out my fictionpress piece.
The maid placed the doll-like baby in her arms. She was so tiny! Her hands formed miniture balls and her feet slowly kicked. "What an energetic child you have Ms. Swann."
"Just like her father," Elizabeth replied, gently tracing her finger down the baby's rosy cheek.
"What will you name her?" the maid asked.
"I don't know, I've never really even thought about it. Isabelle sounds nice, kind of foreign or Spanish. Will would go to those far-off places and come back and tell me of strange people he had met and the names. I always wished I could go with him." Maybe Jack will take me, she thought off in her head.
"Then Isabelle she'll be," the maid replied smiling and bustling around the room, "She'll need her breakfast soon, and you will need to feed her."
"What!?Me, I can't do that, find someone else. I need to check u pon someone," Elizabeth replied thrusting the baby in the maid's arms. "I'll be back soon, I just need to check up on a old friend.
Elizabeth rushed to the dock scanning everywhere for the Pearl. Jack! How could you do this to me? Right when I need you, I can't be tied down. Just looking at that child reminded me of Will, her dark eyes and curly wisps of hair. I can't be the one to raise her, Jack, oh Jack. I can't be a parent, I can't show the child the ways of life. I'm still a child myself. I want to explored, to fly away. To forget all this happened, to have more days like the ones' on the island she had shared with Jack.There she forgot who she was, nothing ever tied her down or limited her soul. A pirates' life is the one for me. When Jack gets back I'll ask him to take me with him on his scavaging. Maybe the baby can come with, ...or not.
"Tsk, tsk," replied the nurse at Elizabeth wandering off, "That girl has no responsibility. Can't she see that her own child, who she's barely met needs her. She'll never be a good parent. She needs that Will Turner. He's the one who makes her world go round and he'd be the one to actually love the child. Right now I think she needs to get away. She's not ready for this responsibility."
"What are you saying, Edina?" asked Anne who had crept up behind her, " Elizabeth needs our support and help. She may not be the perfect parent but we're to be seen not heard. Do you understand? And be careful of what you say outloud and who hears you," Anne winked.
"Ms. Swann your father would like to speak with you in his office," Anne announced to Elizabeth in her chambers. "Coming," she replied. Elizabeth approached her father with dignity, she didn't even know if he had seen her child much less asked her name. "Elizabeth, I have something of great importance to tell you. Since now, you're a widow, stranded alone in the world I think that you should remarry as soon as possible."
"Father!- " "No, Elizbeth, it hurts me to see you in the way you are. You seem like a restless bird, I only want the best for you. This child needs a caring father that can support you and her. And that is why I think it is best for you to marry the Commadore."
Well there ya go, I hope you liked it. I'm gonna update as soon as possible, please also check out my fictionpress piece.