A/N: hey so this is the first chapter and well Read and review ok I really
want feedback from people on with the story.
A young girl lay in a large comfy bed, barely awake when an owl began taping at her window. The girl smiled, stood up and walked over opening the frame simply. The barn owl glided in to the blue, purple and gold room scattered with robes, jeans, T-shirts, and other miscellaneous articles of clothing. The girl quickly grabbed a sweater as she noticed the cold breeze she'd let in, and then untied the letter attached to the owls foot. The owl hooted and flew back out the way it had come from. She opened the envelope and read the neat green hand writing inside...
Dear Miss. Evans,
We are pleased to inform you that we will be pleased to see you back for your Fifth year at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry the necessary books and equipment for this year are enclosed.
Term as always begins on September 1st. We await your owl no later then July 31st. Yours sincerely, Minerva McGonagall, Deputy Headmistress.
As she read through the list of supplies, someone calling from down stairs interrupted her.
"Lillian! Five minute till breakfast if you want to eat you better hurry!" Lily heard her mother call from the foot of the stairs.
"I'll be right down I just want a shower first." She called back grabbing her towel and bathrobe, she walked in to her bathroom to shower.
See the Evans may not be from a great wizard family like some of Lily's friends actually they weren't even from a wizard family at all. Lily was a muggle born, but even if they weren't wizards from a muggle point of view they were a very well off family each bedroom in their mansion had a bathroom of its own, there were four floors not including the attic, in which Lily had made her refuge form her older sister Petunia, a nasty girl who was about two years older then Lily who had just turned fifteen on January 1st, Petunia hated Lily with a passion, she called Lily all sorts of nasty names like freak, abnormality, inhuman, and lots worse. Of coarse Lily could say mean things to Petunia as well but never did. See Petunia wasn't the greatest looking girl she in many peoples eyes mostly Lily's she looked like a horse; strait blonde hair, overly thin, and abnormally long neck, and buck teeth to make the look perfect. Lily on the other hand was the exact opposite of her sister with her beautiful wavy red hair, green eyes that showed her every emotion, freckled skin and creamy complexion that never blemished or burnt.
Lily quickly stepped out of the shower, dried off throwing on some clothes, and then she made her bed and ran down the stairs to find the rest of her family already at the table waiting for her.
"Good-morning mum, dad, Petunia." Lily greeted as she sat down, spiting out her sister's with air so cold it could have frozen anyone.
"Good-morning Lillian darling." Her mother said setting a plate down in front of her.
"Hello sweetheart." Mr. Evans said looking up from his paper.
"Freak." Petunia said with pure disgust not even looking up.
"Petunia do not speak to your sister in that manner how dare you!" Mr. Evans yelled as Petunia look away enraged that her father would yell at the fact that she told the truth, to Petunia Lily was nothing but a freak of nature and she made sure everyone knew it.
"Dad I have to go down town some time this month I need to get my school supplies and new robes." Lily said finishing her bagel.
"Alright sweetheart, how much do you think you'll need? And when do you think you'll go?" Mr. Evans asked grabbing another pancake from the stack.
"Hmm...well robes ...gloves...hmm I'll more then likely need 93£."(A/N: for those of you who don't know what that is in U.S. that's about $170 in Canadian its about $223 it's a lot of money I made books like 65$ U.S. and that's not just school books)
Petunia looked up from her cereal in shock "You're not going to give her that much are you? You would never give me that much to go shopping."
"Petunia this is not shopping its for Lily's school. She needs it, you don't need new blush every week." Mrs. Evans answered clearing the table.
"FINE, GIVE THE LITTLE FREAK WHAT EVER SHE WANTS YOU'LL BE SORRY SOMEDAY AND IT'LL BE PERFECT LITTLE LILY'S FAULT!" Petunia screeched as she stomped out the front door of the house living her father yelling after her to apologize to her sister. Lily as always took no heed to her sister's harsh words but instead hurried up stairs.
The rest of the day Lily could only be found in the attic AKA: Lily's floor. She spent the day reading Writing and owling her friends' letters asking how their summers were and when they wanted to go to Diagon Alley, for their supplies.
"Lillian, come down for supper" Lily heard her mother call from the bottom of the latter.
"Alright, I'll be down in a minute." She called back as she started to put her papers, books and video games away.
Petunia wasn't at supper and she didn't come home till long after Lily had gone to bed, but when she got home Lily wasn't asleep for long. "PETUNIA ALEXANDREA EVANS How dare you walk in here and act like you've done nothing wrong!" Mr. Evans hollered. "But I have done nothing wrong and you know it!" Petunia yelled back.
"NOTHING YOU DID NOTHING!"
"That's right and you know it. She's nothing but a freak of nature!"
"YOU WILL NEVER SPEAK OF YOUR SISTER THAT WAY AGAIN DO YOU HEAR ME! NOW GO TO BED NOW!" Mr. Evans at that began to walk away but to Petunia this wasn't over.
"SHE'S NOT HUMAN SHE'S A FREAK AN ABNORMALITY AND I HATE HER!!!"
"GO TO BED NOW PETUNIA NOW!!! AND YOU ARE GROUNED TILL LILY LEAVES FOR SCHOOL!" "But daddy you know its true..." "GO." Nether knew Lily had heard the whole thing. 'He never disagreed, does that mean he agrees...' was Lily's last thought before she drifted off to sleep.
Things from then just got worse. Petunia refused to look at Lily let alone be in the same room so Lily stayed in the attic most of the time. A few weeks past and it was time for lily to go meet her friends at Diagon Alley she had also decided to stay at the Leaky Cauldron for the night and catch a cab in the morning to King's Cross. Lily quickly dragged her trunk down the stairs as she heard a honk from her cab, as she left her father handed her some money and she was off to the Leaky Cauldron.
The cab driver helped Lily carry her trunk in to the dirty looking pub.
"How much do I owe you for the ride?" Lily asked as the burly looking driver as he set down the heavy trunk.
"Eleven pounds Ms. Evans." He answered looking around he asked, "You sure you don't want me to take you to a nicer place Ms. cuz I will... no charge..."
"I'm sure, I'm meeting some others here. All right here's twelve pounds, hope to see you soon." At that Lily handed the driver his money and walked over to the young bar tender.
"Hello there Lily, I haven't seen you all summer. What can I fetch ya'?" the brown haired bar tender said turning to face her with a smile.
"A room for the night and a warm butterbeer will do Tom thank you so much."
"Right then room first. I'll help you with your trunk come on Lily." He said walking out from behind the counter and handing Lily the key to her room and grabbing her trunk. The two tromped up the stairs.
Lily sat at the counter waiting for her two best friends, Amelia Carson also known as Millie, and Victoria Hale or well just Vicky. The three where all staying over night and soon Lily saw Millie's father carrying in two trunks looking heavier them her own.
"Need some help there Mr. Carson?" Tom asked grabbing the top trunk.
"Yes thank you Tom. It seems my daughter and young Miss. Hale need to pack lighter." Mr. Carson said looking at his daughter as she walked through the door.
"What we only pack things we'll need..." Millie answered.
"I believe you two will be staying with Miss. Evans..." the girls nodded, "I'll help you take these up sir." Tom said walking up the stairs.
"LILY!!!" Millie and Vicky yelled together running over and giving Lily a bear hug.
"I guess you missed me huh." Lily said as they let her go.
"You guess? Of coarse we missed you Lil. We're your friends." Vicky said as Millie nodded vigorously. Then Millie spoke up, "Lets go SHOPPING!" and they were off.
A/N: Ok what do you think I really want to know ok so review any questions just ask.
A young girl lay in a large comfy bed, barely awake when an owl began taping at her window. The girl smiled, stood up and walked over opening the frame simply. The barn owl glided in to the blue, purple and gold room scattered with robes, jeans, T-shirts, and other miscellaneous articles of clothing. The girl quickly grabbed a sweater as she noticed the cold breeze she'd let in, and then untied the letter attached to the owls foot. The owl hooted and flew back out the way it had come from. She opened the envelope and read the neat green hand writing inside...
Dear Miss. Evans,
We are pleased to inform you that we will be pleased to see you back for your Fifth year at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry the necessary books and equipment for this year are enclosed.
Term as always begins on September 1st. We await your owl no later then July 31st. Yours sincerely, Minerva McGonagall, Deputy Headmistress.
As she read through the list of supplies, someone calling from down stairs interrupted her.
"Lillian! Five minute till breakfast if you want to eat you better hurry!" Lily heard her mother call from the foot of the stairs.
"I'll be right down I just want a shower first." She called back grabbing her towel and bathrobe, she walked in to her bathroom to shower.
See the Evans may not be from a great wizard family like some of Lily's friends actually they weren't even from a wizard family at all. Lily was a muggle born, but even if they weren't wizards from a muggle point of view they were a very well off family each bedroom in their mansion had a bathroom of its own, there were four floors not including the attic, in which Lily had made her refuge form her older sister Petunia, a nasty girl who was about two years older then Lily who had just turned fifteen on January 1st, Petunia hated Lily with a passion, she called Lily all sorts of nasty names like freak, abnormality, inhuman, and lots worse. Of coarse Lily could say mean things to Petunia as well but never did. See Petunia wasn't the greatest looking girl she in many peoples eyes mostly Lily's she looked like a horse; strait blonde hair, overly thin, and abnormally long neck, and buck teeth to make the look perfect. Lily on the other hand was the exact opposite of her sister with her beautiful wavy red hair, green eyes that showed her every emotion, freckled skin and creamy complexion that never blemished or burnt.
Lily quickly stepped out of the shower, dried off throwing on some clothes, and then she made her bed and ran down the stairs to find the rest of her family already at the table waiting for her.
"Good-morning mum, dad, Petunia." Lily greeted as she sat down, spiting out her sister's with air so cold it could have frozen anyone.
"Good-morning Lillian darling." Her mother said setting a plate down in front of her.
"Hello sweetheart." Mr. Evans said looking up from his paper.
"Freak." Petunia said with pure disgust not even looking up.
"Petunia do not speak to your sister in that manner how dare you!" Mr. Evans yelled as Petunia look away enraged that her father would yell at the fact that she told the truth, to Petunia Lily was nothing but a freak of nature and she made sure everyone knew it.
"Dad I have to go down town some time this month I need to get my school supplies and new robes." Lily said finishing her bagel.
"Alright sweetheart, how much do you think you'll need? And when do you think you'll go?" Mr. Evans asked grabbing another pancake from the stack.
"Hmm...well robes ...gloves...hmm I'll more then likely need 93£."(A/N: for those of you who don't know what that is in U.S. that's about $170 in Canadian its about $223 it's a lot of money I made books like 65$ U.S. and that's not just school books)
Petunia looked up from her cereal in shock "You're not going to give her that much are you? You would never give me that much to go shopping."
"Petunia this is not shopping its for Lily's school. She needs it, you don't need new blush every week." Mrs. Evans answered clearing the table.
"FINE, GIVE THE LITTLE FREAK WHAT EVER SHE WANTS YOU'LL BE SORRY SOMEDAY AND IT'LL BE PERFECT LITTLE LILY'S FAULT!" Petunia screeched as she stomped out the front door of the house living her father yelling after her to apologize to her sister. Lily as always took no heed to her sister's harsh words but instead hurried up stairs.
The rest of the day Lily could only be found in the attic AKA: Lily's floor. She spent the day reading Writing and owling her friends' letters asking how their summers were and when they wanted to go to Diagon Alley, for their supplies.
"Lillian, come down for supper" Lily heard her mother call from the bottom of the latter.
"Alright, I'll be down in a minute." She called back as she started to put her papers, books and video games away.
Petunia wasn't at supper and she didn't come home till long after Lily had gone to bed, but when she got home Lily wasn't asleep for long. "PETUNIA ALEXANDREA EVANS How dare you walk in here and act like you've done nothing wrong!" Mr. Evans hollered. "But I have done nothing wrong and you know it!" Petunia yelled back.
"NOTHING YOU DID NOTHING!"
"That's right and you know it. She's nothing but a freak of nature!"
"YOU WILL NEVER SPEAK OF YOUR SISTER THAT WAY AGAIN DO YOU HEAR ME! NOW GO TO BED NOW!" Mr. Evans at that began to walk away but to Petunia this wasn't over.
"SHE'S NOT HUMAN SHE'S A FREAK AN ABNORMALITY AND I HATE HER!!!"
"GO TO BED NOW PETUNIA NOW!!! AND YOU ARE GROUNED TILL LILY LEAVES FOR SCHOOL!" "But daddy you know its true..." "GO." Nether knew Lily had heard the whole thing. 'He never disagreed, does that mean he agrees...' was Lily's last thought before she drifted off to sleep.
Things from then just got worse. Petunia refused to look at Lily let alone be in the same room so Lily stayed in the attic most of the time. A few weeks past and it was time for lily to go meet her friends at Diagon Alley she had also decided to stay at the Leaky Cauldron for the night and catch a cab in the morning to King's Cross. Lily quickly dragged her trunk down the stairs as she heard a honk from her cab, as she left her father handed her some money and she was off to the Leaky Cauldron.
The cab driver helped Lily carry her trunk in to the dirty looking pub.
"How much do I owe you for the ride?" Lily asked as the burly looking driver as he set down the heavy trunk.
"Eleven pounds Ms. Evans." He answered looking around he asked, "You sure you don't want me to take you to a nicer place Ms. cuz I will... no charge..."
"I'm sure, I'm meeting some others here. All right here's twelve pounds, hope to see you soon." At that Lily handed the driver his money and walked over to the young bar tender.
"Hello there Lily, I haven't seen you all summer. What can I fetch ya'?" the brown haired bar tender said turning to face her with a smile.
"A room for the night and a warm butterbeer will do Tom thank you so much."
"Right then room first. I'll help you with your trunk come on Lily." He said walking out from behind the counter and handing Lily the key to her room and grabbing her trunk. The two tromped up the stairs.
Lily sat at the counter waiting for her two best friends, Amelia Carson also known as Millie, and Victoria Hale or well just Vicky. The three where all staying over night and soon Lily saw Millie's father carrying in two trunks looking heavier them her own.
"Need some help there Mr. Carson?" Tom asked grabbing the top trunk.
"Yes thank you Tom. It seems my daughter and young Miss. Hale need to pack lighter." Mr. Carson said looking at his daughter as she walked through the door.
"What we only pack things we'll need..." Millie answered.
"I believe you two will be staying with Miss. Evans..." the girls nodded, "I'll help you take these up sir." Tom said walking up the stairs.
"LILY!!!" Millie and Vicky yelled together running over and giving Lily a bear hug.
"I guess you missed me huh." Lily said as they let her go.
"You guess? Of coarse we missed you Lil. We're your friends." Vicky said as Millie nodded vigorously. Then Millie spoke up, "Lets go SHOPPING!" and they were off.
A/N: Ok what do you think I really want to know ok so review any questions just ask.