Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter or Lily or James or..anyone else. There are only a couple of people that I made up.
A/N: O.K. this is a fic where Lily and James usto be sweethearts in seventh year but then around the end of seventh year James broke up with her. Lily don know why. Then she got really mad cuz she had loved him and stuff and now her heart is filled with hate and...just read.
"You are our secret weapon." Said the Dark Lord to a girl standing in the shadows. "When I give the signal you are to then and ONLY then come out of hiding. They can not know about you or my plan will be spoiled."
"Yes my Lord." Said a very attractive slim girl about the age of 18 with long red hair that was pulled into a bun. She had emerald eyes and crimson red lips. She was wearing black jeans, tight black tank top and black boots.
"Good, good. You are to train one more time tonight and then you leave and rest. Be ready tomorrow." He said. It was eleven o clock at night and Lily was glad that she would be leaving. The dark Lord had been training her personally for this battle. The battle where they would try and take over the ministry of magic. Suddenly thoughts came into her head. What would Dumbledore say? What would her teachers think of her when and if they saw her. What about her parents? What about James...
Lily quickly dismissed these thought from her head. Her master was the only one she needed approval from now. He snapped his fingers and a death eater came in.
"Your turn." He said.
The deatheater looked at Lily. "N-no master please. W-what have I done?"
"Silence! If your training has been done properly you will be able to defeat her. If not then you die of your own folly. Now start!"
Meanwhile...
"James get some rest. My spys inform me that Voldemort will be attacking tomorrow early morning. Just train one more time and then we'll call it a night." Said Dumbldore. "You're our secret weapon. The best fightor and warrior among us. Though there are rumours going around that Voldemort has been training an assasin"
"Yes professor. Those deatheaters will not conquer us." said James
Beside James Sirius was nodding of to sleep. Dumbldore had had them awake by six in the morning.
"Come on James one more time. Go through the obstacle course I had Moody set up for you." Said Dumbldore.
Lily was fighting the deatheater. This man is a coward she thought to herself. The deatheater was running around the training room hiding behind pillars and rocks. Lily was shooting curses at him left and right but he was to quick. Suddenly she lost him and didn't know where he went. Then she felt someone jump on her back. Voldemort clapped and more deatheaters came and surrounded Lily.
The deatheater behind her was choking her. She quickly shot a spell at him. And ducked as the deatheaters tried to hit her. She punched and kicked and shot spells at them while ducking spells and kicks and punches from Deatheaters. Voldemort had taught her how to be completely aware of her surroundings. She could even feel it if spells were coming at her. She could duck and shield herself from about a hundred different spells at one time. Yes Voldemort was very proud of his student. There was also one more thing Lily could do but she had difficulty doing it. Deateaters were little by little multiplying in numbers after every two minutes 5 more would come and start attacking her joinig their fellow deatheaters. Lily concentrated hard and suddenly a white light erupted from her. It was all around her and all the deatheaters were on the floor in two seconds flat. Lily was kneeling on the floor gasping for air. Sweat dropping from her face. Yes Lily could perform curses by concentrating hard without a wand and when she did it affected everyone around her within a 6 feet distance.
"Did you..." Voldemort said hopefully.
"No they are stunned." She replied
voldemort was VERY proud of her but there was just one problem. No matter what she never killed or used the cruciatus curse. He had been hoping that she would maybe today actually kill but she didn't. A servant came in had a towel and water bottle for Lily in her hands.
Voldemort sighed and said in his usual hissing voice. "You have got to learn to kill."
"I can't." she replied simply and left for her house that had been given to her by Voldemort. She was easily his favorite. She was never called his servant or his deatheater. She was always given a certain amount of respect by Voldemort. She was his right hand and second in command. She was envied by most. When ever the deatheaters were called she was never made to kiss the hem of his robes. She would just bow to him and then she would stand tall and proud by his side in the middle of the circle and the deatheaters would come and kiss the hem of her robes right after Voldemorts. This was partly done because Voldemort knew If she didn't get the respect needed she would either revolt against him or she would quite and now there was no use in ever trying to send someone to kill her she'd finish them of in a millisecond. Plus she was to precious to his plans to lose now. Also Voldemort didn't mind giving her so much respect. She did deserve it and was almost as powerful as he was "maybe even more." Said Voldemort to himself. From day one she was a fast learner during training and that was how they found out her special power. Lily drove to her three story huge house which she lived in alone. She ran upto her room changed her clothes and laid down on her bed. Her thoughts wondered to her life. Her life had been perfect. Her parents were the best and she had been in love. In love with James Potter the popularist, cutest, Quidditch captain, straight A student and all around nice guy in school. They had gone out for about 2 and a half years. Every one was sure that James would propose to her as soon as they were out of school. A tear fell down Lilys cheek. She remembered it quite well.
Flashback...
"Hey Lily could I talk to you for a minute?" James asked.
"Sure." She replied. She got up from the table where she had been sitting with her friends.
They went upto the common room.
"Lily listen...please don't stay mad at me but I think we should break up." He said quickly
Lily was stunned. She felt and ice brick build up inside her stomach and then tears came.
"Why? I thought you-you loved me. You said so yourself earlier this year!" she said
"Well...people make mistakes I thought it was love but it wasn't." he replied not looking into her eyes.
"Is there someone else?" she asked angrily
James was silent and then said "Yea there is someone else." And with that he left.
"Stop right there James Potter!" Lily shrieked tears coming out of her eyes. "You are a self centered and arrogant bastard! Everyone had told me you were a player but I never believed them but I geuss I was wrong! I hate you and never want to see you again!" with that she pulled of the golden heart shaped locket with heres and James picture in it and threw it at him. James had given it to her for her birthday. Then she ran upstairs to her room. The next day Dumbledore called her to his office. She still hadn't gotten over James break up and her eyes were red and puffy. Her face marked with tear streaks and she had become drastically thin. Graduation day was tomorrow.
"Ms. Evans I'm sorry to say this but your parents have died in a car crash." Dumbldore said sadly. Lily felt tears spring to her eyes once more.
"I know how hard this is. Especially after yesterdays break up...yes I know about it. The whole teachers staff does."
"Leave me alone! You don't know how I feel! The people I love most in this world have abandoned me!" she shrieked and ran out of the office. She was crying silently in a corner when Lucious Malfoy suddenly appeared.
"what happened to you?" he asked in a half mocking voice. Lily and Malfoy hadn't hated each other but they weren't on good terms either. Lily had dated him for about 3 months in 5th year and then they had broken up but at the moment Lily needed someone to talk to.
"I'm left alone in this world." She said sobbingly. "No one is left to take care of me. Where will I live until I have a job? My sister hates me and would never take me in. Everyone I love most are gone. Why?! Why?!" Lily started wailing.
"Lily I know someone that could take care of you. That could give you a job and even a second family." Malfoy said
"Who?" asked Lily sniffling
"I'll show you tomorrow after graduation." He replied.
End of flashback.
At first Lily had been reluctant to join Voldemort. He was in the newspapers and Lily knew that he was evil. But at the time she had been vulnerable and promises of protection had gotten to her. Voldemort was the only one who had been there to comfort her in this time she thought to herself. He is my family now and she fell asleep.
"James was dodging every curse and obstacle thrown at him. Then suddenly Moody came into view and they both battled for awhile until James almost stunned him.
"You're doing good!" said Moody "but now it's time for you to rest. Good night."
Suddenly a few hundred knives came barreling towards him at all sides. James just closed his eyes concentrating hard and the knives stopped and fell to the ground.
"Very good! It only took you 50 seconds that time." Said Moody. James could do spells with out a wand just by concentrating which was very rare among wizards.
James at the moment was thinking about something or someone else.
He remembered how he had broken up with Lily to protect her. He was to become an Auror or assassin and Dumbldore had advised him to break up with Lily.
"As long as she's with you she will be in danger." Dumbledore had said.
He remembered how He had lied to her that there was someone else and it hurt him like anything. He still wore the golden locket around his neck that he had given Lily. It was right under his shirt. He would always wear it for Good luck.
He and Sirius went home and fell asleep.
Voldemort smiled maliciously. I am going to take over tomorrow. He thought to himself. I have been working on this plan for about a year. Ever since the day a spy informed me of James breaking up with Lily. How I had killed her parents making it look like a car crash. Having Crabbe drive his car right into her parents. Then sending Malfoy to bring her to me. She was so easy to persuade.
He looked into a round ball of fire that was in his hand. In the middle of the fire it showed a picture of Lily sleeping in her bed.
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A/N: O.K. this is a fic where Lily and James usto be sweethearts in seventh year but then around the end of seventh year James broke up with her. Lily don know why. Then she got really mad cuz she had loved him and stuff and now her heart is filled with hate and...just read.
"You are our secret weapon." Said the Dark Lord to a girl standing in the shadows. "When I give the signal you are to then and ONLY then come out of hiding. They can not know about you or my plan will be spoiled."
"Yes my Lord." Said a very attractive slim girl about the age of 18 with long red hair that was pulled into a bun. She had emerald eyes and crimson red lips. She was wearing black jeans, tight black tank top and black boots.
"Good, good. You are to train one more time tonight and then you leave and rest. Be ready tomorrow." He said. It was eleven o clock at night and Lily was glad that she would be leaving. The dark Lord had been training her personally for this battle. The battle where they would try and take over the ministry of magic. Suddenly thoughts came into her head. What would Dumbledore say? What would her teachers think of her when and if they saw her. What about her parents? What about James...
Lily quickly dismissed these thought from her head. Her master was the only one she needed approval from now. He snapped his fingers and a death eater came in.
"Your turn." He said.
The deatheater looked at Lily. "N-no master please. W-what have I done?"
"Silence! If your training has been done properly you will be able to defeat her. If not then you die of your own folly. Now start!"
Meanwhile...
"James get some rest. My spys inform me that Voldemort will be attacking tomorrow early morning. Just train one more time and then we'll call it a night." Said Dumbldore. "You're our secret weapon. The best fightor and warrior among us. Though there are rumours going around that Voldemort has been training an assasin"
"Yes professor. Those deatheaters will not conquer us." said James
Beside James Sirius was nodding of to sleep. Dumbldore had had them awake by six in the morning.
"Come on James one more time. Go through the obstacle course I had Moody set up for you." Said Dumbldore.
Lily was fighting the deatheater. This man is a coward she thought to herself. The deatheater was running around the training room hiding behind pillars and rocks. Lily was shooting curses at him left and right but he was to quick. Suddenly she lost him and didn't know where he went. Then she felt someone jump on her back. Voldemort clapped and more deatheaters came and surrounded Lily.
The deatheater behind her was choking her. She quickly shot a spell at him. And ducked as the deatheaters tried to hit her. She punched and kicked and shot spells at them while ducking spells and kicks and punches from Deatheaters. Voldemort had taught her how to be completely aware of her surroundings. She could even feel it if spells were coming at her. She could duck and shield herself from about a hundred different spells at one time. Yes Voldemort was very proud of his student. There was also one more thing Lily could do but she had difficulty doing it. Deateaters were little by little multiplying in numbers after every two minutes 5 more would come and start attacking her joinig their fellow deatheaters. Lily concentrated hard and suddenly a white light erupted from her. It was all around her and all the deatheaters were on the floor in two seconds flat. Lily was kneeling on the floor gasping for air. Sweat dropping from her face. Yes Lily could perform curses by concentrating hard without a wand and when she did it affected everyone around her within a 6 feet distance.
"Did you..." Voldemort said hopefully.
"No they are stunned." She replied
voldemort was VERY proud of her but there was just one problem. No matter what she never killed or used the cruciatus curse. He had been hoping that she would maybe today actually kill but she didn't. A servant came in had a towel and water bottle for Lily in her hands.
Voldemort sighed and said in his usual hissing voice. "You have got to learn to kill."
"I can't." she replied simply and left for her house that had been given to her by Voldemort. She was easily his favorite. She was never called his servant or his deatheater. She was always given a certain amount of respect by Voldemort. She was his right hand and second in command. She was envied by most. When ever the deatheaters were called she was never made to kiss the hem of his robes. She would just bow to him and then she would stand tall and proud by his side in the middle of the circle and the deatheaters would come and kiss the hem of her robes right after Voldemorts. This was partly done because Voldemort knew If she didn't get the respect needed she would either revolt against him or she would quite and now there was no use in ever trying to send someone to kill her she'd finish them of in a millisecond. Plus she was to precious to his plans to lose now. Also Voldemort didn't mind giving her so much respect. She did deserve it and was almost as powerful as he was "maybe even more." Said Voldemort to himself. From day one she was a fast learner during training and that was how they found out her special power. Lily drove to her three story huge house which she lived in alone. She ran upto her room changed her clothes and laid down on her bed. Her thoughts wondered to her life. Her life had been perfect. Her parents were the best and she had been in love. In love with James Potter the popularist, cutest, Quidditch captain, straight A student and all around nice guy in school. They had gone out for about 2 and a half years. Every one was sure that James would propose to her as soon as they were out of school. A tear fell down Lilys cheek. She remembered it quite well.
Flashback...
"Hey Lily could I talk to you for a minute?" James asked.
"Sure." She replied. She got up from the table where she had been sitting with her friends.
They went upto the common room.
"Lily listen...please don't stay mad at me but I think we should break up." He said quickly
Lily was stunned. She felt and ice brick build up inside her stomach and then tears came.
"Why? I thought you-you loved me. You said so yourself earlier this year!" she said
"Well...people make mistakes I thought it was love but it wasn't." he replied not looking into her eyes.
"Is there someone else?" she asked angrily
James was silent and then said "Yea there is someone else." And with that he left.
"Stop right there James Potter!" Lily shrieked tears coming out of her eyes. "You are a self centered and arrogant bastard! Everyone had told me you were a player but I never believed them but I geuss I was wrong! I hate you and never want to see you again!" with that she pulled of the golden heart shaped locket with heres and James picture in it and threw it at him. James had given it to her for her birthday. Then she ran upstairs to her room. The next day Dumbledore called her to his office. She still hadn't gotten over James break up and her eyes were red and puffy. Her face marked with tear streaks and she had become drastically thin. Graduation day was tomorrow.
"Ms. Evans I'm sorry to say this but your parents have died in a car crash." Dumbldore said sadly. Lily felt tears spring to her eyes once more.
"I know how hard this is. Especially after yesterdays break up...yes I know about it. The whole teachers staff does."
"Leave me alone! You don't know how I feel! The people I love most in this world have abandoned me!" she shrieked and ran out of the office. She was crying silently in a corner when Lucious Malfoy suddenly appeared.
"what happened to you?" he asked in a half mocking voice. Lily and Malfoy hadn't hated each other but they weren't on good terms either. Lily had dated him for about 3 months in 5th year and then they had broken up but at the moment Lily needed someone to talk to.
"I'm left alone in this world." She said sobbingly. "No one is left to take care of me. Where will I live until I have a job? My sister hates me and would never take me in. Everyone I love most are gone. Why?! Why?!" Lily started wailing.
"Lily I know someone that could take care of you. That could give you a job and even a second family." Malfoy said
"Who?" asked Lily sniffling
"I'll show you tomorrow after graduation." He replied.
End of flashback.
At first Lily had been reluctant to join Voldemort. He was in the newspapers and Lily knew that he was evil. But at the time she had been vulnerable and promises of protection had gotten to her. Voldemort was the only one who had been there to comfort her in this time she thought to herself. He is my family now and she fell asleep.
"James was dodging every curse and obstacle thrown at him. Then suddenly Moody came into view and they both battled for awhile until James almost stunned him.
"You're doing good!" said Moody "but now it's time for you to rest. Good night."
Suddenly a few hundred knives came barreling towards him at all sides. James just closed his eyes concentrating hard and the knives stopped and fell to the ground.
"Very good! It only took you 50 seconds that time." Said Moody. James could do spells with out a wand just by concentrating which was very rare among wizards.
James at the moment was thinking about something or someone else.
He remembered how he had broken up with Lily to protect her. He was to become an Auror or assassin and Dumbldore had advised him to break up with Lily.
"As long as she's with you she will be in danger." Dumbledore had said.
He remembered how He had lied to her that there was someone else and it hurt him like anything. He still wore the golden locket around his neck that he had given Lily. It was right under his shirt. He would always wear it for Good luck.
He and Sirius went home and fell asleep.
Voldemort smiled maliciously. I am going to take over tomorrow. He thought to himself. I have been working on this plan for about a year. Ever since the day a spy informed me of James breaking up with Lily. How I had killed her parents making it look like a car crash. Having Crabbe drive his car right into her parents. Then sending Malfoy to bring her to me. She was so easy to persuade.
He looked into a round ball of fire that was in his hand. In the middle of the fire it showed a picture of Lily sleeping in her bed.
A/N:O.K. what do you think? Should I continue?! TELL me if its gud or not by revewing. Then I'll know if I should continue or not. Please REVIEW! Next chapter will be about the battle! REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pleeeeaaaaassseee! I love reviews besides I'm not to sure if this is a good story or not and if I get a lot of revewis tehn I'll continue. Criticism helps to! Ideas are also welcome. Ok now click that little but that says click here to review. You know which one!
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