4th chapter. More of them in the Deku Tree, but this is it, don't worry.
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"Navi, what were those?" asked Link. "I'm not too sure, but my guess is, that, they,..were..uh..goma, larva? Maybe yes, maybe, no? it's been awhile since I've seen some of those." "Goma? Well what ever they are, I do NOT want to see them again!!!" said Link. "Well, who would?" said Naomi. There were two sets of webs in this room. One had a tiny crawlspace, the other one had a deku baba behind it.
Well, she lit her stick and ran for the webs without the baba and set them ablaze. The webs burned down and they crawled to the next room. When they got there Link and Naomi realized they had been in this room before. It was the one they feel into after the big jump. Link found another block, and decided to act macho-man in front of Naomi once again and instead of waiting for her to help he pushed the block right off the edge. "Good thinking Link! Now we can use the fire down there to burn the cob webs on the floor right here! You're so smart!"
" Uh, yeah! that's what I was trying to do, heh heh." "Wait here and I'll be right back." she jumped down the block and lit a deku stick on the other side and came running back to the place where Link was standing. She beat down on the webs with the flaming stick and the web began to burn. She put out her stick and then put it away. " Lets go!" she said and jumped right in not waiting for Link. It was a lot deeper than she had though. So when she just kept falling she started to worry, but finally she hit water. She could hear Link as the air swept past him all the way down, and then he splashed right next to her. "Whoa, that was fun." he told her. " Look, the three deku brothers. Remember what that deku told us? Twenty- three is number one. And there in order like I thought, so the middle one first, then the one on the right, then the one closest to that door. Ready? OK, Lets do it! You get that one over there and I'll get these two." said Naomi, "You don't mind do you?" " I don't care, you're best with these things." said Link checking to see if his shield was strapped on tight. It took about a minuet and finally only number one was left. 'PHULT' ,'CRACK' ,'SQUEAK'
"OW,wow,ow, how did you know our secret? How annoying! I can't believe I am going to tell you the weakness of our queen Goma. If you want to deliver the coupe` de grace to our queen, she is only vulnerable when her EYE is RED. Oh QUEENIE, can you forgive me!?" 'SQUEAK!' Then the bars lifted from a large door and the deku shrubs squeaked off, leaving hearts, nuts, and sticks behind. " According to the map," Link began, " That's, THE BOSS LEVEL!!!!" his eyes were huge, he looked at Naomi and could see the she was scared too. " Did you hear when the deku said her EYE!!!, 'gulp' that means, that means, she's just like those larva. But I bet a lot bigger!!" said Naomi. " Why don't we stock up, look there's plants in the corner, maybe they'll have something we'll need." she suggested. So they cut them down to find, deku nuts, and seeds, and two hearts. They used the hearts then so they would be in great shape to battle.
"Don't worry you two, the deku tree has faith in you, you can do it, if he thought you couldn't I'm sure you wouldn't be in here right now. I believe in you too!!" " You, ready?" 'GULP' , "I am if you are." 'double GULP' , "Then lets go." and they entered the unknown together.
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GOMA
It was dark. All they could hear was the thump of their heartbeats, and this strange scratching sound that seemed to be coming from the ceiling. They didn't move at first, just stud there, they were afraid of what was going to happen next. Then Naomi looked out from the little hall they were standing in and looked at the ceiling only to see something crawling on it, it was huge, and had a RED,GLOWING,EYE!
"Well," she said, "Well," he said.'SIGH' " Lets get this over with." she said with a 'GULP!' And they stepped out into the clearing. The door slammed behind them and they flinched and waited for Goma to fall upon them, but she didn't, she just kept crawling around in circles. So they just looked up at her. They looked at her for quite a long time until she FINNALY noticed them.
She couldn't see very well, and obviously couldn't hear very well either if she hadn't heard the door slam. Or maybe she was just stupid, not that that matters. It's not like anyone is going to insult her for her stupidity, for one thing she's huge and has some huge claws. She's a big freaking spider, with one eye, four legs, and a weird tail thingy that looked like it could do some damage. So insults really didn't bother her, if anyone messed with her she could always step on them, or eat them, one of the two would do just fine. Or on a really bad day she would step on you and then eat you, but it usably never came to that.
She looked down and saw these strange little green bugs. ""What are those? Gross, they sure are ugly! Well they came just in time, I was getting a little hungry, maybe I'll ask them to dinner!"" " Here she comes!" yelled Naomi. 'BOOM!' She hit the floor just a few feet ahead of them. "Right!" yelled Link as he ran forward and smashed a deku nut on the ground. "" OW, Oh, my eye, my eye! What the heck did that little freak do to my eye! I can't see!"" She fell to the ground in pain. Then Link began striking at the giant eye. ""I need to get up! I need to make it back to the ceiling, then I can "lay" some help."" So she got up as fast as she possibly could and crawled up the wall.
Link and Naomi ran away from the middle of the room incase she tried to fall on top of them and squash them. "What is she doing?" asked Link, looking all around them for fear of reinforcements, " I hope she's not going to try to jump on us!" " 'GASP' , OH,NO! SHE'S LAYING GOMA LARVA!!!" screamed Naomi as she watched little green and brown packets fall to the ground. As she was franticly searching for safe place to stand and fight she saw it, Goma's eye turned red. She quickly and calmly pulled out her slingshot, took aim and shot Goma's large red eye. Goma stopped laying eggs and began to shriek; soon she came crashing to the ground. Link then rushed forward and started slicing away at the eye again. Suddenly, all that could be heard was shrieking, horrible shrieking as the great beast Goma lay dying! As she began to shrivel so did the eggs and all that was left was some outer shell that had made up Goma's hard exoskeleton. They had done it they killed Goma! Where Goma's shattered body lay was where they found two hearts. But these were bigger than the others and had a silver lining around them. They each picked up a heart and felt ten times stronger than they had before they started their little adventure.
'Oooo' gasped Navi "those are heart pieces they add to your life force and make you stronger. You can take a few more hits now, before succumbing to your injuries. They're very rare, only great warriors ever have the chance to use these. Hey look, step into the light and it will take you out of here." So with the battle over Naomi and Link looked at each other. Naomi smiled at Link and turned towards the light. Link watched her walk to the edge of the green circle of light and walked up to join her. They stepped in to the light together and looked above them as they were slowly being picked up and carried away.
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YAY! Death to Goma! They're FINNALY done with the Deku temple. I wonder what's gonna happen next. *tee hee * You'll just have to wait and see!
To answer SetoFreak, I've already got like 10chapters done, I only just got 'Word' and that's the only way I could get it up on FanFiction.net. But even with 10 chapters, I'm no where near the ending! But it's gonna get really good, promise!
~Kohaku-sama~ ^,^x oodles of oro's!
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"Navi, what were those?" asked Link. "I'm not too sure, but my guess is, that, they,..were..uh..goma, larva? Maybe yes, maybe, no? it's been awhile since I've seen some of those." "Goma? Well what ever they are, I do NOT want to see them again!!!" said Link. "Well, who would?" said Naomi. There were two sets of webs in this room. One had a tiny crawlspace, the other one had a deku baba behind it.
Well, she lit her stick and ran for the webs without the baba and set them ablaze. The webs burned down and they crawled to the next room. When they got there Link and Naomi realized they had been in this room before. It was the one they feel into after the big jump. Link found another block, and decided to act macho-man in front of Naomi once again and instead of waiting for her to help he pushed the block right off the edge. "Good thinking Link! Now we can use the fire down there to burn the cob webs on the floor right here! You're so smart!"
" Uh, yeah! that's what I was trying to do, heh heh." "Wait here and I'll be right back." she jumped down the block and lit a deku stick on the other side and came running back to the place where Link was standing. She beat down on the webs with the flaming stick and the web began to burn. She put out her stick and then put it away. " Lets go!" she said and jumped right in not waiting for Link. It was a lot deeper than she had though. So when she just kept falling she started to worry, but finally she hit water. She could hear Link as the air swept past him all the way down, and then he splashed right next to her. "Whoa, that was fun." he told her. " Look, the three deku brothers. Remember what that deku told us? Twenty- three is number one. And there in order like I thought, so the middle one first, then the one on the right, then the one closest to that door. Ready? OK, Lets do it! You get that one over there and I'll get these two." said Naomi, "You don't mind do you?" " I don't care, you're best with these things." said Link checking to see if his shield was strapped on tight. It took about a minuet and finally only number one was left. 'PHULT' ,'CRACK' ,'SQUEAK'
"OW,wow,ow, how did you know our secret? How annoying! I can't believe I am going to tell you the weakness of our queen Goma. If you want to deliver the coupe` de grace to our queen, she is only vulnerable when her EYE is RED. Oh QUEENIE, can you forgive me!?" 'SQUEAK!' Then the bars lifted from a large door and the deku shrubs squeaked off, leaving hearts, nuts, and sticks behind. " According to the map," Link began, " That's, THE BOSS LEVEL!!!!" his eyes were huge, he looked at Naomi and could see the she was scared too. " Did you hear when the deku said her EYE!!!, 'gulp' that means, that means, she's just like those larva. But I bet a lot bigger!!" said Naomi. " Why don't we stock up, look there's plants in the corner, maybe they'll have something we'll need." she suggested. So they cut them down to find, deku nuts, and seeds, and two hearts. They used the hearts then so they would be in great shape to battle.
"Don't worry you two, the deku tree has faith in you, you can do it, if he thought you couldn't I'm sure you wouldn't be in here right now. I believe in you too!!" " You, ready?" 'GULP' , "I am if you are." 'double GULP' , "Then lets go." and they entered the unknown together.
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GOMA
It was dark. All they could hear was the thump of their heartbeats, and this strange scratching sound that seemed to be coming from the ceiling. They didn't move at first, just stud there, they were afraid of what was going to happen next. Then Naomi looked out from the little hall they were standing in and looked at the ceiling only to see something crawling on it, it was huge, and had a RED,GLOWING,EYE!
"Well," she said, "Well," he said.'SIGH' " Lets get this over with." she said with a 'GULP!' And they stepped out into the clearing. The door slammed behind them and they flinched and waited for Goma to fall upon them, but she didn't, she just kept crawling around in circles. So they just looked up at her. They looked at her for quite a long time until she FINNALY noticed them.
She couldn't see very well, and obviously couldn't hear very well either if she hadn't heard the door slam. Or maybe she was just stupid, not that that matters. It's not like anyone is going to insult her for her stupidity, for one thing she's huge and has some huge claws. She's a big freaking spider, with one eye, four legs, and a weird tail thingy that looked like it could do some damage. So insults really didn't bother her, if anyone messed with her she could always step on them, or eat them, one of the two would do just fine. Or on a really bad day she would step on you and then eat you, but it usably never came to that.
She looked down and saw these strange little green bugs. ""What are those? Gross, they sure are ugly! Well they came just in time, I was getting a little hungry, maybe I'll ask them to dinner!"" " Here she comes!" yelled Naomi. 'BOOM!' She hit the floor just a few feet ahead of them. "Right!" yelled Link as he ran forward and smashed a deku nut on the ground. "" OW, Oh, my eye, my eye! What the heck did that little freak do to my eye! I can't see!"" She fell to the ground in pain. Then Link began striking at the giant eye. ""I need to get up! I need to make it back to the ceiling, then I can "lay" some help."" So she got up as fast as she possibly could and crawled up the wall.
Link and Naomi ran away from the middle of the room incase she tried to fall on top of them and squash them. "What is she doing?" asked Link, looking all around them for fear of reinforcements, " I hope she's not going to try to jump on us!" " 'GASP' , OH,NO! SHE'S LAYING GOMA LARVA!!!" screamed Naomi as she watched little green and brown packets fall to the ground. As she was franticly searching for safe place to stand and fight she saw it, Goma's eye turned red. She quickly and calmly pulled out her slingshot, took aim and shot Goma's large red eye. Goma stopped laying eggs and began to shriek; soon she came crashing to the ground. Link then rushed forward and started slicing away at the eye again. Suddenly, all that could be heard was shrieking, horrible shrieking as the great beast Goma lay dying! As she began to shrivel so did the eggs and all that was left was some outer shell that had made up Goma's hard exoskeleton. They had done it they killed Goma! Where Goma's shattered body lay was where they found two hearts. But these were bigger than the others and had a silver lining around them. They each picked up a heart and felt ten times stronger than they had before they started their little adventure.
'Oooo' gasped Navi "those are heart pieces they add to your life force and make you stronger. You can take a few more hits now, before succumbing to your injuries. They're very rare, only great warriors ever have the chance to use these. Hey look, step into the light and it will take you out of here." So with the battle over Naomi and Link looked at each other. Naomi smiled at Link and turned towards the light. Link watched her walk to the edge of the green circle of light and walked up to join her. They stepped in to the light together and looked above them as they were slowly being picked up and carried away.
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YAY! Death to Goma! They're FINNALY done with the Deku temple. I wonder what's gonna happen next. *tee hee * You'll just have to wait and see!
To answer SetoFreak, I've already got like 10chapters done, I only just got 'Word' and that's the only way I could get it up on FanFiction.net. But even with 10 chapters, I'm no where near the ending! But it's gonna get really good, promise!
~Kohaku-sama~ ^,^x oodles of oro's!