Warning there are swear words in here.
Chapter 3: A Weak Pulse
Author: me, niteowlgal
Disclaimer: Joan and Adam and anyone else from Joan of arcadia are not mine but Barbara Hall's, I wish Adam was mine : ) and new character that is mine, for now known as young guy.
Summary: God tells Joan to meet him in the park and believe in him, Adam gets the wrong impression. Joan goes after him but something goes horribly wrong. ~ by know she has been hit by a car
Pairings: Joan and Adam
A/N: Thanks to everyone for reviewing and reading folks, and please review again and anyone know what beta is and how I can get it to help my stories? Also I have little idea where I am going with this so bear with me while I take time. I hope this isn't a story that turns out crappy in the ending lol. and I think this chapter is kinda short, sorry. I'll try harder next time, for sure. I am gonna watch like Chicago hope and ER, and stuff to get the medical jargon. Please review!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~My Jane ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Adam had turned around after he heard Jane screaming his name he was about to tell her to forget it and leave him alone. But then he heard her heart wrenching scream and what he saw next shocked him. He ran onto the street and tried to save her but it was too late he couldn't get to her time. Jane was gone.
Adam in disbelief ran over to Jane, who was in front of the stopped vehicle and prayed she was alive Adam got to Joan. "Jane can you hear me, are you okay, talk to me?"
He carefully touched her head and put his hands under her head after making sure her neck or anything was broken, he felt something warm, which of course was blood; his hand was covered in her blood her head must of hit and was bleeding. He checked her pulse to make sure she was alive, he felt a faint pulse. Her beautiful was face was bruised and cut and he couldn't even tell if the rest of her was okay, and new it was best not to move her more. He just prayed she was ok.
"This is all my fault I am so sorry Jane", but of course she couldn't respond since she was unconscious. He had to get her help fast or God knows what would happen to her.
"Someone call 911 he screamed into the street not wanting to leave Jane by herself he just hoped some one heard him." There were houses all around and Joan's house was not too far away.
"Help someone help me, Please, Help!!!"
All of the sudden the driver of the car stepped out, a young male around their age probably a year or two older, he was tall especially considering the fact that Adam was on the ground with Jane. He had green eyes and black hair it was hard to tell since it was night. He looked so shocked and in disbelief he struggled to ask "is she okay?"
Adam couldn't believe this jerk, couldn't he see she wasn't okay, he fucken ran over her! How was she supposed to be doing? He knew yelling at him wouldn't help Jane now so he responded back "with do u have a friggen cell phone? Go get help before she dies! Hurry up Yo"
"Yeah I got a cell phone, uhh... I'll call 911" said the young driver, and reported Joan's condition and what had happened. As he made the call. Adam tried to talk to Joan hoping she could hear him and wake up but she stayed out of it. Adam wanted to pound the driver so badly he could feel the rage inside him and knew if Jane died, that guy would have a lot to answer to, he couldn't handle loosing another woman in his life, especially one he loved so much.
Faint siren sounds were heard they were approaching. The fire police and ambulance came, and soon the cops came. The paramedics and fire fighters all surrounded him and told him to move out the way so they could help her but Adam lingered by, not wanting to leave her. As soon as they had Jane on the stretcher and hooked up to all those machines and getting prepared to put her in the ambulance, they heard a loud shout.
"Wait!" it was detective Girardi, Joan's father, he had just arrived and found it was his baby girl who had been hurt and could potentially die. He walked over the stretcher he in utter shock, as could be seen on his face. He started to cry and whispered to Joan that it would be okay. "Your daddy's hear with you now baby, it will be all be okay, don't you worry I'll protect you."
"Excuse me sir but you daughter is very critical and we need to get her to the hospital right away" said one of the paramedics.
"Of course, please hurry you have to save her". As the got ready again to put her in Joan the ambulance it suddenly dawned on Will that someone had done this to her, where is that bastard that hit my baby girl, where is he I'll kill that fucken idiot!"
As the young man tried to hide, and everyone moving away from him, a loud pitch beeping sound started. All of the sudden the monitored hooked up to Joan that showed her heart beat, started to flat-line, she was slipping away from them...
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Yes I love cliffies, no I don't, I hate em but I do it cause I want people to read it and Review!!! Thanks for reading and yes I am evil because of the cliffies but don't worry about it. I have no idea where this story is going. If I can get 5 reviews I think I can get the next chapter up as soon as possible. Alright I hope you liked it and thanks again. Okay back to studying it's almost 2 30 am urghh...: (
Chapter 3: A Weak Pulse
Author: me, niteowlgal
Disclaimer: Joan and Adam and anyone else from Joan of arcadia are not mine but Barbara Hall's, I wish Adam was mine : ) and new character that is mine, for now known as young guy.
Summary: God tells Joan to meet him in the park and believe in him, Adam gets the wrong impression. Joan goes after him but something goes horribly wrong. ~ by know she has been hit by a car
Pairings: Joan and Adam
A/N: Thanks to everyone for reviewing and reading folks, and please review again and anyone know what beta is and how I can get it to help my stories? Also I have little idea where I am going with this so bear with me while I take time. I hope this isn't a story that turns out crappy in the ending lol. and I think this chapter is kinda short, sorry. I'll try harder next time, for sure. I am gonna watch like Chicago hope and ER, and stuff to get the medical jargon. Please review!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~My Jane ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Adam had turned around after he heard Jane screaming his name he was about to tell her to forget it and leave him alone. But then he heard her heart wrenching scream and what he saw next shocked him. He ran onto the street and tried to save her but it was too late he couldn't get to her time. Jane was gone.
Adam in disbelief ran over to Jane, who was in front of the stopped vehicle and prayed she was alive Adam got to Joan. "Jane can you hear me, are you okay, talk to me?"
He carefully touched her head and put his hands under her head after making sure her neck or anything was broken, he felt something warm, which of course was blood; his hand was covered in her blood her head must of hit and was bleeding. He checked her pulse to make sure she was alive, he felt a faint pulse. Her beautiful was face was bruised and cut and he couldn't even tell if the rest of her was okay, and new it was best not to move her more. He just prayed she was ok.
"This is all my fault I am so sorry Jane", but of course she couldn't respond since she was unconscious. He had to get her help fast or God knows what would happen to her.
"Someone call 911 he screamed into the street not wanting to leave Jane by herself he just hoped some one heard him." There were houses all around and Joan's house was not too far away.
"Help someone help me, Please, Help!!!"
All of the sudden the driver of the car stepped out, a young male around their age probably a year or two older, he was tall especially considering the fact that Adam was on the ground with Jane. He had green eyes and black hair it was hard to tell since it was night. He looked so shocked and in disbelief he struggled to ask "is she okay?"
Adam couldn't believe this jerk, couldn't he see she wasn't okay, he fucken ran over her! How was she supposed to be doing? He knew yelling at him wouldn't help Jane now so he responded back "with do u have a friggen cell phone? Go get help before she dies! Hurry up Yo"
"Yeah I got a cell phone, uhh... I'll call 911" said the young driver, and reported Joan's condition and what had happened. As he made the call. Adam tried to talk to Joan hoping she could hear him and wake up but she stayed out of it. Adam wanted to pound the driver so badly he could feel the rage inside him and knew if Jane died, that guy would have a lot to answer to, he couldn't handle loosing another woman in his life, especially one he loved so much.
Faint siren sounds were heard they were approaching. The fire police and ambulance came, and soon the cops came. The paramedics and fire fighters all surrounded him and told him to move out the way so they could help her but Adam lingered by, not wanting to leave her. As soon as they had Jane on the stretcher and hooked up to all those machines and getting prepared to put her in the ambulance, they heard a loud shout.
"Wait!" it was detective Girardi, Joan's father, he had just arrived and found it was his baby girl who had been hurt and could potentially die. He walked over the stretcher he in utter shock, as could be seen on his face. He started to cry and whispered to Joan that it would be okay. "Your daddy's hear with you now baby, it will be all be okay, don't you worry I'll protect you."
"Excuse me sir but you daughter is very critical and we need to get her to the hospital right away" said one of the paramedics.
"Of course, please hurry you have to save her". As the got ready again to put her in Joan the ambulance it suddenly dawned on Will that someone had done this to her, where is that bastard that hit my baby girl, where is he I'll kill that fucken idiot!"
As the young man tried to hide, and everyone moving away from him, a loud pitch beeping sound started. All of the sudden the monitored hooked up to Joan that showed her heart beat, started to flat-line, she was slipping away from them...
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Yes I love cliffies, no I don't, I hate em but I do it cause I want people to read it and Review!!! Thanks for reading and yes I am evil because of the cliffies but don't worry about it. I have no idea where this story is going. If I can get 5 reviews I think I can get the next chapter up as soon as possible. Alright I hope you liked it and thanks again. Okay back to studying it's almost 2 30 am urghh...: (