UnangelicHalo: Yeah, I know that's not what Rob's on probation for...I
just thought it was the funniest damn reason so I wanted to use it. Yeah,
I'm on the boards of her book website, my name's DecrepitReject on there.
To the rest of my reviewers: Thank you all soooooooooo much for reviewing,
on this story and on Wedding Of Sorts....Someone asked if I was going to
write a sequel to Wedding of Sorts, and I honestly don't know yet. I
might, if I get bored, but I don't know what would happen...Oh, wait!
brainstorm I just had an idea...Chapter One of the new story will be up
ASAP.
Ok, on to Chapter Three of Hypnotised By Evil:
Jesse's POV:
"Jesse!" Father Dominic exclaimed. "What are you doing here?" I had
materialized in Father Dominic's office, hoping he would be there. "It's
Susannah." I said. "That el tonto, Paul...he...He's done something to
her."
"Something like?" Father Dominic looked confused.
"I'm not sure what." I said. "He's...put a spell on her, made her love him and forget her feelings for me."
"Er...Feelings?" Father Dominic now looked worried. "Jesse, I thought I'd explained to both of you that-"
"Yes, Yes." I waved my hand at the Father. "We know, we know. But it happened, and now the el bastardo"- Father Dominic cast me a look that said 'Watch the language'- "Er, sorry, Father," I said before finishing, "he's made her forget all her feelings for me, and instead direct them at him."
"Well...Jesse, I don't rightly know what we can do." Father Dominic looked pained to say. "We'd have to know exactly what he did, and then there may not be a way of reversing it."
I put my head in my hands and sighed. "So you mean to tell me, I may have lost my Susannah?"
"It's possible, yes."
I stood up from the chair I'd sunk into. "No."
"No?"
"She's not lost forever. I will figure out what happened to my Susannah, and bring her back." I said before dematerializing out of Father Dominic's office.
Brad's POV:
"SUZE!!!!!!!!!!!" I yelled up the steps. "10 MINUTES, OR WE LEAVE WITHOUT YOU!!!!!!!!!" Not that Jake actually would, but I didn't care. It was just a little assurance that Suze would actually get her ass downstairs on time.
Two minutes after I'd yelled, Suze came bouncing down the steps. Almost literally. She had this big grin plastered to her face, a sure sign that things between her and that freak Slater were on the upside. Or maybe it was the guy, Jesse. The one she'd been sneaking into her room every night. I didn't ask her about the grin, instead asked what was up with the outfit. Suze looked like she'd taken a fashion tip from Debbie or something, ditching her usual jeans and nice shirt for a flirty skirt and top that Dad would have flipped out over, if he hadn't had to leave for work early.
"Just felt like wearing something different." She said, shooting me the evil eye. "What do you care?"
"I don't." I said hotly. "I figured it was for Slater or someone else." I emphasized the 'someone else' bit to let her know I still knew about Jesse.
"What other guy? There are no other guys." Suze said. Something in her tone actually made me believe her.
"Trouble in paradise, huh?"
"BRAD! SUZE! GET IN THE CAR NOW OR I'M LEAVING WITHOUT YOU BOTH!" Jake yelled. We hightailed it out to the car, and I forgot about Suze's outfit. Paul was waiting for her when we pulled up, and they walked off towards the main entrance after Suze yelled that she didn't need a ride home.
Jake grunted. "I really don't like that guy." he said, looking at them as they walked off.
"Who, Paul?" Ok, so I'm not a genius. Duh.
"Yeah." Jake started up the car again. "I mean, look at him!" I looked. Paul's hand was now on Suze's ass. "Jake, cool it. She's a big girl, she can take care of herself." Jake gave me the 'whatever-look-after-her' look, and I groaned. "Yeah, Yeah."
"Brad!" I heard Debbie yell. "Later dude." Jake drove off I met up with Debbie and a few of my other friends. Suze would just have to look after herself for now.
Paul's POV:
When Suze got out of her brother's car this morning, I thought I was going to bust. She looked so damn sexy in this short black skirt and tight black shirt, it was all I could do to not throw her down and screw her right then and there. She gave me her sweet sexy smile as she got out.
"I don't need a ride home after school." Suze called as I put my arm around her waist and led her towards the main entrance. I ran my hand down her back and rested it on her ass, and Suze didn't seem to mind. Then her friends came running over.
"Suze, oh thank God!" CeeCee said. She was this pretty cute albino chick. "I called you last night, and you never picked up."
"Yeah, Suze, you go out and replace us or something?" her friend Adam said. Normally, I'd be threatened with the whole guy-friend thing, but it was ADAM, ok? Not exactly a threat like De Silva was.
Suze laughed. "No, I didn't replace you. I fell asleep early last night." She winked at me after saying this.
"So, I wore you out, huh?" I said, kissing her neck. Forget the fact that CeeCee and Adam now wore identical looks of repulsion. "Suze...That was nothing." I said, now working on one of her ears.
"Uh...We're just...gonna go." CeeCee said, taking Adam's arm and leading him away. I could hear her start to wig out over our public display.
I kept nibbling her ear until Sister Ernestine came up and told us to go to class or else. Since we have different classes until fifth period, Suze and I broke apart. "See you in History." Suze whispered as I left her at her first period trig class.
The day seemed unbearably long, until finally Suze and I were pulling out of the school's parking lot in my BMW. We pulled into my driveway, and Suze got out voluntarily, unlike the last time she was here.
Of course, things won't be the same as they were the last time she was here, I thought with a grin. We walked in the front door, and I called out, "I'm home!" No one answered, and I found a note from Pops's day attendent, Mark, saying they had gone out for a little bit and would be back by five-ish.
"So, Suze, looks like we got the place to ourselves..." I said grinning at her. No, I do not have a one-track mind, as much as it may seem like I do. It would just be a little bit longer before I could trick Suze into exorcising that cowboy. I led Suze to my room and we sat down on the bed as I started kissing her again. My God, she was so beautiful! Big emerald green eyes, gorgeous brown curls framing her adorable face...and that body! Oh my god, she drove me craaaaaaazy with that body of hers! She wasn't stick thin, but she wasn't obese either. She was, in a word, perfect. She fell back onto the bed, me on top of her, and I whispered to her, "I didn't forget it this time..."
Suze's POV:
"I didn't forget it this time..." Paul whispered as we fell onto his bed. I moaned lightly, kissing Paul hungrily. His blue eyes roved over me, as if asking if I was OK doing that. "Paul...um..." I stuttered, tying to get out. See, as much as I loved him, I didn't want to do that yet. It's a huge step, and I just wasn't ready for it yet. "I don't..um...I mean, I..uh...don't think I'm...uh..ready yet.." God, did I sound like an idiot.
But he was cool. I figured he would be, since if he really did love me, then he'd wait until I was ready, right? "Shh..Suze, it's ok. We can just do this." Paul whispered to me, implying that we could just continue to make out.
So we did. And it was absolute heaven...Except that I couldn't stop thinking about Jesse.
I mean, Jesse's evil, and I couldn't stop thinking about him...Because as evil as he may be, I couldn't help feeling a little bit of...something for him. It wasn't love, I knew that much. It was probably lust...He was a pretty good kisser. Almost as good as Paul...I tried to push him out of my head, but to no avail.
"Suze, you OK?" Paul said, getting up off of me. Damn.
"Yeah. I just have some stuff on my mind." I said. Do not say his name, do not say his name...
"Let me guess...Jesse?" Paul cast me a dirty look. Not dirty in a sex way, dirty in a 'I-can't-believe-you' way.
I groaned. "I'm sorry, Paul...I don't know why he's on my mind." I felt horrible.
"Shhhh...Suze, it's OK." Paul said, wrapping me in a hug. "You know...I think I know of a way to get him off your mind..." he added with a meaningful look.
"Something like?" Father Dominic looked confused.
"I'm not sure what." I said. "He's...put a spell on her, made her love him and forget her feelings for me."
"Er...Feelings?" Father Dominic now looked worried. "Jesse, I thought I'd explained to both of you that-"
"Yes, Yes." I waved my hand at the Father. "We know, we know. But it happened, and now the el bastardo"- Father Dominic cast me a look that said 'Watch the language'- "Er, sorry, Father," I said before finishing, "he's made her forget all her feelings for me, and instead direct them at him."
"Well...Jesse, I don't rightly know what we can do." Father Dominic looked pained to say. "We'd have to know exactly what he did, and then there may not be a way of reversing it."
I put my head in my hands and sighed. "So you mean to tell me, I may have lost my Susannah?"
"It's possible, yes."
I stood up from the chair I'd sunk into. "No."
"No?"
"She's not lost forever. I will figure out what happened to my Susannah, and bring her back." I said before dematerializing out of Father Dominic's office.
Brad's POV:
"SUZE!!!!!!!!!!!" I yelled up the steps. "10 MINUTES, OR WE LEAVE WITHOUT YOU!!!!!!!!!" Not that Jake actually would, but I didn't care. It was just a little assurance that Suze would actually get her ass downstairs on time.
Two minutes after I'd yelled, Suze came bouncing down the steps. Almost literally. She had this big grin plastered to her face, a sure sign that things between her and that freak Slater were on the upside. Or maybe it was the guy, Jesse. The one she'd been sneaking into her room every night. I didn't ask her about the grin, instead asked what was up with the outfit. Suze looked like she'd taken a fashion tip from Debbie or something, ditching her usual jeans and nice shirt for a flirty skirt and top that Dad would have flipped out over, if he hadn't had to leave for work early.
"Just felt like wearing something different." She said, shooting me the evil eye. "What do you care?"
"I don't." I said hotly. "I figured it was for Slater or someone else." I emphasized the 'someone else' bit to let her know I still knew about Jesse.
"What other guy? There are no other guys." Suze said. Something in her tone actually made me believe her.
"Trouble in paradise, huh?"
"BRAD! SUZE! GET IN THE CAR NOW OR I'M LEAVING WITHOUT YOU BOTH!" Jake yelled. We hightailed it out to the car, and I forgot about Suze's outfit. Paul was waiting for her when we pulled up, and they walked off towards the main entrance after Suze yelled that she didn't need a ride home.
Jake grunted. "I really don't like that guy." he said, looking at them as they walked off.
"Who, Paul?" Ok, so I'm not a genius. Duh.
"Yeah." Jake started up the car again. "I mean, look at him!" I looked. Paul's hand was now on Suze's ass. "Jake, cool it. She's a big girl, she can take care of herself." Jake gave me the 'whatever-look-after-her' look, and I groaned. "Yeah, Yeah."
"Brad!" I heard Debbie yell. "Later dude." Jake drove off I met up with Debbie and a few of my other friends. Suze would just have to look after herself for now.
Paul's POV:
When Suze got out of her brother's car this morning, I thought I was going to bust. She looked so damn sexy in this short black skirt and tight black shirt, it was all I could do to not throw her down and screw her right then and there. She gave me her sweet sexy smile as she got out.
"I don't need a ride home after school." Suze called as I put my arm around her waist and led her towards the main entrance. I ran my hand down her back and rested it on her ass, and Suze didn't seem to mind. Then her friends came running over.
"Suze, oh thank God!" CeeCee said. She was this pretty cute albino chick. "I called you last night, and you never picked up."
"Yeah, Suze, you go out and replace us or something?" her friend Adam said. Normally, I'd be threatened with the whole guy-friend thing, but it was ADAM, ok? Not exactly a threat like De Silva was.
Suze laughed. "No, I didn't replace you. I fell asleep early last night." She winked at me after saying this.
"So, I wore you out, huh?" I said, kissing her neck. Forget the fact that CeeCee and Adam now wore identical looks of repulsion. "Suze...That was nothing." I said, now working on one of her ears.
"Uh...We're just...gonna go." CeeCee said, taking Adam's arm and leading him away. I could hear her start to wig out over our public display.
I kept nibbling her ear until Sister Ernestine came up and told us to go to class or else. Since we have different classes until fifth period, Suze and I broke apart. "See you in History." Suze whispered as I left her at her first period trig class.
The day seemed unbearably long, until finally Suze and I were pulling out of the school's parking lot in my BMW. We pulled into my driveway, and Suze got out voluntarily, unlike the last time she was here.
Of course, things won't be the same as they were the last time she was here, I thought with a grin. We walked in the front door, and I called out, "I'm home!" No one answered, and I found a note from Pops's day attendent, Mark, saying they had gone out for a little bit and would be back by five-ish.
"So, Suze, looks like we got the place to ourselves..." I said grinning at her. No, I do not have a one-track mind, as much as it may seem like I do. It would just be a little bit longer before I could trick Suze into exorcising that cowboy. I led Suze to my room and we sat down on the bed as I started kissing her again. My God, she was so beautiful! Big emerald green eyes, gorgeous brown curls framing her adorable face...and that body! Oh my god, she drove me craaaaaaazy with that body of hers! She wasn't stick thin, but she wasn't obese either. She was, in a word, perfect. She fell back onto the bed, me on top of her, and I whispered to her, "I didn't forget it this time..."
Suze's POV:
"I didn't forget it this time..." Paul whispered as we fell onto his bed. I moaned lightly, kissing Paul hungrily. His blue eyes roved over me, as if asking if I was OK doing that. "Paul...um..." I stuttered, tying to get out. See, as much as I loved him, I didn't want to do that yet. It's a huge step, and I just wasn't ready for it yet. "I don't..um...I mean, I..uh...don't think I'm...uh..ready yet.." God, did I sound like an idiot.
But he was cool. I figured he would be, since if he really did love me, then he'd wait until I was ready, right? "Shh..Suze, it's ok. We can just do this." Paul whispered to me, implying that we could just continue to make out.
So we did. And it was absolute heaven...Except that I couldn't stop thinking about Jesse.
I mean, Jesse's evil, and I couldn't stop thinking about him...Because as evil as he may be, I couldn't help feeling a little bit of...something for him. It wasn't love, I knew that much. It was probably lust...He was a pretty good kisser. Almost as good as Paul...I tried to push him out of my head, but to no avail.
"Suze, you OK?" Paul said, getting up off of me. Damn.
"Yeah. I just have some stuff on my mind." I said. Do not say his name, do not say his name...
"Let me guess...Jesse?" Paul cast me a dirty look. Not dirty in a sex way, dirty in a 'I-can't-believe-you' way.
I groaned. "I'm sorry, Paul...I don't know why he's on my mind." I felt horrible.
"Shhhh...Suze, it's OK." Paul said, wrapping me in a hug. "You know...I think I know of a way to get him off your mind..." he added with a meaningful look.