WOW. Never in my life have I had to read something as painful as some of
the reviews I have gotten. I am ECSTATIC about many of them, but very sad
about others. But don't misunderstand me; I could also not be HAPPIER that
I got those. (Ok, maybe I could be a LITTLE happier, but hey, it's not like
they were love letters.) I would just like to take one entry to respond to
the many reviews.
Mary Sue writers: you are absolutely right. I can not believe that I did that. I will have to work in something, because I did make her flawless. I guess part of that was definitely because I wanted to stress the "you-can't- have-me" look, and I wanted to go on to some of the things that happened to her. Thank you so much, though it was hard to hear, this was my first fic. So, the ones to come will be much better.
How could she get so bloody if she was good with fists: I thought about the same thing. The reveal to that question will come later. Sometimes, someone isn't hurt because they aren't a good enough fighter to fight back, you know? And she IS only like, 15.
Randy: I also thought about that b4 I named her. It IS a nickname, and the giver and the reason for it is coming
The kloppman issue was brought to my attention. I am shamed faced, I can not believe I did that, What's worse, I KNEW, it was Kloppman, I just kept spelling it wrong!!
Thanks for all these reviews, AND THANX MORE FOR ALL THE GOOD ONES!!!Hehehehe..until next time.
Mary Sue writers: you are absolutely right. I can not believe that I did that. I will have to work in something, because I did make her flawless. I guess part of that was definitely because I wanted to stress the "you-can't- have-me" look, and I wanted to go on to some of the things that happened to her. Thank you so much, though it was hard to hear, this was my first fic. So, the ones to come will be much better.
How could she get so bloody if she was good with fists: I thought about the same thing. The reveal to that question will come later. Sometimes, someone isn't hurt because they aren't a good enough fighter to fight back, you know? And she IS only like, 15.
Randy: I also thought about that b4 I named her. It IS a nickname, and the giver and the reason for it is coming
The kloppman issue was brought to my attention. I am shamed faced, I can not believe I did that, What's worse, I KNEW, it was Kloppman, I just kept spelling it wrong!!
Thanks for all these reviews, AND THANX MORE FOR ALL THE GOOD ONES!!!Hehehehe..until next time.
