Well, this is it, the final, errrrr, countdown? How corny is that? Just
wanna say thanks to all the peeps who reviewed, all TWO of ya, lmao. And
for no apparent reason just wanna say I seen Shrek 2 the other day and I'm
in love with Puss in Boots, savvy?
"Well done Miss Swann, you've assisted with the capture of a dangerous fugitive"
Elizabeth gasped as she lunged down to Jack's side. "Jack?" She cried. "Jack?"
Jack groaned, "Don't worry about me love, I'm....."
"Captain Jack Sparrow, right?"
He flashed Elizabeth his usual grin even through all his pain.
Elizabeth hated seeing Jack like this, his freedom gone, floated away like leaves on the breeze.
"Well, Captain" Commodore said mockingly. "I think this would be a good time to out you out of your misery" He smirked placing the gun to Jack's head. "But, I would like to see you suffer a little while longer. It's highly unlikely that you'll make it through tonight, so I'm just going to leave you here to die."
"Losing your touch, a'e Commodore?"
"Don't tempt me Sparrow, it wouldn't take much"
"Well then, I bid you farewell" Jack gasped as he outstretched his hand up towards the Commodore.
"Indeed" The Commodore snorted as he snubbed Jack's handshake and turned on his heel.
Jack lay back down and shut his eyes. After a while he opened one eye "Is he gone?"
"Yes, long gone Jack" Elizabeth whimpered holding in all of her tears.
"Good! I was getting the chills lying down there!" Jack laughed as he jumped up onto his feet.
"Jack?" Elizabeth frowned. "Explain"
"Just the wonder o' me love, God wanted me spared." He said as he looked to the sky with his hand on his heart.
"Jack" Elizabeth repeated.
"Oh O.K then, the bullet completely missed both of us, happy?"
"Ecstatic!" Elizabeth laughed as she jumped into Jack's arms "I was afraid that I'd lose you again!"
"Not a hippo's chance in hell darling"
"Hippo's Jack?"
"Clearly you've never been to Africa!"
"Do my ears deceive me or did the great Captain Jack Sparrow just use a joke he has used before?"
"I dunno love, you tell me"
"I'll let you off this time"
"Oh thank-you Miss Swann" Jack smiled as he bowed mockingly.
"So, Captain, where are we off to now then?"
"Wherever the wind takes us love"
"To Tortuga then?"
"Mmmmmmm" Jack thought "We'll play it by here"
END! Any good? I dunno, its like what? My third story, and I still can't get it just right, I suppose, everyone feels that way right? No? Just me then? All-white........
"Well done Miss Swann, you've assisted with the capture of a dangerous fugitive"
Elizabeth gasped as she lunged down to Jack's side. "Jack?" She cried. "Jack?"
Jack groaned, "Don't worry about me love, I'm....."
"Captain Jack Sparrow, right?"
He flashed Elizabeth his usual grin even through all his pain.
Elizabeth hated seeing Jack like this, his freedom gone, floated away like leaves on the breeze.
"Well, Captain" Commodore said mockingly. "I think this would be a good time to out you out of your misery" He smirked placing the gun to Jack's head. "But, I would like to see you suffer a little while longer. It's highly unlikely that you'll make it through tonight, so I'm just going to leave you here to die."
"Losing your touch, a'e Commodore?"
"Don't tempt me Sparrow, it wouldn't take much"
"Well then, I bid you farewell" Jack gasped as he outstretched his hand up towards the Commodore.
"Indeed" The Commodore snorted as he snubbed Jack's handshake and turned on his heel.
Jack lay back down and shut his eyes. After a while he opened one eye "Is he gone?"
"Yes, long gone Jack" Elizabeth whimpered holding in all of her tears.
"Good! I was getting the chills lying down there!" Jack laughed as he jumped up onto his feet.
"Jack?" Elizabeth frowned. "Explain"
"Just the wonder o' me love, God wanted me spared." He said as he looked to the sky with his hand on his heart.
"Jack" Elizabeth repeated.
"Oh O.K then, the bullet completely missed both of us, happy?"
"Ecstatic!" Elizabeth laughed as she jumped into Jack's arms "I was afraid that I'd lose you again!"
"Not a hippo's chance in hell darling"
"Hippo's Jack?"
"Clearly you've never been to Africa!"
"Do my ears deceive me or did the great Captain Jack Sparrow just use a joke he has used before?"
"I dunno love, you tell me"
"I'll let you off this time"
"Oh thank-you Miss Swann" Jack smiled as he bowed mockingly.
"So, Captain, where are we off to now then?"
"Wherever the wind takes us love"
"To Tortuga then?"
"Mmmmmmm" Jack thought "We'll play it by here"
END! Any good? I dunno, its like what? My third story, and I still can't get it just right, I suppose, everyone feels that way right? No? Just me then? All-white........