Note: I'm too busy to do foolproof right now, so bear with me for now for the errors in the grammar structure and such. I will revise all the chapters
some time in the near the future. The chapters might be coming in slowly, but surely they will be completed. And to Chaotic Jinx; thanks for being my first reviewer, bro XD
CHAPTER 2:
In the humid and dark bar a young girl who appears to be no older than 16 find her hands freezing and her heart pounding heavily against her chest as she pick up the black round tray that holds four glasses of beer. He slowly walk toward a table that's seated by five men. The five men, looking at girl , snickering and making lewd comments under their breath, but loud enough for her to hear. As the five men continue on staring at the young and shy waitress, a tall man covered in a long black cloak and face hidden under a long brimmed black hat walk through the door.
"Um… here's your drinks…" the girl said with a shaky voice while looking down on the floor. She hope that by avoiding eye contacts they might leave her along. She doesn't want to anger them, because they're part of the Godland Army, a group of ruthless thugs that kill and harm others without any remorse.
The men of the Godland Army smell the fear from the girl and it excites them even more. One of them grab the girl by her arm, which scared the girl and caused to her drop the tray that was still holding two more beers. As the beers and the tray slam down unto the floor, nobody in the bar dare to look at what is happening. They knew what exactly was happening, but they're afraid to do anything. In Aion, nobody dares to bother or put their noses into the business of Godland Army.
"Look what you've done, honey…" said the Godland Army with a red eye patch over his right eyes, the one that grabbed the girl. "You gotta pay for your clumsiness. If you satisfied my buddies and I here enough, we might just let you live." The red eye patched Godland scavenger yank the girls arm and pull her into her. The girl let out a low shriek, while the other 3 Godland scavengers laughs in delight. She want to call out for help, but she knew that wouldn't do anything. Instead she beg them to stop, but it fell in vain just like she expected. Just after the Godland Army scavenger rip open her shirt the tall man appear next to them out of nowhere.
"Get the fuck out here ya fucking punk," warn one of the three scavengers to the tall stranger. "The girl's on her break right now."
"You must be the Godland dogs…" the tall man speak in a low raspy voice. "Let the girl go, before I send you all off to the land of Hades."
"Who the fuck are you?" ask the red eye patch guy as he finally let go of the girl. The girl quickly step to the side, as she watch the eye patch scavenger reach into his pocket and took his knife out. "You better learn to respe---"
"You need something much more than a knife to stop me, fool!" the tall interrupt the eye patch scavenger, and before the scavanger can say anything back he realize that the tall stranger had grab him and the next thing is knew before he let out a scream and died was an unbearable pain that burst around his neck.
The other three Godland Army stare in shock as they watch the tall stranger in black holds their lifeless comrade with his long and thin white fingers. Two red dots glows under the dark brimmed hat while he spit out a large chuck of flesh unto the table. One of the scavengers turned and ran off screaming, while the other two was still in shock. "Let him run…" said the tall stranger. "So, we can bring the rest of your friends to me… and as for you two…" the tall stranger grab the two Godland Army's necks with each of his hands and yanked out their throats. He toss two throats and chunks of torn flesh onto the floor and make his way toward the exit, while others in the bar grasp in horror from what they've witnessed in three seconds. Before he could reach the exit, five Godland scavengers along with the one that escaped seconds ago came through the door. They look at their dead comrades and they stare at the bloody mess that the tall stranger has made behind him.
"Where's the rest of your gang!?" shouted the tall pale stranger, revealing his yellow teeth that's dripping with blood and cover will small chunks of flesh. "Talk fast or die slow!" The pale stranger with the decayed face and glowing red eyes charged the six frozen men after they answered his question.
As dawn slowly approaches, the early sunlight slowly reveals the bodies of nine naked men impaled on nine wooden sticks outside Maspeth Bar. Their blood emptied, their body mutilated and their flesh twisted. Meanwhile, twelve miles away from the mutilated bodies of the Godland Army is a massive area that was formerly an industrial section. Among the few of many industrial factories that covered the area is the lairs of the Godland Army. All of the Godland Army scavengers are asleep soundly as dawn arrives, not knowing the cruel demise of their comrades and not knowing of a certain tall stranger in black heading toward their way.
When the sun was fully up, agonized cries and screams echoes throughout the entire industrial complex. And when the sun was about to retire again for the day the industrial factories was filled with bloodless corpses. The floor was covered with torn and ripped human meat and as the tall stranger walks around the area he can feel the squishing of intestines under his boots. Although by night time the place is filled with the smell of human bowel waste, but he didn't mind and he was busy with decorating his new lair.
When the sun rise again, the former lair of the Godland Army is now decorated with their mutilated bodies hanging off everywhere. This is the declaration of the end to the reign of terror placed on the city of Aion by the Godland Army. However the hanging corpses foreshadows the reign of something much more terrifying.
some time in the near the future. The chapters might be coming in slowly, but surely they will be completed. And to Chaotic Jinx; thanks for being my first reviewer, bro XD
CHAPTER 2:
In the humid and dark bar a young girl who appears to be no older than 16 find her hands freezing and her heart pounding heavily against her chest as she pick up the black round tray that holds four glasses of beer. He slowly walk toward a table that's seated by five men. The five men, looking at girl , snickering and making lewd comments under their breath, but loud enough for her to hear. As the five men continue on staring at the young and shy waitress, a tall man covered in a long black cloak and face hidden under a long brimmed black hat walk through the door.
"Um… here's your drinks…" the girl said with a shaky voice while looking down on the floor. She hope that by avoiding eye contacts they might leave her along. She doesn't want to anger them, because they're part of the Godland Army, a group of ruthless thugs that kill and harm others without any remorse.
The men of the Godland Army smell the fear from the girl and it excites them even more. One of them grab the girl by her arm, which scared the girl and caused to her drop the tray that was still holding two more beers. As the beers and the tray slam down unto the floor, nobody in the bar dare to look at what is happening. They knew what exactly was happening, but they're afraid to do anything. In Aion, nobody dares to bother or put their noses into the business of Godland Army.
"Look what you've done, honey…" said the Godland Army with a red eye patch over his right eyes, the one that grabbed the girl. "You gotta pay for your clumsiness. If you satisfied my buddies and I here enough, we might just let you live." The red eye patched Godland scavenger yank the girls arm and pull her into her. The girl let out a low shriek, while the other 3 Godland scavengers laughs in delight. She want to call out for help, but she knew that wouldn't do anything. Instead she beg them to stop, but it fell in vain just like she expected. Just after the Godland Army scavenger rip open her shirt the tall man appear next to them out of nowhere.
"Get the fuck out here ya fucking punk," warn one of the three scavengers to the tall stranger. "The girl's on her break right now."
"You must be the Godland dogs…" the tall man speak in a low raspy voice. "Let the girl go, before I send you all off to the land of Hades."
"Who the fuck are you?" ask the red eye patch guy as he finally let go of the girl. The girl quickly step to the side, as she watch the eye patch scavenger reach into his pocket and took his knife out. "You better learn to respe---"
"You need something much more than a knife to stop me, fool!" the tall interrupt the eye patch scavenger, and before the scavanger can say anything back he realize that the tall stranger had grab him and the next thing is knew before he let out a scream and died was an unbearable pain that burst around his neck.
The other three Godland Army stare in shock as they watch the tall stranger in black holds their lifeless comrade with his long and thin white fingers. Two red dots glows under the dark brimmed hat while he spit out a large chuck of flesh unto the table. One of the scavengers turned and ran off screaming, while the other two was still in shock. "Let him run…" said the tall stranger. "So, we can bring the rest of your friends to me… and as for you two…" the tall stranger grab the two Godland Army's necks with each of his hands and yanked out their throats. He toss two throats and chunks of torn flesh onto the floor and make his way toward the exit, while others in the bar grasp in horror from what they've witnessed in three seconds. Before he could reach the exit, five Godland scavengers along with the one that escaped seconds ago came through the door. They look at their dead comrades and they stare at the bloody mess that the tall stranger has made behind him.
"Where's the rest of your gang!?" shouted the tall pale stranger, revealing his yellow teeth that's dripping with blood and cover will small chunks of flesh. "Talk fast or die slow!" The pale stranger with the decayed face and glowing red eyes charged the six frozen men after they answered his question.
As dawn slowly approaches, the early sunlight slowly reveals the bodies of nine naked men impaled on nine wooden sticks outside Maspeth Bar. Their blood emptied, their body mutilated and their flesh twisted. Meanwhile, twelve miles away from the mutilated bodies of the Godland Army is a massive area that was formerly an industrial section. Among the few of many industrial factories that covered the area is the lairs of the Godland Army. All of the Godland Army scavengers are asleep soundly as dawn arrives, not knowing the cruel demise of their comrades and not knowing of a certain tall stranger in black heading toward their way.
When the sun was fully up, agonized cries and screams echoes throughout the entire industrial complex. And when the sun was about to retire again for the day the industrial factories was filled with bloodless corpses. The floor was covered with torn and ripped human meat and as the tall stranger walks around the area he can feel the squishing of intestines under his boots. Although by night time the place is filled with the smell of human bowel waste, but he didn't mind and he was busy with decorating his new lair.
When the sun rise again, the former lair of the Godland Army is now decorated with their mutilated bodies hanging off everywhere. This is the declaration of the end to the reign of terror placed on the city of Aion by the Godland Army. However the hanging corpses foreshadows the reign of something much more terrifying.