Hello. I'm disappointed in the little amount of reviews I got, but I guess I can't get everything, now can I? Ah well. If anyone's interested, I am getting out a new story, hopefully very soon. Anyway, here's my thank-you's!
Christy13: Thank you. Lol. Yea. Good thing for James, right?
Fir3fly: Lol. Well, I can't change your mind, now can I? Lol.
Suvuroko: Hehe! I updated! Ta-Da! And thank you for saying my story is cute...and yea, it is easier to write when they like each other... But I am sort-of an Angst fan...So...^-^ Hehe.
Anyway, I hope everyone likes the chapter! (I pray that new-comers will enjoy it too!)
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Snape frowned. Damn Potter. He Was always on top. If not with Lily, then with Quidditch, Transfiguration, every girl in the school, and even with some of the guys! (A/N: Eww...) Life wasn't fair.
But...James didn't have Lily to call his just yet, now did he? No...He didn't. Snape smiled.
As long as I can hold off James getting to Lily...I can have her, and beat James at something!
But...That isn't the only reason you want her...Now is it?
No...Well...Oh! How can my own mind confuse me?!
It's an unfair world...
Snape grinned. If he wanted to redeem himself in Lily's eyes...He would have to work.
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James smiled to himself meanwhile playing with his stolen snitch. He was in Lily's good books. He thought it would never happen. But it did. Now he had a chance. But he wanted her to trust him first. He sighed, the smile wiped from his face. This was going to take forever. But...She did tell him something her friends didn't even know. That had to be a sign!
The portrait hole swung open. In stepped Essence Green, Veronica Marshall, and Lily Evans. The unbreakable trio.
"Hey James!" Lily said with a smile, sitting next to him. Her friends followed curiously.
"When did you two hook up?" Essence asked, with a tiny smile on her face. Knowing Lily, if Essence assumed the wrong thing, there would be a long lecture with her name stamped on it.
"We didn't. James just helped me one day...we're just friends, calm down Ver." Lily snapped as she saw Veronica's was turn into a wide grin.
"But you guys can always--" Veronica started but was interrupted by the portrait hole swinging open and in swept the school slut, Krissy Daniels. Krissy was fairly tall, with long brown hair that looked like crap, and blue eyes that always held lust in them meanwhile seeing a boy; even if the boy was Peter Pettigrew. (A/N: Sorry if I don't get names right! I don't have my books at the moment.)
James fell back into his seat, praying: Merlin, if I am loved, you are not going to let her see me!
Thinking quick, James grabbed Lily and began to whisper in her ear.
"Giggle as if I'm saying something that means anything sweet and cute. Please Lily.." James whispered urgently.
Lily giggled a cute, flirty giggle.
"Hello James!" Krissy smiled and winked.
"Oh. Hello Krissy."
Krissy walked over to James, pushed Lily off the cushion, and straddled his lap. Then, whispering in his ear, "How about we go up to your dorm and have some fun ."
"I'd rather not."
"Fine! Be like that! But if you even need anything , come and see me. Don't hesitate."
James shivered as she walked away. God he hated that girl.
Lily was not amused. "What was that about?!" She pushed herself of the ground and sat on a seat by the fire.
"Donno." Essnece said, dumbfounded by the scene before her. Essence stood up, she was about 5'9 and had waist-long, curly, black hair. She had the most mysterious aqua eyes, and very pale skin. She was beautiful.
Veronica was about the same size as Lily, (A/N: 5'8..if I said differently before, forget what I said!) and had pin-straight, mid-back length, blonde hair; she had big, purple eyes, and a tanned complexion.
"I'm going to bed." Lily and her friends said. Bidding James goodnight, they went up the spiral staircase and went to sleep.
James sighed. Lily was going to sleep...She was getting changed...He felt his pants tighten... Think about Quidditch...
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Snape overlooked Lily in the morning at breakfast. Her and Potter were getting very close. In the way they were talking so intently you would think they were already a couple! But of course, this is Lily Evans we are talking about, sensible, beautiful, interesting Lily Evans.
"What are you looking at Snape?" Lucius Malfoy sneered. Malfoy followed his line of vision, right to Evans.
"Why are you looking at that Mudblood?"
"It's a free Wizarding world. I can do as I please." Snape snapped. He didn't need Malfoy breathing down his neck about Evans! Plus, he was going to put his Master Plan into action today in Potions.
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"Hey Evans."
"Snape." She acknowledged his presence with a nod.
"How are things with Potter?"
"Fine."
"I heard that he was going to stay friends with you long enough to get in your pants." Snape whispered to her quietly.
"I highly doubt that Snape. Please go away, your smell is ruining my potion."
"Fine...But you know, I'm here if he does anything."
"Thank you, but I don't need help."
Part I, complete , Snape thought happily.
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Snape smiled. His Polyjuice potion was almost complete. Soon, there would be nothing to get in his way! (A/N: Bwhaha!)
He took out the hair from his pocket. He knew fighting with Potter would help one day. He was lucky that he was able to grab a strand of messy hair.
He filled a goblet with the slimy potion, placed the hair in, and watched it bubble and turn into a slight orange color.
It's now or never!
I prefer never if you don't mind...
Oh shut up?
He drank it down quickly.
Ugh! Thats disgusting! He screamed in pain as his muscles grew and his hair shortened, and his whole body changed to resemble Potter.
Snape looked in the Mirror and grabbed the fake glasses, and walked out, going to find Lily. It didn't take very long.
"Hey Lily!" Snape shouted down the corridor.
"James!" Lily said, running up to him happily. When she reached him, she gave him a brief hug and then backed away.
Snape sighed. Once again: Now or Never.
Lily gasped as she was suddenly pinned against the wall by 'James'. "What are you doing?!"
"Nothing, love, nothing."
"Get off!"
Snape silenced her by putting his lips on hers and slipping his tongue into her mouth. She thrashed wildly around and bit his tongue.
"Bitch!" Snape shouted and slapped her hard across the cheek.
Snape threw her over his shoulder and began walking into a broom closet. Lily's eyes widened. She screamed, only to be slapped again.
Lily cried loudly as he trailed kisses down her neck, sucking, nipping, all that. This wasn't right.
His hand was going up and down her body, enjoying the feeling of it beneath his.
"Get off me..NOW!" Lily screamed.
Snape listened, his hour was running very low. He had to leave, quickly.
He jumped up and ran to the dungeons. He did everything he needed to. His plan was almost complete. Next stage: Comfort Lily.
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Lily ran back to the common room, only to find James there. How did he get back so quickly?
"Hey Lil! Where have you been?"
"You should know!"
"What are you talking about? I've been here all night!"
"But--Then--How?!"
"Lil, where were you?"
"In a broom closet with you! You're the one that took me there!"
"I'm flattered you think that way of me, but it wasn't me that took you there."
"Oh.." Lily said as she took a seat next to him and leaned her head on his shoulder, crying more tears.
"Shh...It's okay, what happened?"
"Someone might have used a Polyjuice Potion and made themselves you...but...I don't know. All I know is someone that looked like you took me into a broom closet and started feeling me and touching me and kissing me. He wouldn't stop. After about an hour, he left." She began crying more.
James put his arm around her comfortingly. Whoever did this to his Lily, would pay dearly. "Lily, it's okay, I'm here now."
Snape's word struck into her mind. "Potter just wants to get into your pants... "
"James! It was Snape!"
I wonder if I should give the greasy-haired twit a slow death...or a painful one, James thought viciously. Slow...I pick slow..
¥ª¥!!! Finished! Finally, I've been having writers block, and school hasn 't helped. But I just got an idea, and went with it. I might raise the rating...I don't know. Please tell me in reviews. But 7 pages! I'm so happy! Hehe!
Date: 1/28/04
