Hi I hope you liked it! Anyways the story is supposed to be Drama/Angst and
PG13 but I messed up.
I don't know how to fix it. Can someone tell me?
Broken Heart Chapter 2
She hates me I knew it! yelled Inuyasha. Oh Dam it today's the New Moon. I'm already turning human. Damn! I should go somewhere safe to stay tonight. While he was walking two huge bear demons got right in front of him. They were big brown bears with red eyes. It had huge claws and fangs. Inuyasha grabbed his untransformed Tetsusaiga and charged at one of the demons. I'm gonna kill you you piece of shit! Screamed Inuyasha. But before Inuyasha could attack the demon took hold of the sword and through it across the field. It took one swipe at Inuyasha and he fell to the ground. His chest had three long deep gashes. He was breathing heavily. If he hits me again I don't know what I'm gonna do. Suddenly both bears started attacking him at the same time. He dodged the first blow but the second one he got hit. The bear sunk it's teeth into his shoulder. The Inuyasha noticed something it's claws and fangs had poison on them! Holy Shit! Said the silver haired hanyou. The other bear swiped at Inuyasha back. Inuyasha's vision started to blur and he couldn't stand right. Right before he fell into the darkness he heard a scream. It sounds like Kagome! Inuyasha! Kagome yelled. Kagome saw Inuyasha in a pool of his blood on the floor. Kagome go to Inuyasha and get him on Kirra for protection! Said Sango. And get his sword! Said Miroku. Sango sliced right through one of the bears. The other bear came charging at her with it's claws. She dodged it and through her boomerang at it. Both bear fell to the ground with a lound thud. Sango and Miroku ran to Inuysha. Kagome he's hurt really bad. We better make hast to get to Kaede's. Or else he might not make it. They ran as fast as they could. Kaede yelled Kagom. Help! Inuyasha is hurt really bad! Set ye on the bed and go! Said Kaede. Kaede started mixing herbs and putting them on Inuyasha. It passed four hours when Keaede finally entered. When she got out she saw Kagome crying with Shippo curled up on her lap. She saw Kirra sleeping near the fire. Her ears turning every so often. Then she saw Miroku and Sango they both had sad expressions on there faces. They didn't even notice Keade there. They were all thing about Inuyasha. Ahem! Said Keade. All three of them looked up. Is he okay they all shouted! Well he has a lot of poison in him. But I did manage to take some out. But it is not enough. I don't think he will survive. Even in his demon form I don't think he can make it. Unless we find Myoga. He can suck the poison out of him. He will be able to survive for 3 days. If you don't find Myoga in that amount of time he will die. But you still have a chance of finding him. Don't give up. You may see him. But I warn you he looks bad. He has cuts all over his face and body. His biggest cuts are on his shoulder, back, and chest. They all entered the hut without a word. Except some muffled sobs from Kagome.
Hi I'm sorry I took so long to write it. Tomorrow I will post another chapter. I hope you enjoy it. Please Review! BY BY
Broken Heart Chapter 2
She hates me I knew it! yelled Inuyasha. Oh Dam it today's the New Moon. I'm already turning human. Damn! I should go somewhere safe to stay tonight. While he was walking two huge bear demons got right in front of him. They were big brown bears with red eyes. It had huge claws and fangs. Inuyasha grabbed his untransformed Tetsusaiga and charged at one of the demons. I'm gonna kill you you piece of shit! Screamed Inuyasha. But before Inuyasha could attack the demon took hold of the sword and through it across the field. It took one swipe at Inuyasha and he fell to the ground. His chest had three long deep gashes. He was breathing heavily. If he hits me again I don't know what I'm gonna do. Suddenly both bears started attacking him at the same time. He dodged the first blow but the second one he got hit. The bear sunk it's teeth into his shoulder. The Inuyasha noticed something it's claws and fangs had poison on them! Holy Shit! Said the silver haired hanyou. The other bear swiped at Inuyasha back. Inuyasha's vision started to blur and he couldn't stand right. Right before he fell into the darkness he heard a scream. It sounds like Kagome! Inuyasha! Kagome yelled. Kagome saw Inuyasha in a pool of his blood on the floor. Kagome go to Inuyasha and get him on Kirra for protection! Said Sango. And get his sword! Said Miroku. Sango sliced right through one of the bears. The other bear came charging at her with it's claws. She dodged it and through her boomerang at it. Both bear fell to the ground with a lound thud. Sango and Miroku ran to Inuysha. Kagome he's hurt really bad. We better make hast to get to Kaede's. Or else he might not make it. They ran as fast as they could. Kaede yelled Kagom. Help! Inuyasha is hurt really bad! Set ye on the bed and go! Said Kaede. Kaede started mixing herbs and putting them on Inuyasha. It passed four hours when Keaede finally entered. When she got out she saw Kagome crying with Shippo curled up on her lap. She saw Kirra sleeping near the fire. Her ears turning every so often. Then she saw Miroku and Sango they both had sad expressions on there faces. They didn't even notice Keade there. They were all thing about Inuyasha. Ahem! Said Keade. All three of them looked up. Is he okay they all shouted! Well he has a lot of poison in him. But I did manage to take some out. But it is not enough. I don't think he will survive. Even in his demon form I don't think he can make it. Unless we find Myoga. He can suck the poison out of him. He will be able to survive for 3 days. If you don't find Myoga in that amount of time he will die. But you still have a chance of finding him. Don't give up. You may see him. But I warn you he looks bad. He has cuts all over his face and body. His biggest cuts are on his shoulder, back, and chest. They all entered the hut without a word. Except some muffled sobs from Kagome.
Hi I'm sorry I took so long to write it. Tomorrow I will post another chapter. I hope you enjoy it. Please Review! BY BY