Hey everyone, if there is in fact anyone out there who's reading this... I know this isn't the best story line, but if you guys could give me some feedback, it would be really great, so i can make it better, thats providing there is actually anyone reading this........??????

"Thank you!"

"I wanted you to have a good birthday!"

"Max, you didn't have to! I would have been fine with a movie and pizza!"

"But I wouldn't have! It's your birthday, you deserve to have fun!"

"Actually, it's not my birthday until tomorrow!"

"Hmm…"

"What?"

"Nothing!"

Her smile widened as he nodded in the direction behind her. She turned to see a waiter carrying out a large chocolate cake, sparklers flaming on top together with seventeen candles.

"Make a wish!"

She closed her eyes and blew out the candles. The sparklers flickered, spurting out the random spark as they reached their end. Liz opened her eyes to find a small box in front of her. It was black wrapped with a silver ribbon.

"Open it!"

She bit her lips as she lifted up the cover, revealing a beautiful necklace. There was a small diamond in the middle, simple yet elegant on the thin gold chain.

"Max, it's… it's absolutely gorgeous!"

He stood up and walked over to her, taking the necklace out of the box and placing it on around her neck. Max stood back and looked at her, taking in the vision that is Liz Parker. Her hair fell around her face in ringlets, bringing out her stunning features. The black dress she was wearing looked magnificent on her, making her fiery eyes stand out like never before.

"What?"

"Nothing!"

"Stop staring at me like that?"

"Like what?"

"Like that! Stop it!"

"Stop what?"

He leant down and kissed her before she had a chance to retaliate. Even though she hadn't said anything, Max knew that she wished everyone else could be here to celebrate her birthday, but what Liz didn't know was that they all had a surprise for her tomorrow. Tonight was just about him and her, no interruptions were allowed!

"Come on!" He grabbed her hand and walked her over to the dance floor of the restaurant. For an alien, he had quite good rhythm. Her arms went around his neck as he pulled her closer, feeling her breathing in time with him. The words of Oasis, Wonderwall filled the restaurant as the two teens danced together, staring into each other's eyes, never breaking the gaze.

He led her into the room, her eyes closed as ordered by Max. He took a step behind her, sliding his hands around her waist as she lent back against him.

"Okay, you can open them now!"

Liz opened her eyes to find the room filled with candles flickering light against the walls of his bedroom, causing the shadows to move. She gasped at the sight of the room; it had gone from plain to beautiful. There were rose petals scattered on the floor beneath her, making it one of the most romantic sights she had ever seen.

His lips were soft against her skin, her neck tasting sweeter with ever kiss. She turned around so she was now facing him, his body pressed tightly up against hers. Their lips met in a tight embrace, tongues exploring freely inside each other's mouth. They slowly walked towards the bed, locked against each other's body, feeling their skin melt into each other.

Simultaneously, they fell onto the bed, not noticing where they were, or what was happening. He raised his arms as she slid the shirt he was wearing off his head and threw it onto the floor, her lips joining with his again instantly. He broke away, looking down into her dark eyes.

"Liz, we don't have to…"

"Shh…"

She placed her arm on the back of his neck and pulled his lips back onto hers, feeling him surround her. Piece by piece, their clothing was replaced with bare flesh, until they were both completely naked under the covers of his bed.

His eyes met hers, dark pools showing all of his emotions. "Liz, are you sure?"

Trembling with lust and anticipation, she nodded her head, trying to cope from his lips not touching her skin. She felt him enter her, strong but gentle. Their bodies slowly moved in rhythm with each other, their breathing getting faster and faster. His lips lingered on her skin, placing light kisses down her jaw line and neck.

He pushed further inside of her, hearing her moan with pleasure as she arched back her neck, giving Max's lips more room to explore. He could feel her clenching, nearing the edge as he pushed harder. It was too much, he couldn't hold on any longer. He moaned as he released inside of her, feeling her do the same straight after.

Max lay on top of her, breathlessly looking into her eyes as she stared back up at him. His lips met hers, lightly kissing her, slowly stroking the soft skin on her back with his hand. It was perfect, everything was perfect.