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The Comeback
Chapter 3
"WHAT?!" the whole shouted this one word, while Naruto is covering his ears from their outburst.
"Naruto, how could you have lived for 12 years? You look like almost our age?" Shikamaru asked.
"Well, right now my age is almost 20, but right her" Naruto tapping his head "I am 25"
Catching a hint, Shikamaru had a shocked expression "You don't mean that you...."
Naruto smiled "I always knew you were a genesis, and if you thinking what I am thinking then yes"
The others had a confused face "what?"
Naruto sighed, as he knew that they are going to be shocked. "The Jutsu that Orochimaru had used has a major side affect."
"What are those?"
"That I was turned in back into an 8 years old"
The whole room was silent; never they have thought that there is a Jutsu that can turn someone into an 8 year old. Taking their silent, Naruto continued.
"When I wake up the next morning, I couldn't believe that I was 8 years old again. The old lady who watched me sleeping last night asked me from where I was, so I told her. She said there is no place called Konoha, other villages."
"Naruto, if what you said is true, then there are more worlds out there" said Tsuande, who passed her shock from hearing his story. "But did that lady believe you?"
"Actually she didn't, but her husband did. His name was Master Wong; he could tell that I am telling the truth from the look from your eye. Both of them believe me when I did my Kage Bunshin No Jutsu."
Few minutes had passed before Hinata asked question "Naruto kun, what happened after that?"
Naruto turned and smiled to her before continuing "I can't say anything except that Master Wong had 'trained' in many ways, including schooling, but before we finish I want to know what happened when I was away."
So they told what happened up to when the villagers now know that he is the 4th Hokage's son. He was surprised them the he wasn't shocked to hear that.
"Sigh...so you all know that I carry Kyubi, right" they all replied with a nod.
Naruto closed his eye and appears to be thinks. Many minutes had passed before he opened them with a serious expression.
"What I going to say may shock all of you, I will ask only once do want to hear what I going to say?"
They looked at each other before nodding.
"Kyubi wasn't actually a demon who you all thought. He was actually the guardian of the fire country"
"WHAT?!"
"Naruto, if Kyubi was really a guardian then why did he attacked the village?" Kakashi asked since most of them were in shock from what they heard.
"Well, Kakashi sensei, you can blame that on Orochimaru"
"Why does that have to do with Orochimaru?" said Sasuke with a venom at the word Orochimaru.
"Yes, Naruto tell us." Said Tsuande who also wondering.
"Well, because he wasn't chosen as a Hokage he used a unknown Jutsu"
"What is it?" said Tsuande as she had a feeling that she doesn't what to know."
"The Jutsu he used was to control Kyubi so he can become evil, but most scary about this Jutsu is to have 100 scarifies. Men, women, children, babies, heck even a pregnant woman was killed by Orochimaru to use the Jutsu."
All those who had listen became sick from what they heard.
"That Bastard. He should have suffered before he could die." Lets just say that Tsuande is very angry.
"The Jutsu he used made Kyubi attack the village, but fortunately Kyubi had some control. He struggled himself to let my father have a clear shot at him."
"Naruto who do know all that?" asked Sakura
"Maybe later I will tell you all, but right knew I very hungry." Said Naruto as he heard his stomach grumbling.
"Hey Tsuande, am I still Genin? Because I didn't make the exam." Asked Naruto
Tsuande thought for second before smirking, "Naruto, I make you Jounin if you want to"
The others shocked to hear this, but Naruto was very excited.
"Really?! You mean it? HELL YEAH, I do anything just ask" answering Naruto.
"In two weeks time, there are going to a tournament for the best ninja in the world. Many will participate, all ranks can join meaning Jounin, Chuunin, and even Genin can join. If you win the tournament as the champion, I'll make you a Jounin. Deal?"
"Deal! Now came on let's eat"
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"Whoa! You beat your own record by 2 times" said the cook.
Naruto just finished his 50th bowl of ramen and he was very happy. And what more interesting that Naruto doesn't seem to slow down to catch him breathe. Around him are his friends who shook their head, but also smiling for they missed how different it is when Naruto is around. It seems that wherever his is, Naruto makes the place more enjoyable.
"Boy, it's hot." Naruto stand up and removed the jacket he was wearing the whole time. The girls look at him and then turned away with blush on their faces. Naruto was a sleeveless shirt showing the well-toned muscles of chest and abdominal. His arms show the athletic showing muscles. Naruto sees them blushing, but then his thought maybe of the heat. The girls now looked at Naruto's face, showing the sharp jaw, his hair not spiky upward but flat, but it gives him the a certain charm.
"My, my, my Naruto. You look fine." Said Tsuande as she gaze at Naruto's body. Then she notices something. "Naruto, is that a tattoo?"
Indeed, there are tattoos on both Naruto's arms. On his right arm, was a tattoo, which looked like leafs falling and the center was the Leafs village sign with a Kanji under it that says ' The Future Hokage'. On the other arm was a Kyubi's head in chakra. (A/N: the one when Naruto was fighting Haku).
"Cool!" was most replies, while the girls were still blushing.
"Hey baa san, can I have the keys of my apartment."
Silent was his answer; Naruto was confused by their reply.
"Ano, what's wrong? Is anybody now living there? I don't mind I can find someplace else."
"Naruto, it who is living there." Said Sakura, as Hinata began tremble.
"Who?"
"I...am" said Hinata.
Look at her confused on why she sad even if she took his apartment.
"That's ok, Hinata. But why are not with your family?"
Hinata told him about how her father disowned her after his death saying the heir shouldn't have feelings, and since then she lived in his house ever since. Neji tried to lets her to come to his house by her father didn't lets him using the bird in the cage seal to obey him. Let's just say that Naruto wasn't happy, he is beyond rage.
"How dare he...how dare he...HOW DARE HE?!!"
Naruto grabbed his jacket and began running toward Hyuuga main branch.
"Follow him! Make sure he doesn't get killed" ordered Tsuande.
"Don't worry. We won't let Naruto get hurt" said Neji
"I not talking about Naruto. I am talking about Hyuuga Hiashi"
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Hyuuga Hiashi was drinking tea in his private time. He thought back to what he did to Hinata. At first, he was angered of how did she had feels for the fox boy. He disowned her for thinking foolish feeling and for disgracing the Hyuuga's name. She even doesn't have what it takes to be the heir of Hyuuga. When he found out that Naruto is the 4th Hokage's son, he felt a shamed for what he did for Hinata but he didn't because his pride won't let him. Furthermore, Hinata isn't any use for him now.
Suddenly, an explosion on the side of the room had interrupted him from his thoughts. He look to see a hole in a wall and a figure is standing there just as dust began to clear. He sees a young man with blond hair, black jacket and pants and wearing boots.
"WHO DARES?!" demanded Hiashi at the young man.
"I DARE." Said Naruto as he begins to walk toward Hiashi.
Hiashi was shocked to see Naruto infront of him.
"How...how are you alive?"
"HOW DARE YOU DO THAT FOR HINATA? WHAT KIND OF FATHER ARE YOU?!"
Filled with rage, Naruto dashed toward Hiashi, who still in shock, intending to crush his head. Only to be stopped by Kakashi, Sasuke, Neji, Asuma.
"LET ME GO! I AM GOING TO CRUSH HIM MY OWN BARE HANDS!"
"Clam down, Naruto" said Sasuke as he finds difficulty holding Naruto.
"Naruto, Don't" said Kakashi as he also hold him.
Naruto continue struggle from their holds, before he heard someone begging him.
"Naruto-kun, please stop" begged Hinata as she saw Naruto was about to attack her father.
Naruto stopped and turned to see Hinata with tears on her eyes. Feeling that Naruto isn't going to attack, the other released their holds on him. Naruto stared at Hinata for few minutes before glaring at Hiashi.
"Be grateful that Hinata asked me to stop. If it was anybody else I won't stop. I will take her with me since you disowned her." Naruto turned and walked out of the room, but not before holding Hinata and taking her with him.
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The Comeback
Chapter 3
"WHAT?!" the whole shouted this one word, while Naruto is covering his ears from their outburst.
"Naruto, how could you have lived for 12 years? You look like almost our age?" Shikamaru asked.
"Well, right now my age is almost 20, but right her" Naruto tapping his head "I am 25"
Catching a hint, Shikamaru had a shocked expression "You don't mean that you...."
Naruto smiled "I always knew you were a genesis, and if you thinking what I am thinking then yes"
The others had a confused face "what?"
Naruto sighed, as he knew that they are going to be shocked. "The Jutsu that Orochimaru had used has a major side affect."
"What are those?"
"That I was turned in back into an 8 years old"
The whole room was silent; never they have thought that there is a Jutsu that can turn someone into an 8 year old. Taking their silent, Naruto continued.
"When I wake up the next morning, I couldn't believe that I was 8 years old again. The old lady who watched me sleeping last night asked me from where I was, so I told her. She said there is no place called Konoha, other villages."
"Naruto, if what you said is true, then there are more worlds out there" said Tsuande, who passed her shock from hearing his story. "But did that lady believe you?"
"Actually she didn't, but her husband did. His name was Master Wong; he could tell that I am telling the truth from the look from your eye. Both of them believe me when I did my Kage Bunshin No Jutsu."
Few minutes had passed before Hinata asked question "Naruto kun, what happened after that?"
Naruto turned and smiled to her before continuing "I can't say anything except that Master Wong had 'trained' in many ways, including schooling, but before we finish I want to know what happened when I was away."
So they told what happened up to when the villagers now know that he is the 4th Hokage's son. He was surprised them the he wasn't shocked to hear that.
"Sigh...so you all know that I carry Kyubi, right" they all replied with a nod.
Naruto closed his eye and appears to be thinks. Many minutes had passed before he opened them with a serious expression.
"What I going to say may shock all of you, I will ask only once do want to hear what I going to say?"
They looked at each other before nodding.
"Kyubi wasn't actually a demon who you all thought. He was actually the guardian of the fire country"
"WHAT?!"
"Naruto, if Kyubi was really a guardian then why did he attacked the village?" Kakashi asked since most of them were in shock from what they heard.
"Well, Kakashi sensei, you can blame that on Orochimaru"
"Why does that have to do with Orochimaru?" said Sasuke with a venom at the word Orochimaru.
"Yes, Naruto tell us." Said Tsuande who also wondering.
"Well, because he wasn't chosen as a Hokage he used a unknown Jutsu"
"What is it?" said Tsuande as she had a feeling that she doesn't what to know."
"The Jutsu he used was to control Kyubi so he can become evil, but most scary about this Jutsu is to have 100 scarifies. Men, women, children, babies, heck even a pregnant woman was killed by Orochimaru to use the Jutsu."
All those who had listen became sick from what they heard.
"That Bastard. He should have suffered before he could die." Lets just say that Tsuande is very angry.
"The Jutsu he used made Kyubi attack the village, but fortunately Kyubi had some control. He struggled himself to let my father have a clear shot at him."
"Naruto who do know all that?" asked Sakura
"Maybe later I will tell you all, but right knew I very hungry." Said Naruto as he heard his stomach grumbling.
"Hey Tsuande, am I still Genin? Because I didn't make the exam." Asked Naruto
Tsuande thought for second before smirking, "Naruto, I make you Jounin if you want to"
The others shocked to hear this, but Naruto was very excited.
"Really?! You mean it? HELL YEAH, I do anything just ask" answering Naruto.
"In two weeks time, there are going to a tournament for the best ninja in the world. Many will participate, all ranks can join meaning Jounin, Chuunin, and even Genin can join. If you win the tournament as the champion, I'll make you a Jounin. Deal?"
"Deal! Now came on let's eat"
(---------)
"Whoa! You beat your own record by 2 times" said the cook.
Naruto just finished his 50th bowl of ramen and he was very happy. And what more interesting that Naruto doesn't seem to slow down to catch him breathe. Around him are his friends who shook their head, but also smiling for they missed how different it is when Naruto is around. It seems that wherever his is, Naruto makes the place more enjoyable.
"Boy, it's hot." Naruto stand up and removed the jacket he was wearing the whole time. The girls look at him and then turned away with blush on their faces. Naruto was a sleeveless shirt showing the well-toned muscles of chest and abdominal. His arms show the athletic showing muscles. Naruto sees them blushing, but then his thought maybe of the heat. The girls now looked at Naruto's face, showing the sharp jaw, his hair not spiky upward but flat, but it gives him the a certain charm.
"My, my, my Naruto. You look fine." Said Tsuande as she gaze at Naruto's body. Then she notices something. "Naruto, is that a tattoo?"
Indeed, there are tattoos on both Naruto's arms. On his right arm, was a tattoo, which looked like leafs falling and the center was the Leafs village sign with a Kanji under it that says ' The Future Hokage'. On the other arm was a Kyubi's head in chakra. (A/N: the one when Naruto was fighting Haku).
"Cool!" was most replies, while the girls were still blushing.
"Hey baa san, can I have the keys of my apartment."
Silent was his answer; Naruto was confused by their reply.
"Ano, what's wrong? Is anybody now living there? I don't mind I can find someplace else."
"Naruto, it who is living there." Said Sakura, as Hinata began tremble.
"Who?"
"I...am" said Hinata.
Look at her confused on why she sad even if she took his apartment.
"That's ok, Hinata. But why are not with your family?"
Hinata told him about how her father disowned her after his death saying the heir shouldn't have feelings, and since then she lived in his house ever since. Neji tried to lets her to come to his house by her father didn't lets him using the bird in the cage seal to obey him. Let's just say that Naruto wasn't happy, he is beyond rage.
"How dare he...how dare he...HOW DARE HE?!!"
Naruto grabbed his jacket and began running toward Hyuuga main branch.
"Follow him! Make sure he doesn't get killed" ordered Tsuande.
"Don't worry. We won't let Naruto get hurt" said Neji
"I not talking about Naruto. I am talking about Hyuuga Hiashi"
(----------)
Hyuuga Hiashi was drinking tea in his private time. He thought back to what he did to Hinata. At first, he was angered of how did she had feels for the fox boy. He disowned her for thinking foolish feeling and for disgracing the Hyuuga's name. She even doesn't have what it takes to be the heir of Hyuuga. When he found out that Naruto is the 4th Hokage's son, he felt a shamed for what he did for Hinata but he didn't because his pride won't let him. Furthermore, Hinata isn't any use for him now.
Suddenly, an explosion on the side of the room had interrupted him from his thoughts. He look to see a hole in a wall and a figure is standing there just as dust began to clear. He sees a young man with blond hair, black jacket and pants and wearing boots.
"WHO DARES?!" demanded Hiashi at the young man.
"I DARE." Said Naruto as he begins to walk toward Hiashi.
Hiashi was shocked to see Naruto infront of him.
"How...how are you alive?"
"HOW DARE YOU DO THAT FOR HINATA? WHAT KIND OF FATHER ARE YOU?!"
Filled with rage, Naruto dashed toward Hiashi, who still in shock, intending to crush his head. Only to be stopped by Kakashi, Sasuke, Neji, Asuma.
"LET ME GO! I AM GOING TO CRUSH HIM MY OWN BARE HANDS!"
"Clam down, Naruto" said Sasuke as he finds difficulty holding Naruto.
"Naruto, Don't" said Kakashi as he also hold him.
Naruto continue struggle from their holds, before he heard someone begging him.
"Naruto-kun, please stop" begged Hinata as she saw Naruto was about to attack her father.
Naruto stopped and turned to see Hinata with tears on her eyes. Feeling that Naruto isn't going to attack, the other released their holds on him. Naruto stared at Hinata for few minutes before glaring at Hiashi.
"Be grateful that Hinata asked me to stop. If it was anybody else I won't stop. I will take her with me since you disowned her." Naruto turned and walked out of the room, but not before holding Hinata and taking her with him.
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